You might want to consider reviewing your work for errors before posting it to the net. This would have been a better story without all of the grammatical and verbal errors. Having sn actual person reading the script is always better, and takes little time.
You might want to consider reviewing your work for errors before posting it to the net. This would have been a better story without all of the grammatical and verbal errors. Having sn actual person reading the script is always better, and takes little time.
See what I mean? I had a typo, "sn" instead of "an". It is a distraction, that could have been prevented. It took away from the message.