Hello this is the author Tenac and thank you both for the fantastic reading and review. I'm glad you overall enjoyed the story. As to your thoughts let me address some of them. 1. The mystery of the shadow creatures works best as just that, a mystery. I will say that there is an answer and if you look closely at the final sketch there are some subtle hints. 2. Why I include people staring is simply because it is something that has always creeped me out. I had nightmares of things staring at me as a kid and it a very simple trick that I find works though I admit that it is very cliche. 3. To be honest I never put too much thought on Skinner's motivations. Treehouse of horror often has characters doing strange and sinsiter things. If I think about it a long tormented person can do some terrible things. 4. I could live to be 100 and never have completly proper grammer. No excuses mistakes just always seem to slip through. 5. Finally the vomit thing yeah I'm sorry I just got caught up in the cliche on that one. I do imagine seeing an emaciated body could disturb you espically if it's a deep fear.
22:01 well to be fair he did become evil in a treehouse of horror episode where he eats children I don't know the name of it but he did become evil in the episode
I saw the Link... But this is a Different Episode which there needs to be an Explanation on WHY Skinner even did it and that's because this is supposed to be a Different Episode.
Hello this is the author Tenac and thank you both for the fantastic reading and review. I'm glad you overall enjoyed the story. As to your thoughts let me address some of them.
1. The mystery of the shadow creatures works best as just that, a mystery. I will say that there is an answer and if you look closely at the final sketch there are some subtle hints.
2. Why I include people staring is simply because it is something that has always creeped me out. I had nightmares of things staring at me as a kid and it a very simple trick that I find works though I admit that it is very cliche.
3. To be honest I never put too much thought on Skinner's motivations. Treehouse of horror often has characters doing strange and sinsiter things. If I think about it a long tormented person can do some terrible things.
4. I could live to be 100 and never have completly proper grammer. No excuses mistakes just always seem to slip through.
5. Finally the vomit thing yeah I'm sorry I just got caught up in the cliche on that one. I do imagine seeing an emaciated body could disturb you espically if it's a deep fear.
I thought this Story was Alright, I'm glad you gave out your Opinion on it.
Hey this is better than Most Lost Episodes at least.
22:01 well to be fair he did become evil in a treehouse of horror episode where he eats children I don't know the name of it but he did become evil in the episode
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I saw the Link... But this is a Different Episode which there needs to be an Explanation on WHY Skinner even did it and that's because this is supposed to be a Different Episode.
Glad someone took the mantle after the shadow readers retirement
Wait what, what story has the protagonist have an orgasam after seeing disturbing images