This story is decent, but could have been much better with some proper editing, and removal of repetitive scenes. I realize that AI was used to write most of the story, but AI has not advanced to the point of being able to produce a story this complex without some human intervention and editing. 88
Arrogance and hubris in the writing of this story. Constant "human / alien hybrid" statements. The alien has a name, on the same order as the humans are so named and they are equals in the relationship. Apparently not when it comes to the author, or translator, of this story. Aliens, to me, are an unknown or unwanted beings. Depending on circumstances. The former is a matter of overcoming ignorance. The latter is a matter of invaders who have no wish to assimilate to the society they have invaded. They keep old customs in new lands, rather than conforming to the customs of the land / area they have entered, and are thus alien by their own choice. Stupidity! Rogue mercenaries are never a welcome group to any situation. Mercenaries aligned to a faction can be reasoned with, as they abide by the rules / customs of the group which hires them. Mercenaries as a random group have NO STANDING and therefore no say in anything that happens. Allowing them to remain is pure stupidity that only happens in the mind of the writer. Certainly not as a third party. The moron who continued to endanger everyone with terraforming attempts, after the second attempt should have been 'spaced' or disarmed. (literally) I'm 2 hours into this story. Somewhat curious, and somewhat furious. Poor writing for grand fantastical nonsense is not a good thing. The repeating paragraphs have started at this point. 2:19:00. I'm done, not just with this, but the channel. It is getting a Do Not Recommend flag from me.
My god, why are there so many paragraphs of this story that repeat?
The story is written like a book with chapters. The AI is just reading the words in that format.
This story is decent, but could have been much better with some proper editing, and removal of repetitive scenes. I realize that AI was used to write most of the story, but AI has not advanced to the point of being able to produce a story this complex without some human intervention and editing. 88
W T ever living holy month fucking is going on in this story 😆
Arrogance and hubris in the writing of this story. Constant "human / alien hybrid" statements. The alien has a name, on the same order as the humans are so named and they are equals in the relationship. Apparently not when it comes to the author, or translator, of this story.
Aliens, to me, are an unknown or unwanted beings. Depending on circumstances. The former is a matter of overcoming ignorance. The latter is a matter of invaders who have no wish to assimilate to the society they have invaded. They keep old customs in new lands, rather than conforming to the customs of the land / area they have entered, and are thus alien by their own choice.
Stupidity! Rogue mercenaries are never a welcome group to any situation. Mercenaries aligned to a faction can be reasoned with, as they abide by the rules / customs of the group which hires them. Mercenaries as a random group have NO STANDING and therefore no say in anything that happens. Allowing them to remain is pure stupidity that only happens in the mind of the writer. Certainly not as a third party.
The moron who continued to endanger everyone with terraforming attempts, after the second attempt should have been 'spaced' or disarmed. (literally)
I'm 2 hours into this story. Somewhat curious, and somewhat furious. Poor writing for grand fantastical nonsense is not a good thing.
The repeating paragraphs have started at this point. 2:19:00. I'm done, not just with this, but the channel. It is getting a Do Not Recommend flag from me.