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  • @UsekuyeJarana
    @UsekuyeJarana 8 ปีที่แล้ว +113

    I've listened to almost all your poems and I feel glad to say you have fans in South Africa. I wish that one day I could be as good a poet as you are

  • @UsekuyeJarana
    @UsekuyeJarana 8 ปีที่แล้ว +41

    this guy is the only reason why i started posting my poetry on TH-cam. You inspire me man

  • @widdd_
    @widdd_ 8 ปีที่แล้ว +50

    you know how when a movie starts, you pay attention to as much as you can and listen intently as to not miss anything or be inadequately introduced to this new little world you are stepping into. and you know how some movies are so good that they have the light, rightly timed humor that everyone can laugh at, and how some can take you from laughter to a point very near tears in a minute... that's what his poems are like. I smile, laugh, feel my insides pull towards the words that stick to my skin like magnets on a fridge, and feel all warm and stuff just by his poems. idk man they're like a really good movie minus the couple hours. you can't help but connect with him just based on the common fact of being a human being.

    • @j3J9j3J9j3J9
      @j3J9j3J9j3J9 6 ปีที่แล้ว

      agreed, the book he released last year is some of the best reading I did all year.

  • @lajennvee
    @lajennvee 7 ปีที่แล้ว +12

    Everything I see of Rudy's is gold.

  • @Fatina02
    @Fatina02 7 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    This brought me to tears, especially when he described himself as filled with everyones opinion but his own , idk why but that line hit home

  • @MzAmberJ
    @MzAmberJ 7 ปีที่แล้ว +34

    "A ballot box stuffed with everyone's opinions but my own."

  • @no3pearljamfan
    @no3pearljamfan 8 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    My main motivator for writing poetry & he never fails

  • @lesliegerrard3138
    @lesliegerrard3138 7 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Extend your arm like a drawbridge to a castle that no one has visited in years?! I'm swooning! This dude is uh-mazing!

  • @debbiegetnfit
    @debbiegetnfit 8 ปีที่แล้ว +18

    rudy is bae

  • @luke304
    @luke304 8 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    might be my fav of all time

  • @rheyanabranch
    @rheyanabranch 8 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Yes Rudy!!!

  • @Mindiocoss
    @Mindiocoss 8 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    that was brilliant.

  • @asias3000
    @asias3000 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    love it

  • @ShaDafkup
    @ShaDafkup 8 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    one of my favorite poets
    inspired me
    -Chainsaw

  • @nabeelah9391
    @nabeelah9391 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Rudy Francisco - 17
    "If you were to find an old calendar, strap it to a hospital bed
    Tie it down by its week-ends, and then C-section the belly of 1999
    You’d find the 17 year old version of me
    Back when I was a tsunami of awkward moments
    Splashing against the shoreline called __________.
    A young lady, who introduced my jaw to the floor
    Whenever she floated into our first period classroom
    This girl, she was a dandelion seed straddling a wish, a dream
    I never thought would turn flesh and green, but wire hangers like me
    We don’t become captain of the football team because
    The only thing that we are good at is
    Stopping ourselves from saying ‘I like you’ to a girl that
    Holds the remote control to our smiles
    So we are just blurry silhouettes
    Against the backdrop of everything popular
    Often wearing our skin like a costume of someone we didn’t feel
    Comfortable pretending to be anyway
    We swallow earthquakes, and then shrivel at the smell of perfume
    We got bashful, we got tongue tied
    And we got nervous in high definition
    So the question is,
    If a boy falls for a girl that’s out of his league
    And there’s no one is around to hear him
    Does he make a sound?
    The answer…the answer is ‘hell’ and the first two letters of ‘nothing’
    When I was a senior in high school, I was a pocket full of chalk dust
    I was elevator music on a CD that stuttered like a
    Volkswagen with a really bad transmission
    At this age, I was a ballot box
    Stuffed full of everyone’s opinions except for my own
    My swagger was like watching a Walkman trying to swallow a DVD
    At this age, my mouth was a door with hinges covered in rust
    And I walked as if I was concerned with how the ground would feel about my footsteps
    And if I could just find a way to write a letter to that boy
    Who was in an old sweater with itchy sleeves that I will someday grow out of
    I would say, I would say there will be days when you feel like a
    Peacock with no feathers
    Like you are flightless, and undeserving of attention
    But listen,
    You have to stop getting out of bed like an oil spill
    You’re not a flat tire at 2 am
    So stop acting like an accident
    You’re not an accident, you’re not a fucking accident Rudy!
    You’re an apple on a pine tree in a room full of lemons
    And you come from a long line,
    And you come from a long line of Swiss army pocket knives
    Men who are small, sharp, and dangerous when not handled carefully
    Some days I wish that my arms were 12 years long so I could reach all the way back there
    And grab you by the shoulders, shake you, and say
    Listen… you are the main character in a movie that I watch
    Every time I see the inside of my eyelids
    I told myself a million times that I wouldn’t spoil the ending
    But I will tell you this, your story starts off really slow…
    But it does get better, and you don’t have to believe me
    Someday you’ll see for yourself
    And when you see _________ at the senior prom
    Ignore the washing machine in your stomach
    Tell her she looks beautiful tonight
    Extend your arm like a drawbridge to a castle
    That no one has visited in years, and say
    'Will you dance with me?'”

  • @aniyahclemons6771
    @aniyahclemons6771 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    ❤️

  • @annm649
    @annm649 7 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    sending love from the philippines! can't wait to get your book "Helium"!

  • @keelanesquivel3854
    @keelanesquivel3854 6 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Does anyone know where I can find the words to this poem? The audio quality isn't the best and I can't make out some of the words

    • @AvrelReiza9
      @AvrelReiza9 6 ปีที่แล้ว

      Keelan Esquivel same here

    • @terriz.2981
      @terriz.2981 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Transcript here 💛fuckyeahrudyfrancisco.tumblr.com/post/88054794847/trinahfbay-rudy-francisco-17-if-you-were-to/amp

    • @nabeelah9391
      @nabeelah9391 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Rudy Francisco - 17
      "If you were to find an old calendar, strap it to a hospital bed
      Tie it down by its week-ends, and then C-section the belly of 1999
      You’d find the 17 year old version of me
      Back when I was a tsunami of awkward moments
      Splashing against the shoreline called __________.
      A young lady, who introduced my jaw to the floor
      Whenever she floated into our first period classroom
      This girl, she was a dandelion seed straddling a wish, a dream
      I never thought would turn flesh and green, but wire hangers like me
      We don’t become captain of the football team because
      The only thing that we are good at is
      Stopping ourselves from saying ‘I like you’ to a girl that
      Holds the remote control to our smiles
      So we are just blurry silhouettes
      Against the backdrop of everything popular
      Often wearing our skin like a costume of someone we didn’t feel
      Comfortable pretending to be anyway
      We swallow earthquakes, and then shrivel at the smell of perfume
      We got bashful, we got tongue tied
      And we got nervous in high definition
      So the question is,
      If a boy falls for a girl that’s out of his league
      And there’s no one is around to hear him
      Does he make a sound?
      The answer…the answer is ‘hell’ and the first two letters of ‘nothing’
      When I was a senior in high school, I was a pocket full of chalk dust
      I was elevator music on a CD that stuttered like a
      Volkswagen with a really bad transmission
      At this age, I was a ballot box
      Stuffed full of everyone’s opinions except for my own
      My swagger was like watching a Walkman trying to swallow a DVD
      At this age, my mouth was a door with hinges covered in rust
      And I walked as if I was concerned with how the ground would feel about my footsteps
      And if I could just find a way to write a letter to that boy
      Who was in an old sweater with itchy sleeves that I will someday grow out of
      I would say, I would say there will be days when you feel like a
      Peacock with no feathers
      Like you are flightless, and undeserving of attention
      But listen,
      You have to stop getting out of bed like an oil spill
      You’re not a flat tire at 2 am
      So stop acting like an accident
      You’re not an accident, you’re not a fucking accident Rudy!
      You’re an apple on a pine tree in a room full of lemons
      And you come from a long line,
      And you come from a long line of Swiss army pocket knives
      Men who are small, sharp, and dangerous when not handled carefully
      Some days I wish that my arms were 12 years long so I could reach all the way back there
      And grab you by the shoulders, shake you, and say
      Listen… you are the main character in a movie that I watch
      Every time I see the inside of my eyelids
      I told myself a million times that I wouldn’t spoil the ending
      But I will tell you this, your story starts off really slow…
      But it does get better, and you don’t have to believe me
      Someday you’ll see for yourself
      And when you see _________ at the senior prom
      Ignore the washing machine in your stomach
      Tell her she looks beautiful tonight
      Extend your arm like a drawbridge to a castle
      That no one has visited in years, and say
      'Will you dance with me?'”

  • @JasonHdn
    @JasonHdn 8 ปีที่แล้ว +17

    finally a poem free of "the struggle"

    • @ChelseaHolt2
      @ChelseaHolt2 8 ปีที่แล้ว +6

      you're ignorant

    • @JasonHdn
      @JasonHdn 8 ปีที่แล้ว

      +Chelsea Holt I don't think you understand my comment and you're using the word ignorant incorrectly

    • @joriancobb3609
      @joriancobb3609 8 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      what struggle?

  • @neonbreion
    @neonbreion 8 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Damn he is so good. Im workijg on ny verbage and such though! Check ne out on ny channel and dont hesitate to provide feedback!

  • @jgoat4
    @jgoat4 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    mid