연습하다보면 제일 난감한 주제가 ‘Bank’ 였는데, bank description 에 대한 expression도 많이 배우고, 특히 inside 와 outside에 대한 description 전략은 처음 알게되어서 정말 유용했어요!! 그리고 ottoman 은행말고도 가구나 다른 주제에서도 사용할 수 있는 표현이라 “나 고급단어 좀 안다!” 라고 할 수있을 정도라 너무 유익했습니다. 오픽노잼 12월말에 시험이라 열심히 보는 중인데 라이브로도 보면서 공부할 수 있어서 너무 좋소~!~!
1:01:01 답변 준비해보았습니다.. 챗지피티 도움도 받았습니다.. 그러나 쌤샘보다 도움 되진 않을 것 같습니다👍.. “My favorite beach is Haeundae Beach in Busan. The reason I love this beach is because of its great atmosphere. On top of that, I like the soft golden sand that stretches for what feels like miles. I also enjoy the water, which has a beautiful shade of blue. But honestly, what impresses me the most is the atmosphere here. It’s right in the city, so people gather at the beach-not only tourists but also local citizens. Together, they create a lively vibe, and I absolutely love that.”
올해가 끝나기전에 오픽을 빨리 따야해서 라이브강의를 처음 들어왔는데 오늘 꿀팁 7가지 너무 인상깊었고 그 중에 ottomans, 감정 표현때 catches my attention쓰는것과 and on top of that이라는 유용한 언어들을 배우게 되서 인상깊었습니다! Especially 오픽 노잼 steals the show♥ ♥
답변 작성해보았어요~ S : To be honest, my favorite beach is Haeundae Beach in Busan. What i love most about the beach is the atmosphere. It’s so peaceful and gorgeous. M: And on top of that, you can even see yachts and small boats in the distance. Also, it’s right in the city, so it’s super convenient to get to. A: But honestly, the vive is just so amazing. I mean, it’s lively but still relaxing, with plenty of cafes and restaurants nearby. It’s the gorgeous place to unwind.
안녕하세요! 12월 2주동안 갑작스레? 오픽노잼 알게되어 지난주 토요일날 시험봤는데 IH 나왔습니다 ㄷㄷ 첫 오픽시험이었고 진짜 할수있는얘기만 하고 나오자해서 시험장에서 2번째로 나왔는데 이런 점수를 받을줄이야... 진짜 본거라고는 Im시리즈와 IH 시리즈 2개이고 시간날때 그냥 들으면서 다녔고 오늘 시험점수 나왔는데 IH 나왔습니다 직장생활 한지 좀 되어서 영어와 동떨어져있었는데 오픽노잼 덕분에 오픽유잼 됐습니다👍 결론은 두괄식, 필러, 감정 인것같고 끊김없이 천천히 말한게 좋은 점수로 이어졌던거같아요! 다시한번 감사하고 감사합니다!🤗❤
답변 준비했습니다! 유익한 강의 감사합니다!! 다음주 월요일에 시험보는데 AL 꼭 맞고 싶습니다!! S->To be honest, I usually go to Haeundae beach in the summer. Because I love its atmosphere.It's lively but still relaxing. Many people swim there. As I see them, I think that they look like happy and exciting. M -> And the beach is so gorgeous. It has soft golden sand and nice blue water. When I see that, I'm thankful for god to see beautiful scenery. On top of that, Its location is super convenient to spend summer vacation. Because there are numerous entertainment things nearby beach. A -> Hmm, I think that Haeundae beach is one of the popular beaches in Korea. Because of its unique and special atmosphere. It's the perfect place to unwind. For these reasons, I love Haeundae beach. Do you want to go there???
AL 원하고 다음주에 시험보니깐 꼭 집중하고 저의 feedback 잘 보소 ;) --- S: 1. To be honest, I usually go to Haeundae beach in the summer. - If you use a Korean word, you should always try to use the word "called" or just don't use the word. Ex 1: To be honest, I usually go to a beach called Haeundae Beach during the summer in Korea. Ex 2: To be honest, I usually go to a really nice beach near my home during the summer in Korea. 2. Because I love its atmosphere.It's lively but still relaxing. 3. Many people swim there. As I see them, I think that they look like happy and exciting. - This part is a little confusing. - Are you focusing on "atmosphere" or "swimming"? - For "S", you MUST focus on just one thing. - Leave the extra details for "M" or "A" --- M: 4.And the beach is so gorgeous. It has soft golden sand and nice blue water. 5. When I see that, I'm thankful for god to see beautiful scenery. 6. On top of that, Its location is super convenient to spend summer vacation. 7. Because there are numerous entertainment things nearby beach. - Your two examples here are good: "sand" and "convenient location" - What you are missing is "transition" and you really need it if you want AL! No transition example: 그 beach 가 너무 gorgeous 하다 (this is your answer). With transition example: 그 beach에 달은 좋은 점 도 있어요... Ex 1: There are other things I love about this beach. Ex 2: Aside from the atmosphere, there are other things about the beach that I love. --- A: 8. Hmm, I think that Haeundae beach is one of the popular beaches in Korea. 9. Because of its unique and special atmosphere. It's the perfect place to unwind. 10. For these reasons, I love Haeundae beach. 11. Do you want to go there??? - Sentence #11 is awkward. Don't do it. 한국말로도 어색하지안아요? "너 거기 가고싶어???" ㅋㅋ - Here, if your MP is "atmosphere", you now have to elaborate on it. - Why is it a "special atmosphere"? - Maybe it's because everyone's relaxing with some beer? - Or everyone's building unique sand castles? - Be detailed!
답변 준비했는데 확인 한번 해주시면 감사하겠습니다. S - I’d like to tell you about my favorite beach. it’s called Gwangalli beach in Korean - this beach is absolutely perfect because of it’s atmosphere - it’s really fresh and lively M - And um, the location is quite close. it’s 10 minutes walk away from my home - so I can go whenever I want to go - And so, there is a golden sand and blue water. it’s really colorful. A - But honestly, I really love the atmosphere - it really helps to unwind. so when my head is complicate, I always go to this beach - so, that’s why this beach is my favorite
Good attempt! Your M needs a little work. Try to add a transition. "달은 좋은 점 도 있어요". 이런거 add 하면은 훨신 smooth 할겁니다. :) 그리고 "and so" 보다는 "And also"가 거기 M 부분에서는 더 좋은거같아요. - And also, I really like how the water is so blue...
답변 준비해봤습니다. 피드백 해주시면 감사하겠습니다! [S] 1. Honestly, I always feel like going to Haeundae beach in Busan. 2. It's because I always feeling peaceful vibe on there. 3. Everyone coming to the beach seems to relaxed. [M] 4. On top of that, I also like their blue water. 5. As opposed to other beaches in Korea, We can see inside of water clearly without swimming glasses. [A] 6. But I really into their peaceful vibe. 7. It seems that I totally relieve my stress at the beach. 8. I realized that Haeundae is just right for me.
Good job. :) Here's my feedback: 1. When you use a Korean word, try to use the word "called". - I go to a beach called Haeundae beach in Korea. - It's located in a city called Busan. 2. Your "S" is good = "peaceful vibe" 3. For "M", give two examples. Right now, you only gave one example = "blue water" 4. For "A", how or why is it a "peaceful vibe"? It's not detailed enough. The answer is too general. Be more specific!
제가 메인포인트 새롭게 설정해서 작성해봤습니다.. The view of the light from nearby the city reflecting on the water is very spectacular. It's my favorite point of the beach I usually visit named 해운대 in Korean. It's closed to the second biggest city here in Korea. and so It's easy to go there. of course there are kinda good things that make me feel so nice. for instance, the first thing is that the atmosphere is really amazing with young generations. Young people always enjoy activities like swimming or even sometimes riding Z-ski whatever. The vibe there is so energetic. another good thing is that I can relax lying on sun bed listening to music and drinking cocktails. I love it so much. but you know, on the top of that, the best thing is that insane view is absolutely fascinating. Especially at the night, light from the city and bridge make the beach like the universe like the sky.
Your 내용 is good! But your first sentence: The view of the light from nearby the city reflecting on the water is very spectacular. - I'd like for you to mention this later in your answer. Perhaps in "A". Mentioning it in "S" can be difficult especially with grammatical mistakes. --- If you keep practicing like this, your flow will be amazing. Once you're more comfortable with the SMA-T or SMART strategy, focus a little more on grammar improvement. There are many parts that can confuse the grader.
s To be honest I love Haewoondae Beach most for its beautiful blue water. I think I've heard of cleaning discolored water campaign going on there before. It's such a reliever to be able to see the ocean like we've seen before. m On top of that, it's within walking distance from the Haewoondae station so super convenient to get to. and also I can enjoy the soft sand beneath my feet! a What stands out the most is though the eye-catching seawater. The blue sea has such a unique power and offers me a peaceful escape from everything else. And so it becomes all that matters in that moment-just the water and me. t So yeah it's all about relaxing kinda place after hectic days.
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연습하다보면 제일 난감한 주제가 ‘Bank’ 였는데, bank description 에 대한 expression도 많이 배우고, 특히 inside 와 outside에 대한 description 전략은 처음 알게되어서 정말 유용했어요!! 그리고 ottoman 은행말고도 가구나 다른 주제에서도 사용할 수 있는 표현이라 “나 고급단어 좀 안다!” 라고 할 수있을 정도라 너무 유익했습니다. 오픽노잼 12월말에 시험이라 열심히 보는 중인데 라이브로도 보면서 공부할 수 있어서 너무 좋소~!~!
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1:01:01 답변 준비해보았습니다.. 챗지피티 도움도 받았습니다.. 그러나 쌤샘보다 도움 되진 않을 것 같습니다👍.. “My favorite beach is Haeundae Beach in Busan. The reason I love this beach is because of its great atmosphere. On top of that, I like the soft golden sand that stretches for what feels like miles. I also enjoy the water, which has a beautiful shade of blue. But honestly, what impresses me the most is the atmosphere here. It’s right in the city, so people gather at the beach-not only tourists but also local citizens. Together, they create a lively vibe, and I absolutely love that.”
@@랄라룰루-w1j wow amazing!
catches my attention 바로 외웠습니다! 감사합니다!
Mp-extra details 구조와 steals the show, on top of that 등등 라이브 처음 보는데 많은 것을 얻어갈 수 있었습니다 양질의 라이브를 무료로 제공해주셔서 정말 감사합니다!!!!!!❤❤❤❤
To be honest, opic nojam is practically practical
오픽노잼 유튜브 순서대로 공부했더니 오픽첫트만에 ih가 나왔어요ㅠㅠ❤ 혼자 독학이라 막막햇는데 역시 믿고 보는 오픽노잼!!! 매일 다른분들 댓글로만 보다가 저도 이렇게 댓글쓰는날이 오네요!! 3개월동안 믿고 공부했더니 이런 선물같은 결과가 감사합니다 쌤 ✌️
오늘 오픽 시험 결과 나왔는데 솔직히 시험 너무 못 봐서 IL 나올 줄 알았는데 IH가 나왔어요!!! 역시 쌤을 전적으로 믿길 잘했어요!! 사랑합니다❤
IL to IH?!?!
대 투더 박!!
Congrats!!
가장 기억나는 표현 : on top of that, SMA 전략 중 M 시작할 때 쓰기 좋은 표현
그 표현들도 여러가지 있었지만 S부분은 최대한 simple 하게 하라는 말이 기억납니다
올해가 끝나기전에 오픽을 빨리 따야해서 라이브강의를 처음 들어왔는데 오늘 꿀팁 7가지 너무 인상깊었고 그 중에 ottomans, 감정 표현때 catches my attention쓰는것과 and on top of that이라는 유용한 언어들을 배우게 되서 인상깊었습니다! Especially 오픽 노잼 steals the show♥ ♥
영어 진짜 초딩수준인데 오픽노잼 덕분에 영상 전부 시청하고 IH 받았어요 정말 감사합니다😭😭😭
Congrats on getting IH!!! ;)
파고다인강 or 오노스가입은 따로 안하셨나용?!
@ 네 돈 하나두 안썼어용
I hope your day is unfolding well. 새로운 표현 배울수 있어 좋았어요.
이제부터 제 최애 가구는 ottomans 입니다.
답변 작성해보았어요~
S :
To be honest, my favorite beach is Haeundae Beach in Busan.
What i love most about the beach is the atmosphere.
It’s so peaceful and gorgeous.
M:
And on top of that, you can even see yachts and small boats in the distance.
Also, it’s right in the city, so it’s super convenient to get to.
A:
But honestly, the vive is just so amazing. I mean, it’s lively but still relaxing, with plenty of cafes and restaurants nearby. It’s the gorgeous place to unwind.
질문에서 inside/outside 답변 구분할 것! I hope my OPIC results unfold well!
on top of that ❤🎉
내년에는 오픽을 도전해보려고 계획중인 완전 쌩초보 영어 1도 모르는 1인입니다ㅎㅎ 처음에 오픽이라는것을 찾아보고 너무어려울것같아서 포기하려했어요 근데 우연찮게 오픽노잼채널을 보게되었습니다. 그래도 오픽노잼영상을보니 흥미라는게생기네요 군생활하면서 영어공부 쉽지않겠지만... 오픽노잼 영상봐가면서 꾸준히공부해보려합니다. 저의도전 응원해주세요~~~~ㅎㅎ
안녕하세요!
12월 2주동안 갑작스레? 오픽노잼 알게되어 지난주 토요일날 시험봤는데 IH 나왔습니다 ㄷㄷ
첫 오픽시험이었고 진짜 할수있는얘기만 하고 나오자해서 시험장에서 2번째로 나왔는데 이런 점수를 받을줄이야...
진짜 본거라고는 Im시리즈와 IH 시리즈 2개이고 시간날때 그냥 들으면서 다녔고 오늘 시험점수 나왔는데 IH 나왔습니다
직장생활 한지 좀 되어서 영어와 동떨어져있었는데 오픽노잼 덕분에 오픽유잼 됐습니다👍
결론은 두괄식, 필러, 감정 인것같고
끊김없이 천천히 말한게 좋은 점수로 이어졌던거같아요!
다시한번 감사하고 감사합니다!🤗❤
practically, ottomansm, describe from inside to outside
4:02 시작
it really helps me to get useful expressions :)
답변 준비했습니다! 유익한 강의 감사합니다!! 다음주 월요일에 시험보는데 AL 꼭 맞고 싶습니다!!
S->To be honest, I usually go to Haeundae beach in the summer.
Because I love its atmosphere.It's lively but still relaxing.
Many people swim there. As I see them, I think that they look like happy and exciting.
M -> And the beach is so gorgeous. It has soft golden sand and nice blue water.
When I see that, I'm thankful for god to see beautiful scenery.
On top of that, Its location is super convenient to spend summer vacation.
Because there are numerous entertainment things nearby beach.
A ->
Hmm, I think that Haeundae beach is one of the popular beaches in Korea.
Because of its unique and special atmosphere. It's the perfect place to unwind.
For these reasons, I love Haeundae beach.
Do you want to go there???
AL 원하고 다음주에 시험보니깐 꼭 집중하고 저의 feedback 잘 보소 ;)
---
S:
1. To be honest, I usually go to Haeundae beach in the summer.
- If you use a Korean word, you should always try to use the word "called" or just don't use the word.
Ex 1: To be honest, I usually go to a beach called Haeundae Beach during the summer in Korea.
Ex 2: To be honest, I usually go to a really nice beach near my home during the summer in Korea.
2. Because I love its atmosphere.It's lively but still relaxing.
3. Many people swim there. As I see them, I think that they look like happy and exciting.
- This part is a little confusing.
- Are you focusing on "atmosphere" or "swimming"?
- For "S", you MUST focus on just one thing.
- Leave the extra details for "M" or "A"
---
M:
4.And the beach is so gorgeous. It has soft golden sand and nice blue water.
5. When I see that, I'm thankful for god to see beautiful scenery.
6. On top of that, Its location is super convenient to spend summer vacation.
7. Because there are numerous entertainment things nearby beach.
- Your two examples here are good: "sand" and "convenient location"
- What you are missing is "transition" and you really need it if you want AL!
No transition example: 그 beach 가 너무 gorgeous 하다 (this is your answer).
With transition example: 그 beach에 달은 좋은 점 도 있어요...
Ex 1: There are other things I love about this beach.
Ex 2: Aside from the atmosphere, there are other things about the beach that I love.
---
A:
8. Hmm, I think that Haeundae beach is one of the popular beaches in Korea.
9. Because of its unique and special atmosphere. It's the perfect place to unwind.
10. For these reasons, I love Haeundae beach.
11. Do you want to go there???
- Sentence #11 is awkward. Don't do it. 한국말로도 어색하지안아요? "너 거기 가고싶어???" ㅋㅋ
- Here, if your MP is "atmosphere", you now have to elaborate on it.
- Why is it a "special atmosphere"?
- Maybe it's because everyone's relaxing with some beer?
- Or everyone's building unique sand castles?
- Be detailed!
@ 피드백 감사합니다!👍👍😁
Transition, called, detailed하게 답변
한가지에 집중해서 말하고 공부하고 시험에 적용하겠습니다
And on top of that
Also
늘 감사합니다ㅎㅎㅎ
Ottomans ! That word is new to me. I will use it in the exam. 😊
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답변 준비했는데 확인 한번 해주시면 감사하겠습니다. S
- I’d like to tell you about my favorite beach. it’s called Gwangalli beach in Korean
- this beach is absolutely perfect because of it’s atmosphere
- it’s really fresh and lively
M
- And um, the location is quite close. it’s 10 minutes walk away from my home
- so I can go whenever I want to go
- And so, there is a golden sand and blue water. it’s really colorful.
A
- But honestly, I really love the atmosphere
- it really helps to unwind. so when my head is complicate, I always go to this beach
- so, that’s why this beach is my favorite
Good attempt!
Your M needs a little work.
Try to add a transition.
"달은 좋은 점 도 있어요".
이런거 add 하면은 훨신 smooth 할겁니다. :)
그리고 "and so" 보다는 "And also"가 거기 M 부분에서는 더 좋은거같아요.
- And also, I really like how the water is so blue...
It's perfect place to □□□
이표현 두고두고 써먹겠습니다😮
practically! I hope your days is unfolding well.
and on top of that 🍯
specific -> especially
답변 준비해봤습니다. 피드백 해주시면 감사하겠습니다!
[S]
1. Honestly, I always feel like going to Haeundae beach in Busan.
2. It's because I always feeling peaceful vibe on there.
3. Everyone coming to the beach seems to relaxed.
[M]
4. On top of that, I also like their blue water.
5. As opposed to other beaches in Korea, We can see inside of water clearly without swimming glasses.
[A]
6. But I really into their peaceful vibe.
7. It seems that I totally relieve my stress at the beach.
8. I realized that Haeundae is just right for me.
Good job. :)
Here's my feedback:
1. When you use a Korean word, try to use the word "called".
- I go to a beach called Haeundae beach in Korea.
- It's located in a city called Busan.
2. Your "S" is good = "peaceful vibe"
3. For "M", give two examples. Right now, you only gave one example = "blue water"
4. For "A", how or why is it a "peaceful vibe"? It's not detailed enough. The answer is too general. Be more specific!
To be honest, And on top of that!!!!!📝
Ottomans. Especially. Unfolding
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The view of the light from nearby the city reflecting on the water is very spectacular.
It's my favorite point of the beach I usually visit named 해운대 in Korean.
It's closed to the second biggest city here in Korea. and so It's easy to go there. of course there are kinda good things that make me feel so nice.
for instance, the first thing is that the atmosphere is really amazing with young generations.
Young people always enjoy activities like swimming or even sometimes riding Z-ski whatever.
The vibe there is so energetic.
another good thing is that I can relax lying on sun bed listening to music and drinking cocktails. I love it so much.
but you know, on the top of that, the best thing is that insane view is absolutely fascinating.
Especially at the night, light from the city and bridge make the beach like the universe like the sky.
Your 내용 is good!
But your first sentence: The view of the light from nearby the city reflecting on the water is very spectacular.
- I'd like for you to mention this later in your answer. Perhaps in "A". Mentioning it in "S" can be difficult especially with grammatical mistakes.
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If you keep practicing like this, your flow will be amazing.
Once you're more comfortable with the SMA-T or SMART strategy, focus a little more on grammar improvement.
There are many parts that can confuse the grader.
@@opicnojam S에서는 좀 더 간결하고 쉬운 표현으로 mp를 말하는게 더 좋다는 말인가요? 감사합니다
catches my attention, appealing
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To be honest I love Haewoondae Beach most for its beautiful blue water.
I think I've heard of cleaning discolored water campaign going on there before.
It's such a reliever to be able to see the ocean like we've seen before.
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On top of that, it's within walking distance from the Haewoondae station so super convenient to get to.
and also I can enjoy the soft sand beneath my feet!
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What stands out the most is though the eye-catching seawater.
The blue sea has such a unique power and offers me a peaceful escape from everything else.
And so it becomes all that matters in that moment-just the water and me.
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So yeah it's all about relaxing kinda place after hectic days.
Also and on top of that !!
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Catch who’s attention
On the top of that
on top of that 오노2
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AL까지 함께해여~~
ottoman
on top of that 같은 표현과 mp와 추가 디테일 정보 말하는 것 등 다 좋았어요!
on top of that 🎉 !
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