:Shane Koyczan and the Short Story Long: Tomatoes

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  • @Naiche2003
    @Naiche2003 8 ปีที่แล้ว +79

    this is my favorite shane koyczan poem

    • @jago4352
      @jago4352 6 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Seriously? Listen to "For Instance"

    • @Naiche2003
      @Naiche2003 6 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      Jago 435 lmao I've already listened to all of Shane's poems this is still my favorite don't judge me

    • @augustgjesvik8679
      @augustgjesvik8679 6 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      agree

  • @noxhsw
    @noxhsw 8 ปีที่แล้ว +62

    This is too beautiful.

  • @micheletvedt3351
    @micheletvedt3351 2 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    Thank u 4 ur poems! I am 60yrs. Old & live alone with no children or family and u keep me ALIVE! THANK YOU KID THANK YOU!💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙😘😘😘😘😘😘😘💯💯💯

  • @wi6963
    @wi6963 6 ปีที่แล้ว +47

    my friend has severe depression, I asked him what he liked, hoping to find something i can use to make him feel better, he mentioned this guy, i listened to this very video seconds after he mentioned, i really love this, so Shane, you got one more sub

  • @harper.mm.reprah304
    @harper.mm.reprah304 6 ปีที่แล้ว +27

    I can hear the poem itself just fine with the music. I honestly don't know what the problem is for others.

    • @randawolf3825
      @randawolf3825 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @Marten Dekker it doesnt bother me neither.

  • @awwies4442
    @awwies4442 4 ปีที่แล้ว +10

    my first kiss tasted like a Shane Koyczan poem

  • @rebeccacain7813
    @rebeccacain7813 8 ปีที่แล้ว +22

    deep. i love it

  • @fukutaichou1903
    @fukutaichou1903 5 ปีที่แล้ว +9

    This was such a trip. I love it. How does he remember all this :P

  • @riley-ws9ev
    @riley-ws9ev 8 ปีที่แล้ว +13

    i love this guy so much tbh

  • @mikedoser8452
    @mikedoser8452 8 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    I love this

  • @heyhi7415
    @heyhi7415 8 ปีที่แล้ว +24

    Nice science lesson

  • @youreverythingchannel9490
    @youreverythingchannel9490 5 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    I Love it..
    Even though .
    I'm not that deep kind of person i always appreciate this. Because i can play with mywords.it inspires me to make meanings out of everything.. tragedy, romance, comedy, slice of life . Etcc..
    How they symbolize everything.. i love it..

  • @dakotalee9088
    @dakotalee9088 5 ปีที่แล้ว +12

    Jordan Paz, i'm in love with you, i always will be. i remember when you sent me this, how it made you think of me, now i think of you, almost every second of the day, its been 3 years and you're still what i think about, i think about you with my heart. you're still 2,760 miles away from me, from each other. but i do know that one day, we will meet, i don't know when, i don't know where. But wherever it is i know, i do truly know, it's right. And I will always think about you when this plays. I think about tomatoes, i think of you.

  • @mirelim9353
    @mirelim9353 6 ปีที่แล้ว +37

    My first kiss tasted like beer and potato chips 😢

  • @claricia8985
    @claricia8985 6 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    Taught me more than my science teacher did

  • @jasonprice3415
    @jasonprice3415 5 ปีที่แล้ว +19

    My first kiss was awkward I went closed mouthed she did not. the only time in my life I've felt like an icecream cone.

    • @slicedgrapes
      @slicedgrapes 5 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Thats the best to describe how you felt

  • @Fatherjon69
    @Fatherjon69 7 ปีที่แล้ว +15

    i wonder if it's all true. it's very beautiful sadly I'm now just hearing this?

  • @estherjimenezinigo
    @estherjimenezinigo 3 ปีที่แล้ว +17

    Lyrics:
    People always ask me,
    "How do you memorize all of that?"
    And the truth is,
    the first girl I've ever kissed
    tasted like tomatoes.
    I know this because
    the second girl I've ever kissed
    tasted like pepper.
    It wasn't unpleasant... it's just,
    I was expecting tomatoes.
    When I was a kid
    I learned that time slows
    near a black hole.
    Inside a black hole,
    time stops all together.
    Wether or not this theory
    will ever be proved
    I've moved to believe
    this would be the perfect
    place to love someone.
    In grade 4 my gym teacher
    gave me the nickname half-ton.
    It was a name that stuck.
    I remember it because it was
    the first time I ever told someone
    go f*ck yourself, and meant it.
    He quit calling me the name
    after he called my house
    trying to get me in trouble
    for what I said,
    to which my grandmother replied:
    "Mr shithead, I told him to say it"
    I remember my grandfather's
    blue toolkit where he had secret
    stash of raisins.
    I recall thinking: "My granddad
    has the worst taste in candy",
    but he did teach me
    how to tie a tie.
    My first opportunity
    to apply this knowledge
    was my first date,
    a seventh grade classmate
    maybe should have worn
    acid-washed jeans and a
    Def leopard t-shirt,
    but I wore a suit and a tie.
    When she asked
    why was I all dressed up
    I had to think quickly
    and told her:
    "I thought it'd be funny"
    I don't wanna say it ended badly
    but she wound up leaving me
    for a boy who could make
    farting noises with his armpit.
    I'm forced to admit,
    it was pretty cool.
    In forth grade my teacher
    had a rule about
    speaking out of turn.
    Failure to learn and
    practice this lesson
    resulted in having
    to sit outside.
    I know this because
    I tried it once
    but when she finally
    came to check on me
    she asked:
    "what was so important
    that it couldn't wait"
    Knowing that it's rude to point
    but needing to illustrate
    my position I gestured to
    her chest and said:
    "your boob is hanging out"
    She quickly covered up and
    corrected me.
    Yes... she was a good teacher.
    When I was 12 I was given
    an academic diagnostics test.
    The instructor later informed me
    I had an aptitude for history.
    He looked puzzled when
    I replied: "yeah, but that was
    yesterday. Today I'm more
    interested in tomorrow."
    I remember it because
    the next day I asked a girl
    if I could borrow her a pen.
    When I offered it back she said:
    "you should write me a letter
    with it first". So I did.
    I wrote her a note which
    the teacher then intercepted
    and read to the class.
    It was something we'd learned
    in science that day:
    By the way gravity affects
    mass and weight in relation
    of how quickly something
    would fall.
    For example, a crumpled
    ball of paper will fall at the
    same speed as a chunk of
    granite. It doesn't matter
    how much something
    weighs, it stays the same
    until you consider surface
    area and resistance, at which
    point the persistence of
    gravity losses force.
    For example; a couple of
    pieces of paper into a ball
    will fall more quickly than
    a loose sheet.
    They're both composed of
    the same mass and weight
    so you'd think that the rate
    of velocity measured for the
    force of gravity would cause
    each to fall at the same speed,
    but that's when you need to
    consider the greater surface
    the loose sheet adds
    resistence, so the crumpled
    ball will fall quickly and the
    loose sheet will slowly float.
    I wrote a note saying when
    two people fall in love,
    they do so at the same speed.
    There's no need to factor in the
    physics... Explanations or
    something we can make
    no use of.
    Einstein once wrote:
    "Gravity will not be held
    responsible for people
    falling in love."
    I wrote a note saying:
    "If I fall in love with you,
    no one will ever be able
    to explain it, and I think
    that's beautiful."
    Despite the class laughing
    sheeted as well, which is
    how I can tell you that
    I then knew and now still
    know...
    She tasted like tomatoes.
    I don't remember the way
    every song goes.
    I can't recall every person
    I've ever met.
    I get names mixed up all
    the time.
    I'm terrible with birthdays.
    But I remember all the ways
    people have affected me.
    How our stories became
    memories and if you were
    brazen enough to make
    one with me then you're
    in there somewhere.
    Maybe it was a truth or dare
    kiss or a simple act of
    kindness. One that reminded
    me to remember the moment
    and mark it as a memory
    so I could have it to look
    back on from this life.
    I've drawn conclusions
    so big they can't fit into
    the tiny comic book
    boxes, because I don't
    want to risk losing the
    details just so I can
    make the story fit.
    It's not a trick.
    I remember how things
    felt, which in turn makes
    me remember how things
    happened...
    That my first attempt at
    skateboarding when I
    received it down to the
    bone skinned knee.
    I remember a tree that
    looked like a man, huge
    arms, trying to hold up
    the sky.
    I used to try to climb it
    to the top until, one day
    I did, and couldn't get
    down.
    I remember the man with
    the brown car tried to
    convince me he was sent
    to pick me up by my mom.
    Number one, I lived with
    my grandparents.
    Number two, you didn't know
    the safety word.
    I recall it finally occurred to
    me... I'm pretty fantastic.
    It's not magic.
    I remember it because I
    make comparisons, and not
    in terms of better or worse,
    just different.
    And not all of these memories
    are great but they're mine,
    which lends weight to the
    believe that none of our lives
    are put together on an
    assembly line.
    We're not prepackaged with
    emotions or programmed
    with stories. We have to make
    our own and they all come with
    batteries not included.
    And with the endless
    opportunities we have daily,
    seldom do we take the time
    necessary to pause.
    To stop.
    To record, rewind, and press
    play.
    In our own way we are all
    guetto blasters atop volume.
    We consume slience with
    noise.
    Speakers pounding at our
    heartbeats as we write
    refund receipts for the
    broken eardrums of
    people who hear us live.
    We give of ourselves
    time, precious because its
    quality is limited only
    by your ability to live
    within it.
    Put yourself in every
    second of every minute
    and you will have a life
    worth remembering.
    Just because we don't
    have forever doesn't mean
    we have to move towards
    the end, is about a conveyor
    belt I felt nothing but
    astonished people ask me:
    "How do you memorized all that?"
    That is... It's not a trick.
    There's no thick curtain
    you need to pull away.
    No little old man making
    it all worth behind a
    locked door.
    You yourself probably
    remember before when I
    told you that near a black
    hole...
    Time slows.
    Inside a black hole, is where
    I wanted to grow tomatoes.
    I tried my best but feel free to correct me if there are any mistakes! :)

    • @patrickohm5123
      @patrickohm5123 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Thank you a lot for the transcript. Did not catch the grandma's reply to the teacher.
      I think the following two lines are slightly off:
      "your boob is hanging out" She quickly covered up and corrected me. Yes... she was a good teacher.
      -> "your boob is hanging out" She quickly covered up and corrected me: "Breast"... she was a good teacher.
      "My first opportunity to apply this knowledge was my first day, a seventh grade class may have should have worn acid wash jeans and a death leather t-shirt"
      -> My first opportunity to apply this knowledge was my first date, a seventh grade classmate, maybe should have worn acid-washed jeans and a Def Leppard t-shirt

    • @estherjimenezinigo
      @estherjimenezinigo 9 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@patrickohm5123 Thank you! English isn’t my first language so I didn’t catch well some parts. I’m gonna add those changes now :)

  • @DonArsuk84
    @DonArsuk84 7 ปีที่แล้ว +15

    Anyone know where the original poem is? The one without the music where you can actually hear the poem?

    • @waisehell
      @waisehell  7 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      a different album titled 'shut up and say something'

    • @ferrypanda
      @ferrypanda 6 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      It's on Spotify :)

  • @gatesong
    @gatesong ปีที่แล้ว

    Wow, I love this

  • @trinaf6530
    @trinaf6530 7 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    i love that scienve lesson

  • @rubenrybnick7160
    @rubenrybnick7160 7 ปีที่แล้ว +9

    i love you isabella jensen

  • @cosmicpresence1140
    @cosmicpresence1140 7 ปีที่แล้ว +33

    i gave a girl a note I don't know what she did with it though

    • @dubiouswatermelon159
      @dubiouswatermelon159 6 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      Assassin Creed
      Never forget that love is meaningless if there is no pain, and pointless if acquired so easily, friend, my best of luck to you!

  • @micahgriffith7625
    @micahgriffith7625 4 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    My first kiss was with my best friend, it was at a sleep over, I don’t remember what she tasted like but I do remember wanting to keep kissing her

  • @amararose5928
    @amararose5928 8 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    Ayee.

    • @gears2burn
      @gears2burn 8 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Aye buddy!!!

    • @MustaLeeSwagger
      @MustaLeeSwagger 8 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Aye mates!!

    • @gears2burn
      @gears2burn 8 ปีที่แล้ว

      Мустафа HellYea you're amazing buddy

  • @gauravtomar4442
    @gauravtomar4442 8 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    music name which start 1:00

    • @waisehell
      @waisehell  8 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      +Gaurav Tomar composed specially for this album

    • @gauravtomar4442
      @gauravtomar4442 8 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      +waisehell can i find the music without his voice?

    • @waisehell
      @waisehell  8 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Gaurav Tomar unfortunately, no.

    • @gauravtomar4442
      @gauravtomar4442 8 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      sad. anyways thanks!

  • @beaupettyford1089
    @beaupettyford1089 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    this is the only song that i can listen to thats 6mins long

  • @kyramachakaire6187
    @kyramachakaire6187 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    My first kiss tasted like mint ice cream we had shared ice cream earlier that day her lips were soft and she seemed to have more freckles than the night sky. later that week her parents got divorced and she went to live with her dad. I haven't seen her since.

  • @randawolf3825
    @randawolf3825 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Any one still here in 2020?

  • @Mrph3450
    @Mrph3450 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    The music make this more powerful..

  • @undercoverseamonster
    @undercoverseamonster 6 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Man the music KILLS it (in a bad way) whose idea was this???????

    • @ferrypanda
      @ferrypanda 6 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      You can find the original on Spotify btw

  • @eridanampora3024
    @eridanampora3024 7 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    wow the likes equal 911

    • @waisehell
      @waisehell  7 ปีที่แล้ว

      such a unique moment in history

  • @stephbarnan1467
    @stephbarnan1467 7 ปีที่แล้ว +11

    I honestly liked his original version better. The music is so loud on this one , and it just isn’t the same man. Very disappointed.

    • @ferrypanda
      @ferrypanda 6 ปีที่แล้ว

      Steph BArnan I agree

    • @ferrypanda
      @ferrypanda 6 ปีที่แล้ว

      Steph BArnan Btw the original is on Spotify :)

    • @youreverythingchannel9490
      @youreverythingchannel9490 5 ปีที่แล้ว

      Fuck offf. :)

    • @dyke-thing-else8601
      @dyke-thing-else8601 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Someone sat and spent time on this for your entertainment. Be grateful, even if it isn't the best, keep it to yourself. I like this version

  • @ferrypanda
    @ferrypanda 7 ปีที่แล้ว

    Does anyone know we can listen to a version of this without the music? Its overpowering his voice.

    • @waisehell
      @waisehell  7 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      you can look up live versions on yt, or you can concentrate on enhancing ur perception skills

    • @waisehell
      @waisehell  7 ปีที่แล้ว

      "shut up and say something" is the album

    • @waisehell
      @waisehell  7 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      there is no 'shut up and dance'
      it's 'shut up and say something'

    • @ferrypanda
      @ferrypanda 6 ปีที่แล้ว

      waisehell No need to get passive aggressive -- just don't like your version but that's just my opinion. Didn't mean to offend. I found it on Spotify, thank you! :)

    • @ferrypanda
      @ferrypanda 6 ปีที่แล้ว

      Lonwabo Njeje Haha that was my reaction too... I'm surprised waisehell is a Shane Kocyzan fan, no need to be negative. This a poet with optimistic messages. Chill 😎

  • @you-know-who5553
    @you-know-who5553 8 ปีที่แล้ว +42

    The music is so loud, I can't even hear Shane.

    • @waisehell
      @waisehell  8 ปีที่แล้ว +8

      +SheWhoShallNotBeNamed you're in need of better speakers/headphones. I think they did a great job on the mix.

    • @you-know-who5553
      @you-know-who5553 8 ปีที่แล้ว +8

      No, it's still loud on the computer for me. It's probably because I liked another video that had no music at all, but that video got deleted and the next best one was this one.

    • @londubh517
      @londubh517 8 ปีที่แล้ว +6

      +waisehell Using my laptop speakers, television speakers, a pair of SoundMagic in-ear earphones, a set of Beats headphones, and a connecting it to a Sony speaker system, I can assure you that the backing track is definitely overpowering the vocal track. Of course, *it comes down to personal preference*, and +SheWhoShallNotBeNamed as well as myself are not too pumped about it :P Nothing wrong with your speakers/headphones

    • @eridanampora3024
      @eridanampora3024 7 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      yeah it is a little to loud

    • @BabaaYaga888
      @BabaaYaga888 6 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Turn on captions, you would be able to comprehend it better

  • @ILikeToTripOverAir
    @ILikeToTripOverAir 5 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    the music literally sucks the life out of this oof

    • @randawolf3825
      @randawolf3825 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      I really dont see what you guys are talking about.

  • @infernape28
    @infernape28 5 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Can't stand the equalizer of the music vs vocals ruining this poem

  • @MrScreamingSilence
    @MrScreamingSilence 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    I love his poems, but I really hate how loud the musik is over his word...

  • @undercoverseamonster
    @undercoverseamonster 6 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    How are people enjoying this vid with the song in the back??????????

    • @waisehell
      @waisehell  6 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      maybe because it goes along with shane's voice/intonation/theme??

    • @ferrypanda
      @ferrypanda 6 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      I agree the music takes away from the poem. I like the original because his words can stand on their own. You can find it on Spotify btw!

    • @youreverythingchannel9490
      @youreverythingchannel9490 5 ปีที่แล้ว

      It goes with his poem..

  • @WFiIK
    @WFiIK 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    do you dislike the poetry so much that you feel the need to put loud music over it?

    • @waisehell
      @waisehell  4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      This is an official release.

    • @WFiIK
      @WFiIK 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@waisehell Perplexing but useful to know, thank you.

  • @eavesDropSound
    @eavesDropSound 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Not a fan of the music selection. At least turn it down.

    • @waisehell
      @waisehell  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      This is an official release by Shane. It can't be turned down...