Hi Alex big fan of these tear downs, but this email could still be a lot better. Tech/marketing ICP’s are super skeptical busy people and want to see WHY you’re reaching out rather than a generic compliment. Also I think the original email had the right idea with including at least one result metric. With the state of tech right now, tangible results sell better than past logos. Cheers!
What do you think?: Hey Greg, My friend mentioned about your company and it made me send you an email. I have helped Samsung create animated sales video which has generated 64% more conversions. Would love to do the same for you. Mind if i send over some time? Thanks [name]
How about this: Hey Greg, Came across {Company} on {Channel} and I'm seriously impressed with what you've achieved so far in terms of growth at the company. Keep up the good work! Just had a quick question - need any help with animated sales videos? Recently created one for Samsung and that lead to a 64% increase in conversion rate. Now I'd love to do the same for {Company}. Mind if I send over a few times for a quick WhatsApp call? Thanks, Soumya
Hi Alex big fan of these tear downs, but this email could still be a lot better.
Tech/marketing ICP’s are super skeptical busy people and want to see WHY you’re reaching out rather than a generic compliment. Also I think the original email had the right idea with including at least one result metric.
With the state of tech right now, tangible results sell better than past logos.
Cheers!
Sure? Was thinking to use metrics in my email
btw, great book! "The Cold Email Manifesto"
Hi Alex! QQ if I may? Does Lemlist let me schedule 4 sequence emails in one go? And stop the remaining emails when a prospect responds? thanks :)
awesome! pls do some teardowns for boring industries like accounting/consulting (personally looking for effective copy)
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yeah, today this is useless. And in the 3 months it will also change.
What do you think?:
Hey Greg,
My friend mentioned about your company and it made me send you an email.
I have helped Samsung create animated sales video which has generated 64% more conversions.
Would love to do the same for you. Mind if i send over some time?
Thanks
[name]
How about this:
Hey Greg,
Came across {Company} on {Channel} and I'm seriously impressed with what you've achieved so far in terms of growth at the company. Keep up the good work!
Just had a quick question - need any help with animated sales videos? Recently created one for Samsung and that lead to a 64% increase in conversion rate.
Now I'd love to do the same for {Company}. Mind if I send over a few times for a quick WhatsApp call?
Thanks,
Soumya