Pantser Tries Plotting Like JK Rowling // Outlining A Book Series // WRITING EXPERIMENT

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  • I wanted to take a little weekend break from working on the rewrite of draft three so I decided to zoom out and look at the bigger picture, so it's time to outline the book series! I really liked JK Rowling's outlining method last time I used it so I decided to try using this again in this writing experiment so here we go: Pantser Tries Plotting Like J.K. Rowling.
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  • @Maxspare
    @Maxspare 3 ปีที่แล้ว +50

    "It's not a huge deal, it's just not ideal"
    Felt that too hard

  • @LifeofAngelina
    @LifeofAngelina 3 ปีที่แล้ว +56

    Planning a series especially with multiple povs seems so intimidating but you make it look so easy! I definitely need to retry this method when I have a better grasp of my story and subplots

    • @SaraLubratt
      @SaraLubratt  3 ปีที่แล้ว +8

      It looks really complicated and the look of it is intimidating but it has turned out to be the most simplistic and thorough outlining method I've tried so far! I hope it works for you when you try it!

  • @therealannataylor
    @therealannataylor 3 ปีที่แล้ว +41

    That’s so organized. I don’t think I could ever have my book so deeply written down before the first draft. If I write down all the cool things I’m thinking before then, it all just looses its excitement factor.

    • @SaraLubratt
      @SaraLubratt  3 ปีที่แล้ว +8

      I'm glad I pantsed the first book, but I was looking for a gist of where the book is going so that's why I decided to give it a rough outline of the major plot points using this method!

  • @tracy238
    @tracy238 3 ปีที่แล้ว +38

    This method has always confused me, I think it's because there is so much happening on one sheet but I think I get it now and can see how it would be beneficial.

    • @SaraLubratt
      @SaraLubratt  3 ปีที่แล้ว +8

      Oh awesome! I promise it looks way more complex than it is!

  • @sailor.britters
    @sailor.britters 3 ปีที่แล้ว +18

    I saw Kate Cavanaugh give this a try and I've used this for my series ever since! It's a great method and really keeps everything concise and organized. I realized once I got into it that even if I pants all of the first drafts that I'll still need something like this to keep track of the series as a whole.

    • @SaraLubratt
      @SaraLubratt  3 ปีที่แล้ว +6

      Totally! I did see Kate's video on this and I believe I mentioned it in my first video trying this where I was outlining the first book but since she has unlisted it because of what JKR has said over the past few years, decided to not mention it again if people couldn't go find that video. I'm glad this method works for you too!

  • @castle_novelist
    @castle_novelist 3 ปีที่แล้ว +17

    I'm always a pantser and never tried outlining.
    I think if my creativity is down, I'll definitely try this outlining for novelty.

    • @SaraLubratt
      @SaraLubratt  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      It seems like a good way to take a step back from a project!

  • @migueltheauthor7074
    @migueltheauthor7074 3 ปีที่แล้ว +16

    I just finished the video. I'm also planning a fantasy series, and I wi definitely outline using this method. I always outline before writing. Hope DE is doing well, Sara!

    • @SaraLubratt
      @SaraLubratt  3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Thanks Miguel! I hope this method woks as well for you as it did for me!

  • @lostinabookcase3796
    @lostinabookcase3796 3 ปีที่แล้ว +10

    Yeah, I just might need to give this a try. I'm a plantser, but lately it seems the pantser half has been taking over more and more XD

    • @SaraLubratt
      @SaraLubratt  3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Hahaha I feel that.

  • @AuthorZaraHoffman
    @AuthorZaraHoffman 3 ปีที่แล้ว +10

    1. I love ginger beer! 2. It is better to have the books improve so Book 2 being better than Book 1 is awesome! 3. I'm so excited about your story. Your videos also always inspire me to work on my own stories, so thank you!

    • @SaraLubratt
      @SaraLubratt  3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Aw thank you Zara! I'm glad to hear that it's good to have the books improve (and that makes sense). And right? Ginger beer is so good!

  • @AutumnAshleigh
    @AutumnAshleigh 3 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    I love this Sara! 😍 I also love hearing about your project. It is going to be EPIC! Such an awesome way to outline!

    • @SaraLubratt
      @SaraLubratt  3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      I keep thinking I can't get any more excited about my project and then I do something like this and I do!

  • @rambleswolf
    @rambleswolf 9 หลายเดือนก่อน

    So glad I saw this video! I'm attempting Nanowrimo 2023, and was worrying a bit cos my plan isn't fully finalised/ doesn't incorporate in detail everything I've thought putting in the story. But it's great to see that you're on draft 3 and still plotting, revising, and adding ideas to your novel! Really helps me to not stress out so much over it! ^^

  • @mspratyushasen
    @mspratyushasen 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    I agree that this plotting technique seems really helpful for series with multiple characters. I'll try this out later around Nov/Dec.

  • @carlyc.8541
    @carlyc.8541 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Love this! I’m trying this method after having watched your last J.K. Rowling plotting video and I’m about to see whether it makes a difference in my drafting. I can’t believe how many words are in your draft of book 1!

    • @SaraLubratt
      @SaraLubratt  3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Yay!! I hope it goes well for you!

  • @bodine219
    @bodine219 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    You’ve inspired me to try this to take draft one of my whip to draft two! Thanks :)

    • @SaraLubratt
      @SaraLubratt  3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Yay!! It worked really well for me when I used it to reverse outline book one. You got this!

  • @EmilyMcCosh
    @EmilyMcCosh 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Yay! Looks like such an interesting outlining method :D

    • @SaraLubratt
      @SaraLubratt  3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      It seems to help me keep everything straight!

  • @carocarooligan6230
    @carocarooligan6230 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Really sounds like something I should try to get a better overview of my plot/ plot points. Thanks for making the video!

    • @SaraLubratt
      @SaraLubratt  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      I'm glad you enjoyed it! I found it super beneficial and hope you do too if you choose to give it a shot!

  • @narcissamalfoy2666
    @narcissamalfoy2666 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I watched your video from 2019 yesterday, and wanted to try it, but didn’t really understand the columns and stuff, but this video helped me understand it a bit more

    • @SaraLubratt
      @SaraLubratt  3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Ok good! The video from 2019 was one of my first youtube videos so it wasn't super well explained, so I'm glad this one helped explain it better!

  • @totu7071
    @totu7071 3 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    I used this method immediately after watching your as well as Kate Caveigh's video regarding this writing method for my NaNoWriMo project as well as for my first book in my 5 book fantasy series. As a matter of fact, I found your as well as Kate's channel only after watching those videos (I am a huge Harry Potter fan and/was a JK Rowling fan. In fact, if not for JK Rowling and the Harry Potter series, I don't think I would have ever gotten into writing, so no complains)

    • @SaraLubratt
      @SaraLubratt  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Oh that's so cool you found our channels from these videos, thanks for sharing that!

  • @maia_gaia
    @maia_gaia 3 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    This is such an interesting (but simple) way to outline. I've tried using beat sheets, and they just don't work for me, so maybe this would be a good one to try.

    • @SaraLubratt
      @SaraLubratt  3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      I know people rave about beat sheets but those have never really worked for me so maybe this would work well for you!

  • @gioantonio4016
    @gioantonio4016 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    This video was great! I'm planning a fantasy series as well and my outlining process is very similar to this like I really only see a few things about my outlining process that are different from this. I totally want to try color coding though because it seems to work for you! I'm curious as to how long your chapters are because they seem very long but I remember you on a live stream saying your chapters are short so I'm curious as to how long they really are. Great video:)

    • @SaraLubratt
      @SaraLubratt  3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Thanks Gio! My chapter lengths have gotten longer through drafts but draft 1 they were quite short or very long and now on draft 3 they are much more consistent in length. I'm not sure how many words because I don't have it in front of me right now but most are between 4 and 6 pages in 1.15 spacing on a Word Document.

  • @bodine219
    @bodine219 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    I definitely need to try this method, at least for my second draft.

    • @SaraLubratt
      @SaraLubratt  3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      I found it so helpful in clearing my head and refocusing! I hope it works well for you!

  • @caraschwegman5462
    @caraschwegman5462 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    How do you plot your subplots? I’m plotting my book right now but I can’t figure out how I should plot out my subplots.

    • @SaraLubratt
      @SaraLubratt  2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      This method helped me with that with the columns on the further right, just things in other subplots I wanted to happen roughly in what chapter

  • @willermy8579
    @willermy8579 10 หลายเดือนก่อน

    This is really technical. I like it.

  • @LaurelMoring
    @LaurelMoring 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    This seems like a great outlining method for series! It’s probably a little much for me as my YA contemporaries are all stand-alone books (thus far), but definitely something I would try if I was writing something that required more intensive plotting.

    • @SaraLubratt
      @SaraLubratt  3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Do you outline for your YA contemporaries or do you pants them?

    • @LaurelMoring
      @LaurelMoring 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      @@SaraLubratt I outline. I have a hodgepodge of systems that work for me. My first step is to create the formatting of the book in Scrivener, then I create scenes - I typically start with one for every 1000 words (though the scenes often get broken-up differently throughout the editing process). And then write a sentence or two about what is happening in each scene. So for NaNo for example I started with 50 scene cards with a few sentences on each to lead me through the drafting process.

    • @SaraLubratt
      @SaraLubratt  3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      @@LaurelMoring Oh that sounds so cool! I've never heard of that method before!

    • @LaurelMoring
      @LaurelMoring 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      @@SaraLubratt I made it up as I went to be honest lol. Seems to work well for me though!

    • @SaraLubratt
      @SaraLubratt  3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      @@LaurelMoring I think you should make it an official thing! Have you made a video about it because I think it would do well!

  • @kenanlancaster
    @kenanlancaster 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    I think I'd be down to try this outlining method for when I rewrite my books into my series. I tend to plot and pants so I guess I'm a plantser.

    • @SaraLubratt
      @SaraLubratt  3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      That's so exciting Kenan! I recommend trying this method!

  • @writative8285
    @writative8285 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    I am covetous of your organization skills. I think this might be a good outlining method to try for my next project, whatever that is. Great job Sara. Maybe it's the pancakes that powered your productivity so well. Pancakes are a super food? yes I think so

    • @SaraLubratt
      @SaraLubratt  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Hahaha omg pancakes are a superfood, that's what the scientists need to be talking about, not those blueberries and acai. If you are looking to try a new outlining method for your next writing endeavor, I suggest giving this one a shot!

  • @Musicienne-DAB1995
    @Musicienne-DAB1995 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Using this method right now while watching the video, not least because I am lost at sea over a current chapter, and the end point for my WIP. I really enjoyed seeing how your ideas for Books 2 and 3 developed as a result of this outlining method. It definitely seems as though this works for multi-POV stories. I wonder why the prominence of certain POVs have changed in the subsequent books. Perhaps you needed to write the first 1 before realising their story wasn't over? Great video!

    • @SaraLubratt
      @SaraLubratt  3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      That's awesome! I hope that trying this method out helped you discover some things about your story!
      Yeah I'm not sure why the prominence of the POVs shifted but I'm just along for the ride!

  • @BrookWrites
    @BrookWrites 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Lol this makes me want to use this method but it seems so daunting lol I might have to attempt it for my fantasy novel I have waiting in the wings.

    • @SaraLubratt
      @SaraLubratt  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      I think it's a lot easier than it looks!

  • @CharlieeWriter
    @CharlieeWriter 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Does project DE book 1 follow your outline exactly? Also love the color coding!

    • @SaraLubratt
      @SaraLubratt  3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      It has changed a bit since draft one but draft one did follow this outline very closely! But I did make the outline when I was 216,000 words into the story but using this method helped me find the ending of the first book!

    • @CharlieeWriter
      @CharlieeWriter 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@SaraLubratt ah ok. Interesting very interesting

  • @kenanlancaster
    @kenanlancaster 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Will you do a PART THREE? (that's just a joke but that would be amazing)

    • @SaraLubratt
      @SaraLubratt  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Lol I probably will when I get to book 2 😂

  • @eleanorhowlett7296
    @eleanorhowlett7296 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I’m a pantser, but I “back plan” once first draft is complete. It’s a little like this but I’m not as organised as using a spreadsheet 😂 I just make a TON of notes on scrivener, hand-draw a kind of flowchart with what happens in every scene (which I call a skeleton plot/draft) and try to make it all somehow make sense

    • @SaraLubratt
      @SaraLubratt  3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Oh wow that sounds complex! But it sounds great!

  • @allmyloveal1338
    @allmyloveal1338 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    What does DE stand for? I remember CBH but I can never find where you say DE 😭

    • @SaraLubratt
      @SaraLubratt  3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Hahaha I'm so sorry but I've never said what DE means (yet)! I'm hoping to wait until it has a real title and then I can share what it meant!

  • @jhilmilgil4512
    @jhilmilgil4512 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Is the book you were working on published? I'd love to read it!

    • @SaraLubratt
      @SaraLubratt  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Not quite yet but I'm working on it and keeping people updated!

  • @jethalaalchampaklaalgada7927
    @jethalaalchampaklaalgada7927 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Hey Sara...I havent started writing anything till yet (exept my assignments)..
    My question was is it possible for any human to imagine like JK ROWLING and put words to that??
    ❤❤
    Edit : You look cute👀

    • @SaraLubratt
      @SaraLubratt  2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      I think her thought process was interesting to explore!

  • @user-yu4rh6zj9x
    @user-yu4rh6zj9x 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    i'm curious about why and how you break your book into parts according to your pov's. i don't think i've ever seen this before

    • @SaraLubratt
      @SaraLubratt  3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Do you mean breaking my book into different columns for characters and subplots or saying "part 1" for chapter chunks?

    • @user-yu4rh6zj9x
      @user-yu4rh6zj9x 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@SaraLubratt not about the outline, about the drafting. i often hear you saying about how the book spend some time on a pov, and then changes, spending some more on another one. i just thought it was interesting bc most of the books i read
      intersperse the pov, instead of spending a long time on one and then repeting!

    • @SaraLubratt
      @SaraLubratt  3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      @@user-yu4rh6zj9x Ok I understand what you're saying now, thanks for clearing that up. I wrote the first book by writing each point of view by themselves because I wanted to make sure that each POV makes sense on it's own and could be a strong story on its own to ensure that after draft two when I put the POVs together that the story was stronger because each of the POVs were strong on their own. So now it reads like a regular book with alternating POVs for each chapter or so but when I drafted it, I drafted them separately. Does that make sense?

    • @user-yu4rh6zj9x
      @user-yu4rh6zj9x 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      @@SaraLubratt Ohh, i get it! That's really interesting and pretty smart too! Thank u for explaining :)

  • @davidneal9368
    @davidneal9368 ปีที่แล้ว

    What app you using for plot gridding?

    • @SaraLubratt
      @SaraLubratt  ปีที่แล้ว

      Excel

    • @davidneal9368
      @davidneal9368 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@SaraLubratt I thought so. So yesturday downloaded a free plot greed. An hour ago downloaded the free Canva app for plots.
      I'm using the Plotgrid app inspired by the writer of Harry Potter. My Q is. How to split pages from one page to start a new. And, how to add on chapters. The thing is, when writing I like to see separate sheets. Otherwise how do know when you've from one page to another?

    • @davidneal9368
      @davidneal9368 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@SaraLubratt I'm now using the plotgrid app. Does it have a automatic page number you can click on. So you can see where one page ends and another starts? Also how to add on Chapters. As this is a free app.

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    @ducknoisesintensify8007 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    when ever i am getting really bad gender dysphoria as a closeted genderfluid whos mom just told them that they cant cut their hair anymroe the only thing that does not make me dysphoric i come to your chanel or the try guys
    thanks

    • @SaraLubratt
      @SaraLubratt  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      I'm so sorry to hear that. If you ever need to talk about anything, please know I'm here. I'm glad you come to my channel when you seek distraction and comfort. I can't imagine how difficult that is but you are who you are and you need to be true to yourself more than anything else. Please know I'll be sending thoughts and positivity your way.

    • @ducknoisesintensify8007
      @ducknoisesintensify8007 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@SaraLubratt thank you!

  • @georgeskate78
    @georgeskate78 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    I don’t admire JK Rowling’s views but I admire what she has done and how she put a smile on millions around

    • @SaraLubratt
      @SaraLubratt  3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      I agree. I wish she wouldn't have said some of the things she said but I really enjoy HP and I found this outlining she used to be very helpful

    • @georgeskate78
      @georgeskate78 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@SaraLubratt Absolutely, really enjoyed the video btw. Very helpful. I am writing my own book as well. So thank you this really means a lot. Keep up with the great content 😊

    • @SaraLubratt
      @SaraLubratt  3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@georgeskate78 Thank you! Happy writing!

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      @patnor7354 6 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Truth has become very unpopular among some people these days. Doesn't change that it is the truth though.