I thought of him last night Underneath the starlight The moon lit up the darkness and whispered of distance The wind heard my heart and the silence was a song I wondered for a time, as i stood alone
Here's something I came up about my lady.. PROMISE --------------- I promise to love you, it's my favorite duty of life to cherish you, I love your silliness, Your googly eye pictures makes me laugh, You know we're some dorks Please dont get me on your smile it's my Kryptonite that warms the soul The duty of me being your man is to make us happy, I may not be good at spilling my guts But this is who I am letting you know that there is nobody else in this world that compares to you, It's crazy you're the only person that's 24/7 on my mind, and that's a sincere thought no lie, You consume me, I love your nakedness That's my everything and Being naked is pretty funny, And funny is what I want to be!! So to my better half Let's laugh!! Take this rib, ouch; It's okay if I'm in pain I love you Maybe I try to hard I just want to be myself with you. Maybe I don't think you accept me? Butchya do! I hear the rhythm of our heart beating as one Take my hand let go and let God! Speaking in tongues of the Angels Hallelujah! Love has won! Writer Ryan K Pendley
I hope someday I could be trained to improve my writing more. I'm 19 and I wish to become a known poet someday. .... Drove together under the amber skies Rode forever in the heavy anchor of ceaseless cries Two gray Octobers passed, I'm still sobbing In the lonely room where you've left your underbone king My mind still recalls, a lucid image of unrivaled agony I was just seventeen since every autumn became a great misery Woke up at five, Kuya tellin' me that you're gone Wishing I was still asleep at that cruel dawn I ran downstairs, then I spotted Their cheeks are wet, their eyes are puffy and red Screaming and begging them to tell me "it's just a dream" as I fell to the ground and threw everything I held Unfortunate fate, You never witnessed me graduate Heaven took you so early before I could let you meet Valentino Rossi Decades of seasons will still feel like yesterday A great father like you has a special place in my heart to stay The world might had only given you 46 years to exist But your unconditional love and care will be eternally missed (it's a poem that I've wrote as a tribute to my dad who passed away 2yrs ago)
Writing it as on 24 JAN 24' Im a 15 y/o 9th grader and i started Writing poems few months back and this is the first poem that I've written in the form of sonnet:) I was looking at the ceiling Pondering if i was healing Many storms came out of the blue And i was left having no clue Life is like hills and valleys for sure Its never going to smooth and pure In the road of life,much bends are there But we must mend our garden with love, sympathy and care In the tapestry of life There's a lot ups and downs But we should always have a smile on face just like a clown In the tapestry of life,there's much to endure There's alot ups and downs but It will take sometime to cure
In order to break the rules you have to know what they are. People who just want to "follow their hearts" are usually just too lazy to learn the rules in the first place.
since human beings began observing, describing, recording, and reflecting on patterns in nature. none of the innumerable texts (verily obtainable on amazon) should represent infallible guidance to perfect poetry, but varying perspectives from people who concern themselves enough with the subject to get the idea to turn that concern into a book or something (not to say anything about the range of value different perspectives can have)
A quote from the book thief “if your eyes could talk what would they say” Don’t write what thing is but what it represents to you I was always inspired more by the metaphysical style of writing as it’s adds grace intelligence and is very thought provoking. It opens limitless ideas as anything can be a metaphor for something else. Also has different meaning to each person making it more relatable to there own life’s with out making it a pity party That’s not to say that standard literal worded songs (or in this context poems ) don’t have there place depending on how there written. The flaw is there very limiting. Also I have heard songs that actually rhyme very little. The soul destroying thing as a lyricist is that people focus more on the melody but couldn’t careless about the words
a true poet realizes that it is not about length of the poem it is figuring out, what is truly necessary to keep, and discard without weakening the pleasure and meaning depth. I am recluse possibly savant poet, as I been told. I grasped every lesson without trouble. I received a stipend at just 25, as a featured poet. In my private coaching my students learn the basic rules for poetry and beginning, without that what you are saying they can not grasp. there is a golden rule for dorm in poetry, there's a golden rule for subject selection....etc.
You know what is the meaning of the words printed on your shirt?”Sudah makan” stands for “eaten” in Malay language...haha,btw a great explaination on how to write a poem.I write in mandarin
This is my first writing. plz give some suggestion in order to improve.... Hey Chocolaty Chashmish The way you read, I only see The way you walk, I only see The way you stare, my heart races The way you blush, I have a crush. Hey Chocolaty Chashmish Your presence in CL, makes me pleasent Your entry in huts, alas! makes me hush Your glasses, oh my goodness makes me fly Your wrist with bracelet while holding a book, Ah! makes me complete. But! Ohh Chocoloty Chashmish You are princess of Punjab, I am the slave of Sindh You are topper of IR, I am hectered by History You analyze present, while I imagine past You are post modernest, I am still stuck with Marxism You read critique of George Orwell, I still love Stalin You are breeze of spring where cold wind breathes out its chill, I am shattered soul of autumn where leaves are falling all around. Thats why, Ohh Chocoloty Chashmish I Get away, I let away All my feelings All my love All my wishes All my desires and I take away, I make away All the pain All the sorrow All the grief All the regrets Though My heart aches My blood boils My soul suffers My body burns But ohh Chocoloty Chashmish I bear when you are near my Raqib.
Weeks come by fast but end slow Am i truly who I am, the person everybody knows When i see her my mind stops I cant think but when she leaves she makes my body wanna drop Another disappointment of me and for my homies Will i ever get the courage or will I end up lonely I don't know how to fix a problem i aint facin face to face If i don't make my move somebodies gonna take my place Ain't nothin stoppin me, just my cowardness I don't feel like a man i feel powerless Excuses made, games played in my mind Im my worst enemy i'm running out of time When i eyes saw her my body Froze Overthinking my words trying to unload My spoken words I don't know what scares me or why I stop Another missed chance makes me wanna plop So many opportunities when will I change I dont know why I couldt even say her name I know I got what it takes, Thats why it bothers me Was it the absence years of my male figure my father see I wonder when I walk by Can she see in my eyes The strong hesitation Am i faking my daringness or my determination My homies try to help me but am i hopeless? Nobody laugh at my words I’ve spoken Frozen, Disappointed, and Lost
Thanks for posting this video. I've been writing for years with no instruction outside of high school, which was many years ago. I did go through college, but never pursued writing. Maybe I should have. Thanks again. John
The college track of writing can provide solid and tested methods for writers, but it can get really insular, academic, or just lead to a whole bunch of writers working from the same playbook. Ultimately, reading widely and thinking analytically about how the things that move you work, and what parts you can emulate or modify is the key (in my opinion). Keep up the writing :)
The college track of writing can provide solid and tested methods for writers, but it can get really insular, academic, or just lead to a whole bunch of writers working from the same playbook. Ultimately, reading widely and thinking analytically about how the things that move you work, and what parts you can emulate or modify is the key (in my opinion). Keep up the writing :)
What I'm having trouble on is that I feel like I'm going in circles and writing the same thing over and over again. Initially, rhyming and meter came naturally to me. The words just came easily as I tried to describe my thoughts. However, as I kept writing about the same themes (like sadness) but in different lenses, I found that I reverted to the same vocabulary again and again for rhyming. Either it is that I do not have a wide range of vocabulary or that I have exhausted the theme and need to move on to something else. While I now use a thesaurus to deal with the first possibility, I know that it is a short term solution to a long term problem. Hence, I resolved to learn more words. However, if it is the second possibility, I need some help. Should I keep trying or should I simply move on to other themes if I find that I just have a hard time getting out fresh ideas? I think that I may have to just move on, but here is my primal issue: should I release my works now or when the season is right? Basically, last winter, I've written some poems that described that dreary mood most people have during those times. However, since that has now passed a bit, I'm not sure if publishing those poems now that it is sunnier will be detrimental to their acceptance. I find myself also writing more active and bolder poems now that the sun is out more. What do you think? tldr: Should I move on to other themes if I feel like I milked all I can out of a certain one? Should I publish my poems according to the season?
Poetry Show Oh wow, went to look up the forms of poetry and there are a lot of exciting ones to try! I was always afraid to learn more about poetic styles because I felt like doing so would remove the authenticity of my style because I would try and emulate them, but I'm not worried about that anymore :) One's style always comes out in the end after all...
Thanks for this, it gave an outline of the process, now I can see why I struggled at times, damned structure. So I forget structure and edit like there is no tomorrow, here are some words as some kind of reward. The youth has gone the edge has vanished After 50 years your energys famished Walk in twilight now that your banished
A metaphorical comparison of an artist and a poet.( Unnamed & not complete) * * The letters in your words are like the poet's palette of colors. Your mind is a bank that holds the work which is your treasure. Use personality that you own to construct such beauty built in. Your vocabulary becomes your tools and supplies. Technique only guesses how the imagination expresses. Talent is really a reflection of ones own experience. Will and motivation balances detail and depth. More emotion create a far greater skill. With just your eyes, the crowd hushes. Mental hands are your brushes. To recite brings so much of a thrill. For I'm sure you know, nothing more you need for your show but a mind that's a picture of health. Except the whole of your life in itself.
The life that I live is already wroten, liven in hell is it already chosen As time will tell my life been spoken, as misery draws I feel its potent Cant stop this feeling from feeling broken, but moving on is what I chosen Im sorry mom what I say is deep, You gave me life I know not cheap My soul is old its rotten now, may go back home into the ground The Frankenstein I feel thats right the Duke is out hope I fight.
@@poem_kym9406 absolutely! It's important to encourage each other. Write with all your heart and you won't go wrong! Thank you so much means a lot! Just started taking it seriously so hopefully it doesn't disappoint haha!
N. H. II- Miracle Poems 1-5, N. H. II- Poems of Love 1-5 and N. H. II- Peaceful Poems 1-5 are on TH-cam, and here is a link to watch one of them, with an interesting character in it: th-cam.com/video/Sgi6vbn5Qco/w-d-xo.html
Great video! I wish you use more visual such as a whiteboard or graphics. I like poetry bur more so listening than reading. For some reason I tend to feel the sound more than when reading it. I am taking your advice and have started reading more though. And I will keep updating my progress on here if you are still following this threads.
Thank you for sharing your knowledge, looking forward to hearing more. Ah, skip the script, the bonus at the end was better! Take good care of you and yours.
I wish this gave more concrete structure like a map. I'm a very visual person so hearing him talk is like "ya it makes sense but what do I do" gimme a map lol
You would hate my poetry. Hahaha I follow zero rules, I just write whatever comes to me. It's all mostly (secretly) about my traumas, I have C-PTSD. My last video, I think it was my last, it's called "roadkill" is me speaking one of my poems. If you're interested that is.
I'm an amateur at writing so I'm not very experienced with writing epic poems, or even smaller poems for that matter. I would really appreciate some feedback on my content and a few subscribers. I hope you enjoy what I have to offer - epicilem
I enjoyed writing poetry. This poem is titled. Duck and Hide the Evidence. Once upon a time, there lived a crooked government officials with eyes like a mouse and a brain like wavering sea. Sitting upon crookery,. They see painting,. So in their eyes like a mouse,. Go a wondering , and they delete a delete video footage of their crimes, while looking like up standing citizens.
❓❓❓ -------------- You hurt me because I can't read your mind I hurt you cuz You think I'm untrue Even though I love you I'm in this world Schizophrenic Atomic clock God's worth Open heart Time to start Bugs bunny Road runner Acme Akers What does it all mean A thousand words with no meaning Juxtaposed thinking Tunnel vision Paranormal dimension All these voices won't listen Atoms split Movies don't make sense Fact or fiction Read a book Subtle Satan Coward God I'm your image No sucide Born to die Tell me why Not a masochist Don't search for pain I'm a vessel labored in vain Except the Lord build the House Fall from grace "Ouch" Perfect time You hold the key Unlocking these mysteries Monotheism to the Trinity I'm in You, You in Me I don't have the answers So help me to believe First Corinthians Thirteen Holy Bible Leave this World What's in a dream Perfect inspiration Puppet String Your The Potter I'm The Clay Still sitting here with this stain Writer Ryan K Pendley
first poem pls dont bully💀 robes as red as maple leaves quilted over an outline of a body the same man i saw that day holding an umbrella for a flower drenched in the sky’s tears - crimson rain sought flower (Inspired by Tian Guan Ci fu, Hua Cheng)
I am watching potery show To write poem if i know Watching this on the bed Too many ideas in my head Too far for the pen Just imagine in my brain I am to lazy to get up To write things that i want
Honestly, I'm looking for guides to write poems because I've been watching people play Doki-Doki Literature Club, which has poems in it. And I want to start writing poems
Agree 👍 Ode Less Travelled gives a great entry into poetry. It only really helps with forms rather than free verse or more avant-garde poetry, but it's still excellent
I plan to start a new genre of poetry … bogan yarn Oh carn mate while I spin ya a yarn True blue I am From the shed or the barn A dead dingo”s doona a keg of manure VB sips in the night Until the 💩 runs right
Take Off Your Mask To Those Wearing Masks, We See You, At Last, And We've Come to Ask, Want a Drink from This here Flask? If Your upto Task, Take off That One Last Mask. For We are the No Masked. We have done this Task, We Drank from This here Flask. And There is No need to Ask, Cause We See You, Alas, We See Through All Your Masks.
I thought of him last night
Underneath the starlight
The moon lit up the darkness and whispered of distance
The wind heard my heart and the silence was a song
I wondered for a time,
as i stood alone
👏👏👏
Thanks, I felt this as I wrote it.
@@chrysalis72 no problem, I enjoyed reading it👍🏾
Here's something I came up about my lady..
PROMISE
---------------
I promise to love you, it's my favorite duty of life
to cherish you,
I love your silliness,
Your googly eye pictures makes me laugh,
You know we're some dorks
Please dont get me on your smile it's my
Kryptonite that warms the soul
The duty of me being your man is to make us
happy,
I may not be good at spilling my guts
But this is who I am letting you know that there
is nobody else in this world that compares to
you,
It's crazy you're the only person that's 24/7 on
my mind, and that's a sincere thought no lie,
You consume me,
I love your nakedness
That's my everything and
Being naked is pretty funny,
And funny is what I want to be!!
So to my better half
Let's laugh!!
Take this rib, ouch;
It's okay if I'm in pain
I love you
Maybe I try to hard
I just want to be myself with you.
Maybe I don't think you accept me?
Butchya do!
I hear the rhythm of our heart beating as one
Take my hand let go and let God!
Speaking in tongues of the Angels
Hallelujah!
Love has won!
Writer
Ryan K Pendley
@@ryanpendley1826 it's beautiful xx very very lucky ladyx💞💞💞💞💞
Wow. I am trying to write poetry and this is SO GOOD. though he [probably] won’t see this
Well he's definitely helping me
nice try but he ain't gonna see your coment
@@ethanmoyo4890 NOTICE ME SENPAAIIIII!!!!!!
He didn't
I hope someday I could be trained to improve my writing more. I'm 19 and I wish to become a known poet someday.
....
Drove together under the amber skies
Rode forever in the heavy anchor of ceaseless cries
Two gray Octobers passed, I'm still sobbing
In the lonely room where you've left your underbone king
My mind still recalls, a lucid image of unrivaled agony
I was just seventeen since every autumn
became a great misery
Woke up at five, Kuya tellin' me that you're gone
Wishing I was still asleep at that cruel dawn
I ran downstairs, then I spotted
Their cheeks are wet, their eyes are puffy and red
Screaming and begging them to tell me "it's just a dream"
as I fell to the ground and threw everything I held
Unfortunate fate,
You never witnessed me graduate
Heaven took you so early
before I could let you meet Valentino Rossi
Decades of seasons will still feel like yesterday
A great father like you has a special place in my heart to stay
The world might had only given you 46 years to exist
But your unconditional love and care will be eternally missed
(it's a poem that I've wrote as a tribute to my dad who passed away 2yrs ago)
You filipino?
👍🏻
"Kuya" Big bro?
I needed this, I'm creative I just need structure
adhd people be like: im creative/smart i just need structure lol i felt that
@@fsb-micro9897 I have adhd. Weird
Me too lol ths how i know
@@fsb-micro9897 cool
I don't have adhd but Ive never related more
• Sound - alliteration, consonance, assonance, rhyme, onomatopoeia
• Meaning - denotation, connotation, imagery, irony, ambiguity
• Structure - stanzas, line length, enjambment, rhythm/meter, typography
Great lesson; thank you.
SOUND
MEANING
STRUCTURE
Writing it as on 24 JAN 24'
Im a 15 y/o 9th grader and i started Writing poems few months back and this is the first poem that I've written in the form of sonnet:)
I was looking at the ceiling
Pondering if i was healing
Many storms came out of the blue
And i was left having no clue
Life is like hills and valleys for sure
Its never going to smooth and pure
In the road of life,much bends are there
But we must mend our garden with love, sympathy and care
In the tapestry of life
There's a lot ups and downs
But we should always have a smile on face just like a clown
In the tapestry of life,there's much to endure
There's alot ups and downs but
It will take sometime to cure
a good poet follow their hearts not the rules..
in order to have a good poem, break the rules in poetry..
In order to break the rules you have to know what they are. People who just want to "follow their hearts" are usually just too lazy to learn the rules in the first place.
Yuri there are no rules since when was there a rule book?
since human beings began observing, describing, recording, and reflecting on patterns in nature. none of the innumerable texts (verily obtainable on amazon) should represent infallible guidance to perfect poetry, but varying perspectives from people who concern themselves enough with the subject to get the idea to turn that concern into a book or something (not to say anything about the range of value different perspectives can have)
Tinker Nel you have to know the rules to break them.
Tinker Nel, .....
A good poet follows his heart, but a better poet uses everything at his disposal, including and especially his head.
A quote from the book thief “if your eyes could talk what would they say”
Don’t write what thing is but what it represents to you
I was always inspired more by the metaphysical style of writing as it’s adds grace intelligence and is very thought provoking.
It opens limitless ideas as anything can be a metaphor for something else.
Also has different meaning to each person making it more relatable to there own life’s with out making it a pity party
That’s not to say that standard literal worded songs (or in this context poems ) don’t have there place depending on how there written.
The flaw is there very limiting.
Also I have heard songs that actually rhyme very little.
The soul destroying thing as a lyricist is that people focus more on the melody but couldn’t careless about the words
Really appreciate
his shirt says "Just ate"
In what language?
@@aaronpoems7755 Indonesian
@@zero_bf Thanks.
@@aaronpoems7755 yeah man
@Ezran Brider it's Malay but ok
I've been searching this for way too long. Searching writing fundamentals or what's a poetry. And this guy dud it. Thanks. A. Lot.
All of this really needs visual and read examples. As a beginner it’s too abstract
a true poet realizes that it is not about length of the poem it is figuring out, what is truly necessary to keep, and discard without weakening the pleasure and meaning depth. I am recluse possibly savant poet, as I been told. I grasped every lesson without trouble. I received a stipend at just 25, as a featured poet. In my private coaching my students learn the basic rules for poetry and beginning, without that what you are saying they can not grasp. there is a golden rule for dorm in poetry, there's a golden rule for subject selection....etc.
I agree, brevity is key!
You know what is the meaning of the words printed on your shirt?”Sudah makan” stands for “eaten” in Malay language...haha,btw a great explaination on how to write a poem.I write in mandarin
Happiness of sausage brought me here.
MyMusicNoteBook KC sausage of happiness 😂
Ha
ME TOO 🤣🤣
Haha, me too. I already wrote poetry, just wondering whether I missed anything since I learnt it myself, with no internet
lovely Nightcore -3- best way to do it 👻
This is my first writing. plz give some suggestion in order to improve....
Hey Chocolaty Chashmish
The way you read, I only see
The way you walk, I only see
The way you stare, my heart races
The way you blush, I have a crush.
Hey Chocolaty Chashmish
Your presence in CL, makes me pleasent
Your entry in huts, alas! makes me hush
Your glasses, oh my goodness makes me fly
Your wrist with bracelet while holding a book, Ah! makes me complete.
But!
Ohh Chocoloty Chashmish
You are princess of Punjab, I am the slave of Sindh
You are topper of IR, I am hectered by History
You analyze present, while I imagine past
You are post modernest, I am still stuck with Marxism
You read critique of George Orwell,
I still love Stalin
You are breeze of spring where cold wind breathes out its chill,
I am shattered soul of autumn where leaves are falling all around.
Thats why,
Ohh Chocoloty Chashmish
I Get away, I let away
All my feelings
All my love
All my wishes
All my desires
and
I take away, I make away
All the pain
All the sorrow
All the grief
All the regrets
Though
My heart aches
My blood boils
My soul suffers
My body burns
But ohh Chocoloty Chashmish
I bear when you are near my Raqib.
Gotta say its beautiful....wow
This is beautiful ❤️😊
Is she on a pedestal still
Man! You have talent
im a beginner poet so i don’t know if this means anything to you, but i love it! it was really fun to read :)
Weeks come by fast but end slow
Am i truly who I am, the person everybody knows
When i see her my mind stops
I cant think but when she leaves she makes my body wanna drop
Another disappointment of me and for my homies
Will i ever get the courage or will I end up lonely
I don't know how to fix a problem i aint facin face to face
If i don't make my move somebodies gonna take my place
Ain't nothin stoppin me, just my cowardness
I don't feel like a man i feel powerless
Excuses made, games played in my mind
Im my worst enemy i'm running out of time
When i eyes saw her my body Froze
Overthinking my words trying to unload
My spoken words
I don't know what scares me or why I stop
Another missed chance makes me wanna plop
So many opportunities when will I change
I dont know why I couldt even say her name
I know I got what it takes, Thats why it bothers me
Was it the absence years of my male figure my father see
I wonder when I walk by
Can she see in my eyes
The strong hesitation
Am i faking my daringness or my determination
My homies try to help me but am i hopeless?
Nobody laugh at my words I’ve spoken
Frozen, Disappointed, and Lost
Sound, meaning, and structure. That pretty much sums it up.
That pen touching my skin would drive me nuts.
That's the mic.
Thanks for posting this video. I've been writing for years with no instruction outside of high school, which was many years ago. I did go through college, but never pursued writing. Maybe I should have. Thanks again.
John
The college track of writing can provide solid and tested methods for writers, but it can get really insular, academic, or just lead to a whole bunch of writers working from the same playbook. Ultimately, reading widely and thinking analytically about how the things that move you work, and what parts you can emulate or modify is the key (in my opinion). Keep up the writing :)
The college track of writing can provide solid and tested methods for writers, but it can get really insular, academic, or just lead to a whole bunch of writers working from the same playbook. Ultimately, reading widely and thinking analytically about how the things that move you work, and what parts you can emulate or modify is the key (in my opinion). Keep up the writing :)
What I'm having trouble on is that I feel like I'm going in circles and writing the same thing over and over again.
Initially, rhyming and meter came naturally to me. The words just came easily as I tried to describe my thoughts.
However, as I kept writing about the same themes (like sadness) but in different lenses, I found that I reverted to the same vocabulary again and again for rhyming.
Either it is that I do not have a wide range of vocabulary or that I have exhausted the theme and need to move on to something else.
While I now use a thesaurus to deal with the first possibility, I know that it is a short term solution to a long term problem. Hence, I resolved to learn more words. However, if it is the second possibility, I need some help.
Should I keep trying or should I simply move on to other themes if I find that I just have a hard time getting out fresh ideas?
I think that I may have to just move on, but here is my primal issue: should I release my works now or when the season is right?
Basically, last winter, I've written some poems that described that dreary mood most people have during those times. However, since that has now passed a bit, I'm not sure if publishing those poems now that it is sunnier will be detrimental to their acceptance. I find myself also writing more active and bolder poems now that the sun is out more.
What do you think?
tldr: Should I move on to other themes if I feel like I milked all I can out of a certain one? Should I publish my poems according to the season?
+OnlineNamesAreStrange I find experimenting with different forms helps me revisit familiar themes in new ways, maybe try that?
Poetry Show
Oh wow, went to look up the forms of poetry and there are a lot of exciting ones to try!
I was always afraid to learn more about poetic styles because I felt like doing so would remove the authenticity of my style because I would try and emulate them, but I'm not worried about that anymore :)
One's style always comes out in the end after all...
if u are interested in private poetry coaching, please contact me. I can fix that. there is a major problem I can pretty much guess you are doing.
Victoria Hunter
Thanks for the offer, but I've decided to just learn through trial and error. :)
My recommendation.. read, read, read.... books, poetry, essays, critiques.
I found this useful, a base for building strong core of poetry.
Thank you for the lectures, this will be helpful
Thanks for this, it gave an outline of the process, now I can see why I struggled at times, damned structure. So I forget structure and edit like there is no tomorrow, here are some words as some kind of reward.
The youth has gone the edge has vanished
After 50 years your energys famished
Walk in twilight now that your banished
I do agree the three are basics. But, still, those are like 'grenade' in my head.
A metaphorical comparison of an artist and a poet.( Unnamed & not complete)
*
*
The letters in your words are like the poet's palette of colors.
Your mind is a bank that holds the work which is your treasure.
Use personality that you own to construct such beauty built in.
Your vocabulary becomes your tools and supplies.
Technique only guesses how the imagination expresses.
Talent is really a reflection of ones own experience.
Will and motivation balances detail and depth.
More emotion create a far greater skill.
With just your eyes, the crowd hushes.
Mental hands are your brushes.
To recite brings so much of a thrill.
For I'm sure you know,
nothing more you need for your show
but a mind that's a picture of health.
Except the whole of your life in itself.
Where are the vids on these 3 categories?
Love this video and the picture in the back!
actually the most helpful poetry vid ive watched. and you're aussie!
Great video - excellent overview. I look forward to watching more of the videos on this channel, and hope you will upload more. I love poetry. 😃👍💝
The life that I live is already wroten, liven in hell is it already chosen
As time will tell my life been spoken, as misery draws I feel its potent
Cant stop this feeling from feeling broken, but moving on is what I chosen
Im sorry mom what I say is deep, You gave me life I know not cheap
My soul is old its rotten now, may go back home into the ground
The Frankenstein I feel thats right the Duke is out hope I fight.
Thx Mr Bates it is a very good session today, I understand poems much better now :)
A lot of good tips here. Thank you for sharing!
Hi.I just started my spoken poetry TH-cam channel. Feel free to subscribe by clicking the link below:
th-cam.com/channels/UI7EFtj-JDE4F06BDnGkMA.html
New subscriber! ~ Not long set out on my poetry writing journey ... & so much to learn on the way, can't wait 🤓🖋
Best of luck on your journey, friend!
Adam Gary Poetry Thank You..... think I’m becoming addicted!!
@@poem_kym9406 you'll be great!
Adam Gary Poetry Thanks for your confidence! I’m pouring my heart & soul into each poem..... 💗
Your channel looks great, I’ll be checking it out later
@@poem_kym9406 absolutely! It's important to encourage each other. Write with all your heart and you won't go wrong! Thank you so much means a lot! Just started taking it seriously so hopefully it doesn't disappoint haha!
N. H. II- Miracle Poems 1-5, N. H. II- Poems of Love 1-5 and N. H. II- Peaceful Poems 1-5 are on TH-cam, and here is a link to watch one of them, with an interesting character in it:
th-cam.com/video/Sgi6vbn5Qco/w-d-xo.html
Great video! I wish you use more visual such as a whiteboard or graphics.
I like poetry bur more so listening than reading. For some reason I tend to feel the sound more than when reading it. I am taking your advice and have started reading more though. And I will keep updating my progress on here if you are still following this threads.
Thank you for sharing your knowledge, looking forward to hearing more. Ah, skip the script, the bonus at the end was better! Take good care of you and yours.
your shirt says you just ate where you got it ? Indonesia? malaysia?
very succinctly put
Enlightening. Wonderful.
What about the surrealistic/rimbaldian method?
How can i get that poster!!?
Very well put. Reminiscent of Aristotles "Poetics".
I wish this gave more concrete structure like a map. I'm a very visual person so hearing him talk is like "ya it makes sense but what do I do" gimme a map lol
"with a handsome and opinionated host."
i didn't know i had another youtube acc :0
frogs have feelings 2 frogs really do have feelings :')
frogs have feelings 2 good one
it called meter not sound, and melody not whatever you had there or? isent it?
honestly he is spitting so much fax for real 10000
You would hate my poetry. Hahaha I follow zero rules, I just write whatever comes to me. It's all mostly (secretly) about my traumas, I have C-PTSD. My last video, I think it was my last, it's called "roadkill" is me speaking one of my poems. If you're interested that is.
yeaa, and i can understand why people get mad over a ‘poetry’ i might just call it a writing from now on
I am!
Anyways, if it helps you it serves its purpose despite being a poem or not
I'm an amateur at writing so I'm not very experienced with writing epic poems, or even smaller poems for that matter. I would really appreciate some feedback on my content and a few subscribers. I hope you enjoy what I have to offer - epicilem
tension. tension is the most important element, of a good poem at least
Sudah Makan means "I already ate" in Indonesian.
Oh really?
I have written a poetry how can I send it to you for proofreading?
Join writing.com
Thank you for explaining the tips and informing us that you have eaten 😄
really good at explaining things!
I enjoyed writing poetry. This poem is titled. Duck and Hide the Evidence. Once upon a time, there lived a crooked government officials with eyes like a mouse and a brain like wavering sea. Sitting upon crookery,. They see painting,. So in their eyes like a mouse,. Go a wondering , and they delete a delete video footage of their crimes, while looking like up standing citizens.
My poem is about what my hand hold...
What do u think about my poem?
Could I ask for a critique on a poem I've written?
Yup I can help u out I think
structure is awesome
Thanks for sharing!
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You hurt me because
I can't read your mind
I hurt you cuz
You think I'm untrue
Even though
I love you
I'm in this world
Schizophrenic
Atomic clock
God's worth
Open heart
Time to start
Bugs bunny
Road runner
Acme Akers
What does it all mean
A thousand words with no meaning
Juxtaposed thinking
Tunnel vision
Paranormal dimension
All these voices won't listen
Atoms split
Movies don't make sense
Fact or fiction
Read a book
Subtle Satan
Coward God
I'm your image
No sucide
Born to die
Tell me why
Not a masochist
Don't search for pain
I'm a vessel labored in vain
Except the Lord build the House
Fall from grace "Ouch"
Perfect time
You hold the key
Unlocking these mysteries
Monotheism to the Trinity
I'm in You, You in Me
I don't have the answers
So help me to believe
First Corinthians Thirteen
Holy Bible
Leave this World
What's in a dream
Perfect inspiration
Puppet String
Your The Potter I'm The Clay
Still sitting here with this stain
Writer
Ryan K Pendley
This is GOOD mate👍🏾
first poem pls dont bully💀
robes as red as maple leaves
quilted over an outline of a body
the same man i saw that day
holding an umbrella for a flower drenched in the sky’s tears
- crimson rain sought flower
(Inspired by Tian Guan Ci fu, Hua Cheng)
very helpful indeed man
thanks man!
Thanks for the video.
I prefer writing from my heart, my experience matters mo
It's important to follow your heart! The heart often does the work for you!
Thats for sure
your shirt hahaha sudah makan? Its mean have you eaten? nice one!
way words choose to use
hii have you ever in indonesia? the words "sudah makan" is indonesia languages that means in english Have Eaten
Im here to help me with songwriting
i dont have any rules to be tied with?
@Aaron Kyro
Hello I'm Indonesian. Nice t-shirt :)
Anyone here to learn to write poetry so you can write lyrics
I am watching potery show
To write poem if i know
Watching this on the bed
Too many ideas in my head
Too far for the pen
Just imagine in my brain
I am to lazy to get up
To write things that i want
sudah makan? ;) haha cool video man
I didn't like the bloop, but all that you spoke I did.
Hey Jerksen
Honestly, I'm looking for guides to write poems because I've been watching people play Doki-Doki Literature Club, which has poems in it. And I want to start writing poems
Sickly Aura ‘The Ode Less Travelled’ is a great book for learning poetry from a foundational basis.
Agree 👍 Ode Less Travelled gives a great entry into poetry. It only really helps with forms rather than free verse or more avant-garde poetry, but it's still excellent
Where the black out poetry squad at
DiD iSTANBUL-buy alas!
Hmm
the blooper hahahah
Good
So funny because I am called Ludan HINT: (his shirt ) 😂🤣
Hey man nice shirt, i from Malaysia
ok
B.S! Just listen to Eminem and Royce!
I actually do that sometimes!
Yuck
В то время как
Why u wearing a sudah makan shirt? Thats indonesian language
I plan to start a new genre of poetry … bogan yarn
Oh carn mate while I spin ya a yarn
True blue I am
From the shed or the barn
A dead dingo”s doona a keg of manure
VB sips in the night
Until the 💩 runs right
sudah makan? kenyang dong hahaha
i like your shirt :)
Take Off Your Mask
To Those Wearing Masks,
We See You, At Last,
And We've Come to Ask,
Want a Drink from This here Flask?
If Your upto Task,
Take off That One Last Mask.
For We are the No Masked.
We have done this Task,
We Drank from This here Flask.
And There is No need to Ask,
Cause We See You, Alas,
We See Through All Your Masks.
sudah makan laaaaah
Bladabladabla bladabladabla 😂
SUDAH MAKAN. in Indonesian language, it means ALREADY EATEN.
2021 anybody
Photo of fife electricity of poews
Sudah makan? Saya belum makan
Wait- are you an Australian?
English by birth, Aus citizen by choice.