"Going Down the Mountain" | A Hiking HORROR Story

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  • This story is a creepypasta written by me! Enjoy this hiking horror story about the other kinds of mountain monsters that may exist in those woods...
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  • @andreweden9405
    @andreweden9405 4 ปีที่แล้ว +116

    I lost my dad at a young age too, also from an aneurysm. It was very traumatic, as it happened right in front of me. Fortunately, I never had to deal with getting to know a stepdad. My mom stayed single until she herself died about 2 and a half years ago. Anyway, thanks for uploading this! I've been needing it!😁

    • @DarknessPrevails
      @DarknessPrevails  4 ปีที่แล้ว +29

      I'm so sorry for your loss - That is a horrible coincidence concerning this narration. I hope you're living and doing well and happy!

    • @andreweden9405
      @andreweden9405 4 ปีที่แล้ว +14

      @@DarknessPrevails , Thank you! I'm doing well, especially considering current world events!😂 Keep working your narrative magic, I love your aesthetic!

    • @edi9892
      @edi9892 4 ปีที่แล้ว +11

      Would a step-dad be really this bad? Maybe, I'm a special case, because my mother and I both wished my father ill as he'd done more than enough to piss us off. So, when my father ran off (with the money and documents) and my mother started dating again, I told her that her date was nice, but probably not the best choice and told her that I wouldn't sabotage their relationship. He was better to me than my real father, but turned out to be an alcoholic. Still, I supported my mother until she had enough of that idiot. I've never done any hostile act towards him, except that I've warned him once that he's currently pissing off my mother and losing my respect...

    • @ladonnad.steele2470
      @ladonnad.steele2470 4 ปีที่แล้ว +16

      @@edi9892 yes they can. Real dads can too. So can step moms and real moms.... You would be surprised at how bad mankind can be to their own children.

    • @spencerthestupidsamurai7326
      @spencerthestupidsamurai7326 4 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      May they Rest In Peace.

  • @DarknessPrevails
    @DarknessPrevails  4 ปีที่แล้ว +146

    More stories coming tomorrow! :) Like this video if you're stuck at home x(

    • @bingustm5034
      @bingustm5034 4 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      Ight imma like

    • @higgs7473
      @higgs7473 4 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      Yeah I'm in the Quorona Quarantine 👌

    • @nicholebishop81
      @nicholebishop81 4 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      home with my 2 kids! Hope you stay safe an healthy darkness!! Thank you for the stories!! 💙 I hope everybody to stays safe an healthy!!

    • @christineparis5607
      @christineparis5607 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Thank you!! We tried to board our dog overnight to get out of town to get my mother in laws 87th birthday. When we showed up with the dog, they had closed down....well, now we are getting pizzas, curling up with our pups and having a great evening with...YOU!! THANK YOU FOR KEEPING US ENTERTAINED! I hope you are all keeping safe and healthy. I have a friend that's starting a block party, everyone barbecuing on their front lawn, everyone keeping to their yard, but dancing, cooking, playing music and dancing! We can still party!!
      (Please check with seniors in your neighborhood, help them with groceries or cheer them up. They may also have experience with big pandemics in the past and probably have amazing stories to tell, on the phone, or from their doorway. Let them know you appreciate them, we will all be there someday, telling those "young kids" how we survived the coronavirus in 2020, so long ago....

    • @michelepruitt3145
      @michelepruitt3145 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Stuck like Chucky the Evil Doll! Lol 🤣✌😂

  • @TheRealGuywithoutaMustache
    @TheRealGuywithoutaMustache 4 ปีที่แล้ว +124

    Let's just all thank this man for providing us videos during quarantine

    • @DarknessPrevails
      @DarknessPrevails  4 ปีที่แล้ว +14

      I'm stuck at home - Lol narrating or watching TH-cam is all I have to do x)

    • @poureddesignsstudio3907
      @poureddesignsstudio3907 4 ปีที่แล้ว +6

      Darkness Prevails 👏👏👏👏👏

    • @slenn107sanchez8
      @slenn107sanchez8 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Agreed hey your everywhere.

  • @oxyrisin
    @oxyrisin 4 ปีที่แล้ว +10

    The most unbelievable part of this story is that any teenager going away would forget his cell phone

  • @mushmello
    @mushmello 4 ปีที่แล้ว +17

    I don't know why but I imagined Craig as Bob from Stranger Things. Kinda broke my own heart a little.

    • @raikazuchi2516
      @raikazuchi2516 4 ปีที่แล้ว +7

      SAME. For whatever reason when he was making food by the fire, I just imagined him as Samwise talking about potatoes.

  • @daisyonwheels
    @daisyonwheels 4 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    Aww...Mr. Darkness...you just reminded me of my dad😪...and how I missed him so much...he died of sudden heart attack...but thanks though for this wonderful story....this story made me cry😪keep putting out wonderful stories ❤

  • @The.Motivator
    @The.Motivator 4 ปีที่แล้ว +23

    This is actually a very beautiful story. I believe everyone can benefit from some perspective this tale brings. Enjoy

  • @Bigfoot_With_Internet_Access
    @Bigfoot_With_Internet_Access 4 ปีที่แล้ว +87

    Here before that bigfoot guy comments some lame joke that everyone hates

    • @mouseman6980
      @mouseman6980 4 ปีที่แล้ว +10

      Stay safe out there Mr foot

    • @shawnamarisssa9184
      @shawnamarisssa9184 4 ปีที่แล้ว +10

      I actually look forward to your comments now 😂

    • @ladonnad.steele2470
      @ladonnad.steele2470 4 ปีที่แล้ว +7

      We are ALWAYS looking for your comments!!!!

    • @christineparis5607
      @christineparis5607 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      I like them!! Everytime you post I want to go watch the purple mattress protector commercial again. I hope that doesn't offend you, it's just unbelievably hilarious to me. Being from Northern California, it's too easy to imagine a real bigfoot family just like that...
      Someone watch it and tell me what they think!

    • @DarknessPrevails
      @DarknessPrevails  4 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      Why is every new indie startup using you in their name and branding, Sasquatch?

  • @samlycan235
    @samlycan235 4 ปีที่แล้ว +41

    My mama and I listen to your stories while we do puzzles together. You've been a great source of comfort and familiarity during all of this. Thank you.

    • @DarknessPrevails
      @DarknessPrevails  4 ปีที่แล้ว +7

      I'm so glad I can help. Also, never really could get into puzzles. My thing was always army men on the coffee table lol

  • @krismurray77
    @krismurray77 4 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    Darkness is the real hero of this quarantine.

  • @roddmatsui3554
    @roddmatsui3554 4 ปีที่แล้ว +38

    This is one of my favorite narration voices on TH-cam, in regards to spooky stories. I have listened to quite a few hours of this material, often to go to sleep, as the voice is very relaxing.

    • @DarknessPrevails
      @DarknessPrevails  4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      A lot of my fans enjoy sleeping to my videos! I might need to pay attention to that x)

    • @trueblue2892
      @trueblue2892 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Seriously! Him, corpse husband and let’s read are my favs

  • @carac6785
    @carac6785 4 ปีที่แล้ว +45

    Wow. This was such a good story. And it's written by you! Oh my god darkness you are so talented. thank you

    • @DarknessPrevails
      @DarknessPrevails  4 ปีที่แล้ว +13

      My writing is usually better. I didn't really write it so much as I made it up as I recorded. A fun way to "write" Creepypasta on the spot.

  • @Smilo-the-Sabertooth
    @Smilo-the-Sabertooth 4 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    My friends and I went on a camping trip and we did a lot hiking. But we know we’re never completely alone out there.

    • @DarknessPrevails
      @DarknessPrevails  4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Pretty creepy when ya think about it, but a camping trip ain't a proper camping trip unless it's a bit creepy.

    • @Smilo-the-Sabertooth
      @Smilo-the-Sabertooth 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      I totally agree Darkness. Sometimes a creepy camping trip is a thrilling camping trip.

  • @canadianbacon2576
    @canadianbacon2576 4 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    I come from swamp dwellers community because I’ve heard good things about this channel. That story was absolutely amazing. My phone died half way leaving me on a cliffhanger and I couldn’t wait to charge it again. You earned my sub man🤘🏻

  • @Astrocam88
    @Astrocam88 4 ปีที่แล้ว +15

    I enjoyed the last piano song, you're not only talented with narration and writing stories, but music as well. Nice job.

  • @froggergirl19
    @froggergirl19 4 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    I lost my dad to an aneurysm back in 2002. I was 17. It sucked and still does, but my mom has stayed single. As long as she's happy, I'm happy for her.

    • @DarknessPrevails
      @DarknessPrevails  4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      It's terrifying and sad how this happens almost frequently. I wish you the best and hope you're doing well.

    • @froggergirl19
      @froggergirl19 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Thank you. Most of the time I'm alright, but some days it's like it just happened again. It's interesting how the mind works. Thank you for all your hard work on your videos. I love listening to them! 💙

  • @rorifrongillo6763
    @rorifrongillo6763 4 ปีที่แล้ว +11

    Stuck at home and getting ready to home school my kiddo (until the schools re-open). If anyone sees me talking to myself don't mind me, I'm having a "Parent/Teacher Conference". 😝

    • @Calthrow
      @Calthrow 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      😂 I hope you don't half to expel the kiddos!

    • @rorifrongillo6763
      @rorifrongillo6763 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      I know, right? Lol

    • @shawnamarisssa9184
      @shawnamarisssa9184 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      I've had to send my niece & nephew to the principal's office 3 times already 🤦🏼‍♀️🤣😂 good luck!

    • @rorifrongillo6763
      @rorifrongillo6763 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      😂 Thank you, I'm going to need it!

    • @teresaarias6912
      @teresaarias6912 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      lol

  • @odysseyofbuckofive9924
    @odysseyofbuckofive9924 4 ปีที่แล้ว +36

    Unfortunately I have to wait awhile before I can enjoy this narration. I’m stuck at home with kids that DON’T want to do their schoolwork. Hell, who does? Looking forward to it, Darkness!

    • @DarknessPrevails
      @DarknessPrevails  4 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      Hope you enjoy it whenever you're able to listen!

    • @shifflettartstudios2335
      @shifflettartstudios2335 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Headphones tend to help. After their school stuff, give them a tv break or something. While they whoop and hollor watching the show, pop in the headphones, keep and eye on them and listen to some stories. Sometimes I'll leave one earbud in so I can still hear if something happens or someone needs attention.

    • @odysseyofbuckofive9924
      @odysseyofbuckofive9924 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Darkness Prevails I loved the story! Portals are uber intriguing to think about! And this story knocked it outta the park. 👍🏼

  • @spencerthestupidsamurai7326
    @spencerthestupidsamurai7326 4 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Hello Darkness my old friend, I’ve started listening to the podcast since it’s boring in quarantine, I stopped listening a year or two ago and just started again, keep up the good work.

  • @masonmassa9395
    @masonmassa9395 4 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    I blame darkness prevails for keeping me up at night

  • @masonmassa9395
    @masonmassa9395 4 ปีที่แล้ว +9

    I love darkness prevails almost as much as pizza. And I love pizza a lot

  • @dylanmorris7357
    @dylanmorris7357 4 ปีที่แล้ว +17

    Hopefully, you are doing well Darkness Prevails. I'm really looking forward to more videos from you, so keep up the great work.

    • @DarknessPrevails
      @DarknessPrevails  4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      No worries - Got tons of stuff coming up :) You guys have been sending in lots of stories as of late.

  • @Wulfslove
    @Wulfslove 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    This is excellent writing. If you ever feel the inspiration, I'm sure I'm not the only one who would love to read something from you that's novel-length.

  • @avesgreen
    @avesgreen 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I have been subscribed to you for years now I love your stories and have listened to every single one multiple times. This story was so refreshing I can't even begin to explain it. No cliches, no overused wordage, just pure interesting story content. Thank you

  • @nooooplease7060
    @nooooplease7060 4 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    I need a part 2, this narration was the best I've heard in a long time

    • @DarknessPrevails
      @DarknessPrevails  4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      That'd be hard to write... Any ideas on where to pick the story back up?

    • @nooooplease7060
      @nooooplease7060 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Darkness Prevails possibly more of a background story to where the orbs originated from..? But that's what makes the story interesting as there are many unanswered questions

  • @artbyMissAC
    @artbyMissAC 4 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    I love how you wrote this Darkness! and I'm glad it had that ending ^_^ so happy for the both of them!

    • @DarknessPrevails
      @DarknessPrevails  4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Creepy and a good ending :) Those are always fun.

  • @brenda7622
    @brenda7622 4 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    Just in time to relax and enjoy with Darkness. I can't get enough of the darkness it's addictive.

    • @DarknessPrevails
      @DarknessPrevails  4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      I'm so sleepy. Bring on the actual darkness

  • @cheynemccadney3940
    @cheynemccadney3940 4 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    Sweet, been waiting for the next upload, l love listening while working. Its the only thing that makes it bearable so the monster in me doesn't come out ( not a metaphor ) I love this channel

    • @DarknessPrevails
      @DarknessPrevails  4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      I'm glad you enjoy my show, but I hope you don't work around too many other people during these dangerous times. Stay safe!

    • @cheynemccadney3940
      @cheynemccadney3940 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@DarknessPrevails always good sir you and your family as well please be safe

  • @piperatthegatesofdawn
    @piperatthegatesofdawn 4 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    Nice!! "Growing old" towards the end!!!

    • @DarknessPrevails
      @DarknessPrevails  4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Yup! I needed a pretty-ish song to end with :)

  • @LalaAlien
    @LalaAlien 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    YOU'RE LIKE MEDICINE TO MY EARS DURING THIS HORRIBLE QUARANTINE IN FRANCE!! Thank you Dakrness

    • @christineparis5607
      @christineparis5607 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Hi France!! This is Texas checking in, hang in there! It will be ok!!😘

    • @LalaAlien
      @LalaAlien 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@christineparis5607 Thank you! I hope America is prepared in case it happens over there as well. What's going on right now is unbelievable but I think is going to happen everywhere. Let's stay strong.

    • @teresaarias6912
      @teresaarias6912 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      💪🏽

    • @DarknessPrevails
      @DarknessPrevails  4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Best of luck and stay safe! I'll do my best to keep y'all entertained.

  • @Jrod_9424
    @Jrod_9424 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    That one ACTUALLY made me tear up

  • @julijajanjis8272
    @julijajanjis8272 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Darkness you are incredibly good of narrating your stories and music it is unbelievable 👍❤️ you have big salutes from my and from my country Croatia🇭🇷

  • @amateurartist2433
    @amateurartist2433 4 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    Sweet! I love hiking horror stories! I love you and your channel! 💜

    • @DarknessPrevails
      @DarknessPrevails  4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Yeah hiking stories are great. I need to do more mountain monsters too

    • @amateurartist2433
      @amateurartist2433 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@DarknessPrevails the only mountain monster I've ever seen was a mountain lion 🤷

  • @beehay3361
    @beehay3361 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Trying to make me cry. Absolutely beautiful ending. I loved it!!!👏🏽 Blessed, they should be.

  • @stephaniebaker6001
    @stephaniebaker6001 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Normally, I don't listen to Creepypasta stories, but this was excellent AND as always, your narration is perfect DP. Thank you for this; it was a real treat listening to this incredibly spooky and weird story! 🖤🖤🖤

  • @rjkmannusaf0166
    @rjkmannusaf0166 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Thank you for your perfect narration of this glitch inspired story that I enjoyed immensely. For some reason I tend to shy away from “glitch in the Matrix” stories I might have to rethink that after listening to this one. 😎

  • @simplyramona8678
    @simplyramona8678 4 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    Do-overs would be wonderful! Good story, uplifting.

    • @DarknessPrevails
      @DarknessPrevails  4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Do overs? You mean touching on the same topics I've covered? For sure! Any suggestions?

    • @simplyramona8678
      @simplyramona8678 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@DarknessPrevails Not what I meant. The subject of the story was given the chance to "do-over" the relationship with his step-dad through the supernatural events they experienced in the woods. I certainly didn't mean to be critical of your work. You're one of the best narrators on YT and I've followed your channel for years. Thank you for asking Darkness for clarification of my comment.🌱

    • @DarknessPrevails
      @DarknessPrevails  4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@simplyramona8678 No I didn't take it as a critique lol - I get requests for covering old topics all the time and assumed that's what you meant. But yeah it is a do over! Like the movies Groundhog day or Happy Deathday I think.

    • @DarknessPrevails
      @DarknessPrevails  4 ปีที่แล้ว

      I actually haven't seen Happy Death Day yet, which is surprising for a horror movie fanatic like me.

    • @DarknessPrevails
      @DarknessPrevails  4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Do you know of any other movies or shows that feature do-overs? Id love to check it out.

  • @opiumbrella3351
    @opiumbrella3351 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    THANK YOU SO MUCH!!! Your videos are really helping me personally. I suffer from an autoimmune condition, and am basically in quarantine, because I get pneumonia and end up in the icu pretty much annually, just from the common cold/flu bugs that go around yearly. This virus would likely kill me. I am scared, for my kids, for myself and my loved ones, my country, the world, and I am trapped in a windowless bedroom, trying to ride this out. And you don't know how comforting/helpful your videos have been for me. I appreciate the extra hard work your doing in order to keep us all distracted and entertained. Really.
    Love from isolation in Oregon

  • @alexissmith169
    @alexissmith169 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    That got me. It was a good. Thanks for entertaining the contained

  • @theartistdesigner9338
    @theartistdesigner9338 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Life is a lot different for people who have these experiences than for "normal" people... it's hard trying to adapt back to "normal" life as we know it... God bless all you who suffer like this.
    You too DP for submitting these stories 🙂

  • @bradyblackburn4863
    @bradyblackburn4863 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Thanks for keeping at it, DP. This has been a bright spot in a very long day.

    • @DarknessPrevails
      @DarknessPrevails  4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      It was a long day wasn't it? Here's to things getting better soon I hope.

  • @SigynRegn
    @SigynRegn 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Wow, this was so nice. I wish there was a black wall sometimes in my life...

  • @pascaleelliott63
    @pascaleelliott63 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    That last story should be adapted into a movie

  • @jacobbowling263
    @jacobbowling263 4 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Darkness just got home from hiking love the story.

    • @DarknessPrevails
      @DarknessPrevails  4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Glad you made it back okay :) I need to do some hiking myself.

  • @paulfigg4048
    @paulfigg4048 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    This is an Awesome story! Really enjoyed this. Your narration truly creates the atmosphere and surroundings of the story. The music was fantastic also

  • @amandasizelove9069
    @amandasizelove9069 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    That was so awesome! Great story!

  • @x413Crypt
    @x413Crypt 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    This is the second 'pasta of yours I've listened to start to finish after never really caring for them. Your narration makes it *so easy* to just sink into them and your writing is always fantastic my man. I'm autistic so it's just hard for me to get into non-real life stories because it's a deviation from my norm but I'll be damned if I don't sincerely love yours.

  • @teddmills2534
    @teddmills2534 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    It's like interdimensional travel. WOW!!! Good story.

  • @carlgallo5190
    @carlgallo5190 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    One of the best stories I heard you narrate Dark!!! It made me feel like I watched a 2 hour movie! Thank you for supplying such entertainment for us listeners. Keep doing what you're doing!!!

  • @ByeCat
    @ByeCat 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    I'm still slowly catching up on all your wonderful videos, and I love how every few videos there's a story written by you! I have to say this one is my favorite by far. It's really creepy, the story-telling is wonderful, and the ending made me genuinely happy

  • @julies3837
    @julies3837 4 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    It’s a good Friday now!!

    • @DarknessPrevails
      @DarknessPrevails  4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Didn't even realize it was Friday. It's such a bad day for views BUT you guys needed a new story!

    • @julies3837
      @julies3837 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Darkness Prevails With the way my week has been seeing a video from you made me very happy.
      Thank you!

  • @puca7908
    @puca7908 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    This was a really good story! It left me with mixed, but good thoughts and memories. Thank you so much Darkness!

  • @sarahwoods6317
    @sarahwoods6317 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Wow you're an awesome writer, this one of the best creepypastas I've heard in a long time.

  • @christopherhuggy6250
    @christopherhuggy6250 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    This is dope darkness, great job writing this!

  • @tat-2-71
    @tat-2-71 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Incredible narration man. Kind of a creepy feel good story. I dig it.

  • @CommanderSix
    @CommanderSix 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    My favorite story of the year, thank you.

  • @SheWolfMoon
    @SheWolfMoon 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Its so nice to get a happy ending for once.

  • @KarenSmith-pc8ji
    @KarenSmith-pc8ji 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Great story... it was suspenseful, scary and poignant. In addition to being a great narrator, you are a very talented writer. Thanks for sharing your talents with all of us.

  • @daddydreet145
    @daddydreet145 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    VERY well written, entertaining story. and only 1 ad. good job darkness.

    • @DarknessPrevails
      @DarknessPrevails  4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Thank you kindly :) I'll start writing more if this is well received

  • @nowaki16
    @nowaki16 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Amazing storie! Love it :)

    • @DarknessPrevails
      @DarknessPrevails  4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Thank you! Love doing unique antagonists

  • @socrates39
    @socrates39 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I rarely comment, but you sir are very talented. One of the best stories I’ve heard.

  • @ryleigh812
    @ryleigh812 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    That ending make me cry a little

  • @Phendix21
    @Phendix21 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    That was a really good story. Thanks for the distraction Darkness.

  • @insidemanful
    @insidemanful 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Loved the story. Great job!

  • @timothyzeiner3695
    @timothyzeiner3695 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    What a pleasant feel good story. I really enjoyed it. Thank you.👍👍

  • @kristinowens899
    @kristinowens899 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    Oh yeah!!
    Tysm!! One of my favorite channels, love your voice!!

  • @TonyaB005
    @TonyaB005 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Chilling and great at the same time! I am glad it ended well.

  • @umairkhan59
    @umairkhan59 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Man your stories are really awesome😇 i like listening to them almost every time when i am free. i am looking forward to submit my own story on your website keep up the good work.

    • @DarknessPrevails
      @DarknessPrevails  4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Go for it! Just be sure to follow the guidelines - No one really does and it makes it so hard to read and find decent stories.

  • @Nyctophora
    @Nyctophora 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Well written, DP, very well done.

  • @battyloup8510
    @battyloup8510 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I need those vortexes to bring me back some years in my life 🌚

  • @lostsoulfindingtheway
    @lostsoulfindingtheway 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    One of my new favorites 💜

  • @Calthrow
    @Calthrow 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    A creepypasta that you wrote woohoo! Thanks Darkness just what I needed!

    • @DarknessPrevails
      @DarknessPrevails  4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      I miss doing more writing

    • @Calthrow
      @Calthrow 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@DarknessPrevails I cant wait to hear more this one was really good and had me on the edge of my seat but smiling at the end!

  • @goldenagenut
    @goldenagenut 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Good story,well narrated as well. A happy ending is refreshing every once and a while.

    • @DarknessPrevails
      @DarknessPrevails  4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      I absolutely agree. Even horror doesn't have to be depressing and stressful every time.

  • @evilcam
    @evilcam 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    This one actually sucked me in. I was really entranced by the situation and setting. I usually don't really care about characterization, but it worked here because it fit to set the rollercoaster tone. A lot of good ups and downs, and even some emotional interactions that made me want catharsis. Excellent pay off, I did not see the end coming at all, which is rare for these sorts of stories.
    Well done. I saw that you said you thought the writing was meh here, but I thought it was really good. If you really did just make it off the top of your head, I think you have a real gift for story telling. Not only in the horror narration sense, but the real old school 'sit around the fire and listen to village elders tell you about the gods' sort of stprytelling way. Which really, is the best kind.

  • @capridewall3579
    @capridewall3579 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    This was an amazing creepypasta!!

  • @leavesfalldown3191
    @leavesfalldown3191 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    If I get a chance to listen to some music when on my hiking trips I always choose music like Delta Parole or Guns N Roses, the rawness is the best with nature.

  • @susieturk1
    @susieturk1 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Great story Darkness!!

  • @icantthinkofaname15
    @icantthinkofaname15 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Yay I'm glad Craig lived!! Lol good, weird story. 👍

  • @deb6759
    @deb6759 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Excellent work! Thank you!Peace and roses,Deb the TN Scary Lady

  • @tinaparker3178
    @tinaparker3178 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Awe what a good story 😊👍👍👍love your stories darkness

  • @daydreamingdaydreamer6600
    @daydreamingdaydreamer6600 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    Great story! Thank you for these videos!!

    • @ms.scream2248
      @ms.scream2248 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      If you enjoyed this one then youll surely love my scary narrations as well

  • @jamiemcfarland9392
    @jamiemcfarland9392 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I'm so excited!!! My Darkness Prevails Hoody Finally Arrived Today!!! Woo Hoo!!!😈👹👻👽👾

  • @cletola9675
    @cletola9675 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    I loved this story..the best..😀😀

  • @ryandenson2444
    @ryandenson2444 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Love what you do.

  • @zombeefan6428
    @zombeefan6428 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Nicely done!!!!

  • @Joseinopinku
    @Joseinopinku 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    I love the outro, i listened to every second.

  • @lisastephens864
    @lisastephens864 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Your my favorite voice.. love it ...more park ranges please

  • @keciapowell4608
    @keciapowell4608 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Good story, talented writer,I enjoyed.☺

  • @nicpajanel6744
    @nicpajanel6744 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    love this story!

  • @Alessandro_zampino
    @Alessandro_zampino 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    Just put more of these stories of yours..great story 👍✌

  • @McMahon-sh9rg
    @McMahon-sh9rg 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Omg that was beautiful it made my heart cry and smile 💜💜💜💜

  • @ChildfreeMatto
    @ChildfreeMatto 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    Another scary video by Darkness Prevails! Thank you for giving me the chills down my spine. 😱

  • @vaultgirl1017
    @vaultgirl1017 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Awe that was more of a cute story the ending was the best

  • @5crassrocker
    @5crassrocker 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Poor Craig. Seemed like a nice enough guy.

  • @lissettep1219
    @lissettep1219 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    This was an awesome story.

  • @plushcat716
    @plushcat716 ปีที่แล้ว

    Great story!

  • @iamdevon
    @iamdevon 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    Beautiful story

  • @eat_pray_love5
    @eat_pray_love5 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    Loved this story

  • @SUGOI
    @SUGOI 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    U are very talented 👏👏 hats off❤

  • @blackdevilwhitedemon
    @blackdevilwhitedemon 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Aw, that was oddly wholesome Daddy Darkness. :)