If you have criticism, suggestions, ideas or inspiration. Let me know because all your criticism or suggestions are useful for speeding up or improving this level Edit : I really need ideas or inspiration for the block design, so if you have an idea for the block design, let me know :D
On level two (the space one) make background like some stars or nebula like that, hope you like my idea❤ Edit1:another idea to level two again, make the black hole getting closer and closer and closer to us, and change the pipe into portal (optional) so we can run from black hole before getting sucked in
A few more effects and this will definitely get rated! Maybe a glitch effect here? 2:13 Also, if you’re taking any inspiration from any levels, copy them and look at how they make it styled and try to copy that if you can.
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At 3:06 the player gets lifted by a waterfall or geyser or something like that and I think that instead of just using blocks as collision on the water you should use a strong force block. It would make it feel more like water. Also please improve the cuts in the song a bit it would really make it better. Other than that… GREAT LEVEL!
At first I thought you did absolutely nothing for the past months, then I looked further in the vid, and it actually looks featured or even epic rateable!
Amazing level! I just think you should make the f blocks completely indicated and I personally think you should get rid of the spam orbs but still good level!
I LOVE the decorations, gameplay, and ideas but there is just few things that will improve the gameplay or the overall style. You can add a low detail mode for bad divices in all cases and the end and the end screen... I don't have to explain why but you can replace it with the title. But uhhh... Very ℂ𝕆𝕆𝕃
I rarely appreciate Robtop styled levels, but I love this one so far, you are so good at replicating Rob's style (this really looks like an official level) and it looks as cool and fun as Dash, so I can't wait to see this banger drop !
Yeah, this level’s definitely gonna be rated when it’s done but I do have to say the grey castle with the static camera section can give a bit more indication of where you’re gonna go next since you don’t know whether you’re gonna come back from the right or left
2:50 I love that part the effect of the cube paralyzed and the Inverted colors, the camera effects, the synchronization...It's really good!!! Question, will you upload it?. when it will be?. keep it up this level looks very epic😎 2:35
Looks great so far Only suggestions that I have is at 1:30 in the "Press Start" section, I would probably make the camera zoom less and make the shaders effect less intense.
As a person trying to pretending to be gd cologne, and really like coin design, i'll talk about the coins. 0:55 coin: It feels like a repeat of Dash's final coin. It feels unoriginal and uninteresting. It has zero unique concept or difficulty. 1:58 coin: There's only 2 coins you need to go out of your way to get, the other 8 you can't not get. It's not really good for a coin. If the coins are all out of the main path, it would be a nice coin. It has a fun concept, sadly the difficulty is lacking. Concept: a coin at 1:14 would be much better and fun as a spam coin. Really good level though, you're much more talented in level design than i could ever be. Just maybe hope i can help abit in a place i'm decent in, aka coins.
Tbh this level is more better than mee8 (yeah, maybe...?) because its dynamic, it has more greater ideas, and most of all the level is always changing, not always the same plain and background
I think the "dash structures" with the fireballs and conections in the first swing would look better if they were more red-pink, but maybe is just the lack of lighting becouse is just a preview XD.
Zoan, I'm doing a level too and it's called Space, so I saw your video of the Space part of Critical hit and then I did TIP: something yellow something incredible:
Yo I know I’ve commented 3 times already but i am not a very bad creator and I’m trying to get some attention and I think (it’s fine if no) maybe helping with a part or 2 would help me
Yooo i can follow you on gd what is your name? Btw this is soooooooooo cool i can only do 1.0 style levels also underrated gd creator this level should be rated
0:01 I dont like the block choice for the blue brick rising from the water 0:26 maybe the blocks could have a little bit more red 0:38 outstanding!! 0:53 also extremely good To lazy to comment on everything but holy hell alot of this looks really nice, i feel like 85% of the level is done
good level, it deserves rate AND feature. probably not gonna be demon and that is good because of slow demon rating system cool, keep it up, i think i need to play it before thinking about gameplay. and also YES HE CHANGED TEXT, now we havent got moment draw!
def getting rated maybe the next mythic level 😏 also I really like how the lava bursts out of the pipe at 0:27 and lastly why does the audio glitch at 2:05 and 2:40? sorry but ALSO thanks for taking my feedback and changing it to bonus round 😊 3:04
0:14 maybe if you know how, then you could make the vertical GP look like a cave or something like that. Also this already looks amazing, you're great at your job ❤
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If you have criticism, suggestions, ideas or inspiration. Let me know because all your criticism or suggestions are useful for speeding up or improving this level
Edit : I really need ideas or inspiration for the block design, so if you have an idea for the block design, let me know :D
How about Dash block design
@@GDVastastic Interesting
Make a intro and a custom death animation
On level two (the space one) make background like some stars or nebula like that, hope you like my idea❤
Edit1:another idea to level two again, make the black hole getting closer and closer and closer to us, and change the pipe into portal (optional) so we can run from black hole before getting sucked in
I'll do the end screen animation
1:38 FIRE IN THE HOLE banner
Thanks for the likes :)
Why do these words soud fire!
The word: Jæj Jæaj a a jaæj Jæj Jæaj a a jaæj jææeæaæaeaj
1:43
this creator is actually underrated. the level should be rated as well
some part's are still layout, i think it werent done yet
@@imaguyyesmale of course it's not finished yet
Yes, he Is incredible
Is this Critical Hit or Press Start?
@@michaelgray3205 Critical Hit
So far so good, i got impressed on the space theme!❤
Love it
Im just MAKING DASH Hit (Dash + DASH LIGHTSPARK46 + Critical Hit+ DASH Destroyer + Dasher + Fallen Ruins FE2 VER + Press Start = Dash Hit)
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ITS ANDREXEL OMG
yoo :D
Andrexel
this level looks epic already! cant wait when its finished
This is genuienly amazing, some people have called me underrated, but i think you deserve that title more! >:3
Hi! May I deco a "little" part of this level? Also very good level and deco! 😊
Holy crap this is a masterpiece 😍 one recommendation is to add many more pulses, because it can bring even more energy to the level
Congrats on 500!!!
A few more effects and this will definitely get rated!
Maybe a glitch effect here? 2:13
Also, if you’re taking any inspiration from any levels, copy them and look at how they make it styled and try to copy that if you can.
Im so excited i love this lvl already 🎉
On the blue pixel decoration at 0:01 you should add some white highlights to it. They can be found next to the blocks in the pixel tab
Yo this is really great level :)
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Looks cool!!
What?! Mee8?!
At 3:06 the player gets lifted by a waterfall or geyser or something like that and I think that instead of just using blocks as collision on the water you should use a strong force block. It would make it feel more like water. Also please improve the cuts in the song a bit it would really make it better. Other than that… GREAT LEVEL!
I feel like using force blocks would be inconsistent
@@Fmahfs yeah maybe but you could make some kind of illusion of a force block with eased movement on the player or something like that.
Maybe use a few slope blocks to make it feels like it's flipping and turning?
03:15
Tips = Use Gradient For A Background :)
This ones gonna be lit when its finished🔥🔥
Can't wait to play it!
More deco pls?
Actually 2:50 this might be my favorite part!
At first I thought you did absolutely nothing for the past months, then I looked further in the vid, and it actually looks featured or even epic rateable!
There really should be other transitions than just pipes. But everything else is fine besides that bug near the end lol. Great level
congrats, also THAT LOOKS SO COOL WOAHH
Amazing level! I just think you should make the f blocks completely indicated and I personally think you should get rid of the spam orbs but still good level!
00:27 amazing spot on
I LOVE the decorations, gameplay, and ideas but there is just few things that will improve the gameplay or the overall style. You can add a low detail mode for bad divices in all cases and the end and the end screen... I don't have to explain why but you can replace it with the title. But uhhh... Very ℂ𝕆𝕆𝕃
Sick! Could maybe even get a rate when fully decorated :0
Edit: forget what I said, this deserves epic.
I have an idea, when the camera zooms in too fast, you should make it radial blur so it would make it cooler!
WOW,the deco is so good :D
ZoanBeta, I can help with the project, I'm good at decorating but I'm bad at gameplay😁
only criticism: make the skull sync to the music better, and add a little more air deco at the beginning cube
may I have a decoration idea? if its possible to do mdk visualizer style that'll be cool
I really love it ! ❤
It would be a good idea to make a video explaining how to make deco in this style I will be thankful to you ❤❤❤❤❤ thx
You should add explorer boss after critical hit
It will be awesome 😊
I rarely appreciate Robtop styled levels, but I love this one so far, you are so good at replicating Rob's style (this really looks like an official level) and it looks as cool and fun as Dash, so I can't wait to see this banger drop !
It looks fire, the block texture is cool. Can you add more deco?
2:01 the button feels a bit off
That will be a daily level when it's finished so cool btw
CONGRATS KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK
Also you don’t have to but it would be nice if you could give me some tips for the editor
This looks fire so far keep up the good work
Yeah, this level’s definitely gonna be rated when it’s done but I do have to say the grey castle with the static camera section can give a bit more indication of where you’re gonna go next since you don’t know whether you’re gonna come back from the right or left
HOW DID YOU MANAGE TO SNEAK IN RAINBOW BLOCKS IN 1:58
2:50 I love that part the effect of the cube paralyzed and the Inverted colors, the camera effects, the synchronization...It's really good!!! Question, will you upload it?. when it will be?.
keep it up this level looks very epic😎 2:35
This looks so good :D keep up the good work my man
Looks great so far
Only suggestions that I have is at 1:30 in the "Press Start" section, I would probably make the camera zoom less and make the shaders effect less intense.
As a person trying to pretending to be gd cologne, and really like coin design, i'll talk about the coins.
0:55 coin: It feels like a repeat of Dash's final coin. It feels unoriginal and uninteresting. It has zero unique concept or difficulty.
1:58 coin: There's only 2 coins you need to go out of your way to get, the other 8 you can't not get. It's not really good for a coin. If the coins are all out of the main path, it would be a nice coin. It has a fun concept, sadly the difficulty is lacking.
Concept: a coin at 1:14 would be much better and fun as a spam coin.
Really good level though, you're much more talented in level design than i could ever be. Just maybe hope i can help abit in a place i'm decent in, aka coins.
Tbh this level is more better than mee8 (yeah, maybe...?) because its dynamic, it has more greater ideas, and most of all the level is always changing, not always the same plain and background
ZOAN YOU'RE REACHING 1000 SUBSCRIBERS
I’m the 690th subscriber…
I dont know what I should feel, bad or good 😵💫
Good
I think the "dash structures" with the fireballs and conections in the first swing would look better if they were more red-pink, but maybe is just the lack of lighting becouse is just a preview XD.
This looks amazing good job
Zoan, I'm doing a level too and it's called Space, so I saw your video of the Space part of Critical hit and then I did
TIP: something yellow something incredible:
DUDE THIS IS SO GOOD ESPECIALLY THE BLACK HOLE PART THIS DEFINITELY DESERVES EPIC WHEN ITS RELEASED LOVE IT KEEP GOING
The level and gameplay is great but I think you should work on the music sinking specifically
The cut outs of the song
Yo I know I’ve commented 3 times already but i am not a very bad creator and I’m trying to get some attention and I think (it’s fine if no) maybe helping with a part or 2 would help me
1:28 You have cool shader pulses in this part, I guess it will be cool to make press start twist deco after every pulse, sooo... What do you think?
2:22 this part looks a bit bland, maybe polish it
I dont know if you finished decoarting but there are some plain blocks in the level you might wanna decorate :)
Custom background could come in handy
looks like a demon. I LOVE THIS!!!
Amazing
NVM it looks nice other than just being a little static
[The start]Wont be rated with how empty the deco is rn and with how static the colors are
Yooo i can follow you on gd what is your name? Btw this is soooooooooo cool i can only do 1.0 style levels also underrated gd creator this level should be rated
Very cool level love the design it definitely looks better than my critical hit level.
OMG THIS IS INCREDIBLE BROTHER KEEP LIKE THIS!!!!!🎉
This is some of the best gameplay I’ve ever seen. I really want to be a part of this, it would be an honor.
This shouldn't be allowed for how amazing this will be to plaay you did a good job zoan
pretty sure this is inspired by Critical Hit by Mee8
Idea: add the skull in the background in the PRESS START part.
0:15 Dash themer moment by me
More like 0:51
Zoan's Channel is growing SO fast.
( almost at 700 Subs?! )
Really good deco but some gameplay looks stolen from a layout someone made with this song
Do not like the coin where you just click but otherwise this looks amazing
0:01 I dont like the block choice for the blue brick rising from the water
0:26 maybe the blocks could have a little bit more red
0:38 outstanding!!
0:53 also extremely good
To lazy to comment on everything but holy hell alot of this looks really nice, i feel like 85% of the level is done
Just as an idea, maybe add some air deco to some of the parts because I feel like they are a bit empty
I support you and im making my own critical hit not stolen i started it 3 months ago
i just know this level is going to be rated.
yo thats sick, prob ima take inspirations for my level anxiety (music also my mdk!) :)
well not really but yeah
Congrats for reaching 500 Sub's 🎉
For me this deco is actually good enough to worth to rate it so keep deco it!!
Dude I’d LOVE and KILL to verify this Level
Rob pls rate this once it comes out
good level, it deserves rate AND feature.
probably not gonna be demon and that is good because of slow demon rating system
cool, keep it up, i think i need to play it before thinking about gameplay.
and also YES HE CHANGED TEXT, now we havent got moment draw!
i know youre not gonna read all that
@@Михаиля-щ6бI did
Cool
This man cooked so hard that he started lagging, bro is going all out
Itz Beautiful!!!❤
def getting rated maybe the next mythic level 😏
also I really like how the lava bursts out of the pipe at 0:27
and lastly why does the audio glitch at 2:05 and 2:40?
sorry but ALSO thanks for taking my feedback and changing it to bonus round 😊 3:04
I think its maybe a epic or máximum legendary.
But i cant be talking as i cant even make a star rate worthy level lol.
You finally change the last one to "Bonus round" yay ^^
I think the bg could use some more stuff in the beginning
Collab bro?
0:14 maybe if you know how, then you could make the vertical GP look like a cave or something like that. Also this already looks amazing, you're great at your job ❤
At 1:49 the part feels a bit empty, maybe you could add some planets floating in the sky?
VERY similar to Mee8's Critical Hit...
This very good decoration bro!❤
COOL LEVEL WOW and congrats on 500🎉🎉
I like how it look like crítical hit by pixellord
Whats your device you use to play gd? Also i would suggest adding more optimization for less lag or a ldm
@@GDNOAH12 I use mobile, actually I already have LDM but for showcase, I don't use it temporarily
@@ZoanBeta ok me to i also use mobile
cool level
reminds me of dash and explorers a lot