Galactic Council: "Cease Fire!" Humanity: "We're Just Getting Started" | Sci-Fi Story | HFY

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Galactic Council: "Cease Fire!" Humanity: "We're Just Getting Started" | Sci-Fi Story | HFY

[@jackp8583]

The ai voice doesn't do this story any favors. The story itself is ok but the ending could use some revision. It would have been great to get the council's reaction to Humanity's victory afterward. Eating crow or just getting the big finger from us and having to deal with it. Something more of an epilog to wrap up the story.

[@charlesray8008]

Palpable, sick of the word “palpable”. AI must really love using it because all these stories use it to death.

[@sgtjarhead99]

The narration couldn’t be worse.