"The Church in the Woods" [COMPLETE] | CreepyPasta Storytime

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  • @liamlockheartart7560
    @liamlockheartart7560 5 ปีที่แล้ว +353

    This writer seems to really love pointing out that the main character is blushing. Just over and over and over.

    • @laurengardella9524
      @laurengardella9524 4 ปีที่แล้ว +44

      probably watches anime. just saying. lol I know I do.

    • @thefather4414
      @thefather4414 4 ปีที่แล้ว +25

      He a nervous wreck lol

    • @IsaacClodfelter
      @IsaacClodfelter 4 ปีที่แล้ว +25

      Idk, feels like trying to point out the main character's introversion, preferring to be alone.

    • @Sam-ne4qq
      @Sam-ne4qq 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      yeah then killing her and making a tragic ending for them so that it would be more painful for us.

    • @kenmallinson1541
      @kenmallinson1541 3 ปีที่แล้ว +8

      @@Sam-ne4qq thanks for the spoiler! Just U go to sleep now ,I will find U! 🤣😂🤣😈😈

  • @mrs.nightmare273
    @mrs.nightmare273 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1010

    I love how you aren't monotone and your voice fluctuates :) it makes the story creepier. Keep up the good work :)

    • @CobaltFyrestone
      @CobaltFyrestone 5 ปีที่แล้ว +39

      Best male narrator ever.

    • @MT-yt2yf
      @MT-yt2yf 5 ปีที่แล้ว +20

      Mrs. Nightmare that’s what I was thinking like omg everyone else seems so monotone to me

    • @isaacj.7989
      @isaacj.7989 5 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      @@Renji118 no like mr.creepypasta his is really monotone and also all the uhs

    • @foxdenhomestead
      @foxdenhomestead 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Agree

    • @indianabeaulne3187
      @indianabeaulne3187 4 ปีที่แล้ว +7

      Alfred Ridder I would say someone more like mr creeps

  • @rustedcactus115
    @rustedcactus115 4 ปีที่แล้ว +131

    The first about 10 minutes gives such an amazing sense nostalgia, its truly amazing how easily he can draw us in. Truly an art isn't it.

    • @kyleyoung5063
      @kyleyoung5063 ปีที่แล้ว

      ​@DaveraveAndMadonna81why..?

  • @jackdare
    @jackdare 5 ปีที่แล้ว +413

    🎵 _Goin' to the chapel and we're gonna get creepy.._ 👻

  • @bettacheddar3894
    @bettacheddar3894 5 ปีที่แล้ว +162

    Lolol 2:02:05 you can hear the intro start up for juuuust a second

    • @alaynakay3992
      @alaynakay3992 5 ปีที่แล้ว +11

      Betta Cheddar “hey ther-“

    • @nancylozoya6200
      @nancylozoya6200 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Alayna Kay SHUT UP NO ONE WANTS YOUR ANNOUNCEMENT

    • @Lardianyt
      @Lardianyt 24 วันที่ผ่านมา

      I died when I heard it, "aww the clergy got him"

  • @Haxl
    @Haxl 5 ปีที่แล้ว +270

    Up there with Borassca, Penpal, My family was stalked for 4 years and all the great ones.
    The key to these stories are the character and plot development, this had everything. It's truly amazing how this community has evolved, from the original classics that by today's standards are almost boring into these works of art.
    Brilliant job, as always.

    • @caleb.bowman
      @caleb.bowman 4 ปีที่แล้ว +6

      penpal was the first one i listened to and it’s still my favorite

    • @RicHairPIE
      @RicHairPIE 4 ปีที่แล้ว +11

      Agreed, it was very good. If you havent listened to it yet, I highly recommend the left right game. It's very well done and long enough to listen to for a shift at work.

    • @TheSCPStudio
      @TheSCPStudio 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      You act as if the people who wrote the first creepy pastas couldn’t have been experienced writers lmao

    • @somecartoonweeb3947
      @somecartoonweeb3947 4 ปีที่แล้ว +15

      As much as i liked this story, i feel like comparing it to Borrasca isnt fair. Borrasca is a far superior work of literature in my opinion.

    • @Haxl
      @Haxl 4 ปีที่แล้ว +8

      @@somecartoonweeb3947 Borrasca is a lot better I agree. For me, this is to Borrasca what Borrasca is to Tales from the Gas Station.

  • @donjuandinero
    @donjuandinero 5 ปีที่แล้ว +98

    The song used at 5:41 always manages to hit the feels somehow. I think it may be because it was used at the end of Borraska V.
    Spoiler alert for those who haven't seen it:
    It plays when Sam and Kimber finally see Kyle again at the foster/care home.

    • @fredericfrancoischopin1178
      @fredericfrancoischopin1178 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Do you know the song name the song is beautiful

    • @zethicalwaffle9643
      @zethicalwaffle9643 3 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      That story is my absolute favorite

    • @mrlynx2240
      @mrlynx2240 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      @@fredericfrancoischopin1178 “Home” by Myuu, a personal favorite of mine

    • @sarahshadley4596
      @sarahshadley4596 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@mrlynx2240 I’ve been trying to find this for literally years. Thank you. I’d go back and listen to more creepy pastas to even find the melody just to listen to it. The fact I now have the whole song fills my heart. Thank you so very much 😭❤️

    • @annoying3626
      @annoying3626 ปีที่แล้ว

      Is it actually related to that tho u I just decide to rewatch this and read the comments so 3 yrs later

  • @SamuraiGoth
    @SamuraiGoth 5 ปีที่แล้ว +123

    This is a damn cool story. It really nails the atmosphere of being somewhere you feel like you really shouldn`t be. The cult was very interesting too. And the story gets pretty intense once it gets going. Awesome.

    • @ADKwarriors
      @ADKwarriors ปีที่แล้ว

      Dude! "It really nails the atmosphere of being somewhere you feel like you really shouldn`t be." nails it so well I had to reply. Story really does give you this really weird eerie feeling that I couldn't put words to, Thank you!

  • @inducteddragoon
    @inducteddragoon 5 ปีที่แล้ว +211

    Finally the complete story! Time to listen to this whole thing in one sitting lol

    • @SergeantScare
      @SergeantScare 5 ปีที่แล้ว +6

      Hooray for binging instead of healthy doses.

    • @inducteddragoon
      @inducteddragoon 5 ปีที่แล้ว +9

      @@SergeantScare well I'm a truck driver. I drive 11 hours with a 30 minute break everyday. These long stories really help pass the time.

    • @inducteddragoon
      @inducteddragoon 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      @@strahinjamijovic7125 Yeah fr. That's why I'm happy when I see these long ones. But usually I'll just listen to an audio book if there's no good ones out.

    • @scottjones4017
      @scottjones4017 5 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      Bro I didn’t watch any so I could wait until the whole thing came out

    • @inducteddragoon
      @inducteddragoon 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      @@scottjones4017 yeah same here! I've always been like that even with tv shows. Gotta wait for all of it before I start cause I don't wanna be stuck waiting lol

  • @dehydratedculture9126
    @dehydratedculture9126 5 ปีที่แล้ว +119

    Hey man just bought some of your wife’s tea. Good on you for letting us know about her.

  • @seanroberts1157
    @seanroberts1157 5 ปีที่แล้ว +224

    If I had a dollar for everytime I thought 'JUST USE THE GUN'

    • @ryanhewitt8427
      @ryanhewitt8427 5 ปีที่แล้ว +16

      Yeah that's the only problem I had with the story is the protagonist was completely devoid of any sort of common sense

    • @myspacebarbrokenevermindif9892
      @myspacebarbrokenevermindif9892 5 ปีที่แล้ว +18

      burtscott gaming he used the gun at pretty apt times though. Of course he wasnt like a fucking SEAL with it, but he was smart enough to not just dump the entire gun into one guy (like most people would do irl)

    • @GrifoStelle
      @GrifoStelle 4 ปีที่แล้ว +6

      If you'd have more than 6 dollars then you weren't counting your bullets. :D

    • @freedom4442
      @freedom4442 4 ปีที่แล้ว +6

      I thought that but when Victoria was dying I was thinking about that water that Carolina gave him to pour in the circle

    • @Khornecussion
      @Khornecussion 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      There's a few things he does wrong, or not so much wrong, but just misses initial chances to deal with because A: Gets emotional investment out of the reader who is now wondering how they would've handled it. B: Shows the MC is not all knowing, or perfect. More relatable when they're not GI Joe, gunning down monsters like a cheesy 80s monster-action movie.

  • @cherryberry5315
    @cherryberry5315 5 ปีที่แล้ว +82

    Why are people disliking this video? It's a great story, great telling, high quality delivery, and a great channel. I love it! Can't see why anyone wouldn't.

    • @dawnmidnightsun2521
      @dawnmidnightsun2521 5 ปีที่แล้ว +22

      The religious nuts probably. They dont like anything involving their version of the end of the world. Even trying to ban Good Omens from Netflix (the fact that its a prime special seemed to have been missed by them).

    • @johntitor2761
      @johntitor2761 5 ปีที่แล้ว +7

      My sisters a bit of a religious nut and she liked it. She even agrees that certain denominations are... pretty fucked up. Gives Christians like my sister a bad name with their weird creepy views.

    • @cosmicdoggo9296
      @cosmicdoggo9296 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@dawnmidnightsun2521 this church sims more like a people who worship false gods (demons acting as gods to trick humanity and lead as from God) from Bible this story is actually pretty accurate

    • @anniecat4089
      @anniecat4089 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      People love to hate, especially on things that go against status quo... Can't insult the sheep's beliefs now

    • @missdolittle
      @missdolittle ปีที่แล้ว

      I didn’t downvote it but was tempted simply because the background music is too loud in some parts where it’s a pain to understand the spoken words.

  • @eenik9481
    @eenik9481 4 ปีที่แล้ว +11

    I got the perfect ad come up for this. When Marcus said “I wanted to tell her something” an ad came up right after saying “LETS PLAY RAID SHADOW LEGENDS”

  • @bradpritt1550
    @bradpritt1550 5 ปีที่แล้ว +91

    That angel you used in the thumbnail is the Haserot angel. It's in a cemetery in East Cleveland......
    So were the TORSO MURDERS! DO TORSO MURDERS! lol

  • @yulie1022
    @yulie1022 5 ปีที่แล้ว +24

    Last night, all flights (relevant to me) out of Boston were canceled so I made the decision to rent a car and drive home as I had early morning meetings/calls I could not miss. About a 5 hour drive, starting at 6pm. Thank your for your videos complying stories, made it easy and I didn't have to keep looking at my phone to pick a new video. Got home a little after midnight. Stories kept me up and alert through the whole drive (plus a venti starbucks.)
    THANK YOU, love your videos keep up the good work!

  • @persaunna
    @persaunna 5 ปีที่แล้ว +51

    I had never heard this before. You are amazing. There were parts I held my breath for. And, at one point I said out loud to no one cuz it's just me here: " well at least he didn't THROW THE GUN". Totally made me laugh, again with no one, and had to rewind. Thank you for such memorable characters/stories/narration. Writers who want exposure should flock to you. Would put a little heart here but I do t know how. Off to listen to the new Gas Station Tale.

  • @atlas9051
    @atlas9051 5 ปีที่แล้ว +99

    i love your voice. it’s so calming and relaxing.

  • @JINX-The-Writer
    @JINX-The-Writer 5 ปีที่แล้ว +17

    I really appreciate that you always credit the author. There is one big name narrator that never credits the author. As a writer I appreciate it. Keep up the amazing work!

  • @Mong00ze-Muzik
    @Mong00ze-Muzik 2 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    No... no you can't open like that... you are not allowed to make me cry.... the writing, narration and music combined..... it's beautiful...

  • @iaacryign
    @iaacryign 2 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    Im 46 minutes in and i adore elizabeths character, she’s very fun and the way the author is writing her is a very nice change from the usual “she boobily boobed down the corridor”

  • @madelinelove5150
    @madelinelove5150 5 ปีที่แล้ว +63

    this would make one hell of a movie

    • @persaunna
      @persaunna 5 ปีที่แล้ว

      YES!!!

    • @KRSStudios
      @KRSStudios 4 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      Just as long as it is worked with people who know how to make movies

    • @gurt.yuri3378
      @gurt.yuri3378 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      No hollywood bs tho.

    • @GrifoStelle
      @GrifoStelle 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      I'd love to have it in book form for the shelf ❤

    • @notoriousjester2593
      @notoriousjester2593 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      A bit late but you guys should check out The Void, it's somewhat similar and a really solid lovecraftian horror film!

  • @Electro_Katarina
    @Electro_Katarina 5 ปีที่แล้ว +373

    This sounds like a weird skyrim questline.

    • @theoz-zone7470
      @theoz-zone7470 5 ปีที่แล้ว +12

      Modders make this happen please!

    • @Brewski_3-2
      @Brewski_3-2 5 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Yo for real

    • @adampokeythompson1097
      @adampokeythompson1097 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      🧝‍♂️🧝‍♀️🧚‍♂️🧚‍♀️🧙‍♂️

    • @Electro_Katarina
      @Electro_Katarina 5 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      @Randy Winter it's what it sounds like no getting over that.

    • @anarchosherman961
      @anarchosherman961 5 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      @Randy Winter wut

  • @johnwilliam2575
    @johnwilliam2575 5 ปีที่แล้ว +34

    I'm happy to see another long story. This will help pass the time at work, thank you :)

    • @AsdfAsdf-mi6ks
      @AsdfAsdf-mi6ks 5 ปีที่แล้ว

      John William what do you do for your job?

    • @hectorflores8183
      @hectorflores8183 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      History teacher haha I used to have a teacher with that same name

  • @jasonbernard9012
    @jasonbernard9012 4 ปีที่แล้ว +15

    Why does Terrence sound like he’s drunk all the time? I’m dying hahahah

  • @ospr9478
    @ospr9478 4 ปีที่แล้ว +207

    the moment that she said 'my father did this to me' *coughs in Alabama*

    • @EnderHasEntered
      @EnderHasEntered 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      *Coughs in Alabama*

    • @ninja8584
      @ninja8584 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Sammy Slaughter iouo

    • @ninja8584
      @ninja8584 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Opportunity oooio

    • @aaryndanilow5137
      @aaryndanilow5137 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Must happen a lot in Alabama?????...

    • @noonecares8932
      @noonecares8932 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      @@aaryndanilow5137 I live in Alabama and don’t know a single person who is inbred.

  • @chanBackIn
    @chanBackIn 4 ปีที่แล้ว +18

    For a second there I was ready for “vomit on my sweater already ! Mom’s spaghetti!”

  • @asprague1068
    @asprague1068 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    You not only read this piece eloquently, but you also acted out each character through your voice. For me this wasn't just a story, it was a performance. You're an amazing story teller, and to the author: Wow! Just wow! You have a gift. Keep going!

  • @divine592
    @divine592 5 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    Puts so much effort into a video and gets barely any likes, you are very under appreciated here and it will be a very sad day when ur gone

  • @nickerhart6510
    @nickerhart6510 2 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    This could have been an amazing story buy instead of changing things at the end to avoid what the beginning of the story and create an unexpected and satisfying ending, they basically took all tension out by literally telling us how it would turn out.

  • @lunifae9430
    @lunifae9430 5 ปีที่แล้ว +21

    Didn't listen to this bc I confused it with "On a Hill" for some reason... decided to listen anyway bc I adore your storytelling skills, and was pleasantly surprised by this amazing story!! Thank you for helping me draw

  • @khajiitwithwares7734
    @khajiitwithwares7734 4 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    This was amazing... You have the ability to being all these characters to life and instill personality into them, the voice for the Reverend was spot on 🙌🏻

  • @andreaskaiser3849
    @andreaskaiser3849 5 ปีที่แล้ว +48

    Perfect thing to listen to while writing an essay at 2 am

  • @the_koo3151
    @the_koo3151 4 ปีที่แล้ว +21

    Main character: off to do a computer job
    Main character: instead of just keeping his distance and doing his work, ends up demanding to someone he doesn’t know and is basically employed by to who the baby daddy is.
    Sounds like an HR hell problem

  • @shadowstar7388
    @shadowstar7388 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Done. If I heard this story in person, I'd be giving a standing ovation. This was brilliant. Just utterly brilliant.

  • @justsomebody7469
    @justsomebody7469 5 ปีที่แล้ว +12

    Your voice is so soothing and the smooth way you read the story is amazing! I love these stories and I especially love the way you don’t stutter or hesitate while reading! Amazing job! Love it! 👻💗

  • @phoebaleeb6129
    @phoebaleeb6129 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Can we talk about how expertly placed the music at around 1:08:00 is? It accentuates the faster pace of the story brilliantly and I could absolutely hear this piece of music being used for a montage of the passage in a life action version.
    Fantastic narrating and editing as always!

    • @slayerslayer4221
      @slayerslayer4221 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Late but this song is “L theme” From Death Note, like you said it pretty much meant for montage epic moment as from L.

    • @phoebaleeb6129
      @phoebaleeb6129 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@slayerslayer4221 there we go then 😂 thanks for that, I knew I recognised it from somewhere

  • @russellbrownlow4564
    @russellbrownlow4564 4 ปีที่แล้ว +12

    I know this has nothing to do with Tales from the Gas-station, but his voice reminds me of Jack so I keep on thinking that this guy is Jack going through another one of his weird adventures. I love this channel

    • @cosmicseal7977
      @cosmicseal7977 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      I wasnt paying very much attention while listening and kept thinking I was listening to tales from the gas station and went to switch the story to something new

    • @Handles-Are-A-Stupid-Idea
      @Handles-Are-A-Stupid-Idea 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      That's because MCP doesn't ever change the main character's voice. Every main chracter is either softspoken or sounds like an angry drunk.

    • @devonbananastar4170
      @devonbananastar4170 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@Handles-Are-A-Stupid-IdeaI think it’s because it’s closest to his actual voice and it’s much harder to do hours of recording in different voices than one that’s at least similar to your normal one

  • @vitaliheredia8856
    @vitaliheredia8856 5 ปีที่แล้ว +18

    Finally I can listen to this all in one go

  • @SergeantScare
    @SergeantScare 5 ปีที่แล้ว +115

    Well, I feel empty after 2 hours and 50 minutes.

  • @MW-uk5ji
    @MW-uk5ji 5 ปีที่แล้ว +14

    Elderly man in his mid 50's? Oh boy...50 is the new 40

  • @HorrorFreak1408
    @HorrorFreak1408 5 ปีที่แล้ว +16

    You did well on this. It made for a great audiobook

  • @Charwool03
    @Charwool03 5 ปีที่แล้ว +30

    This was a god dam good story I mean wow thxs this is one of my favorite stories now take care and have a good week / year / day

    • @bushdidit3447
      @bushdidit3447 5 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      If you want a god tier one search up Borrasca trust me that story was a amazing one it starts off slow but everything is amazing I thought I knew it all but then that story holy shit please listen to it and tell me what you think also there is two of them there are both equally as good the second one is far fetched but good

    • @max_carnationyt5656
      @max_carnationyt5656 5 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@bushdidit3447 dude I literally heard that one like five years ago and this story reminded me of it but I couldn't remember the name

    • @bushdidit3447
      @bushdidit3447 5 ปีที่แล้ว

      Saber Alejandro lol it’s borrasca

  • @Chaotic_Laughing
    @Chaotic_Laughing 5 ปีที่แล้ว +41

    Sounds like a rollercoaster of reincarnation

  • @roberthomero2647
    @roberthomero2647 4 ปีที่แล้ว +10

    Him describing himself waking up:
    Me: that’s what going off weed is like.

    • @ericamaya5472
      @ericamaya5472 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      The way you worded that makes me think you’ve never smoked weed😂

  • @arachatman7367
    @arachatman7367 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    You don't just read you bring the listener to the very moment and feelings . some readers are boring and don't know how to ack out what so every they keep the same boring pitch . man your fucking awesome . you really know how to keep us engaged .

  • @sjowns100
    @sjowns100 5 ปีที่แล้ว +9

    Ive been following your channel for years and 6 mins into this Video I knew this was your best work yet! Your Narration is spectacular!

  • @evangriffis2942
    @evangriffis2942 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Paradoxical time loops with a primordial godlike being.......im so confused yet it makes perfect sense at the same time...great story, and you narrate your stories REALLY well. Theyre awesome for the late nights when I cant sleep. Thanks alot. 😚

  • @brettjohnson536
    @brettjohnson536 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Am I there only one who was picturing Dutch Van Der Linde when the reverend was talking? Hahaha

  • @Electro_Katarina
    @Electro_Katarina 5 ปีที่แล้ว +90

    I am so enthralled by alternative religions and their belief systems.

    • @trumpetnut79
      @trumpetnut79 5 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      I'm enthralled by philosophically based systems and practices that are purposely non-belief systems.

    • @allyportman8009
      @allyportman8009 5 ปีที่แล้ว +7

      im enthralled by ur dad

    • @Electro_Katarina
      @Electro_Katarina 5 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      @@trumpetnut79 I'm definitely an atheist that is skeptical of everything but I still find it interesting.

    • @Jixsurez
      @Jixsurez 5 ปีที่แล้ว +8

      I'm doing a podcast about my time trapped as a Jehovah's Witness for 20 years of my life. Perhaps you might be interested?

    • @Electro_Katarina
      @Electro_Katarina 5 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      @@Jixsurez I'll check it out!

  • @neji0byakugan360
    @neji0byakugan360 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    I've been listening to this story on repeat along with borrasca, pen pal, and stolen tongues for over 10 years. It is just now that i had to double check... her name is Victoria Ruin? Victoria Ruin... as in ruined victory.... talk about prophetic names

  • @oshadowdevilo7835
    @oshadowdevilo7835 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Bombass story. I listened to it during my road trip today. 10/10 would listen again.

  • @landfam4
    @landfam4 4 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    Me at the beginning: this is too nice, I don’t trust this

  • @toiboiskullguy9331
    @toiboiskullguy9331 5 ปีที่แล้ว +51

    Yeah, I cried as Home started playing as he talks about the Christmas tape
    Shut up

  • @benjaminkamp1375
    @benjaminkamp1375 5 ปีที่แล้ว +76

    Noticed the music from Death Note in the background

    • @hunterkelley8036
      @hunterkelley8036 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      @Tristen Larson same

    • @ryuusu
      @ryuusu 4 ปีที่แล้ว +6

      I know! I was like wait a sec is this from Death note?

    • @TheAquaticBeef
      @TheAquaticBeef 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      looool L music

    • @toxogandhi
      @toxogandhi 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Glad I'm not the only one. I was Team L so hard.

    • @TheSlammurai
      @TheSlammurai 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Same with Silent Hill.

  • @carolwhiteside4748
    @carolwhiteside4748 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    This is the first story I’ve heard in a long time that actually sent chills down my spine. I had to take a few minutes to process everything after it was over. This needs to be a movie

  • @JessyKatt10
    @JessyKatt10 5 ปีที่แล้ว +13

    Awesome story :) I follow your podcast and so glad I found your channel ❤️❤️

  • @leighanndunn3321
    @leighanndunn3321 5 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    Great story and the music behind the story was awesome. Amazing job MrCreepyPasta 👏👏👏

  • @latashaembry8287
    @latashaembry8287 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Absolutely brilliant full circle story absolutely fantastic storyline the inflection of various emotional involvement. The narrators voices at different points just brilliant so well done

  • @camrynwhite968
    @camrynwhite968 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    you are a beautiful story teller the first video i listened to you became my favorite creepy pasta youtuber this story is amazing wow

  • @adityasagar7041
    @adityasagar7041 3 ปีที่แล้ว +9

    the starting of the creepypasta felt so wholesome

  • @glassdiamond2185
    @glassdiamond2185 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    I just started this but I've got to say what an awesome job you did with the intro. You put so much feeling intro it. Well done.

  • @ajvanrensburg5099
    @ajvanrensburg5099 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    You narrate so well that I would think it is you telling the storie from your own experience... well done!

  • @orf48890
    @orf48890 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    I work as an entry level blacksmith ( I do little shit like pommels and guards) and these full series videos are honestly my best friend thank you so much MCP!!

  • @jmommy881
    @jmommy881 ปีที่แล้ว

    Silent hill music very nice touch man im so glad i found you ive been searching for someone to keep me awake and intrigued to get through a 10 hour graveyard shift 6 days a week finally thanks for rocking at what you're doing!!!!!

  • @spartanx9293
    @spartanx9293 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    God the beginning of this story is so wholesome it makes me feel good

  • @trufflehound1960
    @trufflehound1960 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Fantastic storytelling, really atmospheric use of intonation. Great voice for this medium. Thank you

  • @lexthemystic3541
    @lexthemystic3541 5 ปีที่แล้ว +13

    1:06:57
    L's Theme? Huh. Never would've thought. Or is it Tubular Bells?

    • @Behemoth9030
      @Behemoth9030 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      I first thought it was the Exorcist theme for the rising notes but no, pretty certain it’s L’s theme.

    • @MijaCoyote
      @MijaCoyote 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      It sounds more Exorcist to me

    • @lexthemystic3541
      @lexthemystic3541 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@MijaCoyote That’s Tubular Bells.

  • @kikiyoshimie735
    @kikiyoshimie735 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    I have become a avid listener over these past couple of months. I do enjoy them a lot and think your voice adds great character to the stories. I look forward to hearing new ones. Thanks so much for doing what ya do.

  • @mtgamerguy
    @mtgamerguy 5 ปีที่แล้ว +10

    I was crying near the start because I also lost my mother before I was to I young to really remember. She dies from illness. That was 11 years ago.

    • @morriganravenmist5539
      @morriganravenmist5539 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      I'm sorry for you're loss. My mom passed away will be 12yr in October 20th she passed of a brain tumor. She was young. 50 is all. I'm old enough 2 remember my mom. I was 30 when she passed, not a day goes passed that I don't think about her and wish that she was here. Especially after all that's gone on. Plus she would be so super excited that she has another grandchild my brothers little girl 3yrs old and my son and his gf are having a baby so she wpuld be a great nanna! My sons baby is due October end 19/22 so I think it's gonna be a baby girl and be born on 20th October. Anyway. Stay safe and well in this crazy world.

    • @samuel-zb4qn
      @samuel-zb4qn 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      im sorry :(

  • @odlawgames5073
    @odlawgames5073 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Just wanna say you are hands down my favorite creepypasta storyteller. Kinda hard to explain but 90% of the other creepypasta guys sound bland. I do wish you had more long videos like this. I listen to them throughout the night while I'm at work. Keep up the good work!

  • @AzzyOfficial
    @AzzyOfficial 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    “it was my father... he did this to me”
    me: *audible loud wrenching while at work*

  • @Shaljroan30750
    @Shaljroan30750 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Thank you for uploading this. You're a great youtuber, i appreciate you!

  • @mhmjoey
    @mhmjoey 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    been here since 2016, i love coming back to these stories. they are soo good and ur probably the best storyteller i know.

  • @deweycox8409
    @deweycox8409 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    That was goooood. Reminded me of The Forbidden Siren. Mad props to you and the author for this amazing video.

  • @acatacho
    @acatacho 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    That "hey there" at 2:02:00 in context of the story and what was happening scared the shit out of me and I feel dumb for it lol.

  • @targettarget3105
    @targettarget3105 5 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    This story was amazing

  • @loganlion6314
    @loganlion6314 5 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    Yay a long great episode!

  • @sonsosavage9987
    @sonsosavage9987 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Great job with those "muffled bumps" I literally took my Bose off my head, thinking something was happening upstairs.

  • @debbiematthews1928
    @debbiematthews1928 ปีที่แล้ว

    Brilliant as always, sir !! You really have an amazing gift for storytelling .. I'll just dive in now for another story. It's the middle of the night here in Scotland, and as usual, I'm wide awake..just me and Alfred my wee black cat 🐈‍⬛️.. goodnight, and thank you 🌈

  • @sengroagers1111
    @sengroagers1111 5 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    I have been waiting for this...

  • @no1caresanymore
    @no1caresanymore 5 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    Even a pillow! What luxury!

  • @cyrus909
    @cyrus909 5 ปีที่แล้ว +31

    YAAAYYYY TIME TO SPEND 3 HPURS DRAWING AND LISTENING TO THIS

  • @NegativeNezzy
    @NegativeNezzy 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    God damnit, you make the best videos... holy... though I can't stop hearing Daniel from the Radio Station. xD Love the vids man.

  • @lilchekecorrea9816
    @lilchekecorrea9816 5 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    The story's like these are the best

  • @honeybee1256
    @honeybee1256 5 ปีที่แล้ว +9

    Dude!!! Can’t wait to see you in Roswell!!

  • @freedom4442
    @freedom4442 4 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    I was mad about the gun not being used at first, but I am way more mad about him not using the water Carolina gave earlier to reverse the spell.

  • @takodaalldredge8391
    @takodaalldredge8391 5 ปีที่แล้ว +13

    I love how there is a seven month gap in between part 3 and 4

  • @antimal9222
    @antimal9222 5 ปีที่แล้ว +12

    "Son! It's been two days!"

    • @Max-me9xq
      @Max-me9xq 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      I thought I was the only one thinking that lol.

  • @jimmydrury8374
    @jimmydrury8374 5 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    My parakeet's name is Terrance and I couldn't take this seriously because of that

  • @jokerjonesjjp5522
    @jokerjonesjjp5522 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    This seems like a pretty cool story so far. You're doing a great job with it too man

  • @shadowstar7388
    @shadowstar7388 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    So I'm on part 2, and I want to point out what I believe to be foreshadowing. There is no such thing as "just a dream". They all have deeper meaning. Your subconscious is like a farmer your ego is like his dog. The dog can guard the property, round up sheep and cattle, and help with basic tasks, but the farmer sees the bigger picture and is ultimately guiding the dog.

  • @korosheht5446
    @korosheht5446 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

    This was quite the story
    Its crazy to listen to old MCP stories and hearing him speed reading them lol

  • @christopheraaron1255
    @christopheraaron1255 5 ปีที่แล้ว +13

    Smooth, fluent driving... fluent... driving... huh? If I were to read creepy pasta, I would HAVE to edit and correct them...

  • @johnfromdownunder.4339
    @johnfromdownunder.4339 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    It's 2:34 am now in Sydney Australia and I'm so into this story I so want him to succeed but I know a good story has tragic endings.

  • @lavasharkandboygirl9716
    @lavasharkandboygirl9716 2 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    MCP I love your reading but someone needs to tell you that THERE IS NO “T” in “ACROSS”

  • @justsomebody7469
    @justsomebody7469 5 ปีที่แล้ว +16

    Omg poor Victoria 😭😭😭

  • @minibutrfly12
    @minibutrfly12 5 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Love! As usual

  • @na5306
    @na5306 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Really awesome story I was hanging on my seat👍

  • @lazylama
    @lazylama ปีที่แล้ว

    Really great story and narration...thanks for the bedtime story!!

  • @XDiCap
    @XDiCap 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    2:02:02 “Hey the-“ lmao nice editing