eminem made this song so sonically pleasing, hes rhyme choise was just perfect for pleasing my eardrums, and also he stuck to the topic he was writing about and made it all coherent and badass
Yeah, this is my favorite type of rhymes from Em. I like when he's telling a story while still locked in that multisyllable rhyming. Really hard to execute that kind of stuff.
Verse 2 of Renegade is still possibly my favourite Eminem verse ever. It’s so incredibly smooth and while the content isn’t all that deep, the jabs are all connected in a supremely clever way.
It’s fairly deep. Both verses were extremely relevant to what Eminem represented in the public eye at the time. There were demonstrations and protests at nearly every concert he held, people on the far right and left demanding he stop his “hateful lyrics”. And so he dropped a beautifully crafted verse calling them on their hypocrisy and crocodile tears, and doubling down on his public image
0:22 *sharing* his views and his *merits*, but *there's* a huge inter *ference* So you didn't even get all of the rhymes Em has here, and it still looks so colorful. Super impressive scheme, cadence, flow and delivery
@@jameshamilton8720it s funny that even jay z admited it when he was asked about that nas line he says smth like "there s days when we have bad days"so basically admitting and almost everyone cause is objectove that em took this i mean there s been even a word invented cause of this "renegated "which means who does better on a song
@@jameshamilton8720ye bro,good one,no disrespect to jay but when it comes to impact em is far bigger i mean jay z needs business side too to compete and some jay z fans are like ,,but he s a millionare but he has beyonce,,what this has to do with rapwith hip hop,em is very big only with rap alone
I think you make the best highlighted rhymes schemes videos, the way you color the rhymes is correct and the edition is so clean. Greetings from Argentina!
Instead of having brackets, I just made the main syllable scheme as bold and italic to seperate from the the rest of the rhymes including unintentional rhymes. I think's it's much better than separating the words using brackets Also thanks for the peeps who donated to the channel, just upgraded my ram, now I'm able to edit and render at 60fps while keeping the same quality. My videos will be running at 60fps from here on out If ya wanna help the channel paypal.me/oceanwaves1995
I only started a few months ago. Had to learn everything by myself, experiment, trial and error pretty much. Went from less than 50 subscribers to 1.2k subs, so it's not that bad, I suppose.
Yo the quality is lookin crispy 👀 Btw please don't hold back on the highlights, I can see that you purposely don't highlight the entire scheme because of the people that say you highlight things that don't rhyme but I feel like not highlighting the entire rhyme scheme misses the purpose of these videos, just my opinion but it's your choice tho
It's kinda infuriating sometimes, tbh. Like I already add brackets and some people still like to break up the scheme by pieces. There's some dude who won't believe me that /premeditation/ /seed of creation/ /new innovation/ in that K-rino song don't rhyme because the head ryhme (new, pre, seed) don't perfectly rhyme, then proceed to lecture me on how multis works and use dababy as comparison, as if those two artists structure their lyrics the same way.
@@oceanwaves95 my advice is just don't listen to them lol, I mean I get if they don't understand and you try to explain it to them but if you don't have the patience don't bother, some people are just too stubborn for their own good
@@OracleTheRonin Some idiot trying to justify Jays verse as being better constantly said that Ems scheme was simple and put more emphasis on Jays verse being more relatable to black people. It was also at the time where the only scheme available for renegade was that awful single color one with missed rhymes. It really pissed me off because people would actually believe him at times. That videos one of the reasons I'm against channels using the same color for multisyllabic rhymes. It detracts from fully showing the correct schemes.
@@samraizshoaib585 In terms of writing it's far from simple even if it's not relatable by any means you can't sit here and deny that on a technical level this verse beats Jay-Z''s and IMO puts modern-day Em to shame, even if he has tracks like Campaign Speech and No favors, The way this man rode/flowed over the beat is just shows why Em is not to be FW on the mic even on that EPMD2 Track even tho personally in terms of flow I'm more favorable of his smooth legato approach instead of the 3-4 syllable chop session he did at the end of we all have to agree that on a technical level you can't take away from what Em does on any track because that man'll always deliver with his pockets/cadences and schemes
Every time someone asks me why I think he's the greatest lyricist of all time (not just in rap, but music, period), I refer them to this song and "The Way I Am". People can do complex rhyme schemes, people can put it all together in a them that sounds poetic, but nobody can do a whole verse where every bar contains several rhymes in it that mirror half-bars from two lines ago in a way that makes perfect sense. He is the only one.
This kind of video just shows why you're ahead of the rest. You're good at this not just the colors and stuff, a lot of these schemes would go over my head if you didn't highlight it. Your videos are perfect for studying different artists multisyllable rhymes TH-cam should be paying you for you work, bunch of cheap bastards.
I know with Eminem it’s so complex there’s almost none stop rhyming and it is forgivable but you have missed the odd one out here and there. I won’t list them al but first example is POsition NO POlitician which carries on two lines below with DOn’t and swalLOW Second verse first word of line The SEE and JEsus and PEople are missed but are part of MEdia and EAsy rhyme scheme you did get on lines below. You’ve got the EE at the end of each line but it repeats at the start of the next too
I'm not gonna breakdown rap diss or songs that will create division on this channel. Disagreement happens all the time here but that kind of song is just one sided.
U're a good channel. But all dem channels miss rhymes when it comes to Eminem. 'Cause it's not about reading the lyrics with him it's listening, he bends. E.G. the first syllable of position looks like it might rhyme with the first one from polititician but instead he rhymes the "pol"itician with "talk", "call", "y'all", "swal"low.
I didn't miss any rhyme at least the actual rhyme scheme. If you're talking about incidental rhymes, I don't always have to highlight those. The "ih'' and "u'' vowel sounds are what he's rhyming in that verse.
I don't get it, I didn't miss them, I just didn't highlight them. It's extremely basic rhymes. Like I said, I don't have to highlight every incidental rhymes. His main focus their is that 5 syllable scheme that has U-x-x-I-I. Why are you focusing on those syllables anyway? Doesn't make sense. On my rhyme sheet before editing this, I did mark those syllables as incidental, they do rhyme but not a big part of the main scheme.
Yes, that was a mistake on my part. I actually just notice it now. There's a lot of errors with my older videos I think. The style I'm using it here was extremely confusing so I stopped doing it and simplified everything.
@@oceanwaves95 recognizing mistakes and fixing them is the best one can do! always great to find another channel who gives rhyme schemes the love they deserve too
Hey dude instead of making random words bold you should make the wordplay in the lyrics bold. This will make you different from other channels that highlight these rhymes, and will be more appealing to people who watch.
![Eminem - Business [Rhyme Scheme] Highlighted](http://i.ytimg.com/vi/6I7LVEGveNo/mqdefault.jpg)
eminem made this song so sonically pleasing, hes rhyme choise was just perfect for pleasing my eardrums, and also he stuck to the topic he was writing about and made it all coherent and badass
Yeah, this is my favorite type of rhymes from Em. I like when he's telling a story while still locked in that multisyllable rhyming. Really hard to execute that kind of stuff.
Now too many rhymes
Verse 2 of Renegade is still possibly my favourite Eminem verse ever. It’s so incredibly smooth and while the content isn’t all that deep, the jabs are all connected in a supremely clever way.
Big facts. It doesn't make you think or get chills like other em songs, but this is so pleasing to listen to.
it's really deep wdym, pay attention and you'll see how insane this is.
its really deep u didnt get the verse then
for me its verse 1
It’s fairly deep. Both verses were extremely relevant to what Eminem represented in the public eye at the time. There were demonstrations and protests at nearly every concert he held, people on the far right and left demanding he stop his “hateful lyrics”. And so he dropped a beautifully crafted verse calling them on their hypocrisy and crocodile tears, and doubling down on his public image
0:22 *sharing* his views and his *merits*, but *there's* a huge inter *ference*
So you didn't even get all of the rhymes Em has here, and it still looks so colorful. Super impressive scheme, cadence, flow and delivery
This is why Eminem is my fav rapper, he makes incredible music while also rhyming like crazy
One of the best tracks in hiphop
Phenomenal Verses by Em, no wonder everyone says he murdered Jay on this joint
Not everyone however Jay-Z fans refused to admit it
@@jameshamilton8720it s funny that even jay z admited it when he was asked about that nas line he says smth like "there s days when we have bad days"so basically admitting and almost everyone cause is objectove that em took this i mean there s been even a word invented cause of this "renegated "which means who does better on a song
@@spiridonrobert16 Facts
@@jameshamilton8720ye bro,good one,no disrespect to jay but when it comes to impact em is far bigger i mean jay z needs business side too to compete and some jay z fans are like ,,but he s a millionare but he has beyonce,,what this has to do with rapwith hip hop,em is very big only with rap alone
When it comes to rhyme scheme channels , darker and bigger letters is very original. Subbed
I think you make the best highlighted rhymes schemes videos, the way you color the rhymes is correct and the edition is so clean. Greetings from Argentina!
Those rhythm are creepy damn how can someone be soo sick in writing
Killed the highlighting once again
The vibe that this song has been giving to me is unreal, especially regarded to nowadays due to days I've been going through...
This song has always been one of my favorites 😁
You are the best, Man! I think nobody can rhyme like Em, it's sound perfect
he the goat
Ocean and Em killed the whole song!
Yes, original vintage Em was the best . And not that hova jigga nega . That character was never a Negus, get it ?!
@@timboslice4717 no
Jay-Z and Em bringing their best out of each-other = one of hip-hops greatest tracks
Instead of having brackets, I just made the main syllable scheme as bold and italic to seperate from the the rest of the rhymes including unintentional rhymes. I think's it's much better than separating the words using brackets
Also thanks for the peeps who donated to the channel, just upgraded my ram, now I'm able to edit and render at 60fps while keeping the same quality. My videos will be running at 60fps from here on out
If ya wanna help the channel paypal.me/oceanwaves1995
Its better than brackets for sure. Dope!
You are genium
bold works imo
Well still works the same way, glad you did you what you did.
Btw this song is classic, so glad they did this.
This is way better than those brackets. Great work there.
Yo I like this more than the brackets keep up the gold work
I liked your new style
Thank you!
message and crazy rhyme scheme mans the goat
you gonna take a week off and do stay wide awake?
I heard some 50 cent flow at the beginning of his verse. 50 used to do a few Eminem flows. I think they honor eachother.
keep grinding.
Awesome!
Dope asf!! Even tho i didn't have any prob with brackets but this is better.. Keep up the good work 👏👏
How do you have so few subscriber you are my favorite highlight youtuber. (I love the new style,i didn't like the brackets)
I only started a few months ago. Had to learn everything by myself, experiment, trial and error pretty much.
Went from less than 50 subscribers to 1.2k subs, so it's not that bad, I suppose.
Omg you murder the rhymes like Eminem
Yo the quality is lookin crispy 👀
Btw please don't hold back on the highlights, I can see that you purposely don't highlight the entire scheme because of the people that say you highlight things that don't rhyme but I feel like not highlighting the entire rhyme scheme misses the purpose of these videos, just my opinion but it's your choice tho
I think it confuses people who aren't used to my style. That's why I've tried adding brackets, but it just ruins the overall look of the video.
It's kinda infuriating sometimes, tbh. Like I already add brackets and some people still like to break up the scheme by pieces. There's some dude who won't believe me that /premeditation/ /seed of creation/ /new innovation/ in that K-rino song don't rhyme because the head ryhme (new, pre, seed) don't perfectly rhyme, then proceed to lecture me on how multis works and use dababy as comparison, as if those two artists structure their lyrics the same way.
@@oceanwaves95 my advice is just don't listen to them lol, I mean I get if they don't understand and you try to explain it to them but if you don't have the patience don't bother, some people are just too stubborn for their own good
so he didn't miss some ryhmes, he did it on purpose? I still don't understand
@@KRAKSKRAKSKRAKS I try to explain as much as I could lol. It's kinda tiresome tbh. That's why sometime I just don't highlight the entire scheme.
btw he pronounced the word 'sharing' so that it rhymed with steer it
🟧🟩🟪🟦🟨
Fuck myan. Even if i had life f9r it, i could not write this, myan. My man❤
And they said this was a simple scheme.
who? everyone knows this is a classic rhyme scheme of hip hop history
@@OracleTheRonin Some idiot trying to justify Jays verse as being better constantly said that Ems scheme was simple and put more emphasis on Jays verse being more relatable to black people.
It was also at the time where the only scheme available for renegade was that awful single color one with missed rhymes. It really pissed me off because people would actually believe him at times. That videos one of the reasons I'm against channels using the same color for multisyllabic rhymes. It detracts from fully showing the correct schemes.
@@OracleTheRonin k rino Fans, MF DOOM fans and Eminem Haters
@@eneasda5613 Not even
@@samraizshoaib585 In terms of writing it's far from simple even if it's not relatable by any means you can't sit here and deny that on a technical level this verse beats Jay-Z''s and IMO puts modern-day Em to shame, even if he has tracks like Campaign Speech and No favors, The way this man rode/flowed over the beat is just shows why Em is not to be FW on the mic even on that EPMD2 Track even tho personally in terms of flow I'm more favorable of his smooth legato approach instead of the 3-4 syllable chop session he did at the end of we all have to agree that on a technical level you can't take away from what Em does on any track because that man'll always deliver with his pockets/cadences and schemes
Every time someone asks me why I think he's the greatest lyricist of all time (not just in rap, but music, period), I refer them to this song and "The Way I Am". People can do complex rhyme schemes, people can put it all together in a them that sounds poetic, but nobody can do a whole verse where every bar contains several rhymes in it that mirror half-bars from two lines ago in a way that makes perfect sense. He is the only one.
Reminds me of eminems song "white america" great song
yo it would be crazy if u did batta medov from cambatta
This kind of video just shows why you're ahead of the rest. You're good at this not just the colors and stuff, a lot of these schemes would go over my head if you didn't highlight it. Your videos are perfect for studying different artists multisyllable rhymes
TH-cam should be paying you for you work, bunch of cheap bastards.
And still Melly Mel runnin his mouth
Illogic - celestial clockwork, please
I know with Eminem it’s so complex there’s almost none stop rhyming and it is forgivable but you have missed the odd one out here and there. I won’t list them al but first example is POsition NO POlitician which carries on two lines below with DOn’t and swalLOW
Second verse first word of line
The SEE and JEsus and PEople are missed but are part of MEdia and EAsy rhyme scheme you did get on lines below. You’ve got the EE at the end of each line but it repeats at the start of the next too
Do Kingpenn Monzoe Jazzy Flow. Lyrics in the description plz
🔥🔥🔥 which software u use for make it? Could u make 1 4 me?
role model PLEASEEE
Best Jay-Z song
Eminem - Can I B*tch please
I'm not gonna breakdown rap diss or songs that will create division on this channel. Disagreement happens all the time here but that kind of song is just one sided.
@@oceanwaves95 Do both Canibitch and Ballad then
1:14
U're a good channel. But all dem channels miss rhymes when it comes to Eminem. 'Cause it's not about reading the lyrics with him it's listening, he bends.
E.G. the first syllable of position looks like it might rhyme with the first one from polititician but instead he rhymes the "pol"itician with "talk", "call", "y'all", "swal"low.
I didn't miss any rhyme at least the actual rhyme scheme. If you're talking about incidental rhymes, I don't always have to highlight those. The "ih'' and "u'' vowel sounds are what he's rhyming in that verse.
@@oceanwaves95 Common bruv, in the first few lines u missed some where he put a lot of emphasis on them. 100% on purpose.
I don't get it, I didn't miss them, I just didn't highlight them. It's extremely basic rhymes. Like I said, I don't have to highlight every incidental rhymes. His main focus their is that 5 syllable scheme that has U-x-x-I-I. Why are you focusing on those syllables anyway? Doesn't make sense.
On my rhyme sheet before editing this, I did mark those syllables as incidental, they do rhyme but not a big part of the main scheme.
Can you please do the sauce, no one's done it.
I know how much em twists words to rhyme how he wants, but "music" did not rhyme with like "marriage" or "parents" lol
Yes, that was a mistake on my part. I actually just notice it now. There's a lot of errors with my older videos I think. The style I'm using it here was extremely confusing so I stopped doing it and simplified everything.
@@oceanwaves95 recognizing mistakes and fixing them is the best one can do! always great to find another channel who gives rhyme schemes the love they deserve too
yall'll swallow also rhymes
Hey dude instead of making random words bold you should make the wordplay in the lyrics bold. This will make you different from other channels that highlight these rhymes, and will be more appealing to people who watch.
What do you mean random words? Those aren't random I've bolded, those are his main rhyme scheme.
RAnDoM 🤣
Snoop was right
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