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- เผยแพร่เมื่อ 3 ส.ค. 2024
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00:00 Intro
00:04 Writing and designing good characters
02:05 Tips on avoiding or further developing popular character tropes
06:07 Actions that have consequences
07:41 End - เกม
If you see this just know CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT EXISTS
Example:we have a series where someone gets bullied but u don't have to make them go super ultra demon angel hybrid alpha mode and make them kill the bully making a bully more kind and someone you can relate to and want around is something cooler.or maybe they are homophobic but like someone that is homosexual for their personality and they learn to except it.These were just two bad examples I made at 4 in the morning but im sure if you take the time to plot good characters then you can make your story so much better!
But fr don't make it like I'm gay for the person I bully or fell in love with my bully
Great point! Bullies are people too, and if there’s one trope I really dislike is when some “worse” bully comes along and all of a sudden what the first bully did was okay and they’re forgiven cause they aren’t as bad :,)
@@spirabee lol I just saw this but I totally agree but I also hate when the mc just forgives someone who has bullied them for years in just one week-
very minor thing but thank you for using sympathy instead of empathy and not calling him a narcissist on the bad boy example > < ihave npd and when that came up i was nervous but then felt relief bcuz of that : D
There's a difference between a narcissist and someone with NPD
@@myname.1602 people with npd literally is someone who is a narcissist. its in the name /nm /lh
I agreed with you!
Also super important make sure the antagonist gets punished in the end for all the wrongdoings unless they have a reason for doing it and they managed to turn themselves around.
And personally I would love to see a coming-out story.
I’m sorry I found the “I’m no longer abusive” absolutely hilarious 😂
Once I get the chance to make a gcmm I'll make sure to credit ya
I know I'm late but always keep in mind that characters actions usually depends on they're personality and they're relationship with the person/thing thats involved. I get that its "more original" if the person who is getting bullied loves they're bully, but that isn't how life works. Don't get me wrong, you can do that. But in reality the person who gets bullied will always talk bad about they're bullies to they're friends (yes you need them to have friends because no one is really without a friend eg; online, in school, classmate etc...), and it probably isn't abusive either. It's more of a group of girls saying "Omg love your outfit! Where'd you get it?" with laughter every second because no one is that upfront about how they think your clothes look ugly.
And for this lets put the example that the character is a very "chill" person who doesn't really care so they're response to the bullying is different then someone who is more sensitive. And you have to understand that actions usually have a motive, if not then why do it? So in response to the bullying the "chill" character is irritated but doesn't say anything much, just a laugh it off kinda response. But after sometime it kind of hurts her and by the time we reach the climax, you could build it off of how she stands up for herself.
Make sure characters vary with different religion and such as its more realistic. Also don't make it so only the protagonist is going through something or is the only one getting bullied, but don't over do it too. Its okay to get inspiration from real life situation but don't write how you responded link how the character would respond from they're personality and the relationship with the person/thing.
Hope you make an amazing gacha story :D
This right here! Bullying comes in different forms and so do the people who are affected by it. Even popular characters can get bullied by their own friends, so it doesn’t always have to be someone new or shy either.
While we’re at it, parents and siblings can also play a part in how the character deals with it. Perhaps there’s a “they hit you, you hit them back” kind of mindset there that they might push on the character if they find out.
I really hope more people read your comment, it is very inspiring 💕🐝
@@spirabee ahh thanks! You inspired me to start making a Gacha video based on how to write a story :)
For me I think I am going to make a person that actually have stytoms of depression. Like getting little to no pleasure in things they used to enjoy. (Examples: Writing, eating, reading, drawing, coloring, tv, etc.)
Hopefully that's not only what the story is about
this is so good! I hope you make more something like this since I'm so bad about it-
I'm just going to subscribe now..
Poor Jayden, he doesn’t get the girls
i'm actually planning to make a story on elements and war and somethings, I'm really planning it to be more suspense like.I already have a story in my mind but i still didn't know where start off or what exactly they are gonna do. Thanks to you now i'm getting it a little clear, it is really helping me, Thank you so much, you are really good at explaining! ^v^
YOU SHOULD BE THE NEW EVALUATION OF TEACHERS!!!!
Thank you so much it gives me motivation to write my story.
Ik this video is 2 years old but it still helped me a lot so thanks :D
My Gacha World is complicated... Basically there's a purple-blue alien called Comet, then there's also Arthur who loves nature and kinda helps Comet when she crashes into the woods where he lives.
Edit: I need ideas for other characters, I'll reply if I choose yours
Sounds like a very fun concept! I suppose Arthur will help Comet come understand how he lives and such. There are many different ways you can add characters depending on what conflict you want. You might not need many at all.
I’d say, give Arthur maybe one friend or maybe a group that might make Comet understand how his people interact. Perhaps you could make them people he’d wanna keep Comet away from? 👀
Hope this helps! 💕🐝
@@spirabee Thanks, I just finished my third character who is friends with Arthur, he's called Rex!
@@spirabee Also I try not to follow stereotypes, but I sometimes kinda manage to fall into that trap. My main villain might be a hunter, trying to hide evidence of aliens existing, by killing them?
@@chomperthetrox Sounds very cool! I’d recommend working out is motivations. Why does he kill aliens besides removing evidence? Is he working on a project that requires something the aliens have and is planning to use it against others? Or maybe he’s hired by some conspiracy group and is secretly working against them?
@@spirabee Probably the conspiracy group, maybe they're actually abusing him behind the scenes.
These are very useful tips, thank you.
The characters in the video are very interesting and id like to see a portrayal very faithfully.
Thank you for so much!❤🧡💛💚💙💜🖤🤍🤎💕💞💓💖💝💘🎉🎊🥳🎈
Tysm you really helped me a lot 💕💕
Thank you for the tips! It's useful!! 😄
Thank you so much for the tips! These two parts have opened my mind so much!
Thank you I needed these videos ✨✨
These are really great tips👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽well explained too
I started making a new story that works better cuz of u!
Ive watched part 1 and part 2 and this helped me!
Ur underrated and i love ur voice :D
Im subscribing !
PLEASE!!! THESE HELPED ME SO MUCH! THANK YOU!😭❤️
OMGG! thanks a lot!! This helped me so much with making a video :)!
I love how you explain how to do things it is calm and very good I love it
im super late to this, but this really helped me! i took notes while watching this and im hoping this will help me with the series im working on. thank you :]
Thx so much sky this rlly helps alot especially that im makin some gacha content rn stay safe!
I feel like you are a great help cause I need to work on some things to start my channel. So thank you so so much!
“Your audience is smart!”
Me when I make a video with a message: “i don’t get it”
Same 🥲
I love your. On tent so much it actually gives us useful information unlike other gachatubers with generic advice :)
Thank u ^^ I was about to start a series on my other channel and this is really helpful tips
This helped me so much thank you ☺️
Ur such an underrated person
Dude, you’re so underrated.
Thank you! This really helped !
This is really helpful! Thank you for the tips! But one question, how do I really make the characters? The characters personality and how they think is the hard part
Not me grabbing a paper and pen to take notes >->"
Thanks this helps a lot!😊😍
TYSM!!!!!! :)
this rlly helped me thank u i am also gonna try
Well done on 400 subs! i was sub 399 and this really helped! cant waitbto start my new channel soon!!!
Thank you so much for subscribing! I’m definitely going to upload a big thank you vid as soon as I finish the mini movie. Good luck with your channel, wishing you the best 💕🐝
@@spirabee Thank you! good luck as well :)
I'm creating a gacha series where it's like a ton of gacha ocs from different years (2018-2024) and my main oc is basically SUPPOSED to be cringey due to them being a softie cookie loving gacha 2020 oc :3
You have a very nice voice and your videos are really nice
Great tips
Thank you so much !!!!!!!
00:29 this is nice
Madam your getting a new subscriber
You should talk about connecting small things to more bigger things. For example, A girl runs a café and she has an enemy. The new resterant in town. So she goes to a collage to advertise her café. But before she gets the idea she goes to the new restaurant to soke up her teers in food. And then when she goes to the school, she realised that the popular girl is the child of the owner of the restaurant by her lunch.
Thank You so much for this video! I'm starting a channel and am noting every thing
This video is underrated
Bro r u like- a Gacha teacher!? your an expert!
New Sub!
YAY!
;^; I have 2 protagonists and the rest are principal chrs xD but one of the protagonists name is Benjamin aka Benji so r.i
p poor Ben
I love that line you said "Remember you are not writing about yourself but the character. " I think you said that😅 but anyway most people make it to where the character has there personality and everything rather than what the actual character would feel. Like for me I talk a lot of trash and act cool when I am not and in reality I am very shy happy and nice at least I think I am nice. But I would want to think of what the character would act like a out going part type of person! (Which I am not 🥲) and maybe some other characters have some of my personality but not to where I make the character always act like me. I hate the reaction videos on anime characters where it only shows how they would react instead of the actual character reaction 😂
This helped me a lot! Thank you, even though you're probably not gonna see this.
I'm gonna be making a series that focuses on two twins who become gachatubers. The series is gonna be called "The Gachatuber Twins". The stories are gonna focus on the twins who are named Alexandre and Mirabelle. (These are possibly not gonna be their final names for when i start). The series would be about the importance of friendships and patience as well as honesty and trust. I'm gonna begin writing the first episode soon. Got any tips?
Imma spoil 3 of my main characters:
Casper:
The singer- (im doing a music club one- DONT COMPARE IT TO MUSIC FREAKS)
Faye: Drummer
Ben: Guitarst
Music freaks😣I love em
This table me an idea! Ty
Thanks
The smoking thing is true my father once went to the hospital from smoking and has asthma
I forgot about commenting this
You should also talk about how if a character just slaps someone, suddenly they have a large scar on their face? Isn't it supposed to be a slap? That makes absolutely no sense at all!! Right
Same yay ghracters lol also THANK YOU FOR YHE HELP!!!!!!!!:3
Be famous before I cry
Can u do how to keep motivated when doing this
Thank you so much for the suggestion! I’ll definitely do a vid on that sometime in the future :)
Hard part: Naming the actual movie😂
also all main characters don't have to be a girl! they can be a boy too! Imo it's great to base ur characters on real people like your brother 1 of your friends this also helps when making background characters
yea boys can be main too but i'm from India and all indian movies are male-dominant (ig not only indian movies), so that kind of gets on my nerves, so i always keep female... :>
Okay thx
Underated
same with this one sry my page had restarted my hole data so i might have to go back and like all videos and re watch them with no problem (-w-)
Something that I struggle with is I make time go to fast, for example , a conversation a character just had with her dad was only 10 seconds and its hard for me to take things in. If I don't understand it, as its my own story, other people probably won't too. Do you think you can help me with that?
I wanna make a zombie apocalypse series but im not sure how to do it or start. Like the characters, im not sure how to make them fit in and how their personality goes with the story.
Sounds interesting! I think you should start off with world building because it can make it easier to go into depth about the characters later on. Here are some things you could think about!
- How do the zombies work? Can they be fast, slow? Do they infect people through biting them or through sickness or maybe both? Do they have feelings?
- Where does your character / characters live? Countryside or inner city? How is that affected by the zombies? (Characters can be from different places and meet in all kinds of ways!)
- What was life like before the zombies? How does that affect the main characters relationships during the apocalypse?
- How are zombies viewed by people? Opinions can differ and cause conflict!
Also, feel free to create made-up areas where the story takes place. Maybe make maps so that you have an idea of where they are. Don’t forget that anybody can be trapped in the apocalypse. You can have a paranoid character that’s already prepared for the worst or a cheerleader who makes use of all their gymnastics training in the apocalypse. Anything is possible!
Hope that this helps. Good luck! 💕🐝
@@spirabee thank you for your help! Ill take note on that. And (hopefully) when i post the vid you could prob check it out?
@@mushroomed6379 Sure!
how do you choose your gacha title of your story?
It could either be the name of a character or something that’s related to the story. Think about what kind of story it is. Is it action, fantasy or every day kind of stuff? The title could be based off the genre you’re working with :)) Feel free to check out my video on thumbnails where I cover that topic briefly 💕
You would have an A star in English no doubt about it
Not me taking notes
I like how the first one is fashion when I can’t even choose a single outfit for my characters
(Edit: how do I add sections to my videos..?)
I am a question what is my character seems depressed.... 😐
If I will ever be famous in my other acc I will give you a shoutout I promise 💕 cuz you rlyyy helped me outt
I wanna make a zombie series…any ideas for me anyone?
Sorry I'm late but my suggestion is you could make all of them more mindful of their surroundings. Hope this helps!
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This is like school
damn her friends are against her
😂idk if ma chrs are good lol
well thanks but my story isn't gonna be as simple as what you think
How are you so underated?! bhagfuyadftiaudf
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Hope I get pinned
6:25 why the heck is she in the boys toilets?!?!
0:49 so I got gays :>
1:00 damn I didn't taught of dis thx
1:24 I'm telling you that have many problems😂
1:43 is any problem that I might going to put their type(bisexual gay etc)
2:20 damn ma principal characters are goofy and sometimes serious ;-; so they really have a unique personality
3:16 yuh ma guy is really something else with his loffer
4:02 xD lol his best friend is a leaf (FR)
what if they not in an actual school;-;*it's hard to explain tho*
7:02 WHY BEN;-; what's so wrong with the name Ben lol 😂😂😂