My Friend Went Train Hopping and What Came Back Wasn't My Friend...
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- เผยแพร่เมื่อ 1 ก.ค. 2024
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Am i crazy or did he watch the news and still went home?
The problem with this story is that the government would have been easily able to keep the story from the public.
1. You don't get bailed out of prison.
2. You can't trespass on public property.
.... Author/protagonist is pretentious and self righteous.
This is literally "my dog went missing for 3 days" same story. Only a person
Yeah, i noticed that too. Especially with some sentences and descriptions written verbatim. Especially with the voice imitating and "Food was untouched, but all the meat in the freezer gone" part as well as the ending was what tipped me off that this author pretty much copied that story.
Yeah I recognized it was basically a copy. I’m a sucker for imposter/mimic stories but this one is just a poor rewrite of the one with the dog.
YUP😄
How you trespass on public property?
Why didn't he tell anyone? Why would people say he's crazy if it was on the news? That made no sense.
Oooh God, I came searching for some Truth!❤
Thank you, SO much!💕
I can't believe that he reviewed this before posting it!
@@ruffadamsthegreat.2662 damn calm down
I think maybe telling anyone would make him that guy who mistook an alien for his friend. His life would never be the same. Great story, right? x
@@ruth_southernstar
Uh, no
If you have to reach that far, to make it make sense, then absolutely not.
@@ruffadamsthegreat.2662 it's called discernment
The setup of this story is nicely done, but the reveal could have used some work. It would have been far scarier (and more realistic) to have a report that the real Chris' remains were found, with no chance of survival, and mentioning the location as being "very close" to the Area 51 base. From there, having the "Poor Wayfaring Stranger" song would have been a chilling moment of realizing what this thing is and how it's "going over home" through people.
I once met an ex train hopper. He had both his legs cut off on the tracks in an accident and survived. Heavy machinery doesn’t stop for limbs or life.
Bailed out of prison eh? 🤣
I'm totally going train surfing. Just not to Area 51 lol
Love your videos, but I miss the longer format ones
Yeah, this was a concept of mine that could've worked, but never did.
Thanks 😊
This one was terrible on so many levels.
Either this story is plagiarizing "My dog was lost for three days. What came back wasn't my dog" by author chewingskin or the dog story ripped this one off. I don't know which story is older but one of them shamelessly borrows almost completely from the other. Word for word and the plot points in many parts. I really like the dog story. The main character's actions work better in the dog story. Other things also make more sense in it. The dog story's plot doesn't mesh well with what the author of this story tried to do with it.
I'm sure the dog one is the original. I remember listening to it like 8 years ago
@@comraderaichu6940 right? This is plagiarism.
@@Stevies_Precog_Gym_n_Spa420 it's an entertaining TH-cam story. Many of it's stories are not original. It's just a fun, free, audible platform, not a SAT result.
@@ruth_southernstar ok, and if this person decides to put this in a collection and publish it what then. They're putting out work into the public and insisting it's theirs. Attribution maybe doesn't matter for the pig at the trough but it does to the person pouring the feed. And if the feed in question is someone else's...
@@Stevies_Precog_Gym_n_Spa420 this is not what's going on here
Wtf did he say at 14:30
The creature said his name. Micheal
@@demiyenh4406
Tyvm
Hi Skott, hope you’re having a great day!!! Looks like a good story, not that I’ve ever Train Hopped but always lived near Trains 🚂!!! ♥️♥️♥️😊
Favorite narrator ever 🖤🐺🖤🐺🖤🐺 that one scared me dude. I live in Nevada closer to area one than I like 😂
@@susanhorn3952
Used to be mine as well.🙄
Yeah this is a real dog of a story . Good narration bad choice .
Noice
shiey vibes
At first I thought the changes increase his demeanor we're due to him being sexually assaulted. but then turned out to be an alien. Although they did find his naked body so we can't rule out S.A.
Former trainkid/rider here....def scary shit happens and I e seen some weird shit doing this. I've lost a lot of friends to train hopping too.
Anyways love the narration as always , thanks for the story and zzzz❤
I lowkey resent the main character/narrator for his attitude toward the traveling community lol
What came back was a beatnick hipster looking for a place to crash.
No need to fret, however. For he has food stamps and 120x Salvia he traded a railroad spike dagger for.
Heck yessss
🚂🚞🚞🚞🚞🚞🚞🚞 👽 Thanks for the story Skott. ❤
I am so excited for this! i just want to say that i absolutely LOVE every video you put out. Besides the soothingness of your amazing voice-its beautifully obvious you put so much of yourself into your work and i thank you for that! Loving your craft is such a rarity nowadays on here and its beyond evident in your videos! Thank you for all your hardwork-I do so appreciate it❤
Skotts got a groupie..lol
@@sweetpeasarah1 settle down. He's not going to date you.
Narration was excellent- this story was not on the level to be read out loud.
I hope the author keeps up honing their craft, as writing is a skill that sharpens as you practice & take CONSTRUCTIVE criticism
@@JerichotheRed it's just a story on TH-cam. Find another channel rather than insult the narrator. And don't shout.
@@ruth_southernstarThey didn't insult anyone, much less the narrator. You must mean the AUTHOR. Different things. No wonder you thought the story was good if this is your reading comprehension level.
@@marialacambra9715 and there it is, another TH-cam hater TH-cam is full of them.
I refuse to engage further.
@@ruth_southernstarYou're taking every bit of criticism really personally. Are you the author or something? How fragile are you to deem every commenter who didn't like the story as a "hater"?
@@marialacambra9715 there is no reason to be so critical of the author or the narrator. There is also no need to judge me. If you don't like a channel simply move on, don't use it to criticise something you don't like. They are stories, for goidness sake.
Awesome, as always 👍🏻
Oh man, I can't wait to hear this! I remember sleeping in a train yard with my best friend. We were waiting for a southbound train to hop on, but it didn't show up till it was daylight. I always wondered what would've happened of that train had actually showed up in time. Maybe it was divine intervention, because it's pretty fuckin dangerous too.
This was a pretty good story. I liked the idea of train hopping. Excellent narration as always. Have a splendid weekend ❤🤗🌟
My God, I didn't see that coming. How terrifying. And now for the weather...
@@ruth_southernstar
It's too silly to be believed!🙄
As if it's the work of a twelve year old.
@@ruffadamsthegreat.2662 It's a story, not a police report. If it's not for you, go elsewhere. Fast.
@@ruth_southernstar it's a plagiarised story.
@@Stevies_Precog_Gym_n_Spa420 so? many stories on TH-cam are. they are stories not dissertations, and are simply to be enjoyed, or not (seemingly) in your case.
@@ruth_southernstar
Oh, so if my opinion differs from yours, then I need to leave?
Okay, if that's how we're gonna roll, with you being the self-appointed Opinion Police, and since you believe that you're the arbiter of how others should view things, you can kiss me where the Sun don't shine, Karen.😈
This is my favorite kind of story. Doppelganger/Shapeshifter entities. It's also very rare to hear new material that's well written and narrated too... Thank you Skott
"well written"???
This is an outright Rip off of "My dog went missing for 3 days" look it up.
This is a rip off of yhe creepypasta "My dog went missing for three days" 🤣
This one sucked
Yup. It was terrible writing.
Good to see creepypasta is still dogshit. Some things never change
Oh there are several damn good ones tho. Just saying
@@jendubay3782Can you recommend some please?