I kinda wanna know what the Heaven Bar is like, she said that the elevator could go either way depending on what one wanted, probably pretty interesting. either way, interesting story.
This is a good interpretation of hell, and done very tastefully. It did make me feel tense for the main character rather than boredom from most hell interpretation creepypastas.
@@timrosswood4259 The concept of eternal suffering for offending an all-powerful, all-knowing being who knows what you're going to do in advance and permits it to occur is, in a word, idiotic.
It makes me think of Jodi Arias for some reason 😂😂 I don't know why, probably because when that case was on tv all of America was saying that. (If you don't know who she is look her up on here)
bubbels Marin It's not creepy, it's just very interesting and goosebumpy. Because of what Jody said in the end, that he could of take the elevator up just like down. Very deep meaning behind what people think Hell is.
"Every patron in hell gets to enjoy their threats without judgement, after all judgement has already been passed, de exist beyond that now." There is just something i love so much about this
Man this creepypasta really just hits hard, idk how to describe it but i feel like the protagonist being saved from the evil they are facing by the love/kindness of a friend is such a good concept thingy that should be used in more creepypastas.
Easily one of my favorite creepypastas. It's so refreshing to see a creepypasta that isn't about being chased by some monster or a haunted video game or something cliche like that.
Every night, I listened to this Creepypasta with my #1 favorite uncle. He would always stroll into my room just to hear this story several times without fail. Even the famously completed My Property Isn't Normal story made us laugh several times. I still miss him, since he always played video games late at night an hour early into 8:00. By 1:00 or 2:00, he'd be out like a light snoring his ass off. You, Mr. MCP. You introduced a man who saw horror as comedy; to something quite different when it came to a story such as this. His interest in secret bars is what led me to this story. Of course, he didn't dare cross over to that route. But, his curiosity without a doubt... led me to this masterpiece. Bravo to you, MrCreepyPasta. Whenever I go back to this story; I think of him.
Thank you so much. We've got a lot of planning to do but if you follow me on Twitter you can keep up with a more personal side of things. @mrcreepypasta0
I agree ! Very well written and his narration with the appropriate background audio, has me worried about what nightmare I will have tonight because I'm more than sure it's coming ! Lol
Dude, the way you story tell is literally the best. Whomever you marry is SUPER lucky im sure in lots of ways, but the scary bedtime stories are gonna be the best!!!!! ;)
I was reluctant to click this because the thumbnail really really scared me.... But this story. It's amazing. It kinda reminded me of the story of Adam and Eve biting into the fruit of knowledge. Some things were to be left unknown.
What really makes me think is the fact that Jodi said that Kurt could have gone up. She also said in her poem that "pain becomes pleasure, and pleasure becomes death." It makes me think that taking the elevator up takes you to a false heaven fabricated by Din, which slowly takes away your soul bit by bit in return for pleasure... or perhaps that is a natural consequence of meaningless pleasure.
That was really an awesome story! Wonderfully written and of course experty narrated! You really picked a winner this time and please please never stop narrating- you have a gift!
I'm from New Orleans and the scariest thing here is that EVERY detail is right. I can only assume Banning K is either from here or has been here a lot to get the city so right.
This was actually pretty nice. I usually don't really like these overly long, overly elaborated stories, but this one was quite entertaining and kept me interested.
Well, obviously they knew the protagonist was going to escape, because he heard secrets of things that hadn't happened yet, so, with that kind of foresight, are we really sure that they were lies?
This is possibly the best creepypasta I've heard, the voice acting, really did it think, especially when the "secrets" hit him and he knew the things he didn't. The music and the voice made you really feel as if this was happening to you.
Love myself the occasional good ending creepypastas! Fully expected the guy to buy the house and become the new bartender or something stupid like that.
about 3 weeks ago I had such a horrible infection hit my blood system that I hallucinated with just a touch of reality for 5 days it was my private hell I've never ever told a soul about what happened over those five days so needless to say this story really hit home
Only been on a scary story kick for about two months now. Most days I work alone at my construction job and usually listen to 10 hours of scary stories a day. So far this one takes the cake so intriguing and it painted a perfect picture of the situation in my head love the narrator two thumbs up!!!! Anyone have any recommendations to other stories like this??
Hey creeps just a suggestion instead of being the victim or last survivor why not play the monster it would be nice hearing you narrate as a monster or demon for once.
+Senica Allen He's reading stories that are written by other people. He can't read a story from the point of view of the monster/demon/villain/etc. if they aren't written that way.
In the description box you put "from the bowls of hell" and it's "bowels" AND I can't believe it, you said "guess-churred" instead of "jess-chured" for the word "gestured"... Do you do this on purpose to drive those with OCD mad? Lol I LOVE how you read though!
+Princess Celestia Yes, what Alicia said. He mispronounces words from time to time, he and one of my other favorite narrators, "Let's Read!", you should seriously check him out, I'd LOVE a collaboration between the two of them, as they are two Narrators who put a LOT into their work (I love them BOTH for how expressive they are, and how much they put into the sound effects and music, how the stories perfectly go with the music they choose etc.). Don't get me wrong, I LOVE Corpse Husband's voice and acting too and love Lazy Masquerade, URMAKER, Be Busta, and 99% of the narrators! It's simply that these two (him and "Let's Read!") are so stylized and really go the extra mile, as they say.
I thought that when she said "you'll either be in heaven or hell" I thought that meant that like some people will see hell as their heaven cuz kinky people and shiz.
"there was no music playing" as quiet piano music plays in the background
There should have been a piano in there.
When I hear the piano man song I think of a place like this.
The real horror is the fact someone had to get to work by 4-am.
...
Welcome to the medical field
someday you'll have a job too
+Rez I mean the op not you lol
+Gavlick Apthesycerski I do have a job, purely stating that getting up at 4am is never fun.
"They're sharing a drink they call loneliness, but it's better than drinking alone."
Glorious reference lol
+Hope Grimsley Sing us a song, you're the salary man.
Love it
Yes I love Piano Man! 💙
+Hope Grimsley That is so deep and profound.
He managed to get kicked out of hell? That's impressive.
Artyom Sherwin RIGHT!? lol
by breaking da rulz
Harley Quinn 100
So have I
Hitlers the owner
" I don't really remember it but I'll explain it in full detail, from the color of the wall to what everyone was wearing"
Pfft you do that
Ikrr XD
"a grown up who still needed a grown up."
yep, i still need an adultier adult.
Don't we all
+MrCreepyPasta Hi
+Kira ヽ༼ຈل͜ຈ༽ﾉ raise your dongers ヽ༼ຈل͜ຈ༽ﾉ
cocoatreeprincess (,,'_',,)
I need an adult!
Moral: Hell gets cellphone service. Not good service, but service nonetheless.
FUCKING FINALLY!!! a main character who can think fast for once.
Still one of my all time favorites!
Revisiting this gem again 👌🏼
Damn if hell was that intense Heaven must've been THE SHIT boi damn I wish I couldve gone there
I kinda wanna know what the Heaven Bar is like, she said that the elevator could go either way depending on what one wanted, probably pretty interesting. either way, interesting story.
Me too!!! I think I would've asked if I could go to Heaven. Just the thought of going to a bar called Hell doesn't excite me!
They'd probably only serve spring water lol
@@gunhead7159 good spring water
@@koltennguyen9604 From SCP-006, too! (the Astrian Spring, or the Fountain of Youth)
The idea of people willingly going to Hell is pretty creepy, very well done!
I agree
Daikaiju Danielle well just look at people nowadays who bash on religion
Dudley Dingleberry Explain
This is a good interpretation of hell, and done very tastefully. It did make me feel tense for the main character rather than boredom from most hell interpretation creepypastas.
All hell interpretations are boring. The whole concept is an eyeroll.
@@MathewSteeleAtheology L opinion
@@marcovalentini863 k
@@MathewSteeleAtheologyexplain
@@timrosswood4259 The concept of eternal suffering for offending an all-powerful, all-knowing being who knows what you're going to do in advance and permits it to occur is, in a word, idiotic.
It makes you wonder which cell phone service company built a cell phone tower in hell.
AT&T fo' sho'.
+Shedonista Shamanatrix nah man its gotta be verizon
+VAStarGazer211
both have alot of coverage
Veri-Sin.
telia
Fuck, that was good. Probably an instant top 10 for me.
I'm thinking the same thing lol.
It makes me think of Jodi Arias for some reason 😂😂 I don't know why, probably because when that case was on tv all of America was saying that. (If you don't know who she is look her up on here)
Wow. First ever creepypasta to creep me out a little. This is beautiful!
Yeah it gave chills down my spine tbh
***** Exactly. Especially when you do almost everything that the people in the bar did. lol
+Mary Vishnevskaya woah now idk about all that!
+Mary Vishnevskaya you should really find more creepy pastas cause this one isn't even that creepy just saying
bubbels Marin It's not creepy, it's just very interesting and goosebumpy. Because of what Jody said in the end, that he could of take the elevator up just like down. Very deep meaning behind what people think Hell is.
"Every patron in hell gets to enjoy their threats without judgement, after all judgement has already been passed, de exist beyond that now." There is just something i love so much about this
Man this creepypasta really just hits hard, idk how to describe it but i feel like the protagonist being saved from the evil they are facing by the love/kindness of a friend is such a good concept thingy that should be used in more creepypastas.
Easily one of my favorite creepypastas. It's so refreshing to see a creepypasta that isn't about being chased by some monster or a haunted video game or something cliche like that.
Every night, I listened to this Creepypasta with my #1 favorite uncle. He would always stroll into my room just to hear this story several times without fail. Even the famously completed My Property Isn't Normal story made us laugh several times. I still miss him, since he always played video games late at night an hour early into 8:00. By 1:00 or 2:00, he'd be out like a light snoring his ass off. You, Mr. MCP. You introduced a man who saw horror as comedy; to something quite different when it came to a story such as this. His interest in secret bars is what led me to this story. Of course, he didn't dare cross over to that route. But, his curiosity without a doubt... led me to this masterpiece. Bravo to you, MrCreepyPasta. Whenever I go back to this story; I think of him.
congrats on the up and coming wedding. mcp.☺
Thank you so much. We've got a lot of planning to do but if you follow me on Twitter you can keep up with a more personal side of things. @mrcreepypasta0
+MrCreepyPasta Hi
+MrCreepyPasta . i do follow you on twitter and on your gaming channel as well. i wish you both the best of luck for the future.😀
+MrCreepyPasta congrats he or she is a lucky person.
+MissMystery NightShade he
18:21 I'D CHIME IN WITH A "HAVEN'T YOU PEOPLE EVER HEARD OF CLOSING A GOD DAMNED DOOR?"
-I'm so sorry-
By far one of my most favorite creepypastas. Just...amazing.
the tension in this story is the best I've seen in a creepypasta.
I agree ! Very well written and his narration with the appropriate background audio, has me worried about what nightmare I will have tonight because I'm more than sure it's coming ! Lol
I'm definitely proud of the soundtrack for this one. I hope I can continue to write good scores for your stories man :)
I subbed! cant wait for your uploads
+MultiBallz2u I'll try later tonight
What's the name of the song when he was being chased by the bartender
+Evan johson its on my channel man
wait you wrote this? Because if you did damn man this is top 5 creepy pasta
Dude, the way you story tell is literally the best.
Whomever you marry is SUPER lucky im sure in lots of ways, but the scary bedtime stories are gonna be the best!!!!! ;)
Lol
6:56 "I considered this, and decided to leave" story ends there.
"It was full of butts" I giggled like a Japanese 7 year old
A lot of creepy pastas are hit or miss...this one was a grand slam!!! Great story! Please do more like it in the future!
The music at the climax always gets me with the feels.
Shout out to Mike. He's a good friend, more than he'll ever know.
This narrator reads SO well! Lots of inflections in the correct places. I will certainly return!
The way that music crescendos as he's escaping is just _wonderful_
I was reluctant to click this because the thumbnail really really scared me.... But this story. It's amazing. It kinda reminded me of the story of Adam and Eve biting into the fruit of knowledge. Some things were to be left unknown.
Hell has rules isn't that a bit of a buzz kill?
Yeah, I mean, if I'm gonna spend an eternity somewhere, it better be entertaining.
+Castiel Winchester
Well, as we heard in the story, you always get exactly what you came for in hell...
Rule 1. No ac in hell
Rule 2. Eternal burning
Rule 3. You can't leave and suffer for all eternity
Hell always had rules
What really makes me think is the fact that Jodi said that Kurt could have gone up. She also said in her poem that "pain becomes pleasure, and pleasure becomes death."
It makes me think that taking the elevator up takes you to a false heaven fabricated by Din, which slowly takes away your soul bit by bit in return for pleasure... or perhaps that is a natural consequence of meaningless pleasure.
scared straight: ultimate edition
That was really an awesome story! Wonderfully written and of course experty narrated! You really picked a winner this time and please please never stop narrating- you have a gift!
"The second coming of lestat." Lol
I'm from New Orleans and the scariest thing here is that EVERY detail is right. I can only assume Banning K is either from here or has been here a lot to get the city so right.
HOW do you get a cell connection in hell? i cant even get one in the subway
wikikomoto maybe the subway is a deeper version of hell XD
Heck, I cant even get one in class-
Mr creepypasta been talking me to sleep for 10 years now, much love man
they don’t write them like these anymore 😭
This just definitely landed on my top 5 favorite creepy pastas! Great narration and very creative!
Ecclesiastes 1:18
"For with much wisdom comes much sorrow;
the more knowledge, the more grief".
The background image during the video is literally an epileptic trigger lol
This was so refreshing. It's nice to have a creepypasta about something other then a monster a killer.
This was actually pretty nice. I usually don't really like these overly long, overly elaborated stories, but this one was quite entertaining and kept me interested.
Will their be a Krampus pasta this Christmas? *Crosses Fingers*
+Tickles McGee yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep
***** YES! After I saw the new movie I rushed home and re listened to your old ones, so I'm really excited for this!
+Tickles McGee is the krampus move any good?
T Jones Dude. It Is AMAZING! If you love Krampus, you'll fucking love it.
+Charlie Willis It's really good. Lil cheesy at times but still pretty good
Seriously one of my favorite stories. So happy to see a reading done by you!
I've heard many many many creepypastas; this is still one of the best ones I've ever heard. Probably my second favorite of all time.
What's the first?
My all-time favorite creepypasta and my all-time favorite narration.
See kids cigarettes are bad mmmkay.
You'll go to hell if you smoke cigarettes!
Thou shall not smoke cigarettes.
26:02 Wow, good coverage! Wonder who his carrier was.
A realistic view on hell, i'm honestly impressed.
This one is on my playlist/favorites. The music, graphics, and the narration are perfection! Thank you, MCP.
i hope somebody makes another 1 where the guy chooses heaven instead of hell im curious what his heaven would be like😇
darion Johnson some people consider hell heaven cause some people are so fucked up they view it that way
darion Johnson quite honestly that would be very interesting
One of the best Creepypastas I've ever heard, read and narrated by one of the best people I've ever heard, this is excellently done.
Getting Death Parade flashbacks here.
Oh my god yes
+C Ziggy Death Parade was so awesome. * _ *
***** indeed it was.
+C Ziggy IKR??
Same.
Outstanding! One of the best I believe in my humble opinion.
There's cellular connection in Hell?
Sweet
Well... Now I know when I get to hell I can tweet this
@@zura303 if only we knew Twitter was hell
This is the best creepypasta and best commentated creepypasta I've heard in a while great job
Well, obviously they knew the protagonist was going to escape, because he heard secrets of things that hadn't happened yet, so, with that kind of foresight, are we really sure that they were lies?
Are we really sure that they were truths either though?
This is possibly the best creepypasta I've heard, the voice acting, really did it think, especially when the "secrets" hit him and he knew the things he didn't. The music and the voice made you really feel as if this was happening to you.
Love myself the occasional good ending creepypastas! Fully expected the guy to buy the house and become the new bartender or something stupid like that.
"This is your chance to back out" repeatedly. and this dude be like "Good show~ Good show~"
I had three bowls of hell for breakfast this morning.
the graphics n music really add to the tale.
about 3 weeks ago I had such a horrible infection hit my blood system that I hallucinated with just a touch of reality for 5 days it was my private hell I've never ever told a soul about what happened over those five days so needless to say this story really hit home
Blood infections are never pleasant... D:
Great story and incredible narration
This is a great one
Holy shit; this was the best pasta I've heard in a /long/ time. Whatever song you used once Kurt was escaping the bar was perfect.
Fantastic story and reading
Only been on a scary story kick for about two months now. Most days I work alone at my construction job and usually listen to 10 hours of scary stories a day.
So far this one takes the cake so intriguing and it painted a perfect picture of the situation in my head love the narrator two thumbs up!!!!
Anyone have any recommendations to other stories like this??
This would be great to see a film.
I agree!
One of the best Stories!!
Does anyone else imagine the bartender as the one from Catherine?
This is my favorite story he's ever done
Hey creeps just a suggestion instead of being the victim or last survivor why not play the monster it would be nice hearing you narrate as a monster or demon for once.
The world needs more anti hero creppypastas
Well he does not write these. But you could write one and send it to him if you want
That would be awesome! I'm sure there are some good ones out there!
+Senica Allen He's reading stories that are written by other people. He can't read a story from the point of view of the monster/demon/villain/etc. if they aren't written that way.
I live in potawotami!!
love the background piano music along with this great creepy pasta story
Is this based off of the 7 deadly sins? It all adds up.
16:06
"Yes, they're sharing a drink they call 'loneliness.. But it's better than drinking alone!"
I want an anime adaptation
Kudos for this story!!!!!! BRAVO BRAVO!!!!
"There was a house. In New Orleans
They called the rising sun
And its been the ruin of many poor boys"
Sounds like he found the house
that was in sin city.
The best narrator and creepypasta together makes the best creepypasta ever told 💯
man if only this guy wasnt a hipster that thought he was going to get laid.
And this is why I stick to the pubs. Especially O'Mailey's Irish Pub! Great narration of an interesting tale! Keep it up good sir!
What's the name of the song when he is being chased by the bartender?
It doesn't have a name yet. I wrote all the music for this story custom. I'll upload the different parts to my channel when I have the time.
codbarley Oh you made it? Capital work mate! Let me know when it's up!
+Im Tabe I will :)
+codbarley that's awesome! It sounds really good!
+Im Tabe The video is up on my channel. I made a playlist for all the music in this video.
You and Dr. Creepen man, I just can't find any other narrators I can keep going back to.
Welp... I just shit myself. 11/10
+Helo am donald pls suscrib it wasn't even that creepy
No, but it was intense.
+bubbels Marin well that's your opinion
yeah it is my opinion, you don't really have to state the obvious, i was just saying, dont be so worked up about it
Great narration of these stories. Keep it up. I subscribed today
Yay, I'm not too late.
This is one of my favorite creepypastas I've ever heard. Also you're an amazing voice actor
In the description box you put "from the bowls of hell" and it's "bowels" AND I can't believe it, you said "guess-churred" instead of "jess-chured" for the word "gestured"... Do you do this on purpose to drive those with OCD mad? Lol I LOVE how you read though!
+Princess Celestia what if twilight sparkle ended up in the secret bar?
+Princess Celestia But Spike's not British.
+Princess Celestia Yes, what Alicia said. He mispronounces words from time to time, he and one of my other favorite narrators, "Let's Read!", you should seriously check him out, I'd LOVE a collaboration between the two of them, as they are two Narrators who put a LOT into their work (I love them BOTH for how expressive they are, and how much they put into the sound effects and music, how the stories perfectly go with the music they choose etc.). Don't get me wrong, I LOVE Corpse Husband's voice and acting too and love Lazy Masquerade, URMAKER, Be Busta, and 99% of the narrators!
It's simply that these two (him and "Let's Read!") are so stylized and really go the extra mile, as they say.
+Shedonista Shamanatrix I recently found let's read omg he's amazing...
+Jason Garcia YES! He is THE BEST, IMO. I'd like to see him have a million followers.
You've outdone yourself with this one. Bravo MCP.
27:25 music??
Now here's a good story love it great work
I thought that when she said "you'll either be in heaven or hell" I thought that meant that like some people will see hell as their heaven cuz kinky people and shiz.
Amazing as always, and kudos to the author. Also, congrats Mr. Creepypasta!