bruh, imagine outsmarting your own sith master by killing him in his sleep, planning and scheming for years orchestrating a war to kill off the Jedi and take over the Republic to reform it into an empire, also acquiring the chosen one himself as apprentice just to get thrown into lava by that same apprentice after discovering him crippled and burnt alive on a desolate planet being left for dead by the latter's former master.
and then seeing that dumb-ss Chosen One let a bunch of teenagers blow up his Death Star, which took Palps 20 long years to build, ruining Palpatine's credit forever. 😒
I know it was supposed to be Anakin to throw Palpatine to his molten death, but it would be hilarious if he just tripped instead. Imagine all that planning to rule the galaxy, only to die because of a tiny pebble or loose footing.
Vader just picked sidious up and threw him down the death star with 1 hand cut off as well - it doesn't seem that out of place for him to do this too because Vader was angry that Sidious' training was not enough to beat Obi-Wan
@@lordrevan7569 it isn't hard to believe until you realise that Sidious can literally see the future just like any force user could, he would see that action coming and avoid it. In ROTJ he couldn't predict it because he was focused on using his Force Lighting on Luke, not to mention that he couldn't sense Vader turning because he did it out of love and affection for Luke which is something Sidious couldn't comprehend. Here he wasn't doing anything, he should've foreseen Vader accidentally throwing him in the Lava. Which is fine because that's the entire concept of the video, but it doesn't change the fact that it doesn't make sense.
@@thefollower2933 lol force visions do not work like that - if anyone can see into the future then Quigonn would have been able to see Darth Maul using his hilt to stun him, Anakin would have been able to see Obi-Wan cutting off his limbs. Even the visions of Padme dying - Anakin had no control of those or when they happened LOL bad argument - the reason some jedi can sometimes see into the future is not because the force tells them it is because they can read the minds of people around them and predict what they will do next.
Apparently dark side of the Force makes people easy to trip on everything. It is supposed to be like a drug, so I guess it makes sense? It also explains why Darth Jar Jar sticked to worlds full of water, or at least without lava. :P
Because he was always planning and plotting Real time reflex will and wound NEVER be his advantage. His defensive disarming of three of four Jedi Council was fluke reflex he has ZERO competency in. Only his dark side totems empowered NOT his skill. And if Windus shatter point was on point, Mace would have ended Sidious THEN and there, Anakin wouldn't have had time for conflict, No Order 66 and Maul and Asohka would have VERIFIED Sidious schemes against Republic, Jedi, and usurping Anakin. Had Anakin not killed Dooku, Dooku would have told him what Palp was doing
He wouldn’t just melt that quickly that he’d only scream once. Lava is very dense. And actually is only marginally hotter than fire. He’d have burned like anakin. But have been stuck in the molten lava like flypaper until he melted screaming and shreiking in agony. Which would actually been enjoyable to see.
It'd probably sell well, as a way to avert the pain of death and remember one's grandparents. But, here's the dark part: Freezing someone with the machine means they cannot join the living Force.
Plz make a part 2 where it's set in the distant future when people accidentally unfreeze Vader only for Vader to have been mentally meditating the entire time he was frozen and used that time to access all the sith and jedi holocrons for more and more knowledge. I think that would be a good continuation tbh
Vader would grow much stronger in just a few more days and now being the only one the dark side flowed through and location unknown Vaders would power would grow unmatched in just a few months
The only thing I disliked about this was the idea that the senate would seek to immediately make Anakin the new emperor. He had no political experience or standing. There's no actual reason for him to become emperor at that point. They'd more likely expect him to become the grandmaster of a newly formed Jedi order, free of the "corruption" of the previous. Other than that, interesting and worthy of a sequel.
It's funny just to picture him falling by accident though. Palpatine: "There he is...he's still alive. Fetch a medical capsule" Palpatine goes to place a hand on Vader's burnt body, but as he kneels down his knees give out. Palpatine: "Oh SHIT!!!" He falls into the lava and begins to scream. Palpatine: "Anakin....HELP ME HELP ME!!! Don't let the Lava KILL ME!!!" Anakin: "I'm kind of in no position to help anyone...master...master?" Anakin looks to see Palpatine's hand sticking out of the lava as he drowns in it. Anakin: "Ironic...he came to save me from death...but he couldn't save himself. Guess I'll tell my apprentice about the Tragedy of Darth Sidious the Weak Kneed."
How would Maul play a role into this? With him sensing the death of Sidious, would he have tried to claim the title of Dark Lord of the Sith for himself?
Just looking at the thumbnail, I just imagined Palpatine slowly walking down to assist Vader but suddenly slips on the gravel and falls into the lava 😂
Well looks like Momin caught quite a spectacular scene for his artwork. He must be very satisfied, now where is he gonna keep it? Also crazy how Anakin overthrew his master on the very first day of being sith.
That's interesting for Jedi to take the chance to return to a place, trusting an entity that tried to kill them in the first place. That's like returning to a job that fired you.
Honestly, I think that Momin would allow himself to be removed from Luminara, with the anticipation of when he'd be called upon again to create another masterpiece. After all, creating art dedicated to the Dark Side is his entire motivation, nothing else.
Originally Padme appeared in Episodes 1 2 & 3 until she died aged 27 as for Palpatine later Sidious he appeared for all 9 movies until Rey using jedi of old slain incarnate but Ben healed her which he ends up dying soon after.
Love it a fresh concept of fan fiction immensely engaging in my opinion, so thank you for entertaining me. It would be curious to see Momen recontained or even maybe move on (doubt it) Emperor Momen perhaps fulling processes Luminara and the Jedi rebuilding on Dantooine? Hundred years later someone somehow frees them to fight Momen?
Clone 1: "Oh my god, he just fell in..." Clone 2: "It's okay, it's okay, stay calm, just stick to the plan!" Clone 3: "WHY ARE THERE SO MANY FIRE SCORPIONS?!?!?" *(SQUAD WIPED)* Last Clone: *"You're a fcking idiot, my Lord."* Palpatine Sith Ghost: *"Least I still have the Dark Side & chicken..."*
The bystanders who watched everything go down would get luminara (momin) to unfreeze the Jedi. Ahsoka, yoda, and obi wan, would move anakins hands and cuff them with force-restraining cuffs. Anakin would realise at this moment, now completely powerless, what he had done. The younglings he had killed, the padawans, the masters, all of the innocent people he had killed all because of his lust for power. His mind came back to normal now, his mind racing with emotions. He knelt on the ground, cuffed and depressed. Quietly, he asked ahsoka if he could see padme again. Ahsoka looked at anakin, confused. But anakin crawled towards his saber, picked it up, pointing it through his head. Before he could ignite the blade, obi wan grabs the saber, smacking it out of anakins hand. “Anakin, suicide is a cowards way out” obi wan said. But all anakin heard was screams of padme and his mother and the younglings he had killed. A tear fell down his cheek, but no one saw it because of his mask. He looked up at yoda, yelling at him to kill him. Anakin just wanted to see padme. Yoda, looking at anakin, shook his head in disbelief. Anakin was the chosen one- how did the charismatic young Jedi turn into an insane cybernetic monster? Anakin came to his senses now, realising he could still change. He killed mansa, he killed senators, he killed younglings, padawans, masters, knights, clones, civilians, and for what? Just to kill himself now? He knew he could change. And as these emotions and thoughts filled his brain, he stood up. He looked to Ahsoka, then obi wan. “How do I fix this?” He asked. Suddenly, as the sentimental moment was going down, a double bladed saber ignited behind the Jedi. It glowed a bright red. Immediately, Ahsoka ignited her sabers, and obi wan and yoda also prepared for battle. It was maul. Everyone was so focused on anakin that everyone forgot about maul. For some backstory, a few clones went and unlocked the weird mandalorian cell thingy that stopped him from using the force, and they released him, hoping that maul would stop Vader. Maul stared at Vader now. “Since you don’t seem to want this empire, I will be taking it” maul said with a snicker. Anakin effortlessly ripped his cuffs apart, showing how overpowered his cybernetics made him. “The only people who are getting this empire are the Jedi” he said, leaping at maul with his yellow blade, instantly cutting his saber in half. Maul did not anticipate anakin to be this powerful. Anakin nearly effortlessly throwing attacks at maul, one by one, and one of his sabers was quickly kicked out of his hand. Anakin did a mace windu backspin, kicking maul to the wall and pointing his saber at his neck. Maul frantically tried fighting back, but his saber wasn’t doing anything to anakins armour. With no more hesitation, anakin stabbed his saber through maul’s heart, killing him instantly. Yoda, Ahsoka, obi wan, and even luminara’s possessed form looked shocked. With all of this out of the way, anakin wanted to go save padme. He could still use his dark side powers to his advantage. His fight with maul made him realise he was no longer a Jedi, nor a sith. He was something else. Anakin had changed that quickly. He was no longer on the jedis side. He needed to revive padme. He looked to his left, then his right, and bolted out of the temple. He got to the nearest starship, Ahsoka, yoda, and obi wan chasing him but to no avail. He immediately got inside, and got to naboo as soon as possible. He broke the atmosphere of coryscant, immediately setting course to naboo, and he jumped into hyperspace. Once at naboo, he found padmes grave. He dug it up as fast as he possibly could. He found her casket, revealing her body. Anakin had done it- but he heard a starship land nearby. It was the Jedi. They were here to stop him from reviving his loved one. Palpatine was right. But he wasn’t. Anakin shook his head, shrugging off the conflicted emotions. He placed his hand on padme, reviving her. She got up, and anakin hugged her. She was back. He yelled at obi wan not to take another step. But before he could even say another word, yoda shook his head. “A mistake it was, unfreezing Vader…” And then, the machine fired once again. The masters made sure to stay out of the way this time, blasting anakin with the time freezer machine. He was there next to padme. Time practically froze for both anakin and padme. Neither of them even had a chance to say a word to each other, yet they hugged each other tighter as they were both frozen in time, forever. (This took me a lot of time to write lol, like half an hour, would really appreciate a few likes, but also I don’t really care. I thought I’d give a bit more closure to this video that people might like to see) Also yoda fired the machine at anakin as he refused to comply with them and also he was far too dangerous to be left free. Padme was frozen cos, well, she was kinda just a side effect. At least anakin gets to be with her forever now lol Anyways hope yall enjoyed this, I was kinda rushed at some parts but yeah.
This has a multitude of holes 1. The Jedi wouldn’t just come back to corrosant like that 2. Today would never suggest a thought bomb 3. Vader would never be emperor 4 Tarkin can’t call the senate to order Etc etc etc
I want a part two of this, some how a couple years down the road the time freez stops, and the four of them are in a vault of some collector or something.
With Yoda and Obi-Wan frozen and Luminara possessed, there may be nobody capable of containing Momin again. He has created his masterpiece.. and now has a frightened, weak, and grateful galaxy looking to him.
Outstanding story as always. I think it'd be badass if this continued and SPOILER . . . Anakin/Vader defied time itself, moving forward to get a hold of Momen.
If Palpy spent more than several seconds to Anakin's location, his clothes should had started on fire similar to when Anakin landed on his position after being sliced off. Also Vader should be medium cooked by the time Palpy arrived. For the Jedi to deal with Vader, it's best to remove his access to the Force. This required at least several regular Jedi to perform this Force Severe technique.
I loved this, how you made Vader into basically Broly. And in his rage he ruined having the Empire handed to him in a silver platter and everything he wanted as he would easily be able to go into the restricted section as Emperor. Instead he freaked out the galaxy so much, Order 66 was called off. What would happen from then? Well, if you remember Momin made this machine not just for art, his "masterwork" was made so that he could trap those people in the time loop and using all that endless darkside power generated by it to gain infinite power. In fact the reason he is a mask is that the Jedi interrupted him when he was harnessing all that power, he lost control and destroyed his body. So here I expect Momin, to complete this, either by just using the time stopped loop darkside power creating by having the dark Chosen One , Ahsoka, Obi Wan and Yoda trapped into a Jedi Temple that sits on top of a Sith Shrine already or Momin activates his machine a second time in a portion of Coruscant to do it. Momin would regain his body like in the Vader comic, but this time go beyond and become something like The Son of Mortis or Abeloth. So now the Jedi that remain have no choice but to unfreeze this Vader and help him complete his holocron ritual if anyone is to challenge this Momin. I imagine it would be used to bring Anakin back to his original body or make his suit his new "natural" body so he can reach his full potential with it. In the end they still need the Chosen One to bring balance. And once again Yoda and the Jedi are stuck helping a Sith (Anakin/Vader) in the hopes of stopping another and hoping it doesnt backfire... again.
@@starwarsquillI'm a bit mad that you cut off Obi-Wan's arms but at least it gives weight to the story, as anything could happen with an overpowered, deranged Vader. I like how he reacted the most peaceful towards Ashoka. Your story is of high quality, and this comment above is solid in my opinion, I don't want Momin to succeed but he is a Sith and has the upperhand here... I think Yoda made a grave mistake by using Dark Side methods, especially one that he has no control over, and leaving Momin as the most powerful figure among the Jedi in the ship once he and Obi-Wan entered as the sacrifice is just asking for consequences, and that is true especially now that Ashoka is frozen in time as well. Well done, consider me deeply interested in part 2. I hope that you recover swiftly.
This story is too good to just end the way it did. Hopefully you will make a part 2 with Momin/Luminara, Tarkin, Bail Organa, Mon Mothma, Rex, Cody, Jocasta Nu, Caleb Dume, Cal Kestis, and other Jedi, Luke & Leia too, and especially Darth Maul! I'm very curious what happens next!
The problem with this alternate storyline is Order 66 had been issued. Palpatine instructed all Clones to execute all Jedi and Force sensitives. While understanding the Clones were instructed not to harm Anakin Skywalker and your story of having him brought back to Coruscant is reasonable, your Mas Amedda addressing the Senate would have faced major pushback and lead many Senators to believe perhaps Anankin, a Jedi, killed Palpatine on Mustafar. Order 66 was about the Jedi betraying the Chancellor and the Republic.
bruh, imagine outsmarting your own sith master by killing him in his sleep, planning and scheming for years orchestrating a war to kill off the Jedi and take over the Republic to reform it into an empire, also acquiring the chosen one himself as apprentice just to get thrown into lava by that same apprentice after discovering him crippled and burnt alive on a desolate planet being left for dead by the latter's former master.
Darth Plaguis the Wise: 👀
Palpatine: *I HATE YOU!!!*
In the words of Crimson 1: “Predictable.”
Palpatine: "Ironic..."
and then seeing that dumb-ss Chosen One let a bunch of teenagers blow up his Death Star, which took Palps 20 long years to build, ruining Palpatine's credit forever.
😒
I know it was supposed to be Anakin to throw Palpatine to his molten death, but it would be hilarious if he just tripped instead. Imagine all that planning to rule the galaxy, only to die because of a tiny pebble or loose footing.
That's the ending he deserves as a person, tbh.
(As a character, that'd be so anticlimactic, though.)
I read a fanfic years ago where he falls down the stairs after tripping on the handcuffs Luke wore.
Imagine that fate for Vitiate.
@Worthykids needs to make an animation of This!😂
@@mackbolan8got a link?
Man I am dying for a clip of him tripping and rolling down the hill with the “Anakin, HELP MEH!” Sound bite from Ep III playing
And “The Force” theme would be playing in the background lol
I’d love to see someone make this.
@starwarsquill could you buy any chance make a short story about it? Like a 60 second short speed running a ridiculous outcome? 😂😂
@@K.I.A22 oof agh oof AAAAGGHH!!!
Id laugh my ass seeing that.
I love how despite how stupid this concept is, this video takes it completely seriously and actually makes a decent story out of it.
I have to agree. But still let there be another part to this story.
Vader just picked sidious up and threw him down the death star with 1 hand cut off as well - it doesn't seem that out of place for him to do this too because Vader was angry that Sidious' training was not enough to beat Obi-Wan
@@lordrevan7569 it isn't hard to believe until you realise that Sidious can literally see the future just like any force user could, he would see that action coming and avoid it. In ROTJ he couldn't predict it because he was focused on using his Force Lighting on Luke, not to mention that he couldn't sense Vader turning because he did it out of love and affection for Luke which is something Sidious couldn't comprehend. Here he wasn't doing anything, he should've foreseen Vader accidentally throwing him in the Lava. Which is fine because that's the entire concept of the video, but it doesn't change the fact that it doesn't make sense.
@@thefollower2933 lol force visions do not work like that - if anyone can see into the future then Quigonn would have been able to see Darth Maul using his hilt to stun him, Anakin would have been able to see Obi-Wan cutting off his limbs. Even the visions of Padme dying - Anakin had no control of those or when they happened LOL bad argument - the reason some jedi can sometimes see into the future is not because the force tells them it is because they can read the minds of people around them and predict what they will do next.
@@lordrevan7569SomHOw Palpatine ReTuRend🤤
Jar Jar: Meesa clumsy.
Palpatine: You and me both. 💀
that's not the only thing they have in common *evil jar jar laugh*
JarJar, ya but I ain't pulling you out, yousa NOT ruling MY Galaxy Masta!! 😂
After all Meesa JarJar Binks
Apparently dark side of the Force makes people easy to trip on everything. It is supposed to be like a drug, so I guess it makes sense?
It also explains why Darth Jar Jar sticked to worlds full of water, or at least without lava. :P
This explanation is too logical. I like to imagine Sidious was just clumsy and slipped in the ash and into the lava.
Whoops!
"Here you go,Mr. Vader....one order of fried Emperor,extra crispy."
The ironic thing is that reflex actions are something Palpatine was seemingly not able to sense in time as reflex actions didn't use much thought.
Because he was always planning and plotting Real time reflex will and wound NEVER be his advantage. His defensive disarming of three of four Jedi Council was fluke reflex he has ZERO competency in. Only his dark side totems empowered NOT his skill. And if Windus shatter point was on point, Mace would have ended Sidious THEN and there, Anakin wouldn't have had time for conflict, No Order 66 and Maul and Asohka would have VERIFIED Sidious schemes against Republic, Jedi, and usurping Anakin. Had Anakin not killed Dooku, Dooku would have told him what Palp was doing
he is really the chosen one, he can kill the sith in any state🤣
What if Dooku became something like Qui Gon, a force voice, talking and training with Luke throughout his childhood.
He wouldn’t just melt that quickly that he’d only scream once. Lava is very dense. And actually is only marginally hotter than fire. He’d have burned like anakin. But have been stuck in the molten lava like flypaper until he melted screaming and shreiking in agony. Which would actually been enjoyable to see.
OK, calm down, Satan.
Headfirst means a quick death
@@theseekerofancienttruth3873true
Well that's true but Anakin would only be able to register it for a moment, bebire losing consciousness.
@@kirillzakharov7336 palpatine was a disgusting person blud
Anakin just looking at this is the funniest thing to me
Also imagine sidious final moments he would be PISSED
I think the idea of Momin working on a smaller machine, designed to free singular individuals from the time stopping would be an interesting take.
It'd probably sell well, as a way to avert the pain of death and remember one's grandparents. But, here's the dark part: Freezing someone with the machine means they cannot join the living Force.
Probably would leave the mask with his art of Anakin if they did that
Tarkin caring for civilians was verry funny. Good Job! Made me laugh the first time in 2024 😂
Although awesome intro, my headcanon is that Sidious trips on his own robes, windmills, and goes stumbling right into the lava.
Vader occasionally leaving the temple to casually smack down hit squads before going back to meditation is something we need more of!
What If Barriss didn't bomb the Jedi Temple and frame Ahsoka but instead left the Order and joined Ventress
Plz make a part 2 where it's set in the distant future when people accidentally unfreeze Vader only for Vader to have been mentally meditating the entire time he was frozen and used that time to access all the sith and jedi holocrons for more and more knowledge.
I think that would be a good continuation tbh
Including force heal, allowing him to fix his lungs
bro really wants to end the galaxy
Yeah that sounds like an awesome idea.
Palpatine: "IM MELTING, MELTING!! OH WHAT A WORLD, WHAT A WORLD!!" 😁
Vader: now i am the supreme ruler of the galaxy"
Walks down to check anikin
*trips over a severed leg and rolls into lava
Vader: "where is the Emperor, is his safe? Is he alright?"
Clone: "it appears, your Highness, in your disorientation, you killed him"
Nooooo! Wait is Padme alive, that’s why I need him
Perfect end.
The Sith decides to mess with the Force. The force, messed them back.
"Skeletor fell for it, so did I, Noooooooo"
Imagine bro just casually trips into the lava 😂😂
This one was hilarious and here’s an interesting idea What If Obi Wan and Yoda fought Plapatine in Revenge of the Sith.
Vader would grow much stronger in just a few more days and now being the only one the dark side flowed through and location unknown Vaders would power would grow unmatched in just a few months
The only thing I disliked about this was the idea that the senate would seek to immediately make Anakin the new emperor. He had no political experience or standing. There's no actual reason for him to become emperor at that point. They'd more likely expect him to become the grandmaster of a newly formed Jedi order, free of the "corruption" of the previous.
Other than that, interesting and worthy of a sequel.
Then that would be two people who couldn't play "the floor is lava."
Great comment even I have lost that game and not lost THAT bad. 😂
Imagine instead of giving him cybernetics they cloned body parts and restored him to almost pre injury status
Dude this is actually very well done I just finished it!
I can't stop laughing 😂 This is funniest, what if story I have seen yet, well done!
20:38 That concept vader/ stormtrooper armor is awesome.
When I first read the title, I immediately thought of Palps slipping into the lava on a conveniently placed banana peel
If Palpatine got thrown into the lava he would somehow return later
I think this is one very unique and interesting theory and I love it and I also think the suit Vader has at 6:00 looks amazing.
How are you not at 100k subs yet man. This was so good
Haha Thanks for the support, man :)
@@starwarsquill What If Idea:What if The Force never existed?
This was incredible, hope you get more views
Anakin: Haha..he fell for it. All to easy.
It's funny just to picture him falling by accident though.
Palpatine: "There he is...he's still alive. Fetch a medical capsule"
Palpatine goes to place a hand on Vader's burnt body, but as he kneels down his knees give out.
Palpatine: "Oh SHIT!!!"
He falls into the lava and begins to scream.
Palpatine: "Anakin....HELP ME HELP ME!!! Don't let the Lava KILL ME!!!"
Anakin: "I'm kind of in no position to help anyone...master...master?"
Anakin looks to see Palpatine's hand sticking out of the lava as he drowns in it.
Anakin: "Ironic...he came to save me from death...but he couldn't save himself. Guess I'll tell my apprentice about the Tragedy of Darth Sidious the Weak Kneed."
"Somehow, Palpatine tripped on his robes."
This started out good and only got better and better, I'm definitely going to be checking out more of this channel
How would Maul play a role into this? With him sensing the death of Sidious, would he have tried to claim the title of Dark Lord of the Sith for himself?
Just looking at the thumbnail, I just imagined Palpatine slowly walking down to assist Vader but suddenly slips on the gravel and falls into the lava 😂
That was a surprisingly unique story. Bravo!
Palpatine: *trips* AHHHHHH
6:16 Vader has a stormtrooper like helmet here very cool!
Darth momin wanting to make a gucci statue of a darth vader is definitely a funny plot point.
Part 2 where they need Anakin, Asoka and Obi-Wan into the future
He killed his master in his sleep, only to be killed by his apprentince while he sleeps.
I imagine Yoda would have communicated with Anakin telepathicly
Anakin: p-palpatine! Look out for that banana peal!
Palatine: what was that my friend?
*comedic slid whistle*
Palatine: *unending screams of agony*
Well looks like Momin caught quite a spectacular scene for his artwork. He must be very satisfied, now where is he gonna keep it?
Also crazy how Anakin overthrew his master on the very first day of being sith.
This is the best what if I have ever heard it just was brilliant in a way, good work!
That's interesting for Jedi to take the chance to return to a place, trusting an entity that tried to kill them in the first place. That's like returning to a job that fired you.
I was hoping this would open with Palpatine just slipping into the lava like Jar Jar
yoda- lost to this idiot, i can't believe
Honestly, I think that Momin would allow himself to be removed from Luminara, with the anticipation of when he'd be called upon again to create another masterpiece. After all, creating art dedicated to the Dark Side is his entire motivation, nothing else.
Who'd notice or care?
Lavatine. Darth Lavius.
😂
Originally Padme appeared in Episodes 1 2 & 3 until she died aged 27 as for Palpatine later Sidious he appeared for all 9 movies until Rey using jedi of old slain incarnate but Ben healed her which he ends up dying soon after.
Who would’ve thunk that the MVP after Palpatine went for a hot shower would be Momin, of all people. This is really really great dude.
This was actually interesting and had a decent use of Momin.
"THE JEDI ARE TAKING OVER"
So thats what he said while he was in the lava, can you believe that?
-randon Droid on Mustafar
"OOPS!" **proceeds to need space life alert**
Love it a fresh concept of fan fiction immensely engaging in my opinion, so thank you for entertaining me.
It would be curious to see Momen recontained or even maybe move on (doubt it) Emperor Momen perhaps fulling processes Luminara and the Jedi rebuilding on Dantooine?
Hundred years later someone somehow frees them to fight Momen?
Palpatine slipped on a banana peel and fell in
He tripped on Anakin’s leg
An amped up Darth Vader would have so many story arcs
Clone 1: "Oh my god, he just fell in..."
Clone 2: "It's okay, it's okay, stay calm, just stick to the plan!"
Clone 3: "WHY ARE THERE SO MANY FIRE SCORPIONS?!?!?"
*(SQUAD WIPED)*
Last Clone: *"You're a fcking idiot, my Lord."*
Palpatine Sith Ghost: *"Least I still have the Dark Side & chicken..."*
The bystanders who watched everything go down would get luminara (momin) to unfreeze the Jedi. Ahsoka, yoda, and obi wan, would move anakins hands and cuff them with force-restraining cuffs. Anakin would realise at this moment, now completely powerless, what he had done. The younglings he had killed, the padawans, the masters, all of the innocent people he had killed all because of his lust for power. His mind came back to normal now, his mind racing with emotions. He knelt on the ground, cuffed and depressed. Quietly, he asked ahsoka if he could see padme again. Ahsoka looked at anakin, confused. But anakin crawled towards his saber, picked it up, pointing it through his head. Before he could ignite the blade, obi wan grabs the saber, smacking it out of anakins hand.
“Anakin, suicide is a cowards way out” obi wan said. But all anakin heard was screams of padme and his mother and the younglings he had killed. A tear fell down his cheek, but no one saw it because of his mask. He looked up at yoda, yelling at him to kill him. Anakin just wanted to see padme.
Yoda, looking at anakin, shook his head in disbelief. Anakin was the chosen one- how did the charismatic young Jedi turn into an insane cybernetic monster?
Anakin came to his senses now, realising he could still change. He killed mansa, he killed senators, he killed younglings, padawans, masters, knights, clones, civilians, and for what? Just to kill himself now? He knew he could change. And as these emotions and thoughts filled his brain, he stood up. He looked to Ahsoka, then obi wan.
“How do I fix this?” He asked.
Suddenly, as the sentimental moment was going down, a double bladed saber ignited behind the Jedi. It glowed a bright red. Immediately, Ahsoka ignited her sabers, and obi wan and yoda also prepared for battle. It was maul. Everyone was so focused on anakin that everyone forgot about maul.
For some backstory, a few clones went and unlocked the weird mandalorian cell thingy that stopped him from using the force, and they released him, hoping that maul would stop Vader.
Maul stared at Vader now. “Since you don’t seem to want this empire, I will be taking it” maul said with a snicker.
Anakin effortlessly ripped his cuffs apart, showing how overpowered his cybernetics made him.
“The only people who are getting this empire are the Jedi” he said, leaping at maul with his yellow blade, instantly cutting his saber in half. Maul did not anticipate anakin to be this powerful. Anakin nearly effortlessly throwing attacks at maul, one by one, and one of his sabers was quickly kicked out of his hand. Anakin did a mace windu backspin, kicking maul to the wall and pointing his saber at his neck. Maul frantically tried fighting back, but his saber wasn’t doing anything to anakins armour. With no more hesitation, anakin stabbed his saber through maul’s heart, killing him instantly.
Yoda, Ahsoka, obi wan, and even luminara’s possessed form looked shocked. With all of this out of the way, anakin wanted to go save padme. He could still use his dark side powers to his advantage. His fight with maul made him realise he was no longer a Jedi, nor a sith. He was something else. Anakin had changed that quickly. He was no longer on the jedis side. He needed to revive padme. He looked to his left, then his right, and bolted out of the temple. He got to the nearest starship, Ahsoka, yoda, and obi wan chasing him but to no avail. He immediately got inside, and got to naboo as soon as possible.
He broke the atmosphere of coryscant, immediately setting course to naboo, and he jumped into hyperspace.
Once at naboo, he found padmes grave. He dug it up as fast as he possibly could. He found her casket, revealing her body. Anakin had done it- but he heard a starship land nearby. It was the Jedi. They were here to stop him from reviving his loved one. Palpatine was right. But he wasn’t. Anakin shook his head, shrugging off the conflicted emotions. He placed his hand on padme, reviving her. She got up, and anakin hugged her. She was back. He yelled at obi wan not to take another step. But before he could even say another word, yoda shook his head.
“A mistake it was, unfreezing Vader…”
And then, the machine fired once again. The masters made sure to stay out of the way this time, blasting anakin with the time freezer machine. He was there next to padme. Time practically froze for both anakin and padme. Neither of them even had a chance to say a word to each other, yet they hugged each other tighter as they were both frozen in time, forever.
(This took me a lot of time to write lol, like half an hour, would really appreciate a few likes, but also I don’t really care. I thought I’d give a bit more closure to this video that people might like to see)
Also yoda fired the machine at anakin as he refused to comply with them and also he was far too dangerous to be left free. Padme was frozen cos, well, she was kinda just a side effect. At least anakin gets to be with her forever now lol
Anyways hope yall enjoyed this, I was kinda rushed at some parts but yeah.
THE BEST fun fic i ever heard
I absolutely love the fact that you gave a great explanation to an annitionaly stupid idea that many people find as a joke. Great video
Haha I’m glad you liked it :)
This is super creative and intresting
lol Palps tripped and fell on Anikin severed arm or one of the legs.
I'd never heard of Momin before this video, but I'm glad you brought him to my attention.
This has a multitude of holes
1. The Jedi wouldn’t just come back to corrosant like that
2. Today would never suggest a thought bomb
3. Vader would never be emperor
4 Tarkin can’t call the senate to order
Etc etc etc
I wonder if Momin would finally move on from his mask after that, having completed his grand work
What if Celeste Morne was discovered by the Jedi Order, either before or during the Clone Wars, instead of Darth Vader?
Man to Could you should Continue this make a Part 2 I would Love A Part 2
I want a part two of this, some how a couple years down the road the time freez stops, and the four of them are in a vault of some collector or something.
With Yoda and Obi-Wan frozen and Luminara possessed, there may be nobody capable of containing Momin again. He has created his masterpiece.. and now has a frightened, weak, and grateful galaxy looking to him.
2:12 I can confirm he was too dead to give orders👍
Outstanding story as always. I think it'd be badass if this continued and SPOILER
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Anakin/Vader defied time itself, moving forward to get a hold of Momen.
Gld you liked the story, Man :) There were a few more things I wanted to add but I ran into some health issues by the end and had to end it there :/
@@starwarsquill sorry to hear and I hope you feel better. You're an underrated story teller.
What if i had cereal instead of a donair for breakfast.........
I could imagine Anakin being so mad he yells you lied to me and gives s nice force push in his hatred.
Ah man. That would've been glorious. The rule of two back fires. Even if they both died in a shuttle crash. That would be so funny.
If Palpy spent more than several seconds to Anakin's location, his clothes should had started on fire similar to when Anakin landed on his position after being sliced off. Also Vader should be medium cooked by the time Palpy arrived. For the Jedi to deal with Vader, it's best to remove his access to the Force. This required at least several regular Jedi to perform this Force Severe technique.
I loved this, how you made Vader into basically Broly. And in his rage he ruined having the Empire handed to him in a silver platter and everything he wanted as he would easily be able to go into the restricted section as Emperor. Instead he freaked out the galaxy so much, Order 66 was called off.
What would happen from then? Well, if you remember Momin made this machine not just for art, his "masterwork" was made so that he could trap those people in the time loop and using all that endless darkside power generated by it to gain infinite power. In fact the reason he is a mask is that the Jedi interrupted him when he was harnessing all that power, he lost control and destroyed his body.
So here I expect Momin, to complete this, either by just using the time stopped loop darkside power creating by having the dark Chosen One , Ahsoka, Obi Wan and Yoda trapped into a Jedi Temple that sits on top of a Sith Shrine already or Momin activates his machine a second time in a portion of Coruscant to do it. Momin would regain his body like in the Vader comic, but this time go beyond and become something like The Son of Mortis or Abeloth.
So now the Jedi that remain have no choice but to unfreeze this Vader and help him complete his holocron ritual if anyone is to challenge this Momin. I imagine it would be used to bring Anakin back to his original body or make his suit his new "natural" body so he can reach his full potential with it. In the end they still need the Chosen One to bring balance. And once again Yoda and the Jedi are stuck helping a Sith (Anakin/Vader) in the hopes of stopping another and hoping it doesnt backfire... again.
Thanks, man! This is great!
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Hope you give this video a Part 2. It ended in a cliffhanger and it was awesome.
@@SamCaiman14 glad you liked it, man :)
@@starwarsquillI'm a bit mad that you cut off Obi-Wan's arms but at least it gives weight to the story, as anything could happen with an overpowered, deranged Vader. I like how he reacted the most peaceful towards Ashoka. Your story is of high quality, and this comment above is solid in my opinion, I don't want Momin to succeed but he is a Sith and has the upperhand here... I think Yoda made a grave mistake by using Dark Side methods, especially one that he has no control over, and leaving Momin as the most powerful figure among the Jedi in the ship once he and Obi-Wan entered as the sacrifice is just asking for consequences, and that is true especially now that Ashoka is frozen in time as well.
Well done, consider me deeply interested in part 2. I hope that you recover swiftly.
A better possibility is Vader getting banned for friendly fire
“…but somehow Palpatine comes back”
Imagine a sith only interested in technology then domination of the galaxy
An old man slips and falls
first thought when reading title and thumb tag was that Palpatine slipped and fell in haha
Nah I thought this was gonna be a 30 minute video of a what if Palpatine tripped
Haha
Lol he tripped over anakin 🤣🤣🤣
This story is too good to just end the way it did. Hopefully you will make a part 2 with Momin/Luminara, Tarkin, Bail Organa, Mon Mothma, Rex, Cody, Jocasta Nu, Caleb Dume, Cal Kestis, and other Jedi, Luke & Leia too, and especially Darth Maul! I'm very curious what happens next!
i don't think anakin would be able to overpower palp with the force or manually with his metal arm to do this; palpating was too strong in the force
The problem with this alternate storyline is Order 66 had been issued. Palpatine instructed all Clones to execute all Jedi and Force sensitives. While understanding the Clones were instructed not to harm Anakin Skywalker and your story of having him brought back to Coruscant is reasonable, your Mas Amedda addressing the Senate would have faced major pushback and lead many Senators to believe perhaps Anankin, a Jedi, killed Palpatine on Mustafar. Order 66 was about the Jedi betraying the Chancellor and the Republic.
I love the idea of this new cybernetic Anakin.
I didn’t even know Darth Momin existed until this video. Gonna do more research on him later.
He would still "Somehow come back"
Somehow Lavatine returned.
This is what we call a minor inconvenience.
I can imagine Anakin holding out his hand to Palpatine and pulling him into the lava. And he's like psyche