i LOVE THIS ONE 88, PLEASE KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.BEING STUCK IN A WHEELCHAIR...MY BODY MAY BE WEAK, UNCOOPERATIVE AT TIMES DOES NOT MEAN MY MIND IS. IT'S STORIES ON THIS CHANNEL THAT CARRY ME THROUGH MANY A DARK TIME . YOURS AND OTHERS STORIES ON THIS CHANNEL ALLOW ME TO FLY FREE FOR A WHILE ON YOUR IMAGINATION. THANK YOU❤❤❤❤❤
This has been an excellent story with many turns. I noticed the absence of language errors that can be so distracting. To me this seems to indicate a mastery of language or a thorough proof reading of the story by someone who is able to detect errors and remove them. That is so helpful in the enjoyment of any tale. Thank you. However, there are many dimensions to a story and comments indicate that some borrowing from Star Trek may be too often used. Also frequent use of writing tactics too often repeated detract from the story. Alarms going off are too much sometimes.
EDWARDS AND SIRRIUS, NOT JUST JOINED AT THE HIP... BUT THE MINDS!! NICE JUXTAPOSITION, THE MALE HALF REPRESENTING EMOTION WITH THE FEMALE HALF REPRESENTING LOGIC !! 🎉❤ AND ONCE AGAIN..... THE GALACTIC PARADIGM WILL NEVER BE THE SAME!!! "OH THOSE TRICKY PROGENITORS!!" LOL😂 ❤❤ 🎉🎉 😊😊 BTW, 88 YA' ALL!!
i LOVE THIS ONE 88, PLEASE KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.BEING STUCK IN A WHEELCHAIR...MY BODY MAY BE WEAK, UNCOOPERATIVE AT TIMES DOES NOT MEAN MY MIND IS. IT'S STORIES ON THIS CHANNEL THAT CARRY ME THROUGH MANY A DARK TIME . YOURS AND OTHERS STORIES ON THIS CHANNEL ALLOW ME TO FLY FREE FOR A WHILE ON YOUR IMAGINATION. THANK YOU❤❤❤❤❤
Thank you. That was a wonderful story 🐝🐝
Please continue this story ❤❤❤❤
Eighty eight great story
This has been an excellent story with many turns. I noticed the absence of language errors that can be so distracting. To me this seems to indicate a mastery of language or a thorough proof reading of the story by someone who is able to detect errors and remove them. That is so helpful in the enjoyment of any tale. Thank you. However, there are many dimensions to a story and comments indicate that some borrowing from Star Trek may be too often used. Also frequent use of writing tactics too often repeated detract from the story. Alarms going off are too much sometimes.
EDWARDS AND SIRRIUS, NOT JUST JOINED AT THE HIP... BUT THE MINDS!! NICE JUXTAPOSITION, THE MALE HALF REPRESENTING EMOTION WITH THE FEMALE HALF REPRESENTING LOGIC !! 🎉❤ AND ONCE AGAIN..... THE GALACTIC PARADIGM WILL NEVER BE THE SAME!!! "OH THOSE TRICKY PROGENITORS!!" LOL😂 ❤❤ 🎉🎉 😊😊 BTW, 88 YA' ALL!!
Go see a old movie called wild wild planet main villain wanted to tak a girl and exchange halves of their bodies
this record seem to be stuck on: "just when.. alarms started blaring" . Get some new material or get a real job!
Amazing how many programs you have pirated.
The Binars like a lot of other stuff exist in Star Trek and this isn't really how
Why is it called an official rescue mission if rescue is forbidden? Worse than Jay and Silent Bob.
88. 73. ❤
please check your work before posting, the story is all over the place,
😢plagiarize much? Half of your material is taken directly from Star Trek.