Humanity unifying ? With over 400 languages ,? This story makes Star Trek or Star Wars modern stories seem sane pure Fantasy with a "mary-sue" as the leader
I have to agree with the other statements made. Its a good story but the presentation needs some improvement. Repeated segments and oral presentation are two areas that need improvement
Overall I liked this, but there were a few things that I think can be improved. - There's a repeated segment early in the story. This comes across as poor quality control. - The Mars colony preparations is dropped in there and then never mentioned again. Setups without payoffs are frustrating and lower the quality of the story. - Building entire ships over the span of three days, with the only explanation the story offers being "because humans smart and determined" feels disruptive and immersion breaking. It make it seem humans are so determined they pulled completely new technologies out of their behinds. A longer timeframe or a bit more foreshadowing than "we have made advancements in antimatter weapons and shields" would have made this much better.
This would be a good story. Unfortunately, the AI reader needs way better annunciation and pronunciation. I'll overlook the repetition of the story which seems to be a universal problem. Debris is pronounced debree , teach your robot hooked on phonics.
Yeah, this computer voice really puts me to sleep, does not matter what story it is, they all the sound the same with this voice. Think I will stick with those who still use humans to tell the story, just can't fake real emotion.
The repetition serves no purpose other than making the story longer without added information. The petty arguments in the UN is typical of humanity, and not unexpected. It took weeks to get to the meeting but only days to return? Story lacks continuity. Good premise, but poorly written.
Chen again? I’m gone
And all of the preparation achieved in 72 hours (less the time taken gasbagging at the UN)? Ridiculous.
It's always Chen, Sara, Reyes, trepidation, mandible and the same ship names and alien group names
The movie "Contact" came to mind right off the bat.
I'm beginning to think this Chinese AI.
Humanity unifying ? With over 400 languages ,?
This story makes Star Trek or Star Wars modern stories seem sane
pure Fantasy with a "mary-sue" as the leader
AI loops @16:00... The "Galactic Alamo" prerogative lives...
I guess someone decided to fix the Aricebo dish, because it's in ruins now.
Good story, irritating with the repeat, also rather superfluous. Wasting time with this repeat. Just to take up time. Ridiculous.
Ilon musk jr. 🤣
You can tell that the AI doesn’t know English! Rondavis for rendezvous!
I have to agree with the other statements made. Its a good story but the presentation needs some improvement. Repeated segments and oral presentation are two areas that need improvement
Elon Musk Jr., lol!
Just like a conveyor belt of AI stories with no quality control. I think I ll stick to paperback. So sad😂
It loosy program to repeat large blocks of critical test!
Overall I liked this, but there were a few things that I think can be improved.
- There's a repeated segment early in the story. This comes across as poor quality control.
- The Mars colony preparations is dropped in there and then never mentioned again. Setups without payoffs are frustrating and lower the quality of the story.
- Building entire ships over the span of three days, with the only explanation the story offers being "because humans smart and determined" feels disruptive and immersion breaking. It make it seem humans are so determined they pulled completely new technologies out of their behinds. A longer timeframe or a bit more foreshadowing than "we have made advancements in antimatter weapons and shields" would have made this much better.
WTF Is with the last name with Chen and petal And Evans change damn last names already
This would be a good story. Unfortunately, the AI reader needs way better annunciation and pronunciation. I'll overlook the repetition of the story which seems to be a universal problem. Debris is pronounced debree , teach your robot hooked on phonics.
Yeah, this computer voice really puts me to sleep, does not matter what story it is, they all the sound the same with this voice. Think I will stick with those who still use humans to tell the story, just can't fake real emotion.
. chen chen chen im out
Yet Another dam Chen
Quit it with this nonsense of double paragraphs!
A good story line. 4 of 5.
The repetition serves no purpose other than making the story longer without added information.
The petty arguments in the UN is typical of humanity, and not unexpected.
It took weeks to get to the meeting but only days to return? Story lacks continuity.
Good premise, but poorly written.