How to PLAN PERSUASIVE Writing for TOP GRADES (the secrets you aren't being taught)

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  • @t___939
    @t___939 ปีที่แล้ว +482

    after monday... i will never touch english again. Its been a good journey, thanks to you, Mr Salles.

    • @hi12235
      @hi12235 ปีที่แล้ว +19

      Innit spanish here we go

    • @shuncho7844
      @shuncho7844 ปีที่แล้ว +13

      FR i cant wait to stop english

    • @Georgina_d
      @Georgina_d ปีที่แล้ว +16

      I’m doing it for a level so I’ll have to do it even more 😭 I like it though

    • @kostavlogz3288
      @kostavlogz3288 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Unless I speak it lol

    • @shuncho7844
      @shuncho7844 ปีที่แล้ว +6

      @@Georgina_d if u like it then thats fine bcuz ur doing something u like 🙂

  • @Happyhogan
    @Happyhogan ปีที่แล้ว +71

    Mr Salles changed my life I literally want to be like him.💀
    Your enthusiasm is unrivalled and exciting. Your lessons are engaging where others could never.
    For both Lit and Lang you have helped me so much to attempt to reach top grades.
    Thanks Mr Salles :)

    • @MrSallesTeachesEnglish
      @MrSallesTeachesEnglish  ปีที่แล้ว +29

      This is very generous praise. Thank you very much. Good luck on the exam.

  • @kaizen4939
    @kaizen4939 ปีที่แล้ว +81

    Thank you Mr salles you have helped me massively in both literature and language

  • @megafoxgaming123cool4
    @megafoxgaming123cool4 ปีที่แล้ว +73

    thanks so much Mr salles your videos are so easy to follow. I went from a 4 in English lit to an 8 in my mock so I'm confident i got around that in my gcse. Hopefully I can replicate it in English language. Thanks so much sir!

  • @leokhan691
    @leokhan691 ปีที่แล้ว +41

    Thank you Mr Salles for this very convincing and compelling video which has helped me lots in the short run up to paper 2 on Monday.

  • @malharvarpe6666
    @malharvarpe6666 ปีที่แล้ว +28

    Thank you sir, because i used to be a grade 6/7 student in English and now after watching your videos I'm feeling confident both my lang and lit grades will be 8s and 9s

  • @Gabriel-zd8iy
    @Gabriel-zd8iy ปีที่แล้ว +17

    Thank you so much Mr Salles. I found your channel a similar time last year and thought it was a hidden gem. You helped me think outside the box in english and now im getting 7s and 8s (i was on 5s and 6s before) thank you for everything 🙏

  • @ismetren7973
    @ismetren7973 ปีที่แล้ว +14

    0:18 Made me laugh so much. Took me by surprise. I loved it!

  • @hi12235
    @hi12235 ปีที่แล้ว +50

    This settles it. Forget homework, forget revision, I’m a life-a-Holic not a workaholic

  • @axishx8115
    @axishx8115 ปีที่แล้ว +13

    ty mr salles i went from a grade 2 to a 5 in my mock hoping I get a 6 in my gcses

  • @decisive_battle3565
    @decisive_battle3565 ปีที่แล้ว +59

    yip yip ip yip yip yip yip yip

  • @ThomasMeeson
    @ThomasMeeson ปีที่แล้ว +4

    If we dislike the amazing video then perhaps it gets recommended to less people therefore less people witness this plentiful information therefore lower grade boundaries...

  • @noahpalmer6653
    @noahpalmer6653 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    Already doing well in english but I must say these videos give me a touch more direction and settle the nerves.

    • @Kappa_M
      @Kappa_M ปีที่แล้ว +5

      Same, it’s always nerve wracking when you don’t know how well you did in very open-ended exams like English

    • @noahpalmer6653
      @noahpalmer6653 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@Kappa_M completely agree. Maths and science I walk in knowing I will do well. English I have no clue

    • @eveyxp
      @eveyxp ปีที่แล้ว +2

      @@noahpalmer6653 exactly, even as someone who finds English fairly easy and natural, I’m always scared I could get extracts and questions that completely throw me off. Hope tomorrow is kind

  • @Jordiib09
    @Jordiib09 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    My OCD is wanting me to come over and iron your white board.

  • @brokenoob3797
    @brokenoob3797 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    great video i always got stuck on this but now its much more easier thanks to you

  • @abia321
    @abia321 ปีที่แล้ว +9

    Can you post a video on forms for Q5 (etc. letters and articles)?

  • @ciatwist3910
    @ciatwist3910 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Final video before the exam ❤ i will miss mr salles

  • @olig9581
    @olig9581 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    thanks i like the little music breaks imbetween sections very classy 👌

  • @toopeep27
    @toopeep27 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thank you so much!! This video and your q5 book saved me in the exams and many people I know

  • @SreshanRajan
    @SreshanRajan 7 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    Is it just me or does it hurt to see bubbles on the makeshift board?

    • @lunalingo4461
      @lunalingo4461 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      oh ye the air bubbles nah not really

  • @rurzee
    @rurzee ปีที่แล้ว +5

    Hi Mr Salles, are you going to post an updated question 4 video to go alongside all the new paper 2 ones?

  • @toopeep27
    @toopeep27 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thank you so much!! We really appreciate all your hard work, I'll miss English

  • @Average_Life04
    @Average_Life04 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Hello Mr Salles , I started to watch your videos and its really helping me understand what are the top tips that will help me ... Can you please also make a vdeo on all yhe characters that are in inspector calls refereing from the stage directions that Priestley has given .. For example, how they were at the start , how they were in the middle of the story and how they were at the end. Wd have our mocks soon so these are really nessesary.. thank you

    • @Blaze-hq9jk
      @Blaze-hq9jk ปีที่แล้ว

      he already has a video on that

  • @jscanlan_media
    @jscanlan_media ปีที่แล้ว +6

    Apologies Mr Salles but it seems you have missed question 4?

    • @MrSallesTeachesEnglish
      @MrSallesTeachesEnglish  ปีที่แล้ว +15

      Making it right now!

    • @hamnaali4977
      @hamnaali4977 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      @@MrSallesTeachesEnglish Waiting for your video sir, but at the same time, I'm practicing this question using your guide! :)

    • @jscanlan_media
      @jscanlan_media ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@MrSallesTeachesEnglish Just watched it. Thank you it has made the question a lot clearer and now hopefully I can get the higher grades🤞.

  • @katherinefrost5486
    @katherinefrost5486 ปีที่แล้ว

    Omg god thanks that has relieved some of my stress for question 5

  • @milomcanallen1099
    @milomcanallen1099 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    can i make up facts if i have little knowledge about a topic.

    • @kostavlogz3288
      @kostavlogz3288 ปีที่แล้ว

      Yh I’m pretty sure you can. If you use like fake statistics and numbers yes, and make up fake names for influencers make sure you put professor at the start of there names and say they are from harvard

  • @ken-cb4no
    @ken-cb4no ปีที่แล้ว +2

    im in yr10 and i have an englang p2 mock. This is so useful!

    • @shuncho7844
      @shuncho7844 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      well done for your very early revision.Keep it going✊

  • @tommillard5873
    @tommillard5873 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Big ups salles!

  • @aminah9141
    @aminah9141 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    0:18 nice music!

  • @jacksloman3438
    @jacksloman3438 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Guys i reacon Q5 could be on vegetarianism as everyone knows what it is and paper 1 was also on animals

  • @niamh2398
    @niamh2398 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    thank you so much sir :) what form to you recon we will be asked to write?

    • @reload2832
      @reload2832 ปีที่แล้ว

      doesn't make much of a difference tbh other than changing the formality slightly

  • @lucy-tf1ur
    @lucy-tf1ur ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Hi, for the arguments opposing your point of view, can you say why you think those are wrong and why you still overall agree or disagree with the statement?

  • @Bee_7699
    @Bee_7699 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Could you say there are other reasons for peoples success? Such as psychopathy, rich parents etc

  • @oriereprincesyd
    @oriereprincesyd 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    do you need to include strctural devices and launguage into paper 5

    • @tulipzy
      @tulipzy 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Language yes. Structural features kind of. If you are aiming for high grades yes. If not then no

  • @villan7h
    @villan7h ปีที่แล้ว +1

    oh boy, if homework came up past 2020 I would have some... stronger language and structural techniques for them

  • @catherinewilliams9932
    @catherinewilliams9932 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

    Any predictions for 2024?

  • @dandelily9224
    @dandelily9224 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    Would you say that this might lead you to get a bit off topic at times here? My teacher often chides me for ranting slightly and going off topic into politics. Is it really gonna work to talk about the Congo in a debate on homework?

    • @MrSallesTeachesEnglish
      @MrSallesTeachesEnglish  ปีที่แล้ว +2

      It is called the slippery slope argument - a leads to b, leads to c, and so on.

  • @SuccessfulYouth.
    @SuccessfulYouth. ปีที่แล้ว

    Hello sir I did a similar plan on the homework question, could you please help me improve this benevolent piece of writing to mesmerizing.
    NO VALUE
    paragraph 1 = -homework causes students to stress
    - Homework is an evil work that will isolate your happiness
    paragraph 2 = Is it really worth it?
    -Homework is timetaking and it makes you feel : lackadaisical,indignant and sometimes abhorrent.
    - about 60% of people have emotional health issues
    -they are emotionally ill!
    paragraph 3 = - it is as if the sky stopped to tear rain from itself
    -homework gulped all the euphoric, mesmersizing ; relaxing rain('GULP',GULP,GULP)
    -Dr Walter White, One of the greatest psychologist stated in an interview that ("Homework is a unworthy, pointless and an inactive way of learning)
    - He stated homework should be taught to make you feel euphoric rather than putting pressure upon your body.
    paragraph 4 =
    -tiring to relax?
    -who would do such an abhorrent thing
    -homework is a true invader between work
    -makes you feel indignant and melancholy
    -demolishes your interest and creativity and the exploding ideas through your mesmerizing brain...
    I have used mr everything english's technique in the structure but im not sure if im missing something that would affect my lilkeliness of getting good marks, please help|
    -Truly Homework is annoyingly amazing hahah

    • @Amelia-uw7nw
      @Amelia-uw7nw ปีที่แล้ว +4

      What is going on with paragraph 3 😭

    • @SuccessfulYouth.
      @SuccessfulYouth. ปีที่แล้ว

      @@Amelia-uw7nw 😭😭 is it that badd???

    • @idontgetthejoke4393
      @idontgetthejoke4393 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      @@SuccessfulYouth. its good if you want a grade 2

    • @Amelia-uw7nw
      @Amelia-uw7nw ปีที่แล้ว

      @@SuccessfulYouth. why did it start saying gulp - "it is as if the sky stopped to tear rain from itself
      -homework gulped all the euphoric, mesmersizing ; relaxing rain('GULP',GULP,GULP)"

    • @SuccessfulYouth.
      @SuccessfulYouth. ปีที่แล้ว

      @@Amelia-uw7nw haha idk just trying to make it creative...

  • @Luver2196
    @Luver2196 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Thank you so much sir!! Can we know what are the 11 topics question 5 can be about exactly? please

    • @daon4132
      @daon4132 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      I think the 11 topics are just topics he thinks are likely to come up, not guaranteed.

  • @Merrily-in1mq
    @Merrily-in1mq ปีที่แล้ว +4

    MR salles rate english on a scale of 1-10

  • @Lucas-zp6dx
    @Lucas-zp6dx ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Can we make up surveys and stats which are reasonable and are realistic?

    • @sealblubb3374
      @sealblubb3374 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Yes! I’m pretty sure you even get some marks for adding statistics in the mark scheme so defiantly add them :))

    • @Lucas-zp6dx
      @Lucas-zp6dx ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@sealblubb3374 thank you for your help

  • @ojasshanbhag2314
    @ojasshanbhag2314 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Is it a good idea to argue both sides if you are meant to be convincing?

  • @shorgz4693
    @shorgz4693 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    should you write 3 for paragraphs followed by 3 against paragraphs or a for-against-for-against structure?

    • @kexinguo9810
      @kexinguo9810 ปีที่แล้ว +7

      no, you need to be biased and have a strong argument for one point of view. Adding a contrasting view will contradict yourself but you can use counterarguments to strengthen your own view

    • @MrSallesTeachesEnglish
      @MrSallesTeachesEnglish  ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Both work

    • @redditgalaxy1457
      @redditgalaxy1457 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      No, a main point (which is what he was planning), should contain 3 points for or 3 points against, you will have a counter argument further on

  • @melw6201
    @melw6201 ปีที่แล้ว

    Can you tell us any more of the topics they could ask as about?

  • @robinsghost1250
    @robinsghost1250 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    So you know with cultural capital, can i just make up stuff? Thank you for the vid btw.

  • @HollyLygo
    @HollyLygo ปีที่แล้ว

    Hi sir please can u make a video on leaflets

  • @noobydegoat
    @noobydegoat ปีที่แล้ว

    What about the form of question 5 whether it’s an article or diary or letter

  • @nxtleader276
    @nxtleader276 ปีที่แล้ว

    are we supposed to argue both sides or just one as some teachers are saying more markers are given for single sided answers

    • @dapo7930
      @dapo7930 ปีที่แล้ว

      Both but strongly on one side

  • @ventilisationsystem2266
    @ventilisationsystem2266 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    i cant believe tomorrow will be my last english exam...

  • @anniegeorgee
    @anniegeorgee ปีที่แล้ว

    Do you give the opposite argument at all?

  • @vikavoltix5440
    @vikavoltix5440 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    yip yip yip yip yip

  • @nwarrier2338
    @nwarrier2338 ปีที่แล้ว

    For persuasive writing in Q5, are you expected to provide opposing arguments or can you just argue one side? For example, do you have to mention points for both for and against? Thanks for the video, Mr Salles

    • @MrSallesTeachesEnglish
      @MrSallesTeachesEnglish  ปีที่แล้ว +2

      It is a good idea to prove the counterargument wrong, but not essential

    • @nwarrier2338
      @nwarrier2338 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@MrSallesTeachesEnglish Thanks, so you'd still end on your main POV? As in, not sitting on the fence, per say?

    • @boarbot7829
      @boarbot7829 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      @@nwarrier2338 your are writing a ONE SIDED argument, so the only reason you would express the other side of the argument would be to say why it is so wrong.

    • @nwarrier2338
      @nwarrier2338 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@boarbot7829 Alright cheers mate

    • @dylanmorton9999
      @dylanmorton9999 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@boarbot7829 does it matter if I agree or disagree ?

  • @InsightfulInspirations
    @InsightfulInspirations ปีที่แล้ว

    thank you soo much sir

  • @rorevishion618
    @rorevishion618 ปีที่แล้ว

    Have you done a video like this on climate change? I think it always relates or comes up.

  • @ZainKhan-lc7fi
    @ZainKhan-lc7fi ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Hello is it possible if anyone could help , i am a year 12 student resitting since i got a 5 and uni's / apprenticeships dont want anything under a 6 . Im aiming for a 7 hopefully . heres my para thank you
    Homework: is it really worth it?
    Today's subject is homework , a task asked by teachers for students. Many if not all will argue "YO HOMEWORK IS RUBBISH!" , I would argue it isn't. Expanding minds and helping not just the students but teachers to understand how they think ; we all know basic boring homework can take a lot of time but this practice can result in perfection. Tens of thousand of teachers would agree that the students that do their homework aren't just prepared for exams but reach the top band grades , A's and A stars. Not only does this help with your college applications but also your university applications , with millions of students globally fighting for the best university's with the best courses. Doctors , dentists and even software engineers all needing the crème de le crème of students willing to show determination , hard work and most of all time. Not only will you be respected but the salary mirrors the dedication put in to reaching these major milestones.
    "But siirr how will homework mirror our grades?"
    I totally disagree that only homework and extreme "7 hour revision sessions" will result in high grades. There are a number of things that are just as important as homework : sleep , social life , mental and physical health , are all just as important as homework. Do you really think Einstein became the most famous scientist to date with no sleep? Do you really think Elon musk became the richest man alive (2022) with poor physical and mental health? Do you really think Bill gates was able to build Microsoft from the ground on his own? The answer to everyone one of those questions is ... no. Elon Musk recently went on a podcast with Joe Rogan stating not only did he sleep a minimum of 8hours a day but he went to the gym 5 days a week to separate his work life to his outside life. Einstein created his world renowned findings and work with a good nights sleep and daily chats with associates to not overload himself.
    China , india and asia as a whole, with just under 5 billion people ,have more a chance producing a gargantuan number of geniuses not just due to the vast number of people but their ethics . China have recently installed programs for students underachieving causing them not just to do more homework but more 1 to 1 learning with their teachers emphasising how far they are willing to take their education , while students in the Uk and Us are slacking off their homework with no effort . Why slack in a pivotal point of your life . Opening the brown envelope disgustingly disappointed wishing you put in more effort , it isnt worth the despair , depression and dejection.
    Therefore , i believe homework isn't just a "lame task" set by teachers but practice for your future creating nothing but joy and bliss in the long run.

  • @supasayajinsongoku4464
    @supasayajinsongoku4464 ปีที่แล้ว

    what was the piece playing in the backgroud?

  • @proudchristian9873
    @proudchristian9873 ปีที่แล้ว

    what is the layout for a speech?

  • @olivermerritt701
    @olivermerritt701 ปีที่แล้ว

    New camera for Mr Salles?

  • @aliceredfern9390
    @aliceredfern9390 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thanks you mr salles how can i improve my cultural capital quickly?

    • @HighMaintainanceMachine
      @HighMaintainanceMachine ปีที่แล้ว

      I'm not Mr Salles, but I'd recommend watching TedED videos and listening to podcasts about stuff

  • @imisiee
    @imisiee ปีที่แล้ว

    Mr salles how many marks roughly do you need on q5 if we are aiming for a 6?

  • @hanaaa8849
    @hanaaa8849 ปีที่แล้ว

    any predictions?

  • @_altrax
    @_altrax ปีที่แล้ว

    Hi sir, should i consider both views and come to a conclusion? Because that's what I do and I think it works

    • @MrSallesTeachesEnglish
      @MrSallesTeachesEnglish  ปีที่แล้ว

      Sure thing

    • @eggmaster1233
      @eggmaster1233 ปีที่แล้ว +6

      You should never hang on the fence since examiners HATE it. Go extreme on one way or the other way, even if you disagree with the opinion you are portraying in your writing.

    • @Ghost-fh3lg
      @Ghost-fh3lg ปีที่แล้ว

      @@eggmaster1233 me everything English ?

    • @laraspencer7342
      @laraspencer7342 ปีที่แล้ว

      i found the best thing to do is write a paragraph or 2 near the end stating arguments from the other views and disproving them / showing how your arguments are more significant

    • @_altrax
      @_altrax ปีที่แล้ว

      @@laraspencer7342 yeah that makes the most sense it's a balance of Mr Salles and Mreverythingenglish so thanks 👍

  • @kostavlogz3288
    @kostavlogz3288 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thanks g

  • @fazejustice69
    @fazejustice69 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

    hey mr sales I'm a bit slow, are we meant to write a plan like this in the exam? also thank you for the help

    • @Regeor
      @Regeor 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Write a rough draft/ plan on Q5.

  • @James-fz6jr
    @James-fz6jr ปีที่แล้ว

    What type of questions will they ask. Eg like an article

    • @Ehsan4536
      @Ehsan4536 ปีที่แล้ว

      Letter, blog, articles and speech

  • @shaunlobo7134
    @shaunlobo7134 ปีที่แล้ว

    do we know that we are getting persuasive writing

  • @azzykara8559
    @azzykara8559 ปีที่แล้ว

    Party after dark, now we roll, we don't smash now
    Party after dark, cut the lights, this the blackout
    Party after dark, we don't stop 'til we pass out
    Party after dark, welcome to the madhouse

  • @articstudios4226
    @articstudios4226 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Idk if you know but Bill Gates dropped out of high school so I’m not sure you could say he did loads of homework if he wasn’t even at school to receive it

  • @FNCT-q7b
    @FNCT-q7b ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Would i write both for and against in my piece of writing or just mainly focus on one and then maybe one paragraph on the other like mainly focus on for and then one paragraph for against?

  • @andreamcmahon30
    @andreamcmahon30 ปีที่แล้ว

    brilliant

  • @nitricacidd7548
    @nitricacidd7548 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Average Mr Salles W

  • @Pricey0770
    @Pricey0770 ปีที่แล้ว

    Hi sir, do we need to create headline or does it not matter?

  • @N12311
    @N12311 ปีที่แล้ว

    How many marks can I get on paper 2 if I only wrote one paragraph for question 4?

    • @crazyfriend50
      @crazyfriend50 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Depends how good it is lmao
      But ur defo limited to only 12

    • @N12311
      @N12311 ปีที่แล้ว

      I thought it would be like 2 marks

  • @BroSefat06
    @BroSefat06 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I like how most of those famous figures dropped out of higher education

  • @normalthing3229
    @normalthing3229 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    The saddest thing is, this will be the last time I’ll be watching a video from you.. truly a shame

  • @musniazi7003
    @musniazi7003 ปีที่แล้ว

    Hi what order should we do paper 2 language in

  • @spicyvat
    @spicyvat 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

    So in that case if I’m really stuck in the exam, I can say Mr Salles told over 40k people that doing homework is good and it will be able to change the world? 😂😂😂

  • @richardthompson6698
    @richardthompson6698 ปีที่แล้ว

    People who don’t know what a hyena is , has never watched The Lion King.

  • @pigofthefeather1161
    @pigofthefeather1161 ปีที่แล้ว

    🗜️