The information is good. The voice comes across as a combination of sounding slightly bored and the presentation is improvised. While it is important to show the screens and what information to click / select, consider investing or renting a camera so the viewer can see who is making the presentation. Even if the face is shown only at the beginning and end. It is subjective, but there is a comfort is being able to associate a face with the information being presented. Please, do not give up.
Thanks Keith for your valuable feedback and support! FYI, their is a proper camera in the planning and a proper mic has already been purchased - which will make the sound much better.
The information is good. The voice comes across as a combination of sounding slightly bored and the presentation is improvised. While it is important to show the screens and what information to click / select, consider investing or renting a camera so the viewer can see who is making the presentation. Even if the face is shown only at the beginning and end. It is subjective, but there is a comfort is being able to associate a face with the information being presented. Please, do not give up.
Thanks Keith for your valuable feedback and support! FYI, their is a proper camera in the planning and a proper mic has already been purchased - which will make the sound much better.