Sorry everyone for the abrupt ending of the story. I didn't realize the last minute of audio was cutoff in my editor, that was totally my bad. My intention is to bring the best stories with the best quality of the audio/images without any kind of mistakes. I want you to know that I put by best efforts into these videos, and things like this won't happen again! Here are the last few lines of the story, which was cutoff: ---------------------------------------------------- Xik, still trying to shake off the earlier takedown, skittered toward Terry again, her movements erratic but fast. Terry, now fully in control of the situation, waited for her to commit to an attack. When she did, he caught her mid-strike, grabbing two of her thin legs and twisting her into the dirt with minimal effort. In a matter of minutes, all three of Terry’s opponents lay on the ground, struggling to get back up. The arena was silent. The other recruits, who had expected to witness Terry’s defeat, stood frozen, unsure of what they had just seen. This wasn’t supposed to happen. A single human wasn’t supposed to be able to take on a Kraggis, a D'Thaal, and a Xylor at once. And yet, there Terry stood, breathing steady, no sign of exhaustion on his face. Sergeant Grud’ran, for the first time in the entire training session, looked genuinely surprised. His metallic brow furrowed as he stepped forward. He looked at Gruhnak, still groaning on the ground, then at Gorrak, who was slowly sitting up, and finally at Xik, whose legs twitched in confusion. Terry offered a small nod to Grud’ran. “Guess that’s it, sir.” Grud’ran didn’t reply immediately. He studied Terry for a long moment, then glanced at the other recruits, who were now looking at Terry with a mixture of awe and fear. Finally, Grud’ran gave a slow nod of approval. “That was... unexpected,” he said, his voice betraying the slightest hint of respect. “I suppose I underestimated you, O'Neil.” Terry just shrugged, wiping some dirt off his sleeve. “It’s all about leverage.” Grud’ran chuckled-a rare sound from the Skolar. He turned to the rest of the recruits, his expression hardening once more. “Let this be a lesson to ALL of you. Strength, speed, and size mean NOTHING if you don’t know how to USE them. Today, Private O'Neil has shown you what true combat mastery looks like.” The other recruits, even the proudest among them, stood in stunned silence, the weight of Grud’ran’s words sinking in. For all their natural advantages, none of them had expected the human to be their equal, let alone their better. Terry, sensing the moment was over, gave a small smile. “That was fun,” he said, turning toward the exit of the arena. As he walked away, the other recruits parted to let him pass, their eyes wide with a newfound respect. The lesson wasn’t lost on anyone. "Deathworlder" was no longer a joke. From that day forward, it was a title earned-and feared.
Oh God, that's totally my bad. There was still 1 minute left of the story, I don't know what happened. I will pin a comment with the rest of the story, sorry for the mistake.
Sorry everyone for the abrupt ending of the story. I didn't realize the last minute of audio was cutoff in my editor, that was totally my bad. My intention is to bring the best stories with the best quality of the audio/images without any kind of mistakes. I want you to know that I put by best efforts into these videos, and things like this won't happen again!
Here are the last few lines of the story, which was cutoff:
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Xik, still trying to shake off the earlier takedown, skittered toward Terry again, her movements erratic but fast. Terry, now fully in control of the situation, waited for her to commit to an attack. When she did, he caught her mid-strike, grabbing two of her thin legs and twisting her into the dirt with minimal effort.
In a matter of minutes, all three of Terry’s opponents lay on the ground, struggling to get back up.
The arena was silent. The other recruits, who had expected to witness Terry’s defeat, stood frozen, unsure of what they had just seen. This wasn’t supposed to happen. A single human wasn’t supposed to be able to take on a Kraggis, a D'Thaal, and a Xylor at once. And yet, there Terry stood, breathing steady, no sign of exhaustion on his face.
Sergeant Grud’ran, for the first time in the entire training session, looked genuinely surprised. His metallic brow furrowed as he stepped forward. He looked at Gruhnak, still groaning on the ground, then at Gorrak, who was slowly sitting up, and finally at Xik, whose legs twitched in confusion.
Terry offered a small nod to Grud’ran. “Guess that’s it, sir.”
Grud’ran didn’t reply immediately. He studied Terry for a long moment, then glanced at the other recruits, who were now looking at Terry with a mixture of awe and fear. Finally, Grud’ran gave a slow nod of approval.
“That was... unexpected,” he said, his voice betraying the slightest hint of respect. “I suppose I underestimated you, O'Neil.”
Terry just shrugged, wiping some dirt off his sleeve. “It’s all about leverage.”
Grud’ran chuckled-a rare sound from the Skolar. He turned to the rest of the recruits, his expression hardening once more. “Let this be a lesson to ALL of you. Strength, speed, and size mean NOTHING if you don’t know how to USE them. Today, Private O'Neil has shown you what true combat mastery looks like.”
The other recruits, even the proudest among them, stood in stunned silence, the weight of Grud’ran’s words sinking in. For all their natural advantages, none of them had expected the human to be their equal, let alone their better.
Terry, sensing the moment was over, gave a small smile. “That was fun,” he said, turning toward the exit of the arena. As he walked away, the other recruits parted to let him pass, their eyes wide with a newfound respect.
The lesson wasn’t lost on anyone.
"Deathworlder" was no longer a joke. From that day forward, it was a title earned-and feared.
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Is this the first half of the story? It stopped in mid fight.
Oh God, that's totally my bad. There was still 1 minute left of the story, I don't know what happened. I will pin a comment with the rest of the story, sorry for the mistake.
@@HFYVengeance thanks! It was a great story, and well narrated. I really enjoyed it!
Is there a part 2 to this