Honestly you got Act 1 down almost to a tee, down to a few of the jokes. Of course rather than being a character study for Jax and Ragatha it went in the direction of AI self-awareness and more Punished Pomni, but still
Finn, you are a quality fanboy and a quality editor, who makes very quality gushy fanboy content about a very quality medium of artistic expression. Thank you for existing
Jax here: I’m said due to my personal drama and beef with my past and people leaving me. Jax in the actual show: WHERE IS THE [CAINE CENSOR SOUND EFFECT] BLOOD AND DEATH?!?!
I'm half way through this, and I have to say I ADORE your alternate plot prediction. I caught this video before Episode 2 even came out, though I never watched it because really I'd rather dive into the Second episode without any pre-concieved notions (Something I'm thankful for doing). Thats only because I'd rather not let that effect my enjoyment when some of these predictions fall through. I'll just say I seriously loved your different take based entirely on preview. It's insane too, almost everything at the beginning leading up towards the truck fight was damn near spot on! And I think we all thought that bit with Jax was meant to be a deep character moment too, instead of the quick misdirect it was (Though nice spotting the tied up gator detail, its great how you theorised around that) You should keep doing this! The story you Concocted, based off of limited information was really fun to listen to. (Yeah I might as well subscribe too. You've got a way with words)
It’s different from TADC episode 2 but I loved listening to it, it was funny, a little sad with angst, and beautiful thanks for doing this it was amazing :)
You Were Right About the Nightmare, Zooble Now Going, Gangle's Mask Breaking By A Blue Man, Austrailing Acents, Jax Throwing Pomni, And The Fudge-Cliff.
If this is true, how much you wanna bet some of the next episode’s conflict stems from Zooble (who hates Jax the most) completely missing this character development?
As soon as the video was uploaded, Glitch posted another screenshot of the desert NPC locals furious with Pomni and Jax. I think they are not going to take to kindly to the loss their precious syrup. Also I am really impressed that you caught out Pomni being torpedoed out of the sea, I did not see that.
10:33 Ragatha: You need to have some sort of respect for your friends! Kinger: Ragatha Ragatha: You have no idea how much you put us through on a daily basis! Kinger: Ragatha Ragatha: *You're an awful person!* Kinger: Ragatha Ragatha: *WHAT?* * fudge monster peers over their shoulders * Kinger: He has something to say to you
The fudge monster is about to sing a little villain song when ragatha smacks him straight in the face. Fudge monster: ow! Ragatha: can't you see I'm trying to scold my friend here, (points to jax). The fudge monster looks annoyed Fudge monster: ooooooh, you're no fun. (picks up their truck and is about to eat them with Jax looking scared as he dangles at the front).
The "ARSON" caught me so off guard I just bust out laughing.(EDIT:When the episode releases Im gonna watch it 20 times then rewatch this video and see if he managed to accuratly predict anything in it.)(Edit 2:How the hell did I get so many likes?)
As much how I’m a bit upset that the actual episode 2 didn’t really match with this. I’m glad that the actual episode had a heart warming ending. Although I did wish Jax and Puprle gator’s conversation was canon.
I like this guy’s editing skills. Also that was a really beautiful story, I might even like than the upcoming episode 2. And please watch BFDI:TPOT. It’s a great show that I consider indie. And like, your avatar looks like a BFDI character.
Of the 3 indie cartoons referenced at the start, I've only seen 2. I haven't watched Monkey Wrench yet. I would also like to throw in the ring the various D&D story animations out there, especially Dingo Doodles and her Fool's Gold Campaign Story. I've been following it since the start, and it's amazing how Dingo has developed her style over the years.
Coming back after having just watched the episode to say that I liked your prediction more Finn. Both this and the first episode have pomni doing something that breaks her sanity, encoutners wackiness in the fabric of the game, with her being the A plot while every other character is the B plot. I was really excited by your premise to have each character get their own development, but it might only realistically be Pomni at this point, and I'm scared the show is going to be a lot more of just her while everyone else is just existing to exist. It kinda upset me that the image of Jax downtrodden at the back of the tanker wasn't any deeper than, "I'm mad there wasn't more blood and explosions." Maybe this is a miscalculation in my own expectations of the show as a whole, but for now I will still be watching with an twinge of, "this could be so much more," in my throat. I'm finding that I have that twinge with everything I'm consuming lately, and it's concerning.
That sounds very concerning and sad some of my fravorit shows are thoues I never expect anything from and are surprised when they do have something. Like dew drop dieries or hanazuki , shasha and Milo maybe try to find some obscure stuff that no one talked about and see if you like it.
Sounds like your version of the syrup reacts differently to sweet/treat based creatures like a toddler on a sugar high, so sugar drunk. I LOVE Ragatha Mom!!!!!! I LOVE how you portray Pomni and the Abstractions actually trying to communicate. This whole plot was perfect and fits in this universe! Even if nothing is true it was super fun to hear you gush and fanboy and create such a fitting fanfiction in this digital world.
it’s like watching a twisted recap. every bare bones idea is right if slightly misplaced. until 13:26 where it kinda gets really wrong because of the confusion of who the leader was
In the pilot near the end, Caine has this weird expression when he hears that Kaufmo abstracted as if he knew that already and also that Pomni was supposed to find him to ask for help. So maybe he sets up tests to see how the circus members will react, or he just wants to make people happy and nothing in his programming prohibits him from doing that in a way that results in emotional damage. (Like maybe he gives people what they think will make them happy not what will actually help).
I feel like with how you wrote it, the character development could be the same as you worded it but in a different episode. I believe they are mostly trying to still introduce everyone. Maybe in season 2, is there is one, we will get into all the character's deep seeded issues.
If you decide to do this for episode three, I'll actually watch it BEFORE I watch the actual episode. I want to see you write an original episode once the whole show is done. I think it would be cool. :03
Back after watching the second episode you got the dream sequence correct and you almost got the block correct except there was some major differences for example pomni and gummigoo actually becoming friends and jaxs still being an a****** to name a few
I’d really like to see a part three to your Mario movie sequel pitch, and what you would come up with, I also think we waited long enough for a Mario sequel part 3 pitch.
Hm, you are a very talented Storyteller, i honestly could imagine this be the actual Plot of the Episode. It’s going to be interesting to see how the Official Version will turn out to be, i wonder if you might’ve been more close than you think? By the way, have you seen what the curators have said about Jax? Apparently he’s going to get worse as the Show goes on. Also, do you know of any of the AUs made for this Show?
As someone who's been following Goose for years prior to TADC, I can safely say that this has FAR too much genuine heart to be even close to the actual episode. When Goose writes emotional moments (like the scene with the partially abstracted Ragatha in the pilot) it always ends up being in service of comedic cruelty to the characters and nothing else. Another thing is that I can confidently say that Goose will take the approach of Jax just genuinely being a callous sadist with nothing more to him, again, it's her sense of humor. Going back to that thing you mentioned about the prospect of the characters improving through personal trials, I pretty sure we're in for the exact opposite, of Caine's games only making the players' mental states worse, or driving them to just generally be worse people. I'm no saying I didn't like the video, just a bunch of thoughts I had as a dedicated Gooseworx obsessive. As a general rule of thumb for future predictions, just think of it like this: If the twist of the syrup being a drug to distract the kingdom's residents did happen, it would be the setup to a joke of the citizens forming and angry mob and chasing the performers out for trying to cut off their supply and happily buying the gators out (Edit: this tweet from Glitch might've just proved this is exactly what will happen: twitter.com/glitch_prod/status/1783934395113500919). That's the kind of thing Goose always does, those jokes are basically the reason she creates in the first place. You're welcome!
@@MELEMADE338 I think that was more to do with most of the screen time taking place in one off locations and not the circus grounds. And again, this assessment isn't just based on the pilot, but Goose's library of work as a whole.
I'm honestly surprised you never tried to do a review of the Netflix show Kid Cosmic, considering it was made by the same guys who made Wonder over Yonder. Great video still!
Honestly one of the only things I would change is something I want for every episode. For Jax to also be with the same character that Pomni is with during the episode and all the other episodes and slowly reveal parts of his past and what he’s really like behind his emotional defensive walls. (And no I refuse to believe he’s an NPC.). With maybe the 4th to last episode being all about him, pomni, and someone like Gangle or Ragatua going on one final adventure being focused on Jax and his backstory. (A sort of nod to the “I have no mouth and must scream” video game.) Jax breaks down, possibly almost abstracts, but his friends calm him down and assure him that he’s ok. Then when they get back Jax would slowly try and make things right to all the other circus mates (since they apparently all hate him I guess.). I would also have the last 3 episodes be lore focused on Caine or something similar like that. But aside from that I have nothing else to had to this…gonna put this all in my own little AU though. Jax would still love screwing with people through since he loves doing that so much. Old habits die hard after all. He never stop breaking the fourth wall though. Nothing will stop him from doing that. Believe me. Caine’s tried. He just can’t stop him. No one can. He has power of “not giving a jack crap” (GOD this was long. Sorry if it seems like a lot.) -L
Here what you got right Pomni did had a nightmare about abstracted The gummy alligator where Australia One of the gummy alligator did play a role but it was There leader not the purple one There was a car chase Pomni was separated from the group but it was more of a glitch into the ground not in the surpe ocean Gangle comedy mask broke So you where kind of right but also wrong at the same time
Overall those are some good guesses on what might happen but I think you're being too optimistic when it comes to Jax. I believe Goose hinted that he'd only get worse as time goes on.
Dude, Finn, why are you not working with Vivziepop and/or Glitch Productions? Seriously, they need more people like you on their team. Your skills in writing and story structure are what film companies need in their projects.
Fun fact: Holding your pinkie out while drinking tea is actually rude, as it implies you consider yourself superior or more sophisticated than your host/guest
I’m just going to list of how many right things and how many wrong things you got also this video was great just a listing of the things. Chapter 1: you kind of got everything wrong but you were very close about Pomni dream. Chapter 2: before I begin, I just think. 7:40 was funny because he says that kinger practicing holding up his pinky, but literally one second later he just picks his nonexistent ear now let’s get back on track most of it he got wrong and with the gummy gators (sorry I forgot there name) they’re actually stealing the syrup to help their village also at 9:09 this is a reference from pizza tower there’s a move in the game where you can taught it even has the same sound effect now on to Chapter 3: again mostly everything wrong but first the fudge monster actually was mostly friendly just wanting to eat the candy people and does not have any powers and Ponmi and the yellow gator fell out of the map. Chapter 4: again everything wrong and Jack’s being depressed is kind of close, but he was just disappointed with no chaos and also that was the wrong gator. It was supposed to be the yellow one Chapter 5: mostly everything wrong again there was no part two to Pomni nightmare and also jacks is actually going to get even a worse one the show continues. Chapter 6: mostly everything a lot again I forgot to say this in chapter 4, but the gummy gators care a lot about each other and the village and also even know your theory wrong about this but I do like the duo with the purple gator and Jax but in the real episode, it was just Ponmi and the yellow gator instead so you were really close with that though. Chapter 7: I do know digital Circus inspired. I have no mouth, but I must scream, but I was a little bit scared of it so I never researched it, but I didn’t know that so yeah, the characters might overcome the floss A very good theory and your grade is is…… C- but again great theory.
I missed These Type Of Video's. I like The Thing's You Do with A Story Script For an Episode. But I Have Question's 1- Where's Animation Multiverse? 2- Since Mr Puzzles Was Shown At The Beginning... will You Make A Smg4 Video? 3- Where's Can i pitch The Mario Movie Sequel Part 3? and Finally 4- Will You Make More Of These Script's For Future Episodes in a TH-cam Indie Show? and Those Are My Question's I Hope You Will Be able To Reply Thank You. Sorry If i Overwhelmed You.
*sees this after the episode dropped*
hahah,imagine thinking Jax would wanna HELP the Candy Kingdom, let alone actually save it from anything.
Honestly you got Act 1 down almost to a tee, down to a few of the jokes.
Of course rather than being a character study for Jax and Ragatha it went in the direction of AI self-awareness and more Punished Pomni, but still
That and it might be a little early to subvert the formula, this is the first episode made after getting picked up as a full series
Finn, you are a quality fanboy and a quality editor, who makes very quality gushy fanboy content about a very quality medium of artistic expression.
Thank you for existing
Truer words I have yet to find.
I wish there was more of him in this and other fandoms 😔
Jax here: I’m said due to my personal drama and beef with my past and people leaving me.
Jax in the actual show: WHERE IS THE [CAINE CENSOR SOUND EFFECT] BLOOD AND DEATH?!?!
I still feel like he might get that development in the future.
Pomni here: WHERES THE EXIT!?
her in the actual show: I know how to feel in this circus
7:47
I REALLY hope they're called the Gummy Gators, that's f-ing GENIUS
and they were.
I'm half way through this, and I have to say I ADORE your alternate plot prediction.
I caught this video before Episode 2 even came out, though I never watched it because really I'd rather dive into the Second episode without any pre-concieved notions (Something I'm thankful for doing). Thats only because I'd rather not let that effect my enjoyment when some of these predictions fall through.
I'll just say I seriously loved your different take based entirely on preview. It's insane too, almost everything at the beginning leading up towards the truck fight was damn near spot on! And I think we all thought that bit with Jax was meant to be a deep character moment too, instead of the quick misdirect it was (Though nice spotting the tied up gator detail, its great how you theorised around that)
You should keep doing this! The story you Concocted, based off of limited information was really fun to listen to.
(Yeah I might as well subscribe too. You've got a way with words)
It’s different from TADC episode 2 but I loved listening to it, it was funny, a little sad with angst, and beautiful thanks for doing this it was amazing :)
Wow you got hearted
I agree 😮 finally not as depressing
@@coolkenman I agree lol I wasn’t expecting to get hearted
I cannot wait till the full episode comes out and see how crazy Finn goes with that
Finn will eat this episode like crazy
You Were Right About the Nightmare, Zooble Now Going, Gangle's Mask Breaking By A Blue Man, Austrailing Acents, Jax Throwing Pomni, And The Fudge-Cliff.
*Not
⚠️Spoiler⚠️. Actually the candy princess name is ‘princess loolilalu’ and the gummy gators name is are ‘gummigoo (the leader), chad , and max.
How do you know that when the episode hasn't premiered yet?
Gooseworx and glitch ( the creators of the show ) gives out leaks for fun
If this is true, how much you wanna bet some of the next episode’s conflict stems from Zooble (who hates Jax the most) completely missing this character development?
As soon as the video was uploaded, Glitch posted another screenshot of the desert NPC locals furious with Pomni and Jax. I think they are not going to take to kindly to the loss their precious syrup.
Also I am really impressed that you caught out Pomni being torpedoed out of the sea, I did not see that.
You know, that moment between the alligator and Jax actually sounds possible. Plus, it explains why Glitch said this is an episode about depression.
I want each episode to have different themes
it will be interesting to have each adventure to be metaphor to the six humans
@Krisshgail
5 stages of grief?
Ep 1 could be denial
@@lilyaka9194 I can definitely see that.
@@krissygail378 i think they will cause goooswork saod that they going through all the emtions withi this show
10:33
Ragatha: You need to have some sort of respect for your friends!
Kinger: Ragatha
Ragatha: You have no idea how much you put us through on a daily basis!
Kinger: Ragatha
Ragatha: *You're an awful person!*
Kinger: Ragatha
Ragatha: *WHAT?*
* fudge monster peers over their shoulders *
Kinger: He has something to say to you
The fudge monster is about to sing a little villain song when ragatha smacks him straight in the face.
Fudge monster: ow!
Ragatha: can't you see I'm trying to scold my friend here, (points to jax).
The fudge monster looks annoyed
Fudge monster: ooooooh, you're no fun.
(picks up their truck and is about to eat them with Jax looking scared as he dangles at the front).
The "ARSON" caught me so off guard I just bust out laughing.(EDIT:When the episode releases Im gonna watch it 20 times then rewatch this video and see if he managed to accuratly predict anything in it.)(Edit 2:How the hell did I get so many likes?)
Same
2:35
arson*
I'm a huge Harlan Ellison fan. So, hearing Finn talk about "I Have No Mouth and I Must Scream" is very funny to me.
That plus I spy is legit the inspo for this series
You got that about 70% correct.
As much how I’m a bit upset that the actual episode 2 didn’t really match with this. I’m glad that the actual episode had a heart warming ending.
Although I did wish Jax and Puprle gator’s conversation was canon.
I like this guy’s editing skills.
Also that was a really beautiful story, I might even like than the upcoming episode 2.
And please watch BFDI:TPOT. It’s a great show that I consider indie. And like, your avatar looks like a BFDI character.
Of the 3 indie cartoons referenced at the start, I've only seen 2. I haven't watched Monkey Wrench yet. I would also like to throw in the ring the various D&D story animations out there, especially Dingo Doodles and her Fool's Gold Campaign Story. I've been following it since the start, and it's amazing how Dingo has developed her style over the years.
SOMEONE ACTUALLY KNOWS OF THE MADLADY!
He thought that Jax was going to emotionally develop
I heard rumors that Episode 2 is going to be a Jax episode and I LOVE this pre-write
Yes :D
Jax isn't the complete focus though
@@MELEMADE338 how do u know?
@@Arielthedog27 gooseworx said she lies for fun
@@MELEMADE338 maybe she wont this time???
I have a question. How did Pomni not go crazy from the syrup if it’s like alcohol?
Coming back after having just watched the episode to say that I liked your prediction more Finn. Both this and the first episode have pomni doing something that breaks her sanity, encoutners wackiness in the fabric of the game, with her being the A plot while every other character is the B plot. I was really excited by your premise to have each character get their own development, but it might only realistically be Pomni at this point, and I'm scared the show is going to be a lot more of just her while everyone else is just existing to exist. It kinda upset me that the image of Jax downtrodden at the back of the tanker wasn't any deeper than, "I'm mad there wasn't more blood and explosions." Maybe this is a miscalculation in my own expectations of the show as a whole, but for now I will still be watching with an twinge of, "this could be so much more," in my throat. I'm finding that I have that twinge with everything I'm consuming lately, and it's concerning.
That sounds very concerning and sad some of my fravorit shows are thoues I never expect anything from and are surprised when they do have something. Like dew drop dieries or hanazuki , shasha and Milo maybe try to find some obscure stuff that no one talked about and see if you like it.
I feel like Jax is still going to go through something. He's definitely going through something.
Sounds like your version of the syrup reacts differently to sweet/treat based creatures like a toddler on a sugar high, so sugar drunk. I LOVE Ragatha Mom!!!!!! I LOVE how you portray Pomni and the Abstractions actually trying to communicate. This whole plot was perfect and fits in this universe! Even if nothing is true it was super fun to hear you gush and fanboy and create such a fitting fanfiction in this digital world.
Looking back there was WAAAAYYY too much Character development in here compared to what really happened, Too wholesomely realistic XD
That was crazy good and my world is shooketh. Whether it's what happens or not, Finn can really write!
it’s like watching a twisted recap. every bare bones idea is right if slightly misplaced. until 13:26 where it kinda gets really wrong because of the confusion of who the leader was
And then Finn is completely right LMAO. (Would love if he was right about the episode, cuz tbh, this sounds like quite the awesome episode!)
Nope.
this was great! make another one next trailer please!
bro you just fed me with that i can now sleep in peace cause i have a potential episode 2 of the amazing digital circus in mind THANKS
In the pilot near the end, Caine has this weird expression when he hears that Kaufmo abstracted as if he knew that already and also that Pomni was supposed to find him to ask for help. So maybe he sets up tests to see how the circus members will react, or he just wants to make people happy and nothing in his programming prohibits him from doing that in a way that results in emotional damage. (Like maybe he gives people what they think will make them happy not what will actually help).
I feel like with how you wrote it, the character development could be the same as you worded it but in a different episode. I believe they are mostly trying to still introduce everyone. Maybe in season 2, is there is one, we will get into all the character's deep seeded issues.
Oh you were sooooo wrong you were right about the dream thing at Least some of it but the rest is wrong i LOVE the approach they took tbh
You were probably about 50% correct, nice.
Finally a Monkey Wrench reference 😂
*You were almost RIGHT about everything!*
You’re not the only one who knows that from experience that depression will never go away.
Im having Déjà vu with this "early access" concept, and its amazing 🤩 (also shakes violently)
Lol it's funny how much he got wrong but there wasn't a lot to work with before the episode so makes sense
“45 seconds? I’m sure I can squeeze a 10 page script out of that!”
Buddy, the video is 30 minutes, 30 seconds.
*HOW THE HECK DID YOU THAT!? XD*
The humor is so funny XD This is the best indie animation review channel!
Bro guessed over half of the stuff that actualy happened 😂
0:01 murder drones: Am I a joke to you
Jax is literally me this episode wtf
I love how develope jack get's❤
If you decide to do this for episode three, I'll actually watch it BEFORE I watch the actual episode. I want to see you write an original episode once the whole show is done. I think it would be cool. :03
Regardless of whether or not this lines up with the actual episode 2 the premise behind this idea is for a lack of better terms amazing.
Back after watching the second episode you got the dream sequence correct and you almost got the block correct except there was some major differences for example pomni and gummigoo actually becoming friends and jaxs still being an a****** to name a few
Dude, you were pretty spot on.
DO I HEAR GOAT SIMULATOR MMO MUSIC!? XD
Getting in when I can
And the script watching hell of a boss in husband hotel has the cottages standards changed
I now consider this canon.
Man, you really did Gummigoo dirty, didn’t you?
3:06 DONT PRETEND LIKE I DONT REGCONIZE THIS GOAT SIMULATOR MUSIC THAT CRAP WAS MY CHILDHOOD
SAME.
mr puzzles appear in the static shots, let's f#cking goòoooooooo
Let's f#@ing gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooòoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo:)
Bro summoned the osc
lmao
Also great to hear your mind run a creative marathon 👌.
Also I still hope you experience Murder Drones and share your thoughts someday x)
I’d really like to see a part three to your Mario movie sequel pitch, and what you would come up with, I also think we waited long enough for a Mario sequel part 3 pitch.
Hm, you are a very talented Storyteller, i honestly could imagine this be the actual Plot of the Episode.
It’s going to be interesting to see how the Official Version will turn out to be, i wonder if you might’ve been more close than you think?
By the way, have you seen what the curators have said about Jax?
Apparently he’s going to get worse as the Show goes on.
Also, do you know of any of the AUs made for this Show?
As someone who's been following Goose for years prior to TADC, I can safely say that this has FAR too much genuine heart to be even close to the actual episode. When Goose writes emotional moments (like the scene with the partially abstracted Ragatha in the pilot) it always ends up being in service of comedic cruelty to the characters and nothing else. Another thing is that I can confidently say that Goose will take the approach of Jax just genuinely being a callous sadist with nothing more to him, again, it's her sense of humor. Going back to that thing you mentioned about the prospect of the characters improving through personal trials, I pretty sure we're in for the exact opposite, of Caine's games only making the players' mental states worse, or driving them to just generally be worse people.
I'm no saying I didn't like the video, just a bunch of thoughts I had as a dedicated Gooseworx obsessive. As a general rule of thumb for future predictions, just think of it like this:
If the twist of the syrup being a drug to distract the kingdom's residents did happen, it would be the setup to a joke of the citizens forming and angry mob and chasing the performers out for trying to cut off their supply and happily buying the gators out (Edit: this tweet from Glitch might've just proved this is exactly what will happen: twitter.com/glitch_prod/status/1783934395113500919). That's the kind of thing Goose always does, those jokes are basically the reason she creates in the first place.
You're welcome!
@@MELEMADE338 I think that was more to do with most of the screen time taking place in one off locations and not the circus grounds. And again, this assessment isn't just based on the pilot, but Goose's library of work as a whole.
This was a little similar to what actually happened.
10:21
Fitting considering Jax's VA
what do you mean.
edit: just realised, you’re so right.
Well that was an entertaining episode write up. Here’s hoping the actual McCoy is just as interesting. 😊
Well at least he got the dream sequence right.
He got more than that right.
I like your reflection on Jax, it's a shame it's just because he's boring and it's not profound at all.
Well, we still have 6 episodes to go.
Omg he predicted the Australian accents
This feels like it could be the episode, in my opinion. I can’t wait to see how accurate you were from this video
8:30 IS THAT THE WANDER OVER YONDER FONT???????????
There are some good guess in here, good job
Like if you’re still waiting for him to talk about Murder Drones
BOOOOOOOOOT
Ah, i see you have an addiction to meaningless numbers too.
I'm honestly surprised you never tried to do a review of the Netflix show Kid Cosmic, considering it was made by the same guys who made Wonder over Yonder. Great video still!
You were di wrong about Jax he’s a monster
Yeah, he is, but I still feel like there's more to him. We'll have to wait and see.
23:22
Kinda sounds like Blitz’s mindset
Its crazy how much he got right like the block thing and the arm thing when i saw it i thought he had insider info
Honestly one of the only things I would change is something I want for every episode. For Jax to also be with the same character that Pomni is with during the episode and all the other episodes and slowly reveal parts of his past and what he’s really like behind his emotional defensive walls. (And no I refuse to believe he’s an NPC.). With maybe the 4th to last episode being all about him, pomni, and someone like Gangle or Ragatua going on one final adventure being focused on Jax and his backstory. (A sort of nod to the “I have no mouth and must scream” video game.) Jax breaks down, possibly almost abstracts, but his friends calm him down and assure him that he’s ok. Then when they get back Jax would slowly try and make things right to all the other circus mates (since they apparently all hate him I guess.). I would also have the last 3 episodes be lore focused on Caine or something similar like that. But aside from that I have nothing else to had to this…gonna put this all in my own little AU though. Jax would still love screwing with people through since he loves doing that so much. Old habits die hard after all. He never stop breaking the fourth wall though. Nothing will stop him from doing that. Believe me. Caine’s tried. He just can’t stop him. No one can. He has power of “not giving a jack crap”
(GOD this was long. Sorry if it seems like a lot.)
-L
0:17 Hey look its mr puzzles the character that probably isn’t dead but was removed from the show too early
Thx for the 1 like
You got the nightmare sequence from the beginning right.
Thanks for another great video Finny-Finn-Finn and hug youre furbabies all 💙🐱💙
(Early!)
16:41 Ooh, you watch Nintendo High, too?
Here what you got right
Pomni did had a nightmare about abstracted
The gummy alligator where Australia
One of the gummy alligator did play a role but it was There leader not the purple one
There was a car chase
Pomni was separated from the group but it was more of a glitch into the ground not in the surpe ocean
Gangle comedy mask broke
So you where kind of right but also wrong at the same time
Syrup was a valuable resource to the Candy Kingdom
Pomni gets closer to the group at the end
Overall those are some good guesses on what might happen but I think you're being too optimistic when it comes to Jax. I believe Goose hinted that he'd only get worse as time goes on.
Woah, your version of Jax is sooooooo much less of an evil tosser than the real one 🤣🤣🤣
Dude, Finn, why are you not working with Vivziepop and/or Glitch Productions? Seriously, they need more people like you on their team. Your skills in writing and story structure are what film companies need in their projects.
Considering how well this prediction is made, I wouldn’t be surprised if it’s almost or just is what the episode turns out to be like.
Fun fact: Holding your pinkie out while drinking tea is actually rude, as it implies you consider yourself superior or more sophisticated than your host/guest
Interesting.
I’m just going to list of how many right things and how many wrong things you got also this video was great just a listing of the things. Chapter 1: you kind of got everything wrong but you were very close about Pomni dream. Chapter 2: before I begin, I just think. 7:40 was funny because he says that kinger practicing holding up his pinky, but literally one second later he just picks his nonexistent ear now let’s get back on track most of it he got wrong and with the gummy gators (sorry I forgot there name) they’re actually stealing the syrup to help their village also at 9:09 this is a reference from pizza tower there’s a move in the game where you can taught it even has the same sound effect now on to Chapter 3: again mostly everything wrong but first the fudge monster actually was mostly friendly just wanting to eat the candy people and does not have any powers and Ponmi and the yellow gator fell out of the map. Chapter 4: again everything wrong and Jack’s being depressed is kind of close, but he was just disappointed with no chaos and also that was the wrong gator. It was supposed to be the yellow one Chapter 5: mostly everything wrong again there was no part two to Pomni nightmare and also jacks is actually going to get even a worse one the show continues. Chapter 6: mostly everything a lot again I forgot to say this in chapter 4, but the gummy gators care a lot about each other and the village and also even know your theory wrong about this but I do like the duo with the purple gator and Jax but in the real episode, it was just Ponmi and the yellow gator instead so you were really close with that though. Chapter 7: I do know digital Circus inspired. I have no mouth, but I must scream, but I was a little bit scared of it so I never researched it, but I didn’t know that so yeah, the characters might overcome the floss A very good theory and your grade is is…… C- but again great theory.
3:37 this is my favorite part
You were correct at the beginning but then basically 2% correct about the rest😢
That Caine impression is freaking crazy!
The tanker thing reminds me of “Sorcerer” and the French-Spanish (and/or Italian) movie the Bill Freidkin (technically) remake was based on.
well the aussie gators were right
He was right about a lot of things.
6:16 finn did you use a clip of happy perry from Steven universe?
Hey Finn! The trailer for TADC episode 4 released yesterday! Are you gonna make a 30 minute prediction on it?
Well ya got some of it right this time. Good job 👍
Sigh.... That's a better character development for Jax of what they gave us.....
I missed These Type Of Video's. I like The Thing's You Do with A Story Script For an Episode. But I Have Question's 1- Where's Animation Multiverse? 2- Since Mr Puzzles Was Shown At The Beginning... will You Make A Smg4 Video? 3- Where's Can i pitch The Mario Movie Sequel Part 3? and Finally 4- Will You Make More Of These Script's For Future Episodes in a TH-cam Indie Show? and Those Are My Question's I Hope You Will Be able To Reply Thank You. Sorry If i Overwhelmed You.
You made the tadc ep 2 better. Your vids are awesome
I think the mapel syrup is the prize for the advencher
What would happen if you got it completely right?