You need a better fighting choreography, the action is kinda split up sometimes. Also, instead of straight cuts, make a sort of transition, like a zoom or fade to black. The plot should also be more understandable. I couldn't really understand what's going on, unless you're going to reveal it in a later installment
This is good and I have a tip, try moving them in every frame, it takes more time and it’s a bit harder but I got this same tip from someone ( sus ) but for some reason it just looks smoother.
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You need a better fighting choreography, the action is kinda split up sometimes. Also, instead of straight cuts, make a sort of transition, like a zoom or fade to black. The plot should also be more understandable. I couldn't really understand what's going on, unless you're going to reveal it in a later installment
The ultimate critic is back
i think im drunk again.
Bro what
That supposed to be a hate comment?
@@Official_lord_noob nah man, i just commit random stuff in peoples videos.
@@Official_lord_noobhello my old channel.
This is good and I have a tip, try moving them in every frame, it takes more time and it’s a bit harder but I got this same tip from someone ( sus ) but for some reason it just looks smoother.
Ill try
Ok, you don’t have to if you don’t want to tho@@Official_lord_noob
im on my school computer writing this shit
this is peak
Could we plz get more??
Yes
Epic
Ikr
10/10
Epic
Idk if this was supposed to be funny
No its not
@@Official_lord_noob ok