My Art + Writing PET PEEVES (And how to fix them)

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  • @Qwertyuiop1095_
    @Qwertyuiop1095_ 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +2738

    Background tip: if you don’t like drawing backgrounds, try pretending that you’re making a house in the sims or something fun like that. Include things about the world to exaggerate something/to reward people who are paying really close attention. Have you seen how many crosses were around in like the 1300s? Also try looking at pretty things with in the same genre. I like playing assassins creed 2 and getting inspired from those type of games because they’re *so* pretty!

    • @bella_daze3092
      @bella_daze3092 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +74

      @@Qwertyuiop1095_ backgrounds are hard because of spacial awareness, I guess? Like I can write them out but can’t draw it out as easily

    • @Qwertyuiop1095_
      @Qwertyuiop1095_ 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +20

      @@bella_daze3092 yeah it does take a while to translate words to art, I’m pretty lucky in that I think I have pretty good spatial awareness naturally but it’s certainly a skill that has to be refined for everyone trying to draw scenes

    • @grildrago
      @grildrago 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +13

      @@Qwertyuiop1095_ lol, I dont even like decorating house in sims.
      But yeah, gotta find what's the best method

    • @Rulesofnature2006
      @Rulesofnature2006 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@Qwertyuiop1095_ Assassins creed mentioned!!
      Ac is my hyperfixiation and I like to draw the houses and some landscapes from the game to train how to draw backgrounds

    • @sharcraz211
      @sharcraz211 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +6

      Yeah I hate those decoration things in games. Way too tedious.

  • @ShadowDrakken
    @ShadowDrakken 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +1243

    the word balloons being too empty, too tight, or shrink wrapped can actually be a good thing if you're using those as emotive techniques. Too empty makes the character feels quiet and shrinking away, too tight makes them feel loud and obnoxious, and shrink wrapped makes them feel tense and anxious.

    • @TheStarfishface
      @TheStarfishface  2 หลายเดือนก่อน +451

      Oh they definitely have their specific uses! But it’s not something you want to use 100% of the time

    • @vaporean_boylove.0w083
      @vaporean_boylove.0w083 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +57

      I thought the same. Tho not many ppl know when and where to use them sometimes. But this is a great tip to give on a mood or characterize someone.

    • @mertensiam3384
      @mertensiam3384 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +33

      ​@@vaporean_boylove.0w083 yeah, that's the thing with art. It's all about intent.
      Are you drawing the character assymetrical in anatomy because thats their design or because you don't know how to draw it yet? Are you making the speech bubbles wrapped around the text to make it feel cluttered and anxious or because you don't know how to space them yet?
      Intent is important and it can elevate or sabotage an otherwise amazing piece of media

    • @vaporean_boylove.0w083
      @vaporean_boylove.0w083 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

      @@mertensiam3384
      Well said!

  • @5TR3TCH3Z
    @5TR3TCH3Z 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +1143

    The self-deprecating section is SO necessary. When people do it, they're putting the other person in a position to either a.) argue and assure them their art is Good Actually or b.) agree and come off as a tool no matter how they spin it. When you're the one in the self-deprecating position, no compliment feels sincere and any criticism feels like a personal attack. It's a lose-lose interaction. I used to self-deprecate on impulse until I ended up having to placate someone else so I wouldn't risk hurting their feelings one too many times. There's ways to be humble without putting yourself down in the process!

    • @CosmiccNova
      @CosmiccNova 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +31

      @@5TR3TCH3Z It’s really funny because since taking my Creative Writing classes, I’m used to people agreeing with me when I self-deprecate about a piece of my writing. They agree and give me proper criticism/advice to accompany it. I never see anyone as a tool if they present their thoughts in that way.

    • @somegoodsoup7008
      @somegoodsoup7008 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +27

      @@CosmiccNova I think it's because it's less "agreeing that it's bad" and giving you pointers on how to improve and make it less bad.

    • @serenegenerally
      @serenegenerally 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +23

      BROOOO it pisses me off so bad because you’re putting your baggage onto other people and expecting a compliment… like no that’s not how it works

    • @mirulei
      @mirulei 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +19

      i've found that if someone has that attitude it's best to not treat it as an actual argument or opinion but an emotion. logical "that's not true/i don't know why you'd say that" or vice versa responses don't work because insecurity can't be deconstructed logically. something like "i don't get that impression of you but i've had that feeling about myself as well before so i get it" can work wonders in just acknowledging it and moving on without needing to corner yourself into reinforcing the content of their opinion. of course immediately it comes more naturally to try and express your discomfort in how they're expressing that insecurity but it's a more kinder perspective to assume we've all probably felt that way about showing our own works to other people at some point even if we didn't say it out of respect to not spoil the mood or depreciate the art, they just might not be as ready to confront that for themselves yet.

    • @serenegenerally
      @serenegenerally 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +6

      @@mirulei this is actually a great point, haven’t thought of it that way

  • @thecitybeyond-re9sn
    @thecitybeyond-re9sn 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +420

    One thing that helps me stop self deprecating is I think “Would past me think this is cool?” Even if the art isn’t perfect by any means, me from 3 years ago would usually be impressed. Try to impress the you that just started drawing.

    • @DarwinRoger893
      @DarwinRoger893 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +15

      My older self would genuinely cry seeing present me

    • @gluttonousmaximus9048
      @gluttonousmaximus9048 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

      To that question, the answer in my case is still no. My most ambitious and meticulous drawings belonged 10 years ago on my sketchbooks.

    • @reviseyourwhaaattt
      @reviseyourwhaaattt 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +6

      ngl younger me would be like EW ITS NOT ANIME but i think shed admire my character designs even she doesnt like my style LOL

    • @rubyeverred_
      @rubyeverred_ หลายเดือนก่อน

      I'll try that out, thanks for the advice :)

    • @aprilzero716
      @aprilzero716 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Huh. That's actually really good advice! Younger me woulda been fuckin STOKED to see the kinda things I can draw today and that honestly kinda makes me feel a little better about my art. This one's for you, little me! Thanks for the advice, mate. This surprisingly helped a lot

  • @pipkarainbow6622
    @pipkarainbow6622 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +545

    10:51 YES. Usually when i draw animal-like characters, their ears expand from where the human ears grow to the top of their head. It's functional and not annoying because it's only two of them

    • @vaporean_boylove.0w083
      @vaporean_boylove.0w083 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +33

      I also do this. I try to get the ears to properly connect where the previous human ones were. Unless it's just not working like horse ears! Helps mix the two anatomies.

    • @hamstersandwich9917
      @hamstersandwich9917 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      Won't that make the ears too big?

    • @ohahmystical2976
      @ohahmystical2976 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +56

      @@hamstersandwich9917 Last time I checked human’s don’t have animal ears so I don’t think we should be concerned in regards to the size of them for realism 😅

    • @bugstarcat1.11
      @bugstarcat1.11 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      Reigen pfp spotted

    • @mmangalisomasinga432
      @mmangalisomasinga432 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +6

      @@hamstersandwich9917 If you do it right and the character isn't bald, it won't look too much bigger than the regular top-of-the-head-only look.

  • @CorruptedAmbrose
    @CorruptedAmbrose 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +547

    On the topic of the flesh fang: I actually have one because of a scar on my lip that didn't heal right! Just a fun little fact

    • @IlostMyteethh
      @IlostMyteethh 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +85

      @@CorruptedAmbrose ME TOO?? I had a fall a few years back which broke my teeth and split my lip , It never healed properly but I never thought about it as a flesh fang its actually cute to think about it this way ! I feel less alone knowing someone has the same kind of scar as me ahah

    • @CorruptedAmbrose
      @CorruptedAmbrose 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +50

      @@IlostMyteethh flesh fang twins!! I haven't met anyone else that had something like mine!

    • @erikdahl6861
      @erikdahl6861 หลายเดือนก่อน +10

      @@IlostMyteethhthis is genuinely amazing and i hate to interrupt you two but
      fitting name lmao

    • @PGbutalsofourteenplus
      @PGbutalsofourteenplus 29 วันที่ผ่านมา +5

      @@CorruptedAmbrose I like cause thanks to Gacha life I find it cute 🥺🥰

    • @alchemistofsteel8099
      @alchemistofsteel8099 28 วันที่ผ่านมา

      Cringe​@@PGbutalsofourteenplus

  • @SnowFox-gv2rn
    @SnowFox-gv2rn 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +292

    I think a healthy habit to stop self deprecating is to try to point out AT LEAST one part of a new thing you made that you liked and are proud of
    It’s not so much that it makes you egotistical, but it helps you remember that you are more skilled and creative than you think
    Also, remember to be proud that you even are creating! Making art is hard, no matter the medium or practice. Be proud that you made something, no matter the end result

    • @bella_daze3092
      @bella_daze3092 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

      @@SnowFox-gv2rn THIS EXACTLY😭😭 that’s what I do!!

    • @prayagsuthar9856
      @prayagsuthar9856 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +12

      Honestly, some societies have created this RIDICULOUS, flattened, oversimplified idea of what makes you egotistical. _PRAISE YOUR OWN ART!!!!!_ Because ultimately, what matters isn't praising your art this little and bashing it this much. What matters is that you're looking at your own work through a critical lens, and looking at it in a pros-and-cons kind of way. The pros are something you can try to do next time too, and the cons are things you can try to adjust or make up for in the future, through trial-and-error.

  • @greenhydra10
    @greenhydra10 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +665

    "Noses are cool, okay?" That's another one for the Star out of Context list.
    23:28 One of us! One of us!

    • @bella_daze3092
      @bella_daze3092 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +12

      ONE OF US! ONE OF US! ONE OF US!!

    • @alexarose832
      @alexarose832 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +8

      *ONE OF US! ONE OF US!*

    • @SillytheSkrunklylilfella
      @SillytheSkrunklylilfella 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +6

      ONE OF US! ONE OF US! ONE OF US!!!

  • @curious_mitch
    @curious_mitch 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +498

    Yeah, the issue with ears bugs me as well, but I also understand the conflict there. If a character only has animal ears and then we get a shot of where their human ears would be and there's just nothing, it can be kinda' jarring, hence why most characters done in this way usually have that spot covered by their hair at all times. That said however, if we did characters like that more often, then we'd get used to it and it wouldn't be so jarring to see them without the human ears. Also, screw flesh-fang. It's weird.

    • @fastnot
      @fastnot 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +68

      That's why you make the animal ears anatomically correct by extending the bases to the earholes in the middle of the head. Don't wanna do that? Do the 4 ears. I think it looks okay personally

    • @fastnot
      @fastnot 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +13

      @bleh329 Yeah, but removing features doesn't look as acceptable to my brain as adding them. That's why I don't like the "no human ears" kinda approach. If you remove the human ears, why have the animal ones just awkwardly sit on the top? If you remove the human ears, just extend the animal ones down and ta-dah! No empty sides and no human ears. Everyone wins, no?

    • @fastnot
      @fastnot 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

      @bleh329 I'd have to see it to figure out if I like that idea of extending the hairline or not. And as for "having 4 ears with no explanation" I feel like that kinda thing is also applicable to having animal ears just sit on top of the head. That also doesn't make much sense. Why would they be there, if not because the ear canals on the sides were occupied?
      It doesn't really matter. It's a matter of taste in the end. I just personally feel having no ears on the sides whatsoever looks kinda weird, considering most mammals don't look like that.

    • @Silent_BG_Chara
      @Silent_BG_Chara 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

      yeah, although i do like when some shows actually make that a part of the character's narrative (but rarely are since most are kemonomimi beings that exist in that world). The whole my disguise magic isn't as strong/I'm inexperienced. Needs more stable "mana" (yet bro your like 99% there - although i do give a pass if there true form leans more toward antho since they would need more power. of course only works if they eventually gets there as character growth.

    • @curious_mitch
      @curious_mitch 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      There are also instances where, rather than having the animal ears on the top of their head, will instead have long, fury ears where the human ears would be. A kind of hybrid.

  • @AkiraDraws124
    @AkiraDraws124 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +281

    I love that Star can identify an issue and give positive feedback to help fix it instead of just punching down.

  • @MollyFox-gs3sl
    @MollyFox-gs3sl 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +136

    Make a cat girl with cat and human ears and a flesh fang and treat them as odd mutations she’s gotta deal with

    • @austincde
      @austincde 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +25

      I feel like if I had a flesh fang in real life I would not stop licking at it like a loose tooth😭

    • @Moxalotl12
      @Moxalotl12 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +9

      When I read this, I thought that “flesh fang” meant literal gorey teeth that that are made of flesh. Then I googled it and it’s a lot more wholesome than I thought

    • @kohinattosru8587
      @kohinattosru8587 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Tempting...

    • @magnus1383
      @magnus1383 25 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

      Some cats do get double ears

  • @wynandcore
    @wynandcore 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +123

    I don’t think people don’t wanna draw backgrounds because it’s not fun. I’m sure that’s the reason for many, but personally I was always (still am to some extent) scared to draw environments because of the intrinsic fear that it will drag down the rest of the piece. You can have the most interesting characters known to man but I often fear that a bad background will ruin the entire thing.
    If you feel the same way, I urge you: draw BAD backgrounds! Draw bad environments! Keep doing it until you find the fun in it! I used to hate making collages, but I forced myself to do it for art school purposes, and after a while I really started to enjoy it! Do the same with backgrounds, you’ll get there

    • @rosiisartistic
      @rosiisartistic 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +10

      A piece of advice I saw a while ago was, "treat your backgrounds like you do your characters." This didn't immediately make me want to draw more backgrounds, but it sure helped me recognize their importance. Now when I draw them, it comes super easy to me! I won't ever forget this advice.

  • @bird-caged
    @bird-caged 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +146

    On the topic of no noses, I think it really depends on the art style. Sometimes, those little lines or dots for noses can work DEPENDING ON THE ART STYLE. In the anime screenshot you showed, yeah, it just did not fit at all. It would fit more for a more simplified art style imo. Then again, I would sometimes just prefer there to be no nose depending on how simple the art style is. The dot/super small line nose just removes the focus from the expressive eyes. Those triangle noses would’ve also been a bit better, since they aren’t so simplistic and tiny and are just. There I guess. Gosh I hope this made sense.
    Also, flesh fangs. I like them occasionally. Key word is occasionally. In the right context, it can make the character look cute or mischievous. Other times, it looks very, very weird. If it’s a constant thing, like the character is drawn to have them all the time(even if the setting isn’t a fantasy or whatever)I’ll come to be okay with it. If the character has fangs but the artist doesn’t want to show it all the time(since fangs=scary ig), it can make the character seem a bit cute.
    If a random character suddenly gets a flesh fang for no reason, it can be a bit distracting. If it’s to show the character’s mischievousness, I’ll be more or less okay with it, even though I think there are much better ways to show that with the mouth than a flesh fang imo. Other than that, I don’t like when it shows up xD it seems out of place and like the artist doesn’t really know what they’re doing. Also, it should never, NEVER, be drawn alongside actual teeth. I hate that haha.
    Also also, animal ears+human ears. Oh my goodness. The only time I’ve been okay with this is when the animal ears have been like. Added on as a magical mishap or genetic mutation that added it on. If they’re born with both(like most of the time ugh)it’s not great. I want to know WHY there is both, but there is no explanation other than the artist thought it would be weird for no human ears to be there. There are many solutions to this, such as making the animal ears connect to where the human ears would be(but still having them on top of the head), having the animal ears BE where the human ears would be, or just covering up where the human ears would be with hair or something.

    • @mrhalfsaid1389
      @mrhalfsaid1389 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +17

      Yes, but the fact people use it to avoid drawing noses (even though noses are real easy to do) in styles that *REALLY SHOULD HAVE AT LEAST A LITTLE BIT OF NOSE DETAIL* is what annoys me (particularly when the characters have detailed noses *when looking at them from any profile view* 🙂🙃🙂

    • @HopeIsADrug11037
      @HopeIsADrug11037 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      i always just cover where the ears would be with hair for animal characters. we dont have to see it!!

    • @yanderegabby_18
      @yanderegabby_18 หลายเดือนก่อน +8

      Yea I was watching that part like "but that's my artstyle..."
      I could draw noses but with how I've designed my characters, they don't look right. I don't really care much about drawing noses in the first place anyway. Why? No idea, just don't care for it
      I've compensated for this (for my nonwhite OCs in particular) by giving them other ethnic features, usually textured hair for their respective ethnicities. My black/biracial OCs all have some sort of high volume curly/wavy look to their hair to convey that they are of color. I've also started learning how to properly color their hands since POC tend to have less melanin around their hands, and making this more prominent the darker their skin is, and depending on their specific ethnicity

  • @hopethornhill3905
    @hopethornhill3905 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +25

    The human/animal ears! 😂
    I made a ninja turtle OC when I was 13 who was a wolf shifter. She had wolf ears and human ears. BUT I did that on purpose.
    She was mutated with the goal of having pure mutant shifters with no outward animal characteristics. She was one of the only partly successful ones, but she still had wolf eyes, ears, fangs, claws, and a tail.
    The human ears were also deaf 😅 This affected her later when I did the obligatory ninja turtle fanfic thing of having them figure out a way to appear human. She ended up being incredibly hard of hearing once her wolf ears got hidden since her human ears were deaf.
    TLDR: I did the cursed four ears thing but for a reason 😂

    • @KARMAZYNA
      @KARMAZYNA 17 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

      @@hopethornhill3905 Okay, now that us a very neat concept. 👌🏻

  • @k09viner89
    @k09viner89 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +653

    The last one point about self deprecation I can really relate to, especialy as someone who is trying to learn at at 22 (albe it out of love for art, the process of making it and out of pure spite for AI art), and I think alot of it comes down to (for me atleast) is that we can tell when something we make is "good" and "bad" unlike kids who cant tell so we worry about what others will think or hold ourself to an imposebel standard so early on, as if it matters at the end of the day if you just keep going, but we do it none the less becasue we are human.
    On the other hand Felsh-fangs are pure nightmare fule which need to be destroyed in my honest opinion.

    • @EvanmarleyDixon
      @EvanmarleyDixon 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +26

      I have a really bad problem with self-deprecation. My theory is ...
      My teachers in school, college, and uni always found/find multiple things wrong with my work or need improvement without fail.
      I know constructive criticism is part of their job as teachers, but it constantly makes me feel super insecure.
      & Whenever I try to come up with a story idea for a comic, I always find myself taking too much from other stuff I've seen or heard of.
      Then I find & get hooked on a series that feals so original & new to me onlly to think, "omg this feals so fresh and original, why can't I think of something like that".

    • @boohawk659
      @boohawk659 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +13

      I know how you feel. I often think my art could be so much better, that so many others can draw stuff so much easier than I can. That they do it so much faster than I can.
      But, despite that I want to keep going, to get better. Even if I'm not going as fast as I would want, I'm still getting better.
      One thing to remember about your 'art journey' is that it isn't a race, it's not about who can get to the end first, it's about the *journey* and you should enjoy it, at your own pace.
      Also, I to sometimes use the power of pure spite towards Ai. Spite is a powerful motivator, but don't let it be the driving factor.

    • @tatugasshow6047
      @tatugasshow6047 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

      ​@@boohawk659 why do you hate ai art lol

    • @LucyBean42
      @LucyBean42 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

      My doge, I'm pushing 40 and started actively drawing last year. I went through the "this sucks, but it's mine" phase, and I think it's something everyone goes through. You be confident in what you make n_n

    • @sundalosketch4769
      @sundalosketch4769 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@tatugasshow6047 The tools of "ai art" have been used to steal from artists to create poor imitations of their work. The people behind those image generators don't help much with their focus on making money at people's expense, making bold claims of "We'll replace artists, this is the future!" and etc.

  • @Mel0.maniiac
    @Mel0.maniiac 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +62

    The last point is SO true. I have been drawing, like, wanting to improve on my art, since I was really REALLY young, like 5-6 years old or something like that, and I was growing and improving in a much healthier time when art wasn't just a competition to be won. Now, my little brother is beginning to show passion for art as well, but since we have a large gap in age, he doesn't think he's good enough because he can't draw to the level I can yet. He's only 6, the age I started drawing as well, and it's so sad to see him look at his art and say he hates it.

    • @lod4246
      @lod4246 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

      he's already so self-critical at that age!? He needs a hug man...

    • @mercy5004
      @mercy5004 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      While I definitely do think Social media has made the issue worse, I feel like that kind of doubt and comparison has been around for a long long time.
      Growing up, my sister and I didn't have a lot of access to tech, and social media like we know it today just wasn't there yet.
      Similarly, I started drawing in very very early elementary school, then REALLY started applying myself in highschool and college with the help of classes, independent practice and study.
      My sister, who is 7 years younger than me and never took an interest in drawing until she was in middleschool, decided she wanted to learn how to draw. After only maybe 6 months (and no classes) she gave up because at 13 years old she couldn't draw as well as I could at 20.
      Unfortunately I do think its more of a sibling/close comparison issue as its not uncommon to see the younger sibling give up on music due to a musically inclined older sibling, or for them to avoid sports/a particular sport because their older sibling is good at it and they don't feel like they measure to that standard.
      But still... we artists got to be kind to ourselves in our learning periods.

  • @Biotitan00
    @Biotitan00 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +121

    Shows relying on outside material to give context to the show was one of the bigger issues with RWBY. They made a whole separate show to explain things, which is a weird thing to do when the first few seasons are set in a school and it could be brought up naturally in that setting.

    • @Biotitan00
      @Biotitan00 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +11

      @bleh329 ya know what, fair

  • @CalicoBrry
    @CalicoBrry 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +100

    30:42 wtf I started crying 😭😭
    As a beginner artist, it’s hard not to compare myself to people who are better. But looking back at my old drawings compared to my new ones makes me confident I will do just fine.
    I’m gonna continue to grow my garden.

    • @Gendernt_Is_Silly
      @Gendernt_Is_Silly 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

      I clicked on your channel out of curiosity, and your art is amazing! Keep it up :D

    • @AutumnTraitor
      @AutumnTraitor หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      Honestly you're actually pretty good at it. Keep going!

    • @rubyeverred_
      @rubyeverred_ หลายเดือนก่อน

      I've been drawing for just over one and a half years, you are still better than me

  • @ItsyourbestfrinendCRIMSON
    @ItsyourbestfrinendCRIMSON 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +332

    I just love how stars talking about How much she dislikes prologs done wrong and then has game music from a game that has a prolog.

    • @icarue993
      @icarue993 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +78

      Undertale's prologue is on the good side of length. A bit lengthy, but thankfully it is immediately useful by Flowey's action (on a surface level), because we know exactly why they do what they do later

    • @nomoretwitterhandles
      @nomoretwitterhandles 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +64

      Well... yeah. Because that game's prologue was done RIGHT. Prologues can be a great tool for a story as long as they expose you to the STORY, not the LORE. Prologues, like any part of a story, should push the story forward... not dump info on you!

    • @ItsyourbestfrinendCRIMSON
      @ItsyourbestfrinendCRIMSON 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +13

      @@nomoretwitterhandles yeah I agree Undertale one of my favorite games for a reason, I just thought it was funny.

    • @lil_doggo_of_doom
      @lil_doggo_of_doom 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      @@icarue993 That's the point. It's LENGTHY

  • @GordanTheToad
    @GordanTheToad 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +58

    I worry that self-depreciating artist set poor examples for up and coming artist. Someone might love a person's art, see that they are trash talking the final results, and think to themselves "If this person who I look up to doesn't think their own art is good, why should I think my own art is good?" It honestly feels like I have culture shock sometimes whenever I see someone say good things about their artwork.

  • @astronma_starheart
    @astronma_starheart 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +60

    YES! Backgrounds are so fun to draw. I didn’t like to draw them too much as a baby artist, but I did them anyways. And nowadays, I’m really enjoying backgrounds, and it’s slowly turning into me enjoying perspective and want to actually improve at backgrounds. And heading your reaffirm that further inspires to keep doing backgrounds in my works :)

  • @user-LoomaMoth226
    @user-LoomaMoth226 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +8

    Flesh fang can actually be a good character design trait for more monster-like/inhuman characters, but I’ve never seen them on characters that look human and I gotta agree with you, that makes me wildly uncomfortable 😭

  • @scarysaladmedley
    @scarysaladmedley 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +21

    duuude noses are so important! I think the reason a lot of studios go for the dot noses is because if u draw the nose even slightly off it can make it look like your character is looking in the wrong direction and it can be a very fickle thing to tackle when you have such a large cast of caracters (like on love live).

  • @thebrokenpuppet2714
    @thebrokenpuppet2714 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +12

    I agree with you on the nose thing. I hate when the nose is just a microscopic speck. I don’t need something super complex, I’m even fine when the nose is basically just a line. Just do anything more than just a tiny speck

  • @ozgurkurtoglu6005
    @ozgurkurtoglu6005 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +124

    Star Teaches Us about How to Maintain Our own Art Garden With showing her least Favorite garden futures and How to make them better

  • @Sisarooney
    @Sisarooney 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +55

    I am so glad you talked about Bad Ink studios! They are amazing and give so many helpful tips.
    I also appreciate the tips about giving enough information and not over/under doing it. I look back on my first chapter that I just did and already see some things I can make clearer. I don't plan on redoing those first pages for a long time, but if I do, I know what to do now.
    Thanks for the tips!

  • @M-B17
    @M-B17 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +11

    The self deprecation point is exactly why I firmly believe that young artists should NOT post any of their art online for their first years and should focus on having fun and making art that makes them happy. Build your foundation of art on love for your own art. Personally, I recommend that young artists should keep their art private during their first years for several reasons.
    The first is that many young artists are simply not ready for criticism so they should focus on making art that they are absolutely proud of until they are ready and open to it.
    The second is that they will subconsciously develop their own art style because they will draw what they believe looks good increasing its uniqueness.
    The third is self motivation. Many young artists give up because they don’t get likes or feel like they are even seen ;however, that is not a healthy relationship to have with art. By building one’s foundation of art from love of their own art in private, they become their self sufficient well of admiration and joy which builds self esteem. This will encourage them to seek self improvement which will increase the quality of art and the cycle continues.

  • @bug_castor
    @bug_castor 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +66

    only reason i defend flesh fang: only on non-human characters does it look cool (tho i think flesh fang is cute). i have a demon jester named Zimi who has a flesh fang mouth and actual sharp teeth underneath, and when she goes full demon mode, the flesh fangs get turned into actual full demon teeth kinda like a demon skull. basically put, her flesh fangs have a bigger purpose if she's full demon mode

    • @randomperson-kx6mv
      @randomperson-kx6mv 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +16

      I agree!! I draw dragons a LOT and often use "flesh fangs" for them (I didn't even know that's what they're called 😭). I think it looks normal on them.

    • @NightmareGorePNG
      @NightmareGorePNG 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      yeah I think it works best on non human characters, especially if it's mythical. I kinda see it as a smaller version of the zig zag mouth: just a weird shaped creature skull

    • @seagull9580
      @seagull9580 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +10

      @@randomperson-kx6mv same here with drawing 'flesh fangs' on dragons. personally i think of them as simplified shorthands for things like bony or keratin protrusions around the mouth, or sometimes just weird scale/skin structures (look up renders of Glavernus from Monster Hunter, that's more or less what i imagine unsimplified flesh fangs as.)
      i guess it looks weird on humans/humanoids because there's a lot more leeway and freedom with the facial structure of fictional creatures? or maybe its the skin textures, like you wouldn't expect someone with regular human skin to have spiky protrusions over the mouth and therefore your brain's gonna be a bit weirded out by it, but it's a lot more believable with scaly/spiky animal characters? just spitballing here tbh

    • @IGOTTRIXUPMYSLEEVE
      @IGOTTRIXUPMYSLEEVE 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      same, love those. I love giving them to demon characters.

    • @kohinattosru8587
      @kohinattosru8587 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      It could be normal thing for some non-human races, even as just a feature. But your take on it is interesting... And I'm incredibly curious to hear more... Does full demon mode have impact on idle form or demon mode form is coming from the base form? Is there some pattern of changes? If "soft" version gets injury, will it affect demon mode form? Does hair become sharp whips or needles? Do you have any comics or something?

  • @AriTheALTernate273
    @AriTheALTernate273 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +31

    About The Walking Dead, your point is definitely valid! But I do believe you jumped off at the last season to have this problem. Without spoiling, two new characters come in here and the shoe from here on out has a goal, and that goal does come with hope. So, I'd say, watch season 3 and see how you feel afterwards. I've watched and without spoiling, we do get a happy ending(ish) Other shows/spinoff expands on the story and its awesome. Give the show a chance! I'd think you may like it.

    • @yanderegabby_18
      @yanderegabby_18 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

      Don't really blame her though because I also HATE, no I LOATHE, shows that drag on and on and take forever to actually get to the point and progress the series forward. This usually happens to me during the FIRST season, I couldn't imagine sitting through three whole seasons of that. The beginning of your show, specifically the pilot if it has one, is supposed to hook you in and establish a storyline and a goal for something if there's a conflict, but the Walking Dead fails to do that for three whole seasons, which drives people like this person away because the show takes to long to move the story forward. It's also why I myself couldn't get into the Walking Dead and why I hated whenever my parents would watch it because I couldn't stand watching the same recycled bullcrap for hours
      It doesn't help that I like watching more fast paced shows and movies and just hate slow paced things in general and it may or may not have to do with my ADHD, but don't quote me on that. It's also why I like Hazbin, even though it's kinda rushed because A24 screwed Viv over. I'd gladly take a rushed show over a dragged out show in my opinion

    • @AriTheALTernate273
      @AriTheALTernate273 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      @@yanderegabby_18 Not gonna lie, I got kinda bored after the 4-5th season. I t got hard to watch almost hour long episodes where it felt like nothing was happening. Payoff was good but show was WAY too long.

    • @JorguinTorpedo-ff5vk
      @JorguinTorpedo-ff5vk 8 วันที่ผ่านมา

      The Walking Dead point is valid just no against TWD! i hate sad history's that make the world miserable just because Yes when Everything could be solve if the characters in the story have COMMON SENSE.

  • @Chris_the_holydevil
    @Chris_the_holydevil หลายเดือนก่อน +9

    11:22 I wanna say a little fun fact about flesh fangs: I have crooked teeth and my fangs are placed a bit higher and closer to the lips compared to other teeth, which shows up when i smile creating a similar effect to a "flesh fang" 😅 personally for me, it looks fine unless they open their mouth or have a wide smile cuz with a wide smile lips stretch and reveal all the teeth INCLUDING fangs!

  • @electricgecko8997
    @electricgecko8997 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +106

    Noses are the bane of my art existence. I draw semi-realistic noses on my characters and it is an unceasing nightmare. F@#$ noses.

    • @Unknownnw
      @Unknownnw 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +23

      ​@bleh329when it comes to styles, you can give your character hands or noses or whatever if you want. Art isn't linear. When I used to draw, I didn't care about improving, I just wanted to make my cute cat people.
      I agree with you, but let ppl live art is subjective /lh

    • @maninanikittycat4238
      @maninanikittycat4238 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      Real! I hate doing realistic noses!

    • @fa1ryf0x3s
      @fa1ryf0x3s 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      Yeah I just draw like little lines as the nose bridge with an inverted triangle at the bottom..

    • @bluebay1031
      @bluebay1031 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

      @bleh329 I mean if you want to, then absolutely. However I think the issue is the assumption that everyone DOES want to. Not everyone’s like me who wants to turn my art into a career (or at least a source of income). Some people ARE just doing it as a fun hobby.

    • @hamstersandwich9917
      @hamstersandwich9917 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      ​@Unknownnw I mean it's not like they're held at gunpoint? I doubt people would click on a video on how to fix various writing and art quirks if they don't atleast have a willingness to improve

  • @krystalkitten7011
    @krystalkitten7011 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +8

    I really love the videos where Star shares her accumulated art and/or storytelling wisdom. It’s enthralling to listen to her talk about. The final part was wonderful, hearing the passion in Star’s voice (accompanied by that beautiful print), and as someone who struggles with self deprecation and confidence in my own drawing and writing, (and in general), this section made me really happy and I’m definitely going to rewatch it whenever I need to hear it again. :)

  • @Macho_Nacho_08
    @Macho_Nacho_08 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +32

    This video is literally the summary of why you're my favorite artist.

  • @BeetRoots-z1h
    @BeetRoots-z1h 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +9

    Thank you for suggesting comics in your videos I may have already commented this last video but the point still stands Tales from Alderwood has genuinely one of my favorite comics and while I don’t always resonate with something I’ve been suggested it’s always great when I’m constantly getting to see new stories and even falling in love with some of them

  • @angusangus19
    @angusangus19 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +11

    that garden metaphor in the end is such a great way to put the learning experience with art. I’ll think about that if I ever say anything self deprecating.

  • @dweeborea
    @dweeborea 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +126

    I just got to the part of the video about the 4 ears THANK YOU ITS ONE OF MY BIG DESIGN PET PEEVES AJSJDFKGLGL

    • @Curera291
      @Curera291 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +7

      YES! 😅 4 ears... I can only imagine the hearing with 4 ears 😭

    • @PivotLever
      @PivotLever 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @dweeborea Orin from Touhou Project says hi!

    • @mrhalfsaid1389
      @mrhalfsaid1389 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

      Having cat ears would already be really weird to get used to, *IMAGINE HAVING ×3.5 HEARING POWER* 😳

    • @Pika999
      @Pika999 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

      I also hate the four ears thing. Whenever I design a character with animal ears I try to make the ears come up from where their human ears would be. It looks much better and less weird. 😅

    • @kohinattosru8587
      @kohinattosru8587 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

      I've seen creatures with 4-6 ears, but one type (charr from Guild Wars). Having two or more different pairs of ears could be excused if character is failed experiment or other abomination and this issue is adressed in the story. I also love the meme with catgirl wearing human-ear headband

  • @princicat
    @princicat หลายเดือนก่อน +5

    how can you prefer a catgirl with smooth, empty skin on the side of their heads??? its uncanny!!!! and the animal ears are cuter on top of the head like the animal has, so i dont like them to grow from where human ears grow. 4 ear supremacy!!!! also im DYING at flesh fang

  • @clowncarousel
    @clowncarousel 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +8

    I think my favorite series that handles tragedy well is Your Turn to Die. It's such good writing, art, and character design and growth. The situation is grim with a bunch of people from all walks of life being forced into a game where they could be killed at any moment but it's not hopeless. The characters build each other up, the trauma of seeing allies die actually affects the characters and they are talked about a lot even after death. The game is just incredible and I will always sing its praise because it's inspiring in so many ways

  • @howlerbrine
    @howlerbrine 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +8

    FEAR AND HUNGER MENTIONED 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 WHAT THE FUCK IS A NORMAL GAME 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

    • @JorguinTorpedo-ff5vk
      @JorguinTorpedo-ff5vk 8 วันที่ผ่านมา

      We Are playing Finnish games with this one🗣️🗣️🗣️🔥🔥🔥

  • @RainstormCheetah
    @RainstormCheetah 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

    Completely agree with you on the point about backgrounds! I used to avoid drawing them like the plague in my own art because I didn't understand how to give them depth and because I balked at the effort needed to repeat various intricate textures across an entire scene; but some years ago now I needed to do one for a certain picture that I wanted to make. And instead of agonising over it, I just threw myself into it, giving myself the reasoning that I could make it super-stylised so then it wouldn't 'matter' if it didn't look good or didn't have the level of detail it needed.
    And I found I didn't hate the end result. So from there I just started to put a bit more effort into backgrounds. Think about them a bit more. And, to my surprise, discovered that I can actually enjoy the process! They're still not my favourite thing to work on, and some of my attempts are still misses; but these days I'm happy to do them when needed (to the point of sometimes getting a bit *too* carried away with them!), and it's really benefited my artwork in general ^^
    I love your simile about art being like a garden, too! I've never been at that point of giving up on art, because for the longest time I never expected to make anything of it, it was just a hobby and so it didn't 'need' to be good; but I definitely still had a "80% of what I draw is garbage and I want people to be forewarned of that" phase for a time, and that is an absolutely fantastic way to look at it. Thanks for another great video!

  • @august8679
    @august8679 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +8

    I've been an artist for four years and I've learned a lot of these things the hard way, but now I'm so much better at art and I don't say self deprecating stuff anymore, and it's awesome being able to experiment with new things and not judge myself harshly when it doesn't turn out right.

  • @princeapoopoo5787
    @princeapoopoo5787 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +6

    I don't mind flesh fang if it isn't a constant part of the design or if the overall art style is abstract or stylized. if the character sometimes abstracts as a chibi chaos gremlin its fine!
    Same face syndrome is definitely a bit of a big pet peeve, but mostly if a cast is intended to be large and diverse.

  • @Very_Coffee
    @Very_Coffee 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +35

    31:42 “So without further ado…”
    Me: gets an add*

    • @Poplock4121
      @Poplock4121 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      Happened to me too

    • @silver_dusk
      @silver_dusk 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +9

      I guess there certainly was a further ado

  • @yall_girl_eve
    @yall_girl_eve 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +11

    11:10 You had spoken my feelings thank you so much

  • @nugget8967
    @nugget8967 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +43

    Dude I fucking LOVE flesh fangs. I adore that style. Maybe I’m just built wrong but I ADORE that character design. Mwah. Peak. I didn’t realize people hated it LMAO

    • @somegoodsoup7008
      @somegoodsoup7008 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +14

      You're not "built wrong", you just have a different opinion. You're just being you!

    • @nugget8967
      @nugget8967 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

      @@somegoodsoup7008I don’t actually believe that, I always just say I might be built wrong when giving a potentially controversial opinion because it always goes over better, lmao

    • @gluttonousmaximus9048
      @gluttonousmaximus9048 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      Do you like seeing them along with actual teeth, or do you usually see them on relatively simplistic faces?

    • @nugget8967
      @nugget8967 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      @@gluttonousmaximus9048both. If it’s not intended to be teeth, or to just be the very simplified version of teeth, then just removing it when the teeth are shown is generally a good idea.
      However I also just like the idea of actual flesh fangs too. It’s a weird gross concept in a big fan of

    • @reiraccoon
      @reiraccoon 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      omg SAME i love flesh fangs. I think they look so cute

  • @Kazbur-qp8xk
    @Kazbur-qp8xk หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    22:37 this is why I love Fullmetal alchemist so much. The Elric brothers backstory is obviously tragic but it's not just tragic to be sad, it effects everything in the rest of the story. Without the tragedy they wouldn't have tried to bring their mom back, which would keep al in his human body, which would keep them out of being child soldiers, and without that there would likely be the absence of a heroine because they wouldn't get roped up with the homunculi or father or any of the deep conspiracies they find themselves in that leads them to stopping amestris' destruction

  • @uef0h
    @uef0h 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +6

    27:18 I SCREAMEDDDDDD WHEN YOU SAID THIS!!! guys, i cannot fathom enough to PLEASE of all things holy to stop doing this!!! i did this when i was younger and it got me nowhere, if anything it hindered my process so much and was one of the leading causes on why i took an art hiatus (i think it lasted about 2-3 years). embrace your style, treat it like your baby!!! it’s OKAY TO LOVE YOUR OWN ART GUYS LOL (of course, not to a bragging extent but i feel like everyone here should get the point!!!)

  • @BrawlSnorlax
    @BrawlSnorlax 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +9

    9:20 I made it a plot point in my RWBY fic. Fic, Winter, and Weiss were both Fanus that had their bits cut off. Weiss was fine after regrowing her tail. Winter, however, couldn't get used to having four ears and talked in whispers throughout the fic. She even stated she had earplugs in all of them.

  • @takibo_here8626
    @takibo_here8626 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +6

    I COMPLETELY am with you with the 4 ears thing...

  • @EternityKingdomsHeadHoncho
    @EternityKingdomsHeadHoncho 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +72

    Congrats on the Skillshare sponsorship, Star!
    My biggest writing pet peeve is a character who has very toxic, self-destructive flaws but refuses to address them until the very last proverbial minute of their story. Think Steven (Steven Universe Future specifically; Steven was pretty solid for the original show and great in the movie) or She-Ra 2018 Catra. This kind of character can be done right, but they NEED the time to turn themselves around. You can’t just brush off their recovery in a fourth of their show’s narrative or the literal final episode of their series.
    From an artistic standpoint, it’s when too many characters have the same general color palette. Since Star’s already covered Hazbin, I figure I should offer my two cents on it. Vivienne is a good character designer, but she’s horrible at working with any palette that isn’t some combination of red, yellow, black, and white. If Vaggie still had her navy blue and gray palette from Zoophobia, I guarantee you she’d look a billion times better.

    • @hamstersandwich9917
      @hamstersandwich9917 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      ​@bleh329 it's a weird balance for the creators to strike, especially when they probably knew their movie is gonna represent a wide part of colombian culture, do they aim but "realistic" or "idealist"? Its already a story of a family with superpowers, it is wrong to try to send a positive message? But on the other hand, you're right that its kinda unfair to irl people, a common crit of encanto is that the ending is too rushed, feels like the plot of 3 season TV show got shortened to 1 movie

  • @NerdGlasses256
    @NerdGlasses256 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +88

    9:55 The reason why characters with animal ears almost always have human ears too, is because humans without human ears look uncanny, if the place of the ears isn't covered by hair. they look kinda like people without noses, as you have said before. My assumption is, that Star is so frustrated by fleshfangs, because as an experienced artist, she is used to analyzing small details of the designs of characters, while the sole purpose of this design elemet, is to create a little bit of sharpness, and a feeling of wildness, by also letting the character to stay cute, and not incorporating the menacing look of pointy teeth, that makes vampires scary for example. You are just not supposed to think about them so mutch, they are designed to influence you subconsciously. I completely agree with the loredumping part however. I for example love the One piece lore summary at the start of each episode, and I also love how in kill la kill we get to know 90% of the actual lore in the last quarter of the show.

    • @FaelumbreProject
      @FaelumbreProject 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +26

      Tokyo Mew Mew as mentioned fixes that though - the ears go all the way down to where the human ears should be. It's a little innacurate with cat ears (they do go a bit further down but not all the way to the cheeks) but it keeps the silhouette while filling that space.

    • @bunnymoonvii
      @bunnymoonvii 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

      One of my characters in FFXIV is a male Viera, he doesn't have human ears. So he has to have hair that hides his lack of human ears, the really short hairstyles just look bizarre on him.

    • @isotetra1912
      @isotetra1912 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +10

      honestly characters not having human ears never looked uncanny to me lol

    • @princeapoopoo5787
      @princeapoopoo5787 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Tbh the human ears annoy me too, but I think its mostly because a lot of these characters have hair that would disguise their supposed human ears anyway? Maybe if I've seen more bald people with them. 😂

  • @Raine_R
    @Raine_R 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +14

    This video has actually been really informative, thanks!

  • @Funhaus_Fr34k
    @Funhaus_Fr34k 14 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

    9:59 OH YEA the whole anime characters with both human & animal ears drives me NUTS!! I H8 IT

  • @ariannay766
    @ariannay766 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    im someone who's like. neurotically paranoid about developing same face syndrome so I love noses just cause there's so much you can do to make them look distinct

  • @ozgurkurtoglu6005
    @ozgurkurtoglu6005 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +53

    Alternet Title :
    Star Rants about Things
    (then says how to fix them)

  • @Pixalisk
    @Pixalisk 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Thanks for the kind words for aspiring "gardeners" :) And also for the last-time webcomic recommendation of "Alderwood", enjoyed that a lot. Will definitely take a look at Soul to Call. Please keep up the recommendations.

  • @little1133
    @little1133 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    OHMYGOSH THAT'S WHAT'S BEEN MISSING!!! A NOSE!! You just solved my art style man tysm

  • @novajazzz
    @novajazzz 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Thank you star as some one who self doubts all the time I was really thinking on putting down my pen and move on from art your words speak volumes to me. funny my brother yesterday was trying to get me back on art thank you very much for your kind words may you have a awesome day

  • @MessyMissyArts
    @MessyMissyArts หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    Oh no, not my artistic ass being called out at every minute 😭
    They're such amazing points! I've just started learning to draw more varied noses, it really adds more to the face!

  • @I.lov.katz3
    @I.lov.katz3 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    this is how I personally do prologues for books or comics, etc. And yk it works for me: rather than just plain old explaining everything, I show the actual gods or whatever discussing what's happening or show them actually creating it with more mystery and dialogue

  • @vowkeyper
    @vowkeyper 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +7

    a story ive seen that actually fits a lot of these criteria is ULTRAKILL! simply drops you in with minimal information; humanity is dead, blood is fuel, hell is full. the start-up sequence contains a lot of information mashed into not a lot of words (you can tell you're a robot because you 'boot up', and it designates you as V1). you absolutely do not need to know the lore to play the game or understand whats going on, but it gives you that option with the information in the terminals. it's a skill based game and isnt for everyone but the worldbuilding is really good, and tells a very interesting story. if you only want the story, you can just play on easier difficulties. the visuals are also very intentional; eyes being a key in most of them. this is getting long. basically, go play ultrakill.

    • @Scaryland42
      @Scaryland42 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      ultrakill has some great character/creature designs too

    • @vowkeyper
      @vowkeyper หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@Scaryland42 very true!

  • @FreedomisMerica
    @FreedomisMerica 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +9

    13:03 No one tell her about cleft lips

  • @davefromaccounting1983
    @davefromaccounting1983 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    26:25 “Since that day, I’ve been worried I’d been wandering the night, but I had forgotten that this is a world upon which the sun does rise. For that alone, I’m much better off than I was.” This is a line from Berserk, one of my favorite stories ever told. Guts has suffered so much tragedy, but in SPITE of all of it, in SPITE of the world he was born into, he finds hope. He has people he cares for, people who care for him. No matter the darkness that surrounds him, he sees light, he sees a faint glimmer of hope. It may be a long journey for him to see it, and an even longer one for that hope to be realized, but its been a beautiful journey and I hope it continues to be.

  • @MaakaSakuranbo
    @MaakaSakuranbo หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    I've seen a video saying that the big sparkly eyes are actually why you use just a tiny nose. Since the eyes are a lot of focus and detail, so next to it you place the nose as low detail, or so

  • @Twilightsonata-w7p
    @Twilightsonata-w7p 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    I think excluding noses makes characters more cute and their expressions easier to read. Obviously it’s recommended to know how human facial structure works first before attempting stylization, but nonetheless it can really help with being able to stretch emotions or have more readable expressions without it. Plus it can make characters look cuter bc without the nose it puts emphasis on a characters eyes.

  • @thelastcrow5660
    @thelastcrow5660 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +12

    "Noses are cool, ok?"
    TheStarfishface 2024

  • @Hichigo1554
    @Hichigo1554 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    I like your points, I can relate to a lot of the criticisms of writing and story telling. On the Topic of grief, if you haven’t watched it already, I suggest reading the manga as there’s more detail that the anime either misses or changes up weirdly, but Bleach is a story I find that deals with grief, and other topics, in a realistic light. Well as realistic as Soul Reapers go. Tire Kubo has a more show and less tell when it comes the story. Simple things like rain have a symbolic tone to the main character and how he feels in terms of guilt and perhaps even elements of depression and slowly but not completely overcoming it as the story continues. It’s one of the more realistic and down to earth Shonens you’ll come across.

  • @serenegenerally
    @serenegenerally 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

    For animal ear anatomy I recommend Winged Canvas’s video about them! They’re super helpful in general and it’s free art education

  • @mollylarsen9812
    @mollylarsen9812 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    9:20 Star: Ranting really loudly
    *Meanwhile there's a drawing being shown of an overjoyed little Rory*

  • @jrartstudios422
    @jrartstudios422 15 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    If someone is depreciating their own art it doesn’t makes sense if they’re showing it.

  • @spsaofficalchannel
    @spsaofficalchannel 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    Rule of thumb for me at least: if you're gonna write an exposition heavy prolouge... make it skippable and put the cliffnotes version of the prologue's exposition in the story proper... that way readers who skipped it still get the information while people who read the prologue are rewarded with more details and lore!

  • @mercy5004
    @mercy5004 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    As someone who's also been trying to diversify their character designs through introducin unique nose shapes and other features.... I do find myself still really liking the dot/shadow for full front-facing shots. Which are few and far between, but it really feels like it looks the best for that angle especially for characters with elements that are also occupying the mid-face (middle strand of hair, glasses, etc) because it gives everything else room to breathe.
    Then they turn their head slightly and the shape starts to assert itself again, with how much detail I put into it depending on the angle or general mood.
    But then I see people try to use the dot for a full 3/4 or even 4/5 looking away from the camera and it boggles the mind because then the only time they DO draw the nose is full or nearly full profile views.

  • @prodigykcube77
    @prodigykcube77 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Did not expect it to be so motivational when it came to the self-deprication

  • @pixelcat5725
    @pixelcat5725 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Thank you so much for the last point you made 💕 it’s so disheartening to see younger artists bashing on themselves. You’re a huge inspiration for me :)

  • @batkittii
    @batkittii 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    I used to be extremely self deprecating about my art. It was how everyone around me acted, and I thought that no one could judge me for being cocky or unaware of my flaws if I stated those flaws upfront
    The thing is… when I slowly challenged myself to hold back- just to let my art speak for itself- I started to feel better about it. It honestly didn’t change the way anyone interacted with me, aside from making it just more positive overall.
    I also think there’s a lot to be said about being kind to ourselves for the sake of others. Beginners or younger artists will pick up on the language of others, and when they see someone bashing a piece they find impressive (and see as better than their own work), that will be internalized.

  • @Canned__yt
    @Canned__yt 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    ive been watching your videos a lot lately and this advice is really helping me fix/make my character backstories. thanks for this ^w^

  • @KumoKumiko
    @KumoKumiko 16 วันที่ผ่านมา

    good topics overall! especially love the push of encouragement for all our art. good music throughout, too.

  • @betsykadiri
    @betsykadiri 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +22

    4:16 it's hard! Okay!!

    • @dacksonflux
      @dacksonflux หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@betsykadiri SKILL ISSUE

    • @MoonLight-np4wx
      @MoonLight-np4wx 20 วันที่ผ่านมา

      Practice then lmao

  • @Korishiva
    @Korishiva 24 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Some of these things you mention relating to comics/manga made me reflect on how my manga is built. I never really thought about how to layout my pages, the "rules" you need to follow for optimal page flow etc, I've pretty much winged it since day 1, which was 10 years ago 😅 I guess what I'm trying to say is thanks for helping me reflect on this, giving out tips and tricks for newbies, and most likely helping me make my manga even better 😊

  • @mariahs6
    @mariahs6 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Having learned to gain self-confidence, self deprecating is still something that comes up every once in a while that’s become much easier to deal with. I don’t think to myself “wow, this person is so much better at drawing than I am,” I think to myself “wow, this person’s great at art and watching them draw can help me improve my techniques!”
    The best thing about us all being our own people is seeing all these different styles and being able to learn from one another

  • @xurxurlawolf3995
    @xurxurlawolf3995 7 วันที่ผ่านมา

    I don't think one can ever grasp how much your final point needed to be heard. I know I needed to hear it and I can't thank you for it enough

  • @Itzz..wint3rr
    @Itzz..wint3rr 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    unrelated but I love watching speedpaints while somebody is yapping. it's just an amazing experience /pos

  • @macxidy
    @macxidy 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Dayum, was listening to this while working on my own stuff and I wasn't expecting the ending to this vid to be so sweet and encouraging. It's true though. I played around and drew terrible comics for years before getting into my current one, and my current one even started off bein' pretty rough around the edges. But you gotta endure and never give up, like you said! And the more you grow and believe in yourself, the less you find yourself self-deprecating too. :)

  • @pixelatedheartx
    @pixelatedheartx 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +10

    26:42 I NOTICED THAT ACE ATTORNEY MUSIC🔥🔥

  • @dcbandit
    @dcbandit 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    As an artist, here's a philosophy I always follownin everything. Never try to be better than someone else, just try to be better than who you were yesterday. Beat your own high score, don't compare yourself to other artists! It is good to realize you are not as good as say a professional artist, it is humbling, but what you should be looking for is ways yo improve yourself off of what you see others doing, rather than by how badly yours looks compared to theirs.
    Try learning tips and tricks to simplifying the process for yourself, there are ways to get around your weakness instead of fighting through them.
    And finally, always be your own biggest fan, draw what makes you happy! If you aren't enjoying it, try looking at it a different way, and if that doesn't work, try something else. You may just find a gem in the sand!😊

  • @didjargo
    @didjargo 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +12

    I'm glad that someone else sees the Walking Dead in the same light as I do. It's just depression and death with no hope. Compare that to one of my all-time favorite shows: Bojack Horseman. Which succeeds in punctuating the heavy emotional moments with characters who have joy, aspirations, and hope that things could be better.

    • @jimbrody4945
      @jimbrody4945 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Bojack: “Life sucks and then you die, right?”
      Dianne: “Sometimes. But sometimes life sucks and then you keep on living.”

  • @angy9777
    @angy9777 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Wow girlie you really had to put me through an emotional roller coaster with this one huh. I learned something, I laughed a bunch, and by the end I started sobbing. Amazing job, thank you

  • @flat_faced_moon
    @flat_faced_moon หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    A weird one for me ( most common in anime I've noticed) is when tongues on characters are so ridiculously small. Like just barely a tongue sticking out. I don't know what it is but it just creeps me out

  • @InventiveFigure
    @InventiveFigure หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    An artist I personally love has trouble with self-deprecating and it gets frustrating at times since I love her art and she's my number one inspiration for 80% of all my art nowadays. She isn't a beginner or anything, she just has really low self-esteem.
    I wish she could one day realize that, no, her art isn't horrible cause she used a PNG for a background or focused on the characters too much.

  • @cabra0693
    @cabra0693 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    SO THAT'S WHY BLAKE'S DESIGN HAD BEEN BOTHERING ME. Dude I just binged the entirety of RWBY and the ears gave me a weird feeling but I couldn't put my finger on why. I thought "huh I wonder why Catra from She-ra looks fine to me if it's the ears" IT WAS THE DOUBLE EARS

  • @novakat4168
    @novakat4168 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    with backgrounds: im not so great at drawing them, but i love making them in 3d software! if you struggle with perspectives with your backgrounds, you could try making them in something like blender, the sims, or floorplanner so you can set up your camera shots however you want and still have the perspectives make sense and the backgrounds feel full! :3

  • @Lily-ot9ir
    @Lily-ot9ir 6 วันที่ผ่านมา

    The last part hit hard i am usually pretty self deprecating on myself i think its due to me just not liking my art sometimes and me wanting someone to tell me i have potential because well growing up nobody told me i was good enough because of my grades in school.
    Anyway as a young artist i just wanted to say thank you i know in the age we love to hate but as a child who grew up barely believing in themselves i think your positivity really helps.
    So yeah thanks :)

  • @ElbyHere
    @ElbyHere 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +16

    I actually like flesh fang, but I do sometimes see people who when they have a character with big eyelashes, they'll have some of the whites of the eyes go out into those eyelashes, and it always drives me nuts because it looks like their eyes are melting/leaking out and it's so weird to me, so I get it, hahaha.

    • @amandac8836
      @amandac8836 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Omg YES. It weirds me out sometimes… there are a few drawings I’ve seen where I actually like it (I think because the rest of the art style in that image fits with it) but a lot of the time, in my opinion anyway, it can look a bit odd. I do understand it’s a stylistic choice though.

  • @unicornclutter
    @unicornclutter 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    honestly feel the self deprication thing, i try my best not to do it even when my confidence is very low and instead share a hope for the piece when i share it with someone, like 'here's what i drew, I hope youll enjoy it' is a lot nicer than 'here's what i drew, you probably won't like it', none of us are where we neccesarily dream to be as artists, thats how the process works bc your tastes will almost always be ahead of your hands, but you should let people decide for themself if they like your work. also yess i love noses so much! I skip em occasionally for very paired down art that usually also involves tiny dot eyes and no skin tone, but for my more detailed nice style i love making noses unique to the character

  • @dannyxcat
    @dannyxcat 15 วันที่ผ่านมา

    i get kind of intimidated when i see how long your videos are but you are such a charming person and you articulate things in such a way that before i knew it i hadnt noticed i breezed through 30 minutes and yet i was having fun with each second and i dont get that experience very much or at all

  • @generalcorgi698
    @generalcorgi698 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    The flesh fang rant was absolutely valid and warranted

  • @personwholovesailorm
    @personwholovesailorm 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

    I love that as you were just getting into talking about anime I got an ad for some weird Isekai mobile game. So that's neat.

  • @banobobot
    @banobobot 29 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    Agreed. Noses are important. Show me more noses.
    Also yeah, backgrounds are also important. Doing them will very much be worth it.
    I can forgive "flesh teeth" under extremely specific circumstances, like original creature designs, but not on humans.
    Exposition-heavy prologues: gets war flashbacks to the Micheal Bay Transformers movies...
    Needing to consume external media to understand the primary piece of media: Sonic games nowadays be like

  • @oggser8050
    @oggser8050 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    me getting an ad during "screaming about kemonomimi characters having 4 ears" and it was for hoyoverse

  • @Kay20470
    @Kay20470 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    I feel like the thing about having four sets of ears can depend on the character. With high detail characters they look awkward without it since they look human enough.
    Characters who’s ears pop out on the top of their head usually have human ears already removing them look weird