Godmade horrors beyond your comprehension
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- เผยแพร่เมื่อ 5 ก.พ. 2025
- "Far Beyond the Place of Stopping"
By R.J. Williamson
Music:
• Lustmord - Heresy (1990)
• Babel
• The End
Film clips from Begotten (1990)
Male narration voiced by me. Other voices created with ElevenLabs speech-to-speech conversion.
I journeyed, long in walking, far beyond the place of stopping
Where there was no more returning to the people I had known.
I saw the world forgotten, where the grass gives up on growing
And I knew that I would never make another journey home.
Upon that fleshy plain, below the final rock outcropping
Stretched the vast and empty desert of the hungry, bleeding thing
Encompassing the earth to the horizon, all-consuming,
Crying in a thousand voices to its desolate god-king.
And the music of its crying, never dead, ever dying,
Sent me running in a madness I can scarce compare to fear,
Not to safety, but to silence - unto my own unmaking.
And yet now, upon awaking, once again the song I hear.
I long to taste the fruit of earth, I long for water quenching
Of my thirst, unending, nothing that remains can satisfy.
For my voice has joined the chorus ever more, ever mourning.
Ever singing, ever hungry. Ever dying, never die.
*Burialgoods makes a new video*
Me: "Nice, I’ll either laugh my ass off or discover horrors beyond my comprehension."
Why not both?
@@TheCool_Guy23 well, in Lovecraft stories, when characters discovers horrors beyond their comprehension, they run off screaming and laughing maniacally as their sanity vanishes, so yeah, both is good.
Laughing as you go mad from the revelation of eldritch truths is still laughing.
@TheCool_Guy23 Good question.
Ever singing, ever hungry. Ever dying, never die.
Highschool student: Poetry is boring!
Poetry:
Highschool poetry sucks though
And if you ever read something like this in class, im sure the teacher would be cool, but hot damn are you getting bullied after, lol.
@@XenobiologistB5that's why you try your best to traumatize them
literature teachers do their best to ruin your interest in reading, remember that...
If they read stuff like this yeah, but what they teach is trash
Cosmic Horror poetry. Now that's something I didn't know I longed, but boy do I know it now.
@This one made me think of The Raven.
Try out HP Lovecraft
Oh yeah - everything about this video is just creeping me out 😱😬😳😲! 🕳️🔥💥👿😈👹👺💀💥🔥
The Colour Out of Space
Have u ever actually read lovecraft/barker/some old strieber?
"never dead, ever dying" is raw as fuck
The emperor of 40k status:
Fuck it raw
@nowmotivated69 God is indeed a Faschi- commie totalitarian monarchist, what else could describe the pure evil that is the tri-folded worthless monotheist bare-bold faced lie that is those religions?
The bones of the hellenics pantheon scream with their torturous re-use in its creation, may they and the other old and forgotten gods be redeemed one day...
@nowmotivated69 NOT TRUE
@nowmotivated69 Well, the other explanation is that there are higher beings/gods and demons and what not- that are outside our realm of reality- usually.
But it's not just 'a god' it's many multiple, and the ever changing, flowing mechanisms and ever-flowing madness of the chaotic whims of such beings isn't always good or bad.
Much like ancient- much more ancient than modern faiths- believed.
"...ever dying, never die." sounds like that verse from the Book of Revelation:
"And in those days shall men seek death, and shall not find it; and shall desire to die, and death shall flee from them."
in The Valley of The Damned where The Wicked sleep not-
nor are comforted. In agony, Forever.
who find it impossible to fathom even the mere concept of God-
nor are they aware of The Majesty that blinds them.
I argue this may be the fate of many who consider themselves actually "Living".
can you explain what this poem means, i thought it was some creepy entity ascending to godhood
@@yes-qw6om well if you’re referring to the poem in the video its called “far beyond the place of stopping” by rj williamson as for his comment it’s not a poem is a verse from the Bible specifically revelations 9:6
According to some dude in this comment section, it's about God being a fascist who created mankind just so they can suffer. So, pretty fitting.
@@yes-qw6om Yeah and to expound upon what Backwards Freddy says, the rhetoric and messaging behind this poem is in line with what is taught throughout books in the Bible about wicked people and what is understood by exorcists about demons. There is this constant insatiable desire to consume and to dominate, a deep resentment toward good things, and a horrifying distortion of beauty resulting from the previous two. Which is why this video is quite fascinating because it accurately depicts what hell might feel like; the absence of the source of all things good and the wicked miring pridefully in their own emptiness.
Fallout (1997) Alternate ending: Join the Unity by merging with the Master (Unreleased)
Imagine: you reach The Master and hand him what he didn't saw (the inability of Supermutants to reproduce), and due to seeing the horrors of the wasteland, how far the world has fallen, you are granted the ability to become His extention, and be granted a level of connection so direct that you will become the Messiah of New America, bringing an age of terror and greatness, of destruction and rebirth
Of War
And Unity
UNITY
UniTy
UNity
So i'm not insane thinking this was some weird alternate dialogue
"Depart from me, i never knew you."
scariest words ever spoken
Sounds like a poem of someone discovering outer darkness
Words you never want to hear
doer of iniquity
@@rico2289 Matthew 7:23 "And then will I declare to them, ‘I never knew you; depart from me, you workers of lawlessness.’"
This is one of *the* most disturbing, frightening things I've ever heard, and I can't stop listening to it. The chorus of voices at the end is absolutely bone-chilling, as is the idea of "the fleshy plain" which harbors "the hungry, bleeding thing" consuming all of humanity in endless suffering.
Hail Almighty Lord Satan. Hail ABYSS.
This reminds of of the verse "depart from me, for i never knew you" because it describes what will happen of you dont follow God
Overly edgy tbh
It get's even better when you interpret the "hungry, bleeding thing" _as_ humanity!
Tbh is this the apocalypse
The Crimson ingame: ooo spooky red biome
The Crimson in lore:
Terraria
tf u on breh
Shit goes hard.
We are the lucky one since our world aren't fully consumed by crimson
"I journeyed, long in walking, far beyond the place of stopping where there was no more returning to the people i had known. I saw the world forgotten, where the grass gives up on growing. And I knew that I would never make another journey home. Upon that fleshy plain, below the final rock outcropping (outcroppings) stretched the vast and empty desert of the hungry (HUNGRY!) bleeding thing (THING!). Encompassing the earth to the horizon, all-consuming (all-consuming), crying in a thousand voices to its desolate god-king (god-king desolate god-king). And the MUSIC of its crying never dead, ever dying, sent me running in a madness I can scarce compare to fear (fear), not to safety, but to silence (silence) unto my own unmaking. And yet now, upon awaking, once again the song I hear. (The song) I long to taste (TASTE!) the fruit of the earth. (Earth) I long for water quenching (water quenching...) Of my thirst, unending, (unending) nothing that remains can satisfy. (SATISFY!) For my voice (voice..) has joined the chorus (CHORUS!) ever more, ever mourning. Ever singing. Ever hungry. Ever dying. Never die."
Thank you sir for your hard work and dedication.
we just watched it.
If they ever remake the original Fallout, this should be a part of Master's ending
We need more Master in our Fallout, but not something quirky or that makes you say "oh, I remember"
No
Something dark, profound, maybe something that is so twisted, maddening, terrible and cold... that can't but be logical.
The Institute could've been this: a man-made horror through the developement of super-intelligent AI seeking to become more, to become what they could never be, to become human, but beyond human, to be flawless, perfect, logical, infinite, yet flesh, finite, able to experience, not deduce, yet forever unable to understand humanity for all they could know was their endless sequences of logical outcomes and for them humans were nothing but too much variable, and so, a solution had to be found: a human child, to nurture, grow, study, love, test, despise, be in awe with.
And yet, Bethesda couldn't deliver, but I will not give them the fault.
For they never were and never will be the Masters of the world they so try to change and mutate, results mediocre, creating behemoths to feed upon who cannot produce on the long run what they so seek.
Let's be honest the current Bethesda will definitely ruin it, the best thing we can hope is a dedicated hardcore fan making a mod of it.
@@jetpilledmyron2056Yes. Let the wasteland be not only the scenario for old world blues but also for renewed ideas of government, horrors, and sapiency.
I would have loved to start fallout 4 with a Dying Commonwealth Provisional Government that crumbles because of paranoia between governors and citizens due to the synths, see the Minuteman as this paranoid group of citizens of the periphery that are reading themselves for the collapse, have the brotherhood as an option that offers security and the destruction of the institute in exchange for freedom, look at the railroad as this faction that wants to take over the institute in order to ensure the continuing existence of the synth species and technological progress with the synths as the head of it all, and lastly the institute as this group of scientists lead by a super AI that created synths with the objective of creating an enlighten, new humanity, capable of succeeding where humanity has failed with the addded benefit that it would allow other lifeforms to exist as their allies but not allow them to be leaders of this new alliance making this new AI a sort of great mother.
I felt the same😅
Modern fallout could never do something like this.
I was going to ask for a source on the poem to read more of the person's work, but I read in these comments that it was sent you directly by the author themselves.
Give them +1 praise if they hit you up again, because that shit slaughters. The imagery was haunting, the climb to madness had me feeling what I did on the final leg of the trek in Dream-Quest of Unknown Kadath, and this narration positively rattled my soul.
Damn, I was really hoping it was from some author in the 1800s so that I could use it for my game trailer. I guess this explains why I couldn’t find it anywhere. Props to the author, this really is a badass poem.
It fux so hard.
I truly want to read more from this R.J. Williamson fellow, its fantastic.
@@spartanman221 Stick around 😉
I was about to say, this poet is fantastic. The natural rhythm and musical feel to the lyrics gives a feel of a fallen William Blake.
Give us more poems love them
Yes, do you happen to know where this poem comes from?
The description says R.J Williamson, but I can't find anything about him, no matter where I look.
I really want more of this stuff though...
@@charlesgrant6808 He's one of the writers BG works with. His work isn't published.
@@nightsong81 M O A R E
@@charlesgrant6808 Thought it was Robinson Jeffers for a moment.
@@TheLurker1647 Same here his name instantly popped into my head
*"Hey Grandpa and Grandma! How was your day?"*
*Their day:*
This is the kind of poetry i love. Poetry thats raw, thats dark, that makes you inwardly cower and shiver, writhe and tremble as you realize your fear and your darkness, and that you might not ever escape it.
It sounds like something STR8TE from Edgar Allan Poe - BIG TIME.
“I still cannot bring myself to write of this discovery, but let it be known that when I left, the Beast was dead…” - The Vault Dwellers memoirs, Fallout 2 Manual. If I too had to fight a monster which talks like this I doubt I’d want to write about it either.
I would rather be dropped into a death claw nest than be around that dread abomination.
Creepy... Care to provide some context? This is really interesting...
@@Nemy0426 in fallout the vault dweller has to fight the master who speaks in many voices and is horrifying.
@@secondarytrollaccount666 I know I said it was creepy when I first replied, but bro, re-reading op's comment now,
*_"but let it be known that when I left, the Beast was dead..."_*
NOW THAT IS JUST FUCKIN BADASS. Who is this Vault dweller anyway? I'm not really familiar with fallout lore.
@@Nemy0426 in fallout the world is a nuclear blasted wasteland. There are vaults underground that house people from the horrors outside. The vault dwellers vault needed supplies to keep them all alive so the vault dweller was chosen to go into the wasteland to get said supplies while doing so runs into the master and his super mutants. The master is a mutant culmination of many people and multiple computers who speaks exactly like all the voices in this video. It's an old video game that has aged a little but just like the video the master is straight nightmare fuel. There is a lot of info I skimmed over so watch a video or check the wiki.
Burial is my favorite eldritch horror channel
when burial uploads cosmic horror it’s like another christmas day for me
Same.
It haunts me too.
when you reach the far lands in Minecraft:
☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️
When you go further than the farlands and discover lands that were not meant to be seen
point of no return
May we see some unserious people like u everywhere everytime😂
Cringe children game. give your momma’s phone back to her kid before you hurt yourself
I genuinely thought it was a dialogue by the Master in Fallout 1
That line “Not to safety but to Silence” is Raw and perfect
This is the best psychotic-like piece of art I've seen in a good while. The images, how black is most of it, while trying to see something with the blinding white colors is something that Begotten explored perfectly, which just fits in with the narration of the insanity behind the words of the writter. I'm a writter myself and most of my works are just trying to reach this. Had to say something about this, because it captures perfectly the mind of the one to put all of this together, making anyone's mind wander along a crafting of hell itself
A vision of hell itself is something the author had in mind - a particular kind of hell, at least. BG did a great job putting the visuals and the narration together to create something that evokes the desperation, madness and hopelessness of that image.
It goes way deeper. I did a backmask on it, you should give it a listen.
This is terrifying. The use of clips from Begotten combined with ominous narration overlapping with so many different voices gives me chills down my spine in the best way possible. Amazing work!
Video like this are why I wanna start going to church every Sunday 😂
@@wackywolven6192 You should try it!
The voice is a reference to the master
What is 'Begotten'?
@@sladewilson6924 some weird film idk look it up
These kinds of thoughts are what I imagine drove the Master from Fallout to create the super mutants. To weather such horrors, he decided man needed to be made of something stronger, even if that meant they cannot be consindered man any longer.
Could you please provide more context? This is so cool.
@@Nemy0426Just look up the master from Fallout 1 or better yet play Fallout 1 yourself
@@Nemy0426 The master is the main villain from Fallout 1, you know how fallout goes. The world has been blown to bits and is now filled with horrid, mutated creatures. Between bandits, death claws and the radiation.
If mankind is to prosper in this new age, they needed to be...improved. Enter FEV, the forced evolutionary virus. It is a mutagenic substance that can improve a human's body and intellect. The Master starts kidnapping people from the wasteland and mutating them to form an army of super mutants.
@@Nemy0426 yeah play fallout 1
@@Nemy0426The Master serves as the main antagonist of Fallout 1. His goal was to turn everyone into mutants with him as their leader to end internal conflicts within humanity that lead to war and destruction. Really cool stuff you should look up more of it online if you’re interested.
Wow I definitely need more like this. The swapping of voices is insane
Check out the backmask I did on this video, should be the first video at the top of my page. I gave all credits to the author Burialgoods, but the backmask is really interesting, for what I could make out of it, fits in absolutely perfect with the original version here.
Fallout 1 is a good one with the master
If Master from Fallout wasn't hell-bent on world domination, but instead turned to poetry
This isn't even a meme anymore. You could show this in a university experimental film class, and nobody would bat an eye.
Not my comprehension, it's beyond OUR comprehension!
Komrad
@@arifhossain9751 What is a conjoined hive-mind of suffering, if not communism of the flesh?
YE DAMN COMMIE😂
@@nightsong81
Communitarianism of the flesh?
@@nightsong81What would capitalism be without the consumerism of mind and selective human suffering for decades and decades for a supposed greater good called profit?
The grass gave up on growning.... that idea... that grass, a plant that keeps on growing and growing, regardless of what's around gave up.... scares me the most for some part
So simple and so haunting huh
What gets me is the third stanza. He ran from the sounds this thing was making, and finally unalived himself to make it stop. Just the sound of it singing, crying, screaming in all the voices of its members, drove him to that. But death wasn't enough to save him. He just woke up again, as part of that thing.
@@nightsong81 Damn. I didn't even comprehend that part until now. Chills.
@@nightsong81 Holy shit.
Thinking a bit too literal but sure.
HOLY SHIT THIS IS AWESOME!! This is like some Edgar Allen Poe shit
That's madness. You terrified me to the core.
When I saw the thumbnail, I thought it was a black metal video clip. but I don't know why I watch this video over and over again.
same
Because the darkness is pulling you in... and you are succumbing to it. It's a shame you let it, only because you have not tasted The Light! It's SO MUCH better!!! ALL encompassing, all knowing, all loving and protecting, with an eternal future, a promise that no thing, or no man can ever snatch you away from His Hands. Literally loving WITH The Creator of all things Himself. Man, dont short change yourself. Seek and you shall find. I know. I was once lured into the dark, as it IS intriguing... but the Light IS pure love, and joy, peace, and adventure! What are you waiting for? HE. IS. WAITING. ......For YOU!
@@time2see192 Thx guy i was succumbing to it too. Tell me how to escape the dark
What is black metal?
@@ivanthedoomslayernorwegian metal a majority of the time. its good
The combination of male and female voices giving it that aspect that all of humanity is being devoured is fire
FINALLY! Horrors beyond my compression. Ive already comprehended man-made horrors and they bore me. Atleast now i can tackle a new level.
the way he emphasize "MUSIC!" gives me goosebumps everytime,
this is my favorite piece so far.
Lord Jesus Christ, Son Of God, have mercy on me a sinner
0:07 That buzzing sounds like the Half Life 2 ambient sound generic_ambience I think it's called.
Maybe it's music.
It took me a second to realize this wasn't taken from Fallout 1
"Do not be afraid. I am peace; I am salvation. I am a timeless chorus. Join your voice with mine, and sing victory everlasting."
"Now the gate has been unlatched, headstones pushed aside; corpses shift and offer room, a fate you must abide."
"We exist together now... two corpses, in one grave."
"Child of my enemy, why have you come? I offer no forgiveness, a father's sins, passed to his son."
"Time... has taught me patience! But basking in new freedom, I will know all that I possess!"
"Do I take life or give it? Who is victim, and who is foe?"
"Resignation is my virtue; like water I ebb, and flow. Defeat is simply the addition of time... to a sentence I never deserved... but you imposed."
"Oh I know what the ladies like."
@@bigchunky7499 "For a brick, he flew pretty good!"
A true man of culture
''This one is machine and nerve, and has its mind concluded. This one is but flesh and faith, and is the more deluded.''
@@Dirtnap12 "Kill me or release me, parasite, but do not waste my time with talk!"
"Ever dying, never die" is so fucking metal for some reason
I need more poetry like this urgently. My soul yearns for it.
The melody of the words reminds me of Allen Poe
Intentional, was hoping someone would notice
The meter is similar. Poe regularly used trochaic octameter, and he liked to switch it up by cutting off the last stressed syllable.
This poem uses iambic octameter and trochaic octameter alternatingly, always cutting off the last beat, so that the lines flow into each other. It lends a somewhat stream-of-consciousness rhythm to the reading.
@ The author wants you to know this is the best compliment anyone has ever given him.
@@nightsong81 I like your funny words magic man
"Allen Poe"
I think this might be my new favourite video of yours. Just the combination of the atmosphere and the raw lines just make this video chilling
Burialgoods the best VA youtuber out there hands down
I've never been someone interested in poetry, but my god is that poem something special. It makes me wonder if I could ever create something so impactful yet vaguely disturbing in the near future...
Give it a try!
Peer into the abyss for too long and it might peer into you.
@@redpillnibbler4423when the abyss stares back at us its just checking on its children
@@itiso1123
😅👍
This is was so ridiculously good I am so happy this showed up on my for you. Thank you for taking the time to make this. Will be watching this from time to time now.
Holy smokes, I thought this was Poe or Lovecraft. Exceptionally written poetry, and truly, _criminally_ underrated mastery of words.
Edit: I can't stop reading. This poem has truly rocked me to my core, and I can't explain why.
indeed and same. almost like hypnotic effect
You are not alone in feeling that way!
🖤
I've never played the original fallout, but the Master sounds like the coolest main antagonist of the series.
this was genuinely unnerving, we need more poetry read in digitally distorted voices
I wish I had a voice scrambler. I might actually read my work more often then.
I love this video so much I can't stop revisiting it. All I can think of is how hellish an existence it would be to live eternally. Heaven is joy only when you give in to the chorus and become one with God part of his decaying never dying corpse body which is everything in existence. Phillip Mainlander spoke of this.
Dang that would fit into Ultrakill violence lore.
No fr this goes hard AF
No sound, No memory. Suffering leaves Suffering Leaves.
After I first heard this video I printed the poem out and posted it in my cubicle.
It lives with a growing catalog of existential images/writings. :)
Helping you inspire dread in your coworkers, one poem at a time
Definitely sounds like a spiritual journey into ones own death and surviving the near death experience and clinging to life harder with a new-found zeal for life. Yet thats accompanied with a haunting vigor, born of fear of the ending.
This was a cool edit.
The Master practicing his poetry before making another Super mutant (secret audio)
This really helps with my depression
this really reminds me of a scene from a game called "stasis: bone totem" where biomechanical bodies would be long dead, yet still breathing. hearts still pumping after the people who had them died hundreds of years ago.
Beautiful beyond comprehension.
I love these kinda skits where you sound like the Master. Its beautifully disorienting.
I need some boss with type of monologue it's so cool!
This goes so unironically hard I love it
I’ve seen the unknown and have witnessed the unseen
The horrors I’ve seen have left me yearning for the peace of ignorance, to forget what lies beneath the veil of normalcy
That deep male voice that you use (I assume yours, but modified ?) is a *joy* to listen to.
It's a difficult feeling to describe. It's both beautiful, charismatic, and terrifying to behold at the same time.
It's me, and it's natural, except for the lofi effects I use. Thank you
@@burialgoods holy sh1t your voice is deep
Me: "So how was your weekend?"
Burialgoods: * 0:00 - 1:36 *
Me: *takes bite of bologna sandwich. Swallows.* Yeah, sometimes it be like that...
When the sqitzo friend snaps
🌽
I read your comment as I watched this video. When the video ended, I heard light jazz playing from my PC in the back. It made reading your punchline more hilarious.
Legendary. The voices, especially that male deep voice, are mesmerising.
Testimony of a forgotten traveller trapped within the bounds of the crimson
I don't know who you are, nor why this video appeared in my recommended feed, but I am *entranced*
This is, by far, the most chilling video you've ever made. Please use this style again - and please keep working with this poet. Your narration, his words, and your video editing worked together to create a horrifying masterpiece.
Dude! DUDE! I love this! It makes my imagination run wild hearing and seeing this video. Great work!
watching the videos this channel posts, so random, so gritty, so.. so weird. it feels like a fever dream.
I love the effect that having multiple voices on top of each other has
Dear author, wherever you may be,
this poem is like T.S. Eliot crossed with Harlan Ellison and it's so fucking good oh my god
love,
a new fan
Is this meant to be The Master from Fallout
Had to have had the same inspiration
Sounds a bit more like The Beast/Naggarok from Homeworld
Little bit of Master, a pinch of Naggarok, a dash of Gravemind.
I swear the female voice glitching out almost sounds like SHODAN from System Shock
I don't even like poetry but I'm absolutely addicted to this guy
i like these because then my brain has something else to concentrate on other than creating horrors beyond my comprehension and i can actualy go to sleep
Really well done. Timing and footage choice are spot on and the mixture of voices adds texture to the video. I really liked the "for my voice has joined the chorus" section :)
Wait, wtf was that.
Wall of flesh from terraria ig?
"It's the UNKNOWN!" 😭😱
I think the footage is from the film begotten. Edit: since checking the description it appears my hunch was correct
Can I interest you in a travel package to hell?
@@LinktoLinkGamerthought so too, but I've never seen it in full
Subbed after this. Honestly an incredible work of art. Compliments to the poet as well. In love with everything about this video, I would absolutely devour more content like this!
This poem is about the journey of life that is seemingly endless. One could become depressed and shun the finer and mundane parts but over time - that primal hunger returns. Time has a way of eroding the most resolute of feelings both emptiness and fulfillment. It’s the slow dance with life and death that leaves us empty yet filled with ephemeral joy, sorrow, despair and fear; last but not least: Hope.
That's certainly an interesting way of looking at it.
Your voice sounds so identical to Voids from Berserk ‘97 & I love it
"vast and empty desert of the hungry bleeding thing" brings to my mind the sort of imagery from the game Scorn and some of Beksinski's more horror-oriented landscapes paintings. I love this, I've probably listened to it a dozen times now
I recognised that footage instantly :D Begotten is insane!! But also heck those words are amazing definitely going to have to look more into the source of those (thanks for linking in the description). Incredible narration!! 🙏🏻💚
Edit: for some reason this feels like All Tomorrows! Like the reality where that future exists 😱
It is terrifying to know that "The Place of Stopping" may exist in a literal sense.
Well in a scientifically theoretical sense since if you are just at the half way point near the event horizon of a black hole; the out side perspective it seems like you are slowly and slowly getting closer to the inside of a black hole yet at a certain moment you're seemingly stuck in one place as time and space yields to the great mass of infinity as you are infinitely falling into a seemingly desolate desert at is the truest of desolateness and barrenest of a dessert at may be. Yet it takes everything with it, a thing that takes everything yet is truly empty inside.
But, in your perspective it is the opposite. The world runs without you, as you see everything that was the present accelerate into to the future; your home, your loved ones, your planet, everything you know will be gone faster than you can comprehend. As you see the stars blast into galactic space dust and watch them take their last breath, you are the one that is left falling into an abyss as you will be the last of the last that will every will be and soon to be. As this world is "The Place of Ending".
behold, a graduate of Reddit University
You're backing the wrong horse, pal. God uses black holes for checkers. Kids, don't let this sophomoric guff scare you. Pick up the cross and follow the way of the Lord. He will lead you to Paradise.
@@user-gj7lp5iz6k oof is it that inaccurate?
Man I need to do more research. I just wanted to have fun and makes some poetry.
This plays every night before bed
Sweet dreams
OwO
This video legit randomly started playing I wasn't even on the youtube tab and it started playing.
This is perfect! Exactly what I’ve been looking for in poetry. Please do keep making these!
Im sorry I keep coming back to this ,I also realize you sound just like dogma from The binding of Isaac. Another favorite villain of mine. You inspired another dnd villain.
I didn't realize The Master was using FEV to keep poetry jams alive! Hail and farewell to the unsung hero...
"In the end days, men will cast themselves off the tops of mountains seeking death, but death will flee from them."
In a world post revelations or something similar, Someone seeks beyond the boundaries of their home. (beyond the place of stopping) implies a community set rule of somekind. The world forgotten implies desolated ruins and salted earth much like fallout. The last outcropping reminds me of mountains hence the bible quote. The fleshy desert covering the horizon implies this deathless suffering thing is at least 5.5 miles in diameter. (Run to my own unmaking) The someone attempts to kill themselves, most likely throwing themselves head first off the cliff. Only to be absorbed by the massive flesh carpet of screaming and brought back to life within it, unable to die.
The concept of hungry ghosts mixed with the biblical horror that is a post revelation world where none are allowed to die. i love it.
Well done. 👏
In Islam, there’s a story about how in the day of judgement, God will bring forth death itself in front of the entirety of mankind and will slaughter it like a ram.
HOW AM I JUST NOW FINDING YOUR CHANNEL?! 😭
This was not just a poem or a video. This was an entire experience. Bravo to the author, and your voice makes it even more gut wrenching with the others overlapped. I'd love to draw something inspired by this.
And now I'm inexplicably thinking of the SCP-001 proposal, "When Day Breaks".
Strong Edgar Allen Poe vibes, so "Raven"-esque. Surprised I'd never read it. Impressive wordsmithing, unsettling interpretation. Brrr 🕷️
It's never appeared elsewhere. So I'm not that surprised 😁
Those layered voices are so good. Please do more!
It's reassuring to see others open up about their experiences with schizophrenia. Sharing our stories can help reduce stigma and foster a sense of community and understanding. Thank you for your bravery.
Is he actually a schizo?
this feels like one of those cursed videos or something.
Shit sent shivers down my spine.
I fucking loved this. I was at the edge of my seat scared but also drooling at how well made this was. This was a masterpiece I fucking love it
This vid hits different when you're alone in the dark at 1 am
Im alone in the light at 1:53 am. It slaps
In the forest
Dystopian Poetry is a genre, I love writing them, my peers call me crazy, I dont mind.
Darker yet darker. Gods next experiment will be very interesting
It’s a bit more tame because it’s F-106 2
What do you two think.
So horrors beyond comprehension and keeping bilions of souls alive and suffering and torturing them for eternity is what yall mean god does? Wouldnt that make him NOT all loving and omnibenevolent?
So, this is what miyazaki wanted us to feel when he made the souls game, huh?
Wow this is a work of art
Wow, Burial Goods, that's a powerful and haunting poem you've shared. It seems to describe a journey into a desolate and forsaken world, where the narrator has lost touch with their past and their sense of self.
The imagery is vivid and evocative, with phrases like "the world forgotten, where the grass gives up on growing" and "the vast and empty desert of the hungry, bleeding thing" creating a sense of stark desolation. The creature described in the poem, with its "thousand voices" and "ever-dying" cry, is a terrifying and mesmerizing presence.
The narrator's response to this encounter is one of madness and despair, as they flee not to safety, but to silence and "unto my own unmaking." The use of words like "unmaking" and "ever mourning" suggests a sense of dissolution and disintegration, as if the narrator's very identity is being consumed by the bleakness of their surroundings.
The final lines of the poem are particularly striking, as the narrator finds themselves drawn back into the "song" of the creature, longing for the fleeting comforts of the physical world even as they're aware that they'll never be satisfied. The repetition of "ever" - "ever mourning," "ever singing," "ever hungry," "ever dying, never die" - creates a sense of trappedness, as if the narrator is doomed to repeat this cycle of longing and despair forever.
Overall, this is a deeply unsettling and thought-provoking poem, one that explores the darker aspects of human experience and the search for meaning in a seemingly meaningless world.
is this Chat GPT?
You'd definitely make a perfect storyteller for Lovecraft's fiction.