If you find any criticism in this music, please convey the criticism you find here, because my skills are not good enough and have many shortcomings, so that I can improve and fix the mixing in producing music in the future.
3 months later... I won't lie, I'm at a pretty low point right now. But...this theme...really helped invoke some...hope in me... Thank you Forza, for your music, your dedication....and your passion. Stay Determined ❤
How well it turned out! You make this kind of music, for me personally, better than some kind of hackneyed rock. Please try to make more of this kind of music! I wish you success!
It’s nice that you are trying out different ways to make remixes not only is this healthy it can also expand your imagination for really unique music compared to other artists. I hope that you are successful in the future and continue to thrive in thin community.
huh I didn't expect something like that but... I like this, it's cool how calm it is. I don't mind if you start doing music like this but I would like to see the old type of your remixes. You did a good job Forza (as always ;)) so Stay DETERMINED FORZA!!!
Как же хорошо получилось! такая музыка у тебя получается, лично для меня, лучше, чем какое-то заезженный рок. Прошу, постарайся делать побольше подобной музыки! желаю успехов!
Это начало такое имбовое, мне кажется что дальше будет видно настоящее искусство, но если честно хотелось бы побольше миксов и ремиксов в видет металл 😅
To say your skills aren't good is just an insult to how lovely this production is, it's lovely harmony and I think you should try this again but with more ambition. It is layered well and is beautifully. Please continue production like this! Perhaps try adding a few more instruments to go along with the main flow of the song.
I feel hesitant about it because I made mistakes in mixing, such as too much reverb, and I also found excessive low-freq which makes the sound unbalanced. Besides, thank you for liking it, I will try to make it better!
Thank you pal! This is the first time in making this music as an experiment in developing skills, but unfortunately I have many shortcomings and less good skills in producing this. This requires a lot of practice and lessons for this.
It have made me imagine a scene, where my Alizabelle after her recent prematurely death of her sister stands in bathroom inside of her now silent home before a mirror and remembering her childhood. How she was having fun with her parents and siblings. How they all was playing together, traveling, watching. Their family photo and how they were taking the photo. How she was sitting on laps of her sister. How her brother was unhappy about him doing something as pointless as taking a family photo. And how her parents was happy about them all being together. How she loved her mother and was happy being around her. And how she loved helping her big sister with study. Then she have remembered the circumstances why she doesn't looks at the picture anymore. How the news of death of their parents in a car accident have caught them when she and her sister was having a dinner that they together have made for them and their parents that were supposed to join them soon but already were late. How she and her siblings were on funeral of their parents. How in next few days her brother have decided to abandon them to search for better life. How her sister was begging him to stay because she doesn't know how she would feed herself and her little sister since she's just a student. How she was mostly all alone because her sister had to study and work to feed them both and she almost never was at home. What was even more worse, it was at the period of Alizabelle's life when she have needed any support the most but at the end was left in her yet darkest places. How even despite it all her sister even while being very exhausted due her schedule was trying to cheer up her at the only time when they were together, at the dinners. How after some time the things became a little better after her sister have got a boyfriend who was supporting them materially to at least for the sister to not live at her job to feed herself and her little sister. How her sister was happy because she have found a soulmate, despite it was aching Alizabelle herself, because she believes that she would never find anyone. How her sister was planning her wedding together with her little sister. And then she have remembered the day when her sister have died in her hands. After that she was left all alone, this time without anyone at all to support her. Then Alizabelle looks at her reflection at the mirror at her silent house. She feels sorrow. She feels sorrow because she would never meet her family. She feels hate. She hates the world for everything it have made her to go through. She just wants it end. She punches the mirror few times and then the sorrow kicks in. She starts crying loudly and slowly falls on the floor... Well, if the idea of the theme was to translate something like that then you have did it well! Like, very well!!
Hey Forza, Half here, remember that request I talked about? I'm just here to tell you that I changed the name of the song for my sans to "Judge of The Abnormal", that's all, still love your work, keep it going!
It seems like I think so. I have tried several times to fix the same thing as you said, but the results I did were the same and there was no change, and I also found something related to it that made this music mixing unbalanced. Maybe I will try to fix it again later. Moreover, Thanks for the criticism you found.
If you find any criticism in this music, please convey the criticism you find here, because my skills are not good enough and have many shortcomings, so that I can improve and fix the mixing in producing music in the future.
all negative commets below this is false
I ate his sans on breakfast
@@RedSkullers ( ._.)
Forsza I will be real...you underrated your self😢
Is this for your sans?
3 months later...
I won't lie, I'm at a pretty low point right now.
But...this theme...really helped invoke some...hope in me...
Thank you Forza, for your music, your dedication....and your passion. Stay Determined ❤
Not even 10 seconds in and it’s already a masterpiece
Man.. this is absolute masterpiece, i love this type of music! Keep up the good work!
Thats just sad but amazing, forza.
Nah bro ig im actually gonna cry-
Its sounds so emotional
How well it turned out! You make this kind of music, for me personally, better than some kind of hackneyed rock. Please try to make more of this kind of music! I wish you success!
It’s nice that you are trying out different ways to make remixes not only is this healthy it can also expand your imagination for really unique music compared to other artists. I hope that you are successful in the future and continue to thrive in thin community.
Kinda reminds me of a boss that you can’t defeat. Sounds amazing
huh I didn't expect something like that but... I like this, it's cool how calm it is. I don't mind if you start doing music like this but I would like to see the old type of your remixes. You did a good job Forza (as always ;)) so Stay DETERMINED FORZA!!!
This music is so crazy and soothing
dude this is amazing
Как же хорошо получилось! такая музыка у тебя получается, лично для меня, лучше, чем какое-то заезженный рок. Прошу, постарайся делать побольше подобной музыки! желаю успехов!
Это начало такое имбовое, мне кажется что дальше будет видно настоящее искусство, но если честно хотелось бы побольше миксов и ремиксов в видет металл 😅
Thanks for doing my request this means a lot to me 😊
oh wow, ur oc finally has this own theme
it sounds amazing gave me shivers i dont mind if its bad as long it can give me shivers i love it
It's really good man
To say your skills aren't good is just an insult to how lovely this production is, it's lovely harmony and I think you should try this again but with more ambition. It is layered well and is beautifully. Please continue production like this!
Perhaps try adding a few more instruments to go along with the main flow of the song.
I feel hesitant about it because I made mistakes in mixing, such as too much reverb, and I also found excessive low-freq which makes the sound unbalanced.
Besides, thank you for liking it, I will try to make it better!
@@forzasans_musician Those are just general common mixing errors
It's not a major issue and you shouldn't let it discourage you
Yeah i'm suscribing, this is a masterpiece
Cool the final judgement of all au
I love this
that's sad and amazing 😢🤧
Thank you pal!
This is the first time in making this music as an experiment in developing skills, but unfortunately I have many shortcomings and less good skills in producing this. This requires a lot of practice and lessons for this.
@@forzasans_musician I see. Yea you're welcome, man.
Cool!
Sickkk!!!😊
Absolutely beautiful, there is no advice I can provide you as I'm a newer composer. So, all I'll say is you definitely need to be hired for something.
Also, no Sans needs a theme that vibes this hard.
10/10 👍
It have made me imagine a scene, where my Alizabelle after her recent prematurely death of her sister stands in bathroom inside of her now silent home before a mirror and remembering her childhood. How she was having fun with her parents and siblings. How they all was playing together, traveling, watching.
Their family photo and how they were taking the photo. How she was sitting on laps of her sister. How her brother was unhappy about him doing something as pointless as taking a family photo. And how her parents was happy about them all being together. How she loved her mother and was happy being around her. And how she loved helping her big sister with study.
Then she have remembered the circumstances why she doesn't looks at the picture anymore. How the news of death of their parents in a car accident have caught them when she and her sister was having a dinner that they together have made for them and their parents that were supposed to join them soon but already were late. How she and her siblings were on funeral of their parents. How in next few days her brother have decided to abandon them to search for better life. How her sister was begging him to stay because she doesn't know how she would feed herself and her little sister since she's just a student.
How she was mostly all alone because her sister had to study and work to feed them both and she almost never was at home. What was even more worse, it was at the period of Alizabelle's life when she have needed any support the most but at the end was left in her yet darkest places.
How even despite it all her sister even while being very exhausted due her schedule was trying to cheer up her at the only time when they were together, at the dinners.
How after some time the things became a little better after her sister have got a boyfriend who was supporting them materially to at least for the sister to not live at her job to feed herself and her little sister. How her sister was happy because she have found a soulmate, despite it was aching Alizabelle herself, because she believes that she would never find anyone. How her sister was planning her wedding together with her little sister.
And then she have remembered the day when her sister have died in her hands. After that she was left all alone, this time without anyone at all to support her.
Then Alizabelle looks at her reflection at the mirror at her silent house. She feels sorrow. She feels sorrow because she would never meet her family. She feels hate. She hates the world for everything it have made her to go through. She just wants it end. She punches the mirror few times and then the sorrow kicks in. She starts crying loudly and slowly falls on the floor...
Well, if the idea of the theme was to translate something like that then you have did it well! Like, very well!!
Well, at some point I'm going to animate it. Only what i need is get a little more skilled at animating.
make a remix of papyrus encounter II pls
Hey Forza, Half here, remember that request I talked about? I'm just here to tell you that I changed the name of the song for my sans to "Judge of The Abnormal", that's all, still love your work, keep it going!
niiiiiice
Я пришел сюда не по зову сердца, а по зову уведомления
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Это база
@@SANS78-c9k внатуре
Why does this remind me of Omori
Are you Italian?
I'm not Italian. I'm Indonesian (You can see it in the about tab to learn about the country where I live.
@@forzasans_musician oh right…thank you ;)
@@Deltaskull you're welcome!
Teach me
too much low-freq
maybe high-freq but idk
maybe too much reverb
You're right.
It seems like I think so. I have tried several times to fix the same thing as you said, but the results I did were the same and there was no change, and I also found something related to it that made this music mixing unbalanced. Maybe I will try to fix it again later.
Moreover, Thanks for the criticism you found.