Hannah! You are a fantastic story teller. The way you express your characters emotions is not only authentic but tremendously delightful and AI cannot achieve this. Its your USP. Please don't change. Thank you for entertaining us and I hope you will go from strength to strength. God bless!
Truly enjoyed this story though part of me felt like this should have been a series. Especially finding out about Juliet true identity. Yes you can’t help who you love but I would have loved to see Derek reaction to Juliet being his sister & how it possibly would have changed things. Though this is a fantasy most of us know whether through birth or adoption legal siblings can’t marry. So trying to find the loophole here 🤔💭
Thank you I really do appreciate your comment as it makes me a better writer, but in some cultures in Africa, such marriages are allowed. I was writing based on that perspective. But it is not really talked about. Different cultures have different value systems too.
@ Ahh, I was just now in the middle of researching this as I figured it might be the casee. Still, I appreciate the story & the educational knowledge of some African cultures
Hannah! You are a fantastic story teller. The way you express your characters emotions is not only authentic but tremendously delightful and AI cannot achieve this. Its your USP. Please don't change. Thank you for entertaining us and I hope you will go from strength to strength. God bless!
Thank you very much for your kind words. God bless you
Beautiful story ❤️ 😍 ♥️
Nice story thank you ❤❤❤❤
Interesting story ❤
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I love love love this story ❤❤❤🎉🎉🎉
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First one to comment today ❤😂🎉
Thank you dearie take your flowers 🌸🌺💐🌷🌻🌼
Treat everyone with kindness
Nice ❤
Glad you like it
Destiny can be delayed but can't be denied 😢
Truly enjoyed this story though part of me felt like this should have been a series. Especially finding out about Juliet true identity.
Yes you can’t help who you love but I would have loved to see Derek reaction to Juliet being his sister & how it possibly would have changed things.
Though this is a fantasy most of us know whether through birth or adoption legal siblings can’t marry.
So trying to find the loophole here 🤔💭
Thank you I really do appreciate your comment as it makes me a better writer, but in some cultures in Africa, such marriages are allowed. I was writing based on that perspective. But it is not really talked about. Different cultures have different value systems too.
@ Ahh, I was just now in the middle of researching this as I figured it might be the casee. Still, I appreciate the story & the educational knowledge of some African cultures
@@NaeDoll29 thank you for your intelligent contribution. it is well appreciated
It’s a good thing she was kidnapped, because it led to her discovering her mother, she would have just married her brother.
😂😂The guy is adopted she is the real deal
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They are brothers, even though Derick was adopted, they weren't supposed to get married
Some cultures in Africa allow it
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