0:52 "Though he was enjoying his play session, he was starting to feel a little bit anxious, yet he had no idea why." 1:49 😢 2:44 oh geez that scared me- 3:04 "The sudden appearance of monsters was concerning. It must actually be a thunderstorm, though the timing of it seemed odd, so he decided to go back to his house to sleep." 3:38 dirt block at the bottom of the stairs in his house? 3:44 "Now here was something very suspicious. In the short time he had left his house and come back, somehow one of his stairs had gone missing?" 4:28 "Suddenly the player started to feel extra anxious. His anxiety led him to believe he was not alone, and something was upstairs in his house!" that last part is worrying... 5:13 there's someone there... 5:20 he can still see whoever it is from downstairs... 5:24 "What was that? Was that a player? It looked like Alex was in his world!" 5:50 gone... but the window or the wall is broken leading out onto the trees outside... 6:30 "Ok, so Alex was there, but it appeared she had broken the glass and gone!" 9:28 "He could not find Alex. He had no idea where she had gone. But he also kept getting a message from his friend, this time he wanted to join him on his world. He decided to invite him and play together." 10:06 when he turns to look in this direction it looks like something appears in the sky in the distance then quickly vanishes... 11:05 a cross shape dug in the snowy ground? 13:13 Alex in the distance with her back to him... 13:58 "The player, acting jovial yet foolish, decided to poke her to see if she would move!" 14:15 "Oops! Just like that he had killed her! But the way she died just didn't seem right! Why was there no player death message in the chat? Something SERIOUSLY wasn't right!" 15:36 "Finally he had gottena message from his friend on Xbox. He said that he couldn't join and that someone named "ALEX" was preventing him from joining!" 17:48 that's not good... 18:00 jumpscare... 18:03 "And then suddenly the player was thrust into a pit of lava and burned up, and when he respawned his house and the whole village waas burned... and finally his friend was able to join him at last." 18:13 "But they cannot find Burned Alex." Your welcome for the timestamps! 😊😊😊❤️❤️❤️
@@YTRetroManXD thanks ❤️ Your the first to comment that lol 😂😅 Edit: not trying to hurt your feelings... I don't mind not having replies to my timestamp comments... I'm happy with the likes I get 😊 because when my timestamp comments get likes then I know that people have seen possibly read and possibly used the timestamps in my comment while watching the video/videos 😊😊😊❤️❤️❤️
Holy moly-! My comment has 17 likes-! I've never gotten *THAT* many-! Thank you!!! 😊😊😊❤️❤️❤️ (the 18th like is me liking my own comment so that one *DOESN'T* count... 💀😅)
Player: **Wanders into a cave** Player: **Sees iron ore** Me: GET IT. GET IT! Player: **Mines the ore** Me: Thank gosh... OH HEY IS THAT COAL- Player: Well anyway time to go commit murder
I'm sure Alex is nice, its just some lost girl looking to warm up for the day, then out of nowhere, this person thought it's a good idea to burn the house down out of fear and calling it a day hence the origin of Burned Alex
@@SchisMontHil890 I'm guessing that your talking about my timestamp comment... Which this is the first time my comment has gotten hearted and pinned by Ray because I've never gotten my comments hearted by him. I also hardly ever get pinned by anyone other than myself(I sometimes pin my own comments, I also pin other peoples comments on my channel sometimes) I got my first pin by one of the channels I'm subscribed to
creepypasta idea : skeleton Trex A Living Dinosaur Skeleton Ability To Break blocks and Walls Depending On Its Durability and yes Its Eyesight can see better than a eagle He can u spot from far away To avoid him Dont Move ur character if hes next to u His vision is based on movements soon as u stop moving it will think u Disappeared somewhere Can shake Ground shake range is 12 blocks away A little shake if ur 5 blocks It will shake alot per footstep it takes
I like the idea of this! But I do have some constructive criticism: 1) *Textboxes:* The textboxes feel a little out of place and pop up unexpectedly. They don’t add to the creepypasta feel and reveal too much lore too quickly. For example, instead of outright saying, “A year ago he (the player) had lost his pet dog who had died in the snow,” you could allude to the dog’s death by having the player walk to a tomb or headstone with the words, “Rest in peace (dog’s name)” and a note below explaining what happened or describing a positive trait about the dog, such as “Passed from a mysterious heart attack” or “He/She was always full of life.” You could even attach a notebook that the player reads, explaining in detail what happened. 2) *Dog and Cross Relevance:* The inclusion of the dog feels out of place. Unless I missed something, aside from making the player sad, the event doesn’t seem to contribute much to the story. Also, the cross seen at 11:00 seems out of place. Burnt Alex doesn’t appear to have much religious or anti-religious significance, and crosses can appear naturally without any nefarious meaning. 3) *Player Connection:* I don’t feel connected to the player since they are only referred to as “the player.” This makes the story less impactful. Even giving the player a basic name might help viewers feel more attached. I saw an ARG about a week ago that made me feel really pitiful for the player yet excited to see where the story would go (the “46 Intel” ARG). This can help viewers stay engaged with the video, creepypasta, or ARG, and in turn, might make them more interested in your storytelling, potentially resulting in more viewers. 4) *Story Clarity:* At 17:45, the story falls apart for me and leaves me with more questions than answers. We never get an idea of why Burnt Alex targets this player, aside from them possibly burning them. But then, who or what is Alex? Is it a person? An NPC? If so, then who? And why did the player burn anyone? Based on their mannerisms, they appear to be a child, so why would they even think about doing that? 5) *Ending:* Finally, the ending is the nail in the coffin for me. “And then suddenly the player was thrust into a pit of lava and burned up, and when he respawned his house and the whole village was burned… and finally his friend was able to join him at last.” Why don’t we see the player being “thrust” into a pit of lava? Where was this lava pit? The general grammar also ruins it for me and doesn’t make it creepy at all. Overall, I think your concept has a lot of potential! With a few adjustments, it could become even more engaging and immersive. Keep up the great work, and I’m excited to see how your content evolves!
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@@user-Brentdone listen here kid, you’re not that special and he’s not gonna listen to absolutely everything people request if not at all. This is *HIS* channel and he can do whatever he wants with it. So stop crying like a little baby about it and deal with it! God, I’m so tired of these kinds of people who think they can get whatever they want.
0:52 "Though he was enjoying his play session, he was starting to feel a little bit anxious, yet he had no idea why." 1:49 😢 2:44 oh geez that scared me- 3:04 "The sudden appearance of monsters was concerning. It must actually be a thunderstorm, though the timing of it seemed odd, so he decided to go back to his house to sleep." 3:38 dirt block at the bottom of the stairs in his house? 3:44 "Now here was something very suspicious. In the short time he had left his house and come back, somehow one of his stairs had gone missing?" 4:28 "Suddenly the player started to feel extra anxious. His anxiety led him to believe he was not alone, and something was upstairs in his house!" that last part is worrying... 5:13 there's someone there... 5:20 he can still see whoever it is from downstairs... 5:24 "What was that? Was that a player? It looked like Alex was in his world!" 5:50 gone... but the window or the wall is broken leading out onto the trees outside... 6:30 "Ok, so Alex was there, but it appeared she had broken the glass and gone!" 9:28 "He could not find Alex. He had no idea where she had gone. But he also kept getting a message from his friend, this time he wanted to join him on his world. He decided to invite him and play together." 10:06 when he turns to look in this direction it looks like something appears in the sky in the distance then quickly vanishes... 11:05 a cross shape dug in the snowy ground? 13:13 Alex in the distance with her back to him... 13:58 "The player, acting jovial yet foolish, decided to poke her to see if she would move!" 14:15 "Oops! Just like that he had killed her! But the way she died just didn't seem right! Why was there no player death message in the chat? Something SERIOUSLY wasn't right!" 15:36 "Finally he had gottena message from his friend on Xbox. He said that he couldn't join and that someone named "ALEX" was preventing him from joining!" 17:48 that's not good... 18:00 jumpscare... 18:03 "And then suddenly the player was thrust into a pit of lava and burned up, and when he respawned his house and the whole village waas burned... and finally his friend was able to join him at last." 18:13 "But they cannot find Burned Alex." Your welcome for the timestamps! 😊😊😊❤❤❤ i am tooo!
0:52 "Though he was enjoying his play session, he was starting to feel a little bit anxious, yet he had no idea why."
1:49 😢
2:44 oh geez that scared me-
3:04 "The sudden appearance of monsters was concerning. It must actually be a thunderstorm, though the timing of it seemed odd, so he decided to go back to his house to sleep."
3:38 dirt block at the bottom of the stairs in his house?
3:44 "Now here was something very suspicious. In the short time he had left his house and come back, somehow one of his stairs had gone missing?"
4:28 "Suddenly the player started to feel extra anxious. His anxiety led him to believe he was not alone, and something was upstairs in his house!" that last part is worrying...
5:13 there's someone there...
5:20 he can still see whoever it is from downstairs...
5:24 "What was that? Was that a player? It looked like Alex was in his world!"
5:50 gone... but the window or the wall is broken leading out onto the trees outside...
6:30 "Ok, so Alex was there, but it appeared she had broken the glass and gone!"
9:28 "He could not find Alex. He had no idea where she had gone. But he also kept getting a message from his friend, this time he wanted to join him on his world. He decided to invite him and play together."
10:06 when he turns to look in this direction it looks like something appears in the sky in the distance then quickly vanishes...
11:05 a cross shape dug in the snowy ground?
13:13 Alex in the distance with her back to him...
13:58 "The player, acting jovial yet foolish, decided to poke her to see if she would move!"
14:15 "Oops! Just like that he had killed her! But the way she died just didn't seem right! Why was there no player death message in the chat? Something SERIOUSLY wasn't right!"
15:36 "Finally he had gottena message from his friend on Xbox. He said that he couldn't join and that someone named "ALEX" was preventing him from joining!"
17:48 that's not good...
18:00 jumpscare...
18:03 "And then suddenly the player was thrust into a pit of lava and burned up, and when he respawned his house and the whole village waas burned... and finally his friend was able to join him at last."
18:13 "But they cannot find Burned Alex."
Your welcome for the timestamps! 😊😊😊❤️❤️❤️
4 like with 0 reply?
Let's me fix that!
What the hack
@@YTRetroManXD thanks ❤️
Your the first to comment that lol 😂😅
Edit: not trying to hurt your feelings... I don't mind not having replies to my timestamp comments... I'm happy with the likes I get 😊 because when my timestamp comments get likes then I know that people have seen possibly read and possibly used the timestamps in my comment while watching the video/videos 😊😊😊❤️❤️❤️
@@SchisMontHil890 what? Is something wrong? Is it my comment? Did I do the timestamps wrong or the words next to each timestamp?
Holy moly-! My comment has 17 likes-! I've never gotten *THAT* many-! Thank you!!! 😊😊😊❤️❤️❤️
(the 18th like is me liking my own comment so that one *DOESN'T* count... 💀😅)
Timestamp about message sound
1. 2:13 massage noises
2. 5:33 massage noises
3. 6:47 massage noises
4. 7:15 massage noises
5. 9:24 massage noises
6. 15:27 massage noises
>>End
Message:❌️
Massage:✅️
This is what happens when Mario's creepypastas meet minecraft
Minecraft creepypasta idea: if this appear in your railway, DELETE YOUR WORLD (entity:choo choo charles)
Omg ray ur vids are always amazing!😊😊
Wow another awesome TH-cam video from RayGloom! 😁
Bro they just snatched Alex's wig off😭💀
Nice vid rayyyyy!!!!!🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉
Oh atleast she only treats you like you treat her.
Collin: nah I'd win
Player: **Wanders into a cave**
Player: **Sees iron ore**
Me: GET IT. GET IT!
Player: **Mines the ore**
Me: Thank gosh... OH HEY IS THAT COAL-
Player: Well anyway time to go commit murder
Creepypasta Idea: if you see a creeper face in the sun. REINSTALL YOUR GAME NOW!!!! Entity: VOID STEVE
I'm sure Alex is nice, its just some lost girl looking to warm up for the day, then out of nowhere, this person thought it's a good idea to burn the house down out of fear and calling it a day hence the origin of Burned Alex
If this were real, then I would have found it more times than what everyone expects lol
Burned Alex, was that a new Minecraft Creepypasta Entity Ray.
11:18 herobrine cross?
It so creepy 😨
Love your vids!! Not real! But fun and interesting! I could watch all your vids without getting bored!! Keep up the good work!! Big fan!!
5:12 BUrned Alex appears
13:11 Burn Alex appears again
17:59 the real burned Alex
I don't want to comment on the odd timestamp because the timestamp has already been attached by Ray.
@@SchisMontHil890 I'm guessing that your talking about my timestamp comment...
Which this is the first time my comment has gotten hearted and pinned by Ray because I've never gotten my comments hearted by him. I also hardly ever get pinned by anyone other than myself(I sometimes pin my own comments, I also pin other peoples comments on my channel sometimes) I got my first pin by one of the channels I'm subscribed to
I came here a bit early
Alex got Anakin/Darth Vader treatment 😭💀
creepypasta idea :
skeleton Trex
A Living Dinosaur Skeleton
Ability To Break blocks and Walls
Depending On Its Durability
and yes Its Eyesight can see better than a eagle He can u spot from far away
To avoid him
Dont Move ur character
if hes next to u
His vision is based on movements soon as u stop moving it will think u Disappeared somewhere
Can shake Ground
shake range is 12 blocks away
A little shake
if ur 5 blocks It will shake alot
per footstep it takes
What's the seed get it a seed for wheat but seriously what's the seed and if it's bedrock TEL ME THE SEED
Bro if u got then pls tell me toooo
Wdym if its bedrock? It wouldn't be on this channel if it wasn't bedrock
@@Animalisticatomicalnightmare yes but how do he play that world's!!!!??
fart poop in mouth@@Indian_Gamer_106
Cool and Goodjob ❤❤❤❤❤
Thing's will never be the same...
omg guys-! My timestamp comment got hearted *AND* pinned by Ray!!! That's *NEVER* happened till now!!! Eeeek!!! 😃😃😃😊😊😊❤️❤️❤️
I like the idea of this! But I do have some constructive criticism:
1) *Textboxes:* The textboxes feel a little out of place and pop up unexpectedly. They don’t add to the creepypasta feel and reveal too much lore too quickly. For example, instead of outright saying, “A year ago he (the player) had lost his pet dog who had died in the snow,” you could allude to the dog’s death by having the player walk to a tomb or headstone with the words, “Rest in peace (dog’s name)” and a note below explaining what happened or describing a positive trait about the dog, such as “Passed from a mysterious heart attack” or “He/She was always full of life.” You could even attach a notebook that the player reads, explaining in detail what happened.
2) *Dog and Cross Relevance:* The inclusion of the dog feels out of place. Unless I missed something, aside from making the player sad, the event doesn’t seem to contribute much to the story. Also, the cross seen at 11:00 seems out of place. Burnt Alex doesn’t appear to have much religious or anti-religious significance, and crosses can appear naturally without any nefarious meaning.
3) *Player Connection:* I don’t feel connected to the player since they are only referred to as “the player.” This makes the story less impactful. Even giving the player a basic name might help viewers feel more attached. I saw an ARG about a week ago that made me feel really pitiful for the player yet excited to see where the story would go (the “46 Intel” ARG). This can help viewers stay engaged with the video, creepypasta, or ARG, and in turn, might make them more interested in your storytelling, potentially resulting in more viewers.
4) *Story Clarity:* At 17:45, the story falls apart for me and leaves me with more questions than answers. We never get an idea of why Burnt Alex targets this player, aside from them possibly burning them. But then, who or what is Alex? Is it a person? An NPC? If so, then who? And why did the player burn anyone? Based on their mannerisms, they appear to be a child, so why would they even think about doing that?
5) *Ending:* Finally, the ending is the nail in the coffin for me. “And then suddenly the player was thrust into a pit of lava and burned up, and when he respawned his house and the whole village was burned… and finally his friend was able to join him at last.” Why don’t we see the player being “thrust” into a pit of lava? Where was this lava pit? The general grammar also ruins it for me and doesn’t make it creepy at all.
Overall, I think your concept has a lot of potential! With a few adjustments, it could become even more engaging and immersive. Keep up the great work, and I’m excited to see how your content evolves!
Alex appeared as a Demonic, Burned Hellbound
You thought Herobrine worked alone!
Where did Burned Alex
Where do these seeds come from the scary ones and can anyone tell me some pls
Hey yo Burned alex saw 13:20
Burned Alex was one of The Minecraft Creepypasta Entities Alex Ray.
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Why am I feeling anxiety watching this😶
😊❤😊❤😊
😊
i like the minecraft house
I feel bad for the player’s dog that had died and Alex is burnt to a crisp.
😊❤😊❤😊❤😊
😊
Who TOLD alex to burn herself to death and haunt a player for no reason
I ,so miss Minecraft ,so much its why i watch Minecraft on TH-cam as i dont have the game ,but the videos on here are ,so awesome and amazing to 8:08
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Ayyy
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Juan Cuadrado
Hi raygloom
Sadio Mane
Yo ray what I'm looking for for distortion Alex entity it should appear soon
Gerard Pique
CREEPY
Timo Werner
The only thing creepy about about this is his hotbar.
First
Raphael Varane
BRUUUHH WHERE ARE THE TIMESTAMPS?
first
WE NEED THAT SEED
Ederson
Believe and accept Lord Jesus as your God and Saviour! He died for our sins ! If any Believers are here reply with AMEN!
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
Nobody cares…
Amen ❤
Amen
It’s just a creepypasta Video. Nothing Else.
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Luis Suarez
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Paul Pogba
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Gerard Pique
Giorgio Chileini
Gianluigi Buffon
Noah Okafor
🎉
Hey Titan tv man
@@S1LLY_PLUNG3R_LOV3R yea
Will you make a creepypasta about the new biome?
Kylian Mbappe
Alex is christian i knew it because everytime she appears she leave a cross sign hahahahahahaha joke.
Actually not a joke
Whats the seed?
Love your videos ❤❤❤ can you do another with camotim please
Lionel Messi
HAHA IM EIGHTH
You shouldn't watch yt
I hate creepy pastas but i watch these videos cuz i hate them
1 HOUR AGO?!
Wait if its snowing how is alex burnt
Alex appear 5:10
Sdss dds was c😈
おはようございます、
OK, I’m tired of this. Will you ever accept my idea if you see a block move brace yourself if you make one more video then I’ll be mad
He wont
@@Play-Doh_Eater all right let’s see about that because if he doesn’t listen, then I will un sub to him
@@user-BrentdoneAnd?
@@user-Brentdone listen here kid, you’re not that special and he’s not gonna listen to absolutely everything people request if not at all. This is *HIS* channel and he can do whatever he wants with it. So stop crying like a little baby about it and deal with it! God, I’m so tired of these kinds of people who think they can get whatever they want.
@@mistersteady why are you calling me a kid even though I’m not
0:52 "Though he was enjoying his play session, he was starting to feel a little bit anxious, yet he had no idea why."
1:49 😢
2:44 oh geez that scared me-
3:04 "The sudden appearance of monsters was concerning. It must actually be a thunderstorm, though the timing of it seemed odd, so he decided to go back to his house to sleep."
3:38 dirt block at the bottom of the stairs in his house?
3:44 "Now here was something very suspicious. In the short time he had left his house and come back, somehow one of his stairs had gone missing?"
4:28 "Suddenly the player started to feel extra anxious. His anxiety led him to believe he was not alone, and something was upstairs in his house!" that last part is worrying...
5:13 there's someone there...
5:20 he can still see whoever it is from downstairs...
5:24 "What was that? Was that a player? It looked like Alex was in his world!"
5:50 gone... but the window or the wall is broken leading out onto the trees outside...
6:30 "Ok, so Alex was there, but it appeared she had broken the glass and gone!"
9:28 "He could not find Alex. He had no idea where she had gone. But he also kept getting a message from his friend, this time he wanted to join him on his world. He decided to invite him and play together."
10:06 when he turns to look in this direction it looks like something appears in the sky in the distance then quickly vanishes...
11:05 a cross shape dug in the snowy ground?
13:13 Alex in the distance with her back to him...
13:58 "The player, acting jovial yet foolish, decided to poke her to see if she would move!"
14:15 "Oops! Just like that he had killed her! But the way she died just didn't seem right! Why was there no player death message in the chat? Something SERIOUSLY wasn't right!"
15:36 "Finally he had gottena message from his friend on Xbox. He said that he couldn't join and that someone named "ALEX" was preventing him from joining!"
17:48 that's not good...
18:00 jumpscare...
18:03 "And then suddenly the player was thrust into a pit of lava and burned up, and when he respawned his house and the whole village waas burned... and finally his friend was able to join him at last."
18:13 "But they cannot find Burned Alex."
Your welcome for the timestamps! 😊😊😊❤❤❤
i am tooo!
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