Scholarship Essay Sample About Why I Deserve The Scholarship

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  • @TheScholarshipSystem
    @TheScholarshipSystem  ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Comment below: what’s a specific example you could use to help answer this question?

  • @walkwithme2700
    @walkwithme2700 ปีที่แล้ว +50

    Why do i deserve this scholarship money :
    1. Fund will help. How impact in the long run. Better the world. Contribution to society.
    2. Focus on the purpose of the scholarship. Core to the purpose of the scholarship. Relate to the donor
    3. Use spesific example. Show them something. Not tell them. Spesific story about the idea you want to say.
    4. How to overcome obstacle
    5. Maximize the word count

  • @michelemusick6498
    @michelemusick6498 2 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    Thank you for this information. We just joined the scholarship system in June and starting to apply. It's actually fun...thank you for all that you do!!

  • @ibe.11
    @ibe.11 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

    What if the field I plan on pursuing in the future isn't as 'helpful' as a veterinarian for example? I plan on majoring in information technology, how can I highlight how I'm bettering the world?

  • @rogerspree
    @rogerspree 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    I want to use an experience I had at a hospital with a family friend who is a doctor. How I conversed with some of his patients and comforted them

    • @TheScholarshipSystem
      @TheScholarshipSystem  3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      This would be a great topic to include in your essay!

  • @eloisecarcini1280
    @eloisecarcini1280 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Thank you for the advice!

  • @baotramnguyenle9720
    @baotramnguyenle9720 6 หลายเดือนก่อน

    I have a question. I'm preparing a video application for a scholarship. The requirement already included some questions and I have to answer within 2 minutes. Should I just follow only the provided questions or add other bullet ideas like you recommended in the video? Thank you so much

    • @TheScholarshipSystem
      @TheScholarshipSystem  6 หลายเดือนก่อน

      If time permits, you can add other content. Check out our video on video interviews. th-cam.com/video/XOeCIq3x2nE/w-d-xo.htmlsi=X-TGf0WOmHuWMMnh

  • @jesubankejosephine2381
    @jesubankejosephine2381 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    This was so helpful

  • @Max_Lavoisier
    @Max_Lavoisier ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Please, what about merit scholarships

    • @TheScholarshipSystem
      @TheScholarshipSystem  ปีที่แล้ว

      Hi Maxwell - did you have specific questions? If you are just wanting to learn about scholarships in general, try this video: th-cam.com/video/vjrErw2Er0s/w-d-xo.html

  • @helenjabar5196
    @helenjabar5196 10 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Hello, I have a question! For some programs, I’ve applying they asked What will I contribute to the program? little confused, what would you recommend? Did you make any video about it? If yes can you attach the link for me? Thank you a lot!

    • @TheScholarshipSystem
      @TheScholarshipSystem  10 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      The answer is similar to Why I deserve the scholarship. When asked about what you will contribute, you will need to share what makes you different. How will your perspective, personality, attitude, or skills make a difference to the program, the participants, or the project? So you will want to share how you being involved will make an impact to the program and to the overall experience. So if you reframe the question to, Why I deserve to attend this program... it may make the question a little easier to answer using our suggestions.

    • @helenjabar5196
      @helenjabar5196 10 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@TheScholarshipSystem thank you, helped a lot!

  • @prathoma2375
    @prathoma2375 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Hi, so i am applying for this scholarship where i want to amswer this question by mentioning the financial burden that the only earning member of my family faces to pay for my education, and hence, the scholarship would lead to me being able to help relieve that stress somewhat, while also clear away some educational fees...what do you think of this?

    • @TheScholarshipSystem
      @TheScholarshipSystem  3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      This would be a great start, but you also need to mention how it affects you personally.

    • @prathoma2375
      @prathoma2375 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @TheScholarshipSystem Cool, will keep that in mind. Thank you tons for the reply :)

  • @PixelproAnimation
    @PixelproAnimation 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

    I am going to apply at GIST korean university for master. In application it asked what are your financial problems and why do you need matriculation fee waiver??? please tell

    • @TheScholarshipSystem
      @TheScholarshipSystem  5 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Our content is for students living in the US attending college in the US. But for the most part, if a scholarship asks to prove financial need, then you have an opportunity to explain your family's financial situation. You can include a monthly cashflow budget, if necessary, to prove that there is no discretionary money available. You can also discuss how you want to avoid student debt and how that will benefit you in the future.

    • @PixelproAnimation
      @PixelproAnimation 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@TheScholarshipSystem one more question related to us universities.
      I have heard that people should directly apply to the PhD instead of masters because for PhD we have good chances. ? Additional, recommend university list without IELts and no applications fee.
      And currently open admission of which universities?

  • @ShreyalAhir
    @ShreyalAhir ปีที่แล้ว

    Great vdo

  • @usmaarshad9196
    @usmaarshad9196 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

    It's really awsome video...very informative

  • @itzregina326
    @itzregina326 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Hello I have a question! For a some scholarships I’m applying for there is no word count. What do you recommend as a solid word count for this kind of essay?

    • @TheScholarshipSystem
      @TheScholarshipSystem  ปีที่แล้ว +2

      If there is no word count, usually about 500 words is good. But it never hurts to approach the scholarship organization itself to see if they have a preference that wasn't stated.

    • @itzregina326
      @itzregina326 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@TheScholarshipSystem thank you!

    • @ayeshaakter3959
      @ayeshaakter3959 ปีที่แล้ว

      Hello madam I enjoyed watching your video. I want to apply for a fellowship to do Ph.D. in public health. I am going to apply for this first-time international scholarship. So I don't understand how to write nicely. I have masters in public health and have been working in the public health sector for 10 years. It would be very helpful if you could advise me on how I should put all this together.
      Thank you

  • @user-tt6pp1kf6c
    @user-tt6pp1kf6c ปีที่แล้ว

    What about the question tell us about a personal achievement that makes you proud

    • @TheScholarshipSystem
      @TheScholarshipSystem  ปีที่แล้ว

      That's a great topic - we can certainly cover that one in future video!

  • @zuriyatiismail4917
    @zuriyatiismail4917 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    3:05

  • @vikashdas003
    @vikashdas003 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thanks Ma'am

  • @sairamariamissac2881
    @sairamariamissac2881 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Hi mam,
    I have opted for Msc accounting and finance in uk university. Can u tell me what kind of community service I can provide?. Plzz reply

    • @TheScholarshipSystem
      @TheScholarshipSystem  ปีที่แล้ว

      Our information is for residents living in the US attending college in the US. You may need to find resources closer to your area.

  • @shaeztime6972
    @shaeztime6972 6 หลายเดือนก่อน

    hello mam can i get scholarship i have money problem but my have a dream study in abroad im' looking scholarship 5 months too i dont know what can i do for my dream 😢

    • @TheScholarshipSystem
      @TheScholarshipSystem  6 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Our content is for residents living in the US attending college in the US. You may need to search for international scholarships.