Mistreated by S-Rank Team, He Travels in Past & Alter his Storyline for Revenge
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- เผยแพร่เมื่อ 29 ก.พ. 2024
- His girl was stolen, and he was constantly mocked for being a weakling, so the boy went to the past to exact revenge at his S-class party - Manhwa Recap
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"Luis can probably fix her but whatever is wring eith her is hotter."
Damn, I feel that.
😂
Nahhh, bro was typing with one hand💀
i stopped the video just to find this comment XD
Ah, one of my people
Same here XD @@feveredmushroomHD
- dude mistreated by the females
- goes back to past to change his fate
- 1st plan is to make childhood friend to not meet hero, the plan was never even begin
- instead he accidentally met 1st female, tried to stay away from her bcs he hate her
- but turns out she is different than he remember, confused, he ended up making her into yandere
- again he met 2nd female now, this time he plan to exact revenge bcs he also hate her
-but turns out she is also different from what he remember, confused again, he also ended up turns her into yandere
- now its the hero turns
yandere simulator?
@@John_Doe465basically 😂😂
That-
Accidental rizz technique
@@notagoosewithaknife9750
Dealing with the devil has its own benefits.
His role is probably to disintegrate the chances of the Hero's Party from ever emerging by charming all the future potential female members of it, weakening the Hero's Party before it can be a threat to the demons.
I love when there's some human commentary under the ai voices. Makes the readings about 10x better. "luis could probably fix her but whatever's wrong with her is hotter" is going to be in my head rent free for the rest of my life
It is revenge to take girls from the x s rank team because that team won't exist their is more than one way for someone to take revenge on someone
I thought this would be a good revenge story but it’s just a dude that goes back in the past and simps over the girls that treated him like crap. Shame the story went this route
It's called being the bigger person or you could also say it's just that he isn't a edge Lord and is a good person with morals
I read the story you wrote! And this one is way better than your shit!
@@Sham0605 what is bro talking about💀
@@specterclassbeats me ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
@@specterclass i am not talking to you but the main commenter...
And abt what - he will probably understand!
"I can fix her"
Says every failed dead victims of yanderes💀
I can't take these coomer weeb mangas, man. Always gotta have that simp MC who unrealistically shows crazy people who abuse them physically kindness and forgiveness, when they don't deserve it at all
Dude looking at her eyes that's all I saw that, he changed her from an abusive bully to a obsessive yandere that being said I love yabdere girls so she is automatically sexy now compared to before
A unique take on the "traitor" party. They aren't cartoon caricatures, they have/had their own emotional baggage that cause them to behave that way towards Luis; who is no saint, himself. Now, with the timeline scouted, he knows their potential and the world's events. With that he seems to try to earn the respect he feels he's owed from them.
The MC is a weirdo. His childhood friend fell in love with someone else and he is using the advantage of time travel to try to steal her back. That is something a villain would do.
Also, the way the knight girl treated him is unforgivable. Who cares about her past trauma or baggage? She doesn't get to treat humans that way and she doesn't deserve redemption through the MCs actions. If she redeemed herself by her own actions that would be fine but everything is spurred on by the MC. He is redeeming her. She is not redeeming herself.
@TurntBucket
Villain protagonist is a thing. MC took the deal with the demon out of envy. Makes him more interesting than the cookie cutter MCs these stories usually get.
technically, it's not redemption because she hasn't done anything like that yet. In a way, he's stopping it before it starts.
All in all, the point is gray morality. story frontload both sides flaws. Usually, the one betrayed is either the goodest noodle or only takes revenge on the party after building up some power for a few chapters, but is otherwise chill with everyone else.
@@79bigcat I know that a villain can be an MC. I just don't care for this guy. For me to go along with a story that has a villain as an MC I want the author to make it clear that he knows the MC is a bad person. I don't like it when it's unclear if the author actually thinks that behavior is okay. I at least want it to be clear that these are purely the actions and values of characters and not the author projecting their values. That is my personal preference. You are free to like whatever you like.
As for whether it's redemption or not, it is redemption. Those events have happened. Time travel is not the same as just moving time to a point in the past. The MC has his memories and those events did happen. He just went back to the past. If everything reset, including the MC's memories, then I would agree that those events haven't happened.
If those events never happened then everything would play out the same this time as it did the first time.
@@TurntBucket To be honest saying the MC is a villain is a bit of a stretch. While he's not like a traditional hero I wouldn't call him a villain. There are plenty of other MC that would be easier to say are villains but I wouldn't call the MC of this story to be a villain. I would argue he is a heroic person that has flaws. I say this because the actions he takes through the story would make him a hero.
Heck even the opening of the story have him risk his life to save a mother and her child. Sure the motivation of the MC and his envy and jealousy over the hero wouldn't be exactly called noble. But that what makes him interesting.
@@it-a-goI dont believe I ever called him a villain.
>swearing to turn him into gold
And thus he became Goldlewis
Is that a guilty gear reference
@@nyanblackch.3211 😉
This aint redo of the healer, this is redo of the scout
XD idk why but I literally heard TF2 scout say "think fast chuckle nuts" when I read this
😂
Sans rape.
Redo Simp*
@@lightnighl7220you’re OLD
I seriously don't understand why people here keep saying "he's turning them into yanderes!" when they're hardly even yandere material at all. If anything they're a little clingy or aggressive in their newfound affection towards the MC but i wouldn't call them "Yanderes". I don't think people these days really understand what is actually a yandere anymore cause the term has been thrown around so many times to describe a girl that's "clingy" or "obsessive".
Oh nowadays if they see a woman with a sword or weapon, they’re going to consider them as yandere, for they’re not of the initiated.
yea the 1st girl was like one for 1 scene and thats it
It's girls first love yeah they're def not yanderes. They're just curious about the new feeling and are unaware of what it is.
This is a new take on a revenge story. Instead of killing them he just makes them fall in love with him aka making them into a yandere which isn’t probably good for him in the long run 😅
idk... theres got to be some sort of plan the MC has, cause it sure doesnt look like it how he almost dies here and there whenever he decides to not take the revenge that was such a directive force in the main plot of the story.
more like: MC gets 2nd chance and yolos it mysteriously
I guess the plan was
Step 1: get the childhoodfriend
Step 2: go adventuring with her and get treasure and conections using his knowlage of the future
Atep 3: see the world burn
Step 4: join the salvation army as before but know stronger
But since the girl was out already then the plan exchanged part 2 and 1
and then the other girl make him his subordinate and then he overrated his knowlage of the future without taking into account the exact timeline and that the personality of people changes overtime
only halfway through so far, I appreciate that lewis is still willing to do what he thinks is right, even though she wronged him at another time. its pretty rare these days.
"Mistreated by S-Rank Team, He Travels in Past & Alter his Storyline for Revenge"
Keyaru?
Ty
Healer moment
@@ihadfunplaying Truly a "would you like this rod, or this rod" moment of all time
@@Jono_Dio_Da💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀
More like a backwards Keyaru it seems, less sadistic and more of a guy that actually holds heroic ideals
Please make a part 2
This is a certified spoonkid classic
I always get surprised by this comment
Damn he might as well be asmr channel with willjum and bart
Broooo damn it's been a long time since i last watch spoonkid but where did this came from ?
Once i finished it i realized he is turning his old party members yandere for him, i wonder how his childhood friend will look twisted with obsession
I hate this kind of clickbait video titles...
yeah REVENGE more like GET RAPED
See I want to see a story instead of the mistreated hero go all the way back to the beginning of their journey, the mc leaves small messages to their past self of to secretly train harder and to do thing that would only be known in the future.
The idea being every time the mc comes back to his future body small improvements are made like, before one kick to the gut would have left him dry heaving, but now it feels a gentle kick, with the idea being the future party has no idea as if suddenly he went from a weaklings into a monster, with the mc leaving messages to his past self to start planting secret items stashed away.
With the entire idea he’s doing such changes that are completely unnoticeable by the party so when he decides to get his revenge it’s far more filling to crush his “team” when they think they are so powerful but now they are nothing but ants.
I just who’s with me on its better to crush someone with overwhelming force when they think they are untouchable vs simply shoving a weakling off the path of a hero
MY MAN! insert epic handshake.
@@drivanradosivic1357 insert epic hand shake to the master bro hug.
Read Dreamcide - MC that constantly hops between 2 TL
I fantasize about the best retort to my middle school bully in my twenties kinda energy 🥴
If you dream about mcs crushing their wrongdoers like ants and being op go read the plethora of cheat skill revenge garbo that is out there. This story is a different kind of a hot mess methinks
That is almost exactly like the plot of Singularity, a PS3/360 game. You keep seeing temporal messages saying that "X doesn't work", eventually everything goes wrong and you lose your waifu to a time distortion... Or maybe I just sucked at the game and got the bad end? Had a bunch of fun sci-fi guns and felt a lot like Resistance Fall Of Man. Singularly was pretty hyped before release, but it fell flat, still worth a play through.
Part 2 please......😊😊😊😊
Bro didn't take revenge, he created his very own harem 💀
The hero did made this girls is harem also but didn't changed them to a better person, the MC however change the girls to a kind and caring person. P.S. I read the WN and the Hero is just another fuck boy.😂
Unless I'm missing some context, the hero didn't do shit to him. Only the knight did.
The rest were either neutral or pragmatic.
This dude has a jealousy hate boner for the hero due to his own inadequcies.
It's possible anything he's done to him happened in the past off screen.
@@nehemiahsalters1350 Nah, I read the chapters after this video. He literally admits he wanted to be like the hero but was chasing his shadow. This caused jealousy and resentment.
Then he proceeds to strike the hero down.
@@Zwei22 damn that's kinda ass. I mean it's human. Probably the most realistic motive for someone who went back in time but still
@@nehemiahsalters1350 He doesn't kill him if that helps. He says the only way he can be a equal/ideal is to face off against him.
The hero laments they could have been friends if the circumstances were different as he believes the protag is not actually evil.
@@Zwei22 Basically he failed to make protag a respectable person and instead turn him into villian
This seems to just be the story of a guy who doesn't completely understand that he was sent back in time. The number of times he thinks his former party members can do things that others couldn't because they did it in the future is quite high. Dude legit can't fathom the fact that his former party members weren't just born with immense knowledge of their fighting tactics and methods.
He completely understands that, it's just that he's been adventuring with them for quite a while so he knows way more about their future selves and struggles to rewire his brain to remember they weren't epic badasses from the start
@@Casual-Yohoho-Enjoyer If he struggles to rewire his brain that means he doesn’t, at the most fundamental level, understand that he is in the time before the time when they were epic badasses.
@@p.strobus7569 Consciously and logically he understands it. Subconsciously he still sees their future selves in them, which is perfectly logical because they're literally the same people with the same face, same interests, mostly same dreams and aspirations, they share many personality traits and skills. They're just rougher, unrefined, inexperienced. He also expects them to know skills they don't yet have but there's no reason to believe he knows when they got them, for all he knows they were born with them or at least that's how it feels like with how competent in using them they're implied to be.
@@Casual-Yohoho-Enjoyer Which means that he doesn't understand it because understanding a thing is more than memorizing facts or knowing the wikipedia page, to understand a thing this big, requires knowing it so fully that even the subconscious goes along. He knows the fact of time travel but hasn’t thoroughly thought through the implications of time travel so he doesn’t understand where or when he is.
@@p.strobus7569 There are different types of understanding and different ways you can understand something. You can for example experience something traumatic and logically understand that it's not your fault but subconsciously still blame yourself for it and feel guilty, or want to stop scrolling through Twitter or watch less youtube and logically you know it's taking too much time out of your day but you still do it out of habit because you're used to doing that
this is actually pretty good need a part 2 now🙏
Define good!
All I, and my fellow commentators, see that he's a male with no balls. Came back in time to act as a loser again. Simping and losing to these females + not even being strong enough to win.
Nah, it's painful to watch, like all of the other coomer weeb mangas. Realistically, he should take revenge, but he's just letting everyone who treated him badly walk all over him
@@LavaCreeperPeopleHow so?
@@LavaCreeperPeople come on man we want to do the bongo bongo what wrong with that?
I think this would've been a little better if the characters looked liked they regressed by 10 years. A person looks changes a lot in a decade, especially when they're young
If possible can you make more of this?
I thought this was a revenge story not him helping his abusers
He's stealing the harem of the Guy that turned his friends and girls on him
@@tboy817did he turn them on him or were they all just assholes with insecurities that bullied someone weaker and he just didn't stop them.
Except only 1 person actually abused him. This guy is a joke. He made some kind of Faustian deal with an evil entity over some dumb bullshit.
Stupid stupid stupid there's only fee chad mc with a real story not some oh no ima simp and not take my revenge wahhh wahhh like Damm like 99.9 is same whimpy Mc has a harem he doesn't kill he let's bad guys go he doesn't kill people who have killed other people or hurt him let me be the bigger person and forgive u like shit up
I mean he was kicked hard enough to bleed and told to still keep watch and no one said anything at that point it's clear no one not even his saint friend said anything at that point since it's clear he lets this stuff happen and at that point these are all his girls and he is the "hero" this falls to him
this story is very harsh brutal sad in the beginning but I love that he got a second chance to turn the table and put those abusive douchebags in to their place I am really looking forward he have planned for the future before the next episode keep this fresh because I really want to see what lies ahead
bruh they dont deserve anything bad. if anything he should help them by making them better people
Please make a Part 2 please
This is a VERY interesting story. I need this as an anime! I want to see and hear the emotion in them!
So instead of making yourself stronger you make others lives better?
Another good one
Part 2 please
I like this story, I also like the main character, he’s responsible, works hard, is brave, has a great mind, & he adjusts well to new situations, and so I hope a Part#2 gets made.
I also noticed that the main character, he may still hold a grudge against, those who had tormented him, in his former life.
But he seems to be trying to forgive two individuals, who exist in his new life, while he’s being very cautious around them.
People change over time.
Once you mix the coffee bean with the new cream and sugar, they would be born anew and can never be reverted back.
The demon only gave the MC the chance to become the change which would impact the Hero's Party as a whole.
Basically “I can fix her” story
Gets abused by his party members, goes back in time, immediately starts simping for one of his abusive party members. It's a pretty stupid plot tbh.
Uh huh
Nah I disagree
Part 2 please🙏😁 😇
Nah, dude gone back to the past just to simp
Yeah. He a weak bich like all of the other MC's lately.
There’s always a Great War in these stories but never Jumbo Shrimp
Please part 2 please
i want More!!!!!!!!
I’m sad, I click this video thinking “Wow going back in time to shape events how you want them because of revenge? Sounds like the petty GOAT himself Reverse Flash” but then I read the comment sections and it’s not at all the story I wanted.
Dude most of the Revenge Regressor was like that lol.
but I got tired of those so I'm lowkey inclined on liking this series more.
One of my problem on Most revenge Regressor where the MC's mission is to take revenge on the people who abuse him in the present by going to the past.
In order for that type of revenge to work was by simply making those "Villains" One dimensional characters where they are evil the time they are born so the readers and the MC have the justification to K*ll or T0rture them or "get revenge".
Please do "The Wailing Perversion" one day.
Thanks
A really epic manhwa
yup agreed that manhwa is fire 🔥🔥
This is actually a good story. It's not your typical revenge story where the MC just kills all his former comrades. Here, he sees how each of his comrades became who they would become and intervenes in their development. I like it.
Part 2, please.
I finished reading the web novel... it was a major disappointment as everything became predictable , and >90% of the text was focused on fighting ridiculous monsters. The interactions between the girls were absent.
so did bro get laid in the end or what?
Can you spoiler me why they acted horrible to the MC in the original timeline? Was it because of the childhood friend?
send in twice i see the first time deleted for some reson
unexpected turn of events, I expected he would take direct revenge on the people who wronged him from his original timeline but instead he makes them unintentionally simp for him and turns them into yanderes... will the previous hero turn into a yandere for him as well?
"As For Me, Give Me Happiness"
At the start, it seemed like he wanted revenge but as the story progresses, it seems like all he wanted was to go back in time to just to rizz them.
Those girls are brainwashed by the Hero who is influenced by the church.
The demon only did some time travel shenanigans just so that there would be a timeline where the Hero's Party never emerged in the first place.
I like this one
does ann walk around carrying a barrel on her back?
This is actually a really good story: basically the girls that betrayed him were really easy to influence so 1st timeline they were influenced by the hero who was brainwashed by fake ideals of the church type government. In the new time the MC meet those girls before the hero do, so the girls ended being influenced by the MC ideals and become a totally different person. That’s why the story ends with the downfall of the church, and the Hero banished wandering alone with one eye left while the MC travels happily with his Harem.
Did that actually happen? Is it in a Light Novel or Web Novel?
what the hell did the hero do to deserve this lmfao just add him to the party as his wingman
what? the previous hero seems the most decent person out of all of them then he gest the worst ending?
The only thing i dont like about this is that its about the MC going back in time
If I remember only a ponytail person abused him and not the other ones
the cook chair lmao
His Journey of Revenge was actually a journey to learn empathy.
This is a good story!
3:09 Inspired by One Punch Man, for sure
Oh boy, the 100th time seeing this plot.
next part please
Please make one with Destiny Unchain Online
He takes revenge by treating well those who treated him badly. 😮💨
Kill them with kindness?
5 mins in and I realized that this is not a revenge story.
Wasted second life. Too much unnecessary hustles.
Dang The mc has rizz revenge 💀
well worth of a quick part 2
To bad it only has 16 chapters which sucks
yeah saw it now, @@gintokithetrollgod
@@gintokithetrollgodwhats it called
@@raku4206 it’s literally in the first second of the video
@@gintokithetrollgod hows i supposed to know if it only lasts half of a second
This story got my brain into a frenzy how abuser has became helper
I disagree.
The abuser simply does not exist the time he goes back to the past
@@EasyBitGaming-pu1ixyep, the girls have past traumas and the MC helps them overcome it. When the girls were with the Hero they had a violent and cold personality but with MC they became kind and caring albeit possessive.
More like he travels to the past & alter his storyline for simping.
more parts?
The story plotline may not be that great but i feel the mc is interesting
Came back in time to stay a total loser.
"Luis doesn't mind being treated as trash but can't accept the father treating his daughter like this"
?? WTF Maaaaaan ??
Wow 😮
I'm sorry Luis, but she already has you wrapped in her fingers.
Cool 😄
Part Deue por favore' 🙏🏾 grazie
What happened to P2 of the emo boy and popular girl?
it might not have enough chapters
I really like this type of revenge stories, not too over the top, not too underwhelming, good character background stories, MC is not an overpowered MC with cheat skill, and he gets the girls too fall in love with him.
*That’s why you need anti-hero. Poor MC is like Emiya Shirou and Peter Parker.*
Part 2
Luis is just him
This revenge story was different from the rest I’ve seen .
The mc has a ton of personal flaws and insecurities the party he was with wasn’t evil it was really only the knight that was pretty scummy
He isn’t a saint
His feelings jealousy and resentment towards the hero makes him make some pretty terrible decisions
Luis is not innocent as well.
Part 2 😊
Hope you make a 2nd part. I'm drawn to revenge stories like a moth to flame.
This ain't no revenge
part 2
Oh man this serious fire I like this I want to hear more about this💯😎😎😎😎😎
its just 12 chapters btw and thats it
where is the part 2
Kinda meh going back in the past just to make them fall for you is one stupid thing to do
Alright, hear me out guys! I can fix those crazy chicks that betrayed MC.🗿
Wish there was monga want an giant sword 🗡️ user
there is only like 2 more chapters and then its over. should have just finished it out.
So a Doormat decides not to be a Doormat.....travels back in time and becomes a Doormat......
10:52 Hey wait a minute that juste Mount Saint-Michel
Next part?
Going to predict thst the reason they all act horrible to him is mainly because of the childhood friend.
bro is a simp it's saddening why stand by a girl who gave him false hope which tormented him he should just walk another path😑😑
So he wanted to change his future only to get caught back up with the same people he despised? Make this make sense.
It's simple - the catalyst to them being horrible was most likely the Hero. He most likely fed on their more negative traits so that by time he met them in the future, they became horrible while his childhood friend seemed to have been influenced to be more meek while charmed by the Hero. Since he's meeting them before joining the party this time, he's meeting them before the turned horrible and can thus influence them to be their best selves instead.
Axed at 12.2. Used to promote their LN probably
Fuck
What kind of revenge is that! Is there a revenge in that story?..........................??????????????????????
Man, this guy Luis is a real f-up, 15mins in and after his 2nd chance he helped the person he most hate, then became her servant and then got whipped, by his actions I will add. For someone that knows the future he really took a dumb route.
If anything yes he hated how she treated him but let it be know he has respect for her as a person and her swordsmanship also her dad was treating her like shit so ofc our mc stood up for her
Im more accepting of him becoming the bigger person the 1 person he TRULLY hates is the knight from that church