Paper 1 Question 5: Two Grade 9 Answers

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  • @idrk1507
    @idrk1507 3 ปีที่แล้ว +632

    You + Mr Salles + Mr Bruff = Perfection

    • @MI-lo2hj
      @MI-lo2hj 3 ปีที่แล้ว +64

      = lots of time spent on yt

    • @idrk1507
      @idrk1507 3 ปีที่แล้ว +28

      @@MI-lo2hj
      Oops I just saw your comment while procrastinating. This is a sign lol

    • @bharanikumaravel6100
      @bharanikumaravel6100 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Yes

    • @knj4lpsj4l83
      @knj4lpsj4l83 2 ปีที่แล้ว +58

      Ngl Mr bruff just waffles in my view

    • @shaaravguha3760
      @shaaravguha3760 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@knj4lpsj4l83 True

  • @WhosParx
    @WhosParx 2 ปีที่แล้ว +156

    If anyone thinks they might need this:
    25 Language Devices: Defined & Explained!
    1. Pathetic Fallacy
    Is when the weather or the atmosphere describes the mood.
    For example, when the weather is rainy people are sad and depressed
    2nd example, the dark night could symbolise something supernatural like 3AM Satan etc…
    2. Personification
    Is when a non-human is given human qualities.
    For example, the tree is waving to John as drives away.
    3. Simile
    When you are comparing two things using ‘like’ or ‘as’
    For example, his facial vision looked like a falcon’s eye
    4. Metaphor
    Is when you are comparing two things with is or are
    Example He is an orc
    5. Extended Metaphor
    Pick a metaphor and explain how --- > turn in to an extended metaphor
    Metaphor --- > Life is a rollercoaster. Now turning into extended metaphor add explanation so, Life is a rollercoaster you don’t know when you will be at the top or at the bottom, it will all happen in an instance, at the greatest heights you will be at the greatest heights and at times it will crash, but every day is never the same, just like in a turn in a Rolle coaster is never the same.
    6. Oxymoron
    2 opposite words side-by-side
    Example, the small giant
    7. Juxtaposition
    You explain an oxymoron.
    The small giant tip-toing trying to reach the top shelf, however, his small arms and puny fingers prevented him from grabbing the bar of jam.
    8. Symbolism
    Is when objects represent a meaning.
    For example, moon and the star represent Islam.
    2nd Example, if you get a priest you will think someone died.
    In Macbeth the dagger links to death.
    9. Semantic field
    Is where words are linked to an idea.
    For example, PPE, 2m and Hand Sanitiser, Head of Year link to COVID.
    10. Irony
    Is when events in the text surprises the characters. Something not expected!
    Mr Birling offering a 1000.
    Scrooge changing his nature.
    11. Rhetorical Question
    Question does not require an answer
    12. Hyperbole
    Is when you hype, when over-exaggerating.
    I am going to eat the whole restaurant.
    13. Assonance
    Is the repetition of the vowel sound.
    I am too cool for school. Oooooo
    14. Alliteration
    Words in a row begin with the same letter.
    15. Sibilance
    Is when words in a row have the s letter or the s sound
    Example: the snake was slowly hissing
    16. Euphemism
    Is when you say something in an indirect manner.
    He is not with us anymore.
    17. Emotive Language
    Is when the writer makes the reader feel emotional. By making them angry.
    18. Onomatopoeia
    Words describe the sound
    Boom bang skirr pop
    19. Ruel of 3 / Power of 3 / Triplets
    Words or phrases in a row describe something (3)
    The table is black, hard and wide
    20. Facts/ Stats
    Uses evidence to support their facts.
    50 % of the students prefer using email rather than social media .
    21. Plosive
    Reptation of harsh sound
    Words such as 'P' 'D' 'B'
    22. Zoomorphism
    Is when you give a person animal features.
    Example John barked at me / John shouted at me.
    23. Opinion
    24. Repetition
    Language Device and Structure.
    Is when the writer uses the words repletely to create an effect.
    Where is being repeated and why is that important
    25. Noun, Verbs, Adjectives, Adverbs
    Structure
    Flashback - when you go back in time ,3 days ago etc..
    Foreshadowing - when the writer gives clue about future ‘my heart was beating fast’
    Zoom in - focus on one thing for example ‘pen’ , ‘specific character ‘
    Zoom out - normally used to talk about setting
    Dialogue - when the character speak ‘hey there !’
    New character
    New setting
    Change in tone
    Short sentence - to build up tense
    Long sentence - add details and slow down the narrative
    Short /long sentence - may show importance in both
    Shift in focus - talks about object then talks about another object for example ‘pen’ to ‘table’
    Cyclical structure - similar stuff happening with beginning and ending
    Juxtaposition
    Extended metaphor
    Pace
    List
    Pov
    Overall tone
    Chronogical order
    Climax
    Repetition
    Links
    Mood , pathetic fallacy

    • @Apex-pred
      @Apex-pred 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Thanksssss

    • @willpendleton1552
      @willpendleton1552 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Legend

    • @Apex-pred
      @Apex-pred 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Bro thank you sooo much me and my friend were revising techniques of this
      Thanks brooooooooooo
      It helped loadsss

    • @Greenbeanscreens
      @Greenbeanscreens 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Thank you so much

    • @milkinthebag5087
      @milkinthebag5087 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      You beautiful human being thanks

  • @sch00lg1rl9
    @sch00lg1rl9 3 ปีที่แล้ว +129

    Last school year, (couple months ago) I did this question and got 32/40. In the overall Language paper 1 - I got a 9 and I forfeited question 3 to get full marks for 4 aswell! Hopefully this time, I do a little bit better.

    • @user-ih8vk7cs5k
      @user-ih8vk7cs5k 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      any tips on doing a question 4?

    • @Nicolee02x
      @Nicolee02x 2 ปีที่แล้ว +9

      @@user-ih8vk7cs5k totally got ignored lol don’t take it to heart

    • @daddlolll1520
      @daddlolll1520 2 ปีที่แล้ว +8

      @@user-ih8vk7cs5k use a lot of evaluative language as you cannot get into the top level without it. use analysis and use innovative ideas to wow the examiner + good inferences. you should be aiming for 3 paras and a conclusion but you should do more if you can

    • @OrangeDude7
      @OrangeDude7 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@daddlolll1520 can you give an example of evaluated language

    • @daddlolll1520
      @daddlolll1520 2 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      @@OrangeDude7 more,less successfully etc language which is critical and weighs opinion

  • @davidaptus9505
    @davidaptus9505 2 ปีที่แล้ว +13

    youve actually helped me so much i wish you could be my actual teacher in class

  • @elizabethmarvelfan9033
    @elizabethmarvelfan9033 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +15

    I've failed all my exams so far and I feel so dumb as my friends have smashed them so im praying this is a good exam. Anyone else doing it in 2024 good luck

    • @AksaHidosh
      @AksaHidosh 7 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      😭Yeah, physics was the worst

    • @ttcguy4681
      @ttcguy4681 7 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Peak for you damn near in the same position as u

  • @grub2369
    @grub2369 3 ปีที่แล้ว +24

    Bro, the second example is literally the lorax.

    • @isa_ig1
      @isa_ig1 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      😂😂😂😂🤣🤣

  • @raze6919
    @raze6919 3 ปีที่แล้ว +93

    My exams is today, thanks. You just saved my grades

    • @keegandesouza627
      @keegandesouza627 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @Rhahaze What did u choose on the paper 1 question 5

    • @raze6919
      @raze6919 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@keegandesouza627 the descriptive, it wasn't my best work to be honest

    • @keegandesouza627
      @keegandesouza627 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@raze6919 what did u describe

    • @mahirazim3027
      @mahirazim3027 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Raze how did you do?

    • @raze6919
      @raze6919 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@mahirazim3027 7 in eng lang, 7 in eng lit. Fr, this video was so useful. i had no teaching for eng lang and a 3 in eng lit in dec.

  • @salmakadous8204
    @salmakadous8204 2 ปีที่แล้ว +18

    Watching this before my mocks! Thank you so much for your great help.

  • @milkinthebag5087
    @milkinthebag5087 2 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Got the resit tomorrow. Good luck to me and others doing ittt

  • @M7RAA
    @M7RAA 3 ปีที่แล้ว +24

    Sir, can you please do this for paper 2 question 5. I have the final exam on Monday, and this kind of video will be really useful. Thank you

    • @tabinkhan9559
      @tabinkhan9559 3 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      Yeah he did that check in sir channel in paper 2 quetion5 study in playlist I give you link

    • @rohan_n23
      @rohan_n23 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      He is already done the video

  • @iconichoe4432
    @iconichoe4432 2 ปีที่แล้ว +13

    the second one sounds like the Lorax lol

  • @dhxlzz_
    @dhxlzz_ 11 หลายเดือนก่อน +6

    Quality > Quantity

  • @strangetraveller7399
    @strangetraveller7399 3 ปีที่แล้ว +15

    Sir i dont know why but you sound completely shattered today lol

  • @tabinkhan9559
    @tabinkhan9559 3 ปีที่แล้ว +11

    Sir please do a video on how to plan a article plot for paper 2 question 5 best way to get a grade 9 please that will be beneficial 🙂🙏🙏👍

  • @promilarani1238
    @promilarani1238 3 ปีที่แล้ว +20

    Love your content thank you 🙏🏽

  • @muhammadibrahimuddin7681
    @muhammadibrahimuddin7681 3 ปีที่แล้ว +17

    can u do PRTEZEL pgraph for lang and lit example
    ive tried it sometimes it gets repetitive but overall WAY better than the PETAL format i used b4
    thnx

    • @leya3333
      @leya3333 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      what does that stand for ?

    • @muhammadibrahimuddin7681
      @muhammadibrahimuddin7681 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@leya3333
      Point Evidence Technique Analysis Link

    • @leya3333
      @leya3333 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      @@muhammadibrahimuddin7681 no I’m talking about the prtezel paragraph.

    • @muhammadibrahimuddin7681
      @muhammadibrahimuddin7681 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      @@leya3333 oh didnt u see video
      Point
      Reference (Quoute)
      Technique- eg simile
      Explain effect
      Zoom - eg the verb 'stepped'
      Explain effect
      Link
      th-cam.com/video/YSnp2q4kGxY/w-d-xo.html

    • @songokukakarot6247
      @songokukakarot6247 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      @@leya3333 point, reference, technique, effect, zoom in, effect, link

  • @theomorah5660
    @theomorah5660 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    Second dude copied the lorax😂😂

  • @staldani
    @staldani 3 ปีที่แล้ว +13

    Is there anything stopping us from copying this? Is AQA really going to try and find out if we did?

    • @alexxskrak7011
      @alexxskrak7011 3 ปีที่แล้ว +8

      no, you can just say it was for revision, but doubt you will get question based on these answer

    • @hamzabhatti6276
      @hamzabhatti6276 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      i got caught from AQA saying i copied a answer
      so jus change a bit of it

    • @sanahk4316
      @sanahk4316 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@hamzabhatti6276 really

    • @hamzabhatti6276
      @hamzabhatti6276 3 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      @@sanahk4316 yh so dont copy all, change a bit of it cos if ur teacherI is clever enough they will find out and snitch to AQA, then u will get a grade 0

    • @idrk1507
      @idrk1507 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @trix o
      Hey, I have a question
      Ok so, I made a story (myself). I then sent it to a competition in my city and ended up winning. That story is now on an anthology somewhere bah blah blah.
      Can I use that piece of writing, which I made myself, on the exam?

  • @rohan_n23
    @rohan_n23 3 ปีที่แล้ว +16

    come on!!!!!
    sir can you make a video on how to write a letter, newspaper and a blog for specifically paper 2 question 5. please?

    • @M7RAA
      @M7RAA 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      yes i would want this too

    • @M7RAA
      @M7RAA 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      also, hi rohan.

    • @rohan_n23
      @rohan_n23 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@M7RAA hi mate

  • @SharuWrld
    @SharuWrld 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Can you please release a paper 2 English. I have a test for tomorrow. Please. Your sick at these. I smashed paper 1 because of you.

  • @cdmpd1162
    @cdmpd1162 3 ปีที่แล้ว +13

    My teacher told me its easier doing descriptive writing instead of story writing is that true?

    • @dalia7988
      @dalia7988 3 ปีที่แล้ว +8

      yes because you don’t need to worry about the ending of the story or making an interesting plot

  • @istiaqabdullah8498
    @istiaqabdullah8498 2 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Can you please do a video on the story of the priest?

  • @AQReaction
    @AQReaction 3 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    Can you do a revision about year 11 Romeo and Juliet about conflict

  • @raisingh4916
    @raisingh4916 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Hi , can you please make a video on Unseen Poetry or Question 4 paper 1

  • @0s7t3
    @0s7t3 3 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    Hey guys my imagination is not great and im so bad at coming up with any thing my mind just goes blank when im presented with the image is there anything i can do from now to improve my creativeness..

  • @ilikethis5619
    @ilikethis5619 3 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    thank you so much. my exam is tomorrow :)

    • @rajansinghbhamra9445
      @rajansinghbhamra9445 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      same lol

    • @nyson2057
      @nyson2057 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      same

    • @ilikethis5619
      @ilikethis5619 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@rajansinghbhamra9445 good luckkk :))

    • @ilikethis5619
      @ilikethis5619 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@nyson2057 wow ok you too good luck 🤞

    • @nyson2057
      @nyson2057 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@ilikethis5619 Good luckkk 👍

  • @UPI-rk7sn
    @UPI-rk7sn 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Does the short paragraph have to be 1 word or couple of words

    • @lsy9362
      @lsy9362 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Short paragraphs are 1 sentence long or could be less. It can be 2-3 sentences as well but in most cases it is an one line paragraph

  • @Glowdits
    @Glowdits ปีที่แล้ว +6

    Those two model answers i would grade a grade 5 never ever 9. they are both nonsense!

    • @katanaking7660
      @katanaking7660 7 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Yeah honestly don't believe either of these are close to a 9

  • @tabinkhan9559
    @tabinkhan9559 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Thank sir

  • @bigmemerlol_1012
    @bigmemerlol_1012 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    can someone help me i need to do a good paragraph for inside a house the only thing i've thinked of is when i went to my house i saw the scarlet red and oranges flames warming my whole body and house up

  • @532s
    @532s ปีที่แล้ว +2

    whats the actual question asked for the first answer?

  • @tabinkhan9559
    @tabinkhan9559 3 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    Sir please do a video on paper 2 question 5 planning for question article for a grade 9 that will be useful and beneficial for me 🙂 because I got this on my mock please 🙂🙏🙏👍👏👏

  • @lustforlife247
    @lustforlife247 2 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    Who the hell is going to able to write all this

  • @Ishowclips76
    @Ishowclips76 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Thanks bro

  • @J67-h8g
    @J67-h8g 3 ปีที่แล้ว +13

    My exam is on Monday. This’ll be pointless then. Can you upload this today pls.

  • @marwahazam2703
    @marwahazam2703 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    thank u!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • @j.e.s.m9941
    @j.e.s.m9941 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    The second story sounds like the lorax

  • @charlotteclarke2301
    @charlotteclarke2301 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    can someone explain how the second answer is based on abandonment?

    • @jzinfo3173
      @jzinfo3173 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Abandoned nature , and natural beauty

  • @bradparker2285
    @bradparker2285 3 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    Sir, can you do the same example for description please

  • @thanansayanbalachandran6081
    @thanansayanbalachandran6081 ปีที่แล้ว

    so lets begin guy *starts intro Mr EE: oh hell nah I ruined it there isn't 1 guy I am not popular *cries edit: suppose to say guys lol🤣

  • @esther8436
    @esther8436 3 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    Jesus loves everyone reading this, God bless you in your tests!

    • @alinalilka8430
      @alinalilka8430 3 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      May Jesus pbuh bless us all 💕😊

  • @GOATOFMEMEMES
    @GOATOFMEMEMES 11 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Ws in the chat

  • @jackthelad9258
    @jackthelad9258 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    These are mine no one take :)

  • @lavender_milk312
    @lavender_milk312 ปีที่แล้ว

    I know this is silly but can I swear in my question 5 essay for vocabulary

  • @faster7723
    @faster7723 3 ปีที่แล้ว +74

    You can’t imagine how much you helped me !!!
    🤍 thank you so much Jazakallah kher

  • @fardinrahman6621
    @fardinrahman6621 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    I used the first one in my test and I only got 29/40. How come?

    • @hectorsalamanca9948
      @hectorsalamanca9948 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      L

    • @hassansyed696
      @hassansyed696 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Because you messed up somehow lmao

    • @Yuri-gu5ml
      @Yuri-gu5ml 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      75% not that deep ngl but you probably did something wrong or left stuff out

  • @lolasimpson-tg3ig
    @lolasimpson-tg3ig ปีที่แล้ว +1

    what an awful story.