I have watched over a thousand videos and the most infamous one was yours yet it was the best fo them all, you made it simple and this is exactly what I do when I write yet I get a more clear picture now, really good explanation I will always use this!
This is a rap I wrote about the life of 'Death'. Suggest any improvements 😁 Have you ever thought of dying from this pain for once Good for you I think of it everyday my entire life But I can't cuz I'm already dead every second for y' all Because pain is the word that I only know I always hope someone to carry this pain Someone who can help me before my life drain I know it's not a good thing to ask something really bad But is it a bad thing for me to live without being sad People always come here and ask for help But how can I help them when I don't have the strength Today some asked me to give their life back But how can I help them when my life is black For you your day is already over But for me it's always never over When someone sees me they're always mad But is it a bad thing for me to live without being sad
The best have seen so far You make me feel like I can actually rap Action speak louder than words Let me just hit you with this subscribe How was that ??😂
Some other beginner and intermediate level rappers wanna do it together? A challange to write at least one verse each day? And sharing to get feedback? We can improve together much faster.. when all the like minded people will be under the roof. Let me know if you're interested
Assign each sign post? Which one? You know it too man, when you think of rhymes all day, you end up unintentionally integrating them into your regular essays.
What's a life worth living? Sometimes I sit and ponder, Think about what Ive been given, Middle class luxury wonder If life really is that scripted, Just look at what the script is, I Predict her goal and his It's written in description To be honest.. I'm guilty of the same inscription Honestly I want happiness through money fame and riches And I dislike the thought so im flaming what the vision is. I Cant be a bon vivant. I just sit and listen. An anti social personality that shine bright and glisten In solitary of prison, the mind and cognition Knowledge and awareness should really be a part of the mission I'd rather be rich in intention than be rich and missing, Myself, Obeying society's wishes Just imagine being you and then living that image Sometimes I cant. The herd mentality speaks loud and clear in my ear It plants a seed like an implant If you listen you can hear and sense it Become aware, woke then you stare senseless It's what happens when you pay attention Instead of money to showcase how extensive your life is
Thats not how rap works guys, dont listen to him, if you want to be good at writing, there is only one secret, dont overthink about what to write, you can freestyle if you want, thats what rap is in the end, its a spot on art, if you cant freestyle or write 16 lines in under 10 minutes then you cant rap so stop doing it and try and find something new, or something else from the hip hop culture, like graffiti or be a b-boy or something
I have watched over a thousand videos and the most infamous one was yours yet it was the best fo them all, you made it simple and this is exactly what I do when I write yet I get a more clear picture now, really good explanation I will always use this!
How tf am I seeing this two years after?! Thank you so much man, hope it was useful and still is
@@RappingManualYT hahaha youtube is always ”in time” 😂😂😂😂
He's REALLY good at explaining this stuff!
So finally all the future rappers are here ..
Thank you man really preciate this
Your videos is best & authentic bro ....
yo this stuff is actually pretty good
much respect and love man !!
love the material homie! thanks for the help!
Glad you're finding it helpful man : ) Thank you for watching.
This helps alot man thanks! Keep making more video tips!
You've helped me lot. God bless you
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This is a rap I wrote about the life of 'Death'.
Suggest any improvements 😁
Have you ever thought of dying from this pain for once
Good for you I think of it everyday my entire life
But I can't cuz I'm already dead every second for y' all
Because pain is the word that I only know
I always hope someone to carry this pain
Someone who can help me before my life drain
I know it's not a good thing to ask something really bad
But is it a bad thing for me to live without being sad
People always come here and ask for help
But how can I help them when I don't have the strength
Today some asked me to give their life back
But how can I help them when my life is black
For you your day is already over
But for me it's always never over
When someone sees me they're always mad
But is it a bad thing for me to live without being sad
Hilarious
good tips and insights bro
We need you back! Youre my nmr 1 teacher !!
Keep it up man 👍
I've learning form your videos
Hope to be better at the craft
So helpful!
Thanks man! really appreciate your videos
I appreciate you watching them man, thank you!
The best have seen so far
You make me feel like I can actually rap
Action speak louder than words
Let me just hit you with this subscribe
How was that ??😂
Cool man 😂
1:00 to 1:04 sound like he freestylin
tru tru
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What 10000 hours of rapping does to a mf
Helped me a lot!!
You're underrated af
Thanks a lot for introducing me to the term "quatrain"!!!
Thanks for this
NEW SUBSCRIBER MUCH RESPECT FOR THIS
Much appreciated
If I have to break song with topic 'dreams, hopes, helplessness, distrust'
Thank u brother
The pleasure is all mine.
Some other beginner and intermediate level rappers wanna do it together? A challange to write at least one verse each day? And sharing to get feedback? We can improve together much faster.. when all the like minded people will be under the roof.
Let me know if you're interested
Thsnks
0:58 Tell me that was intentional
Assign each sign post? Which one? You know it too man, when you think of rhymes all day, you end up unintentionally integrating them into your regular essays.
@@RappingManualYT Hell yeah, sounded like you were riming on beat
@@prod_revo Lol, NOT GUILTY! : )
@@RappingManualYT Yo would you mind checking out my beat, on my channel, and telling me it it would be good for a song?
Thanks
It was fucking great tip
So writing a focus rap song is the same thing as writing an essay...hmm..interesting
good
What's a life worth living?
Sometimes I sit and ponder,
Think about what Ive been given,
Middle class luxury wonder
If life really is that scripted,
Just look at what the script is,
I Predict her goal and his
It's written in description
To be honest..
I'm guilty of the same inscription
Honestly I want happiness through money fame and riches
And I dislike the thought so im flaming what the vision is.
I Cant be a bon vivant.
I just sit and listen.
An anti social personality that shine bright and glisten
In solitary of prison, the mind and cognition
Knowledge and awareness should really be a part of the mission
I'd rather be rich in intention than be rich and missing,
Myself, Obeying society's wishes
Just imagine being you and then living that image
Sometimes I cant.
The herd mentality speaks loud and clear in my ear
It plants a seed like an implant
If you listen you can hear and sense it
Become aware, woke then you stare senseless
It's what happens when you pay attention
Instead of money to showcase how extensive your life is
“Just imagine being you and then living that image” 📄✍🏾 🔥
Dont post it in comment. If theyre good many people are gonna steal ypur lyrics
That's actually good bro good job!👌🏾
This is good man
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Thats not how rap works guys, dont listen to him, if you want to be good at writing, there is only one secret, dont overthink about what to write, you can freestyle if you want, thats what rap is in the end, its a spot on art, if you cant freestyle or write 16 lines in under 10 minutes then you cant rap so stop doing it and try and find something new, or something else from the hip hop culture, like graffiti or be a b-boy or something