Okay, first, this is my favorite Spade verse thus far. It's got so much character and the sus bars made me cackle for a few minutes. Also idk why, but "I'm the yonko you couldn't prevent." goes incredibly hard. Now I will say, it still has some problems that seem pretty consistent in most of your verses, there's places where there's too many or too few syllables so it causes breaks in the flow, and the delivery needs work, some words (for example, members, or this clown don't got makeup) get mumbled really bad, and I think it could use one or two more takes. It's difficult just keep working on it. I'd say try writing with more percussive consonants, that's helped me. Ari's verse is so strangely low quality, that could be the mix cause I actually like some of the ideas that went into it a lot, but it sounds so wrong compared to everything else in this track. Karma's verse is really good, but I'm biased cause I love the flow he picked, and I use that shit all the time. The mixing still sounds weird, but it's a feature and mixing those is really hard, and since this one is a little better, I'll leave it. The hook is honestly my biggest problem with this track, it's another case of: I like the ideas, but the mixing messes it up. The sound idea is really nice on the hook, but the mixing is just bad. I think it's supposed to be all 3 of you singing in harmony, or at least there's 3 tracks, but they're all mixed to quietly, and they're all at around the same level, so it just sounds muddy. Keep improving though! This is one of your best tracks yet despite all of that.
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Okay, first, this is my favorite Spade verse thus far. It's got so much character and the sus bars made me cackle for a few minutes. Also idk why, but "I'm the yonko you couldn't prevent." goes incredibly hard. Now I will say, it still has some problems that seem pretty consistent in most of your verses, there's places where there's too many or too few syllables so it causes breaks in the flow, and the delivery needs work, some words (for example, members, or this clown don't got makeup) get mumbled really bad, and I think it could use one or two more takes. It's difficult just keep working on it. I'd say try writing with more percussive consonants, that's helped me.
Ari's verse is so strangely low quality, that could be the mix cause I actually like some of the ideas that went into it a lot, but it sounds so wrong compared to everything else in this track. Karma's verse is really good, but I'm biased cause I love the flow he picked, and I use that shit all the time. The mixing still sounds weird, but it's a feature and mixing those is really hard, and since this one is a little better, I'll leave it.
The hook is honestly my biggest problem with this track, it's another case of: I like the ideas, but the mixing messes it up. The sound idea is really nice on the hook, but the mixing is just bad. I think it's supposed to be all 3 of you singing in harmony, or at least there's 3 tracks, but they're all mixed to quietly, and they're all at around the same level, so it just sounds muddy.
Keep improving though! This is one of your best tracks yet despite all of that.
Thanks for the advice!
no prob! @@yaboispade
I agree with everything here, though my part was not because of me, my part is like 2 seconds off beat
@@LuvvAri that'll do it lol, I was like: "There's no way he could've recorded it like that"
@@BigPurpleMustache really nice to know people hold a high standard for my verses, might have to stop being lazy and drop
The Buggy Amv is fucking hilarious 😂
Nice work 👏🏾👏🏾
W song bro keep it up
Spade d goat
I loved it but hated ariis it was ok but it felt out of place
Fair
@@yaboispade you and karma killed it though
Cuz it was, i got put off beat, i dont really mind it though