Live life with no regret, when you hurt, workin' six to five you can't tell the tears from sweat, or what you're worth. Always kissing someone's ass like you lost a bet. Dog just got sick but you have no money to pay the cost for a vet, it's easy to forget the endless cycle.... of living in a house where you can see the sky fall... it's easy to cry null because when you wake up in the morning you remove that rifle from your tired scull -- bars.
I wear Nike socks, while walking down the block and there I saw your glock that I had to block while walking down the block and now you're out of stock
Put my cock, inside its box, and stuffed its mouth with a sock, stopped and chopped , it’s vocal box, ripped off his jaw, and put him in arm submission lock, I lost my watch.. fuck it idk where I’m goin with this
Straddling up to the shoe store, shiny glistening floor shown. What’s up with the popping, glowing colors simmering off the footwear? Looking quite high tech something like alien ware. Loving the laces, so many places with fresh material, they were so clean people thought it was a miracle. Sales with the discount off, so ya better bring y’all cases. Pull out from the box leaving people shocked as you can tell by their faces.
best example i could find: Eminem - Rock Bottom Feel like im walking a tight rope without a CIRCUS NET Poppin PERCOCET, Im a NERVOUS WRECK I DESERVE RESPECT, but i WORK A SWEAT, for this WORTHLESS CHECK Bout to BURST THIS TECH at somebody to REVERSE THIS DEBT This is what makes eminem the greatest of all time, he is simply the best at using multi syllable, internal, and end rhyme, as well as assonance, alliteration, and metaphor/similies
Ayy Hex just wanna let you know that you and Tek still killin it over all the years ive been listening to yall cats. You guys are masters at this art without a doubt. Your shit is inspiration for cats like me and my music crew. Stay dope. OneLove.
Don't mix Liquor, car keys and wordplay, I gotta prefunk in a hurry, after the party, driving home drunk listening to Rakim, KRS-1 and big daddy cane on a thirty Thursday, Rocking to the beat out of my seat, lost control, swerved, crashed, ended up in a hurst and that's a worst way, especially since it just happened on my birthday I tried 😂
I glad there's videos like this on youtube with guys like this that know what there talking about. Teach those talentless up and coming soulja boys how its done.
Not mine but I wanted to show how multi rhymes can be combined with internal rhymes for a more complex pattern: (2nd verse of Bad Company - Umang & Kick Back) "I'm systematic with this gift of manners, sittin' back with a pen and pad and interact it with simple magic, single handed, think gymnastics when I flip a passage, the way that my lips are flappin' you'd think I was just a madman escapin' on what I crafted..." Multis aren't everything, it's best when there's assonant filler in-between.
Retrieve What I Perceive As A Need To Achieve Relief For Me I Discretely Weave A Web Of Make-Believe To Deceive & Seize These Naïves Then Retreat Through The Leaves So Serene Like A Breeze See I Cheat Deadbeats & Treat Obese Police Who Overeat As If They Were Thieves In The Middle East Beneath Obsolete A Disease Of Displease To These Elite Street Athletes Neat Masterpiece On These Mantlepiece Like Peace & Sanctity Or So It Seems Sneak In To Steal Your Dreams As If They Decreased Until They Delete You Admit Defeat You Beg & You Squeeze Enwreathed In Your Sheets You Cleave Your Teeth To Your Hearts Beat Your Beaten With Ease As I Tease Like A Beast Feasting At The Very Least On These Screams They Are My Tasty Treat You Plea Like A Priest With Prayer Bead Rosaries On Your Knees But God Isn't Me He Exists Overseas I'm Must Be Higher Than a Muh' Fucka. God Deyum. LMFAO... t(>.
I'm a psychopath with a long history of violence, I'll get a reaction like histamine appliance, leavin you perplexed because I'm a mystery of science, these rappers try to get under my skin they're giving me psoriasis
writing is an art at its best when its felt from the heart u should tell it from the start i was born premature but i fought apparantly i came from the source
Becoming a good writer just takes tonns of practice id say it takes an average rapper atleast 6 months to a year before they are writing anything half way decent. I remember the first bars i wrote had no real structure but the more i kept at it slowly began to be able to write more complex schemes.
I am a 14 year old girl who is doing all of these in her rhymes and not knowing that. Shit comes naturally when I legit just listen to rap songand it teaches me how to rap
I never said delivery wasn't a factor. But weak lyricism is all over the place. This is for people looking to step up their writing game. Everybody hates...smh
Diamond rings, designer jeans , shiny thing, everything the finer life brings ain't glitz glamour, arms and hammers, head and shoulders now we working constantly around the clock as the day gets older!!!!
Same here. Having started DJ'ing drumb n base in 1995 gave me the advantage to MC over it 7 years later. though hip hop is mainly what I do the syllable are cynicism located in dnb emceeing gave me my foundation in hip hop syllable bouncing. I'm in X skateboarder cat from the 90's and it reminds me of skateboarding. syllable flipping.
Your dope bro I was skeptical about taking advice from a white dude about rapping but you know your shit. Forreal you could be a ghost writter golden information
i really dont think emcees read all this stuff, they just write and practice, earn good vocab, all this multi syllable shit will just confuse you, you have to start with your abc rhymes like dr.seuss and just rhyme, eventually you get better and notice time to time those multi syllables will show up im not gonna worry about multi syllables or syllables itself when i freestyle,i just fuckin freestyle lol
I'm rich, my life is like a sketch, sometimes I was feeling upset attempting to jump off a bridge, at times I had an empty fridge, grew up on milk and cereal, stayed spiritual look at me now they call me Lord lyricall.
No. What you wrote is single rhyme. BLEE-ding to REACH FEE-ding the GREEKS LEAK-ing of GREASE SPEA-king of SPEECH SEA-king is WEAK TEA-ching the GEEKS SNEE-zing dis-EASE SEA-ted be-TWEEN SEE-ing mau-RICE FEE-ling so WEAK EA-ting for FREE KEEN on my NEICE KNEE-ling for PRIESTS HEL-ping to PREACH DEL-ving to DEEP SEL-ling to PEEPS SA-lomon WEEPS MAS-ter de-GREE etc. Practice, practice, practice, practice, practice, practice, practice, practice, practice, practice, practice.
Just a few Pac rhymes that contained multi syllable rhymes: Ballad of a Dead Soldier, Hard 2 find, If I die tonight, Ghetto Star, Troublesome 96, Ambitionz As A Ridah,Hit'em Up, ect. Biggie multis NEVER made sense.
Here is a website where you can find multy syllable rhymes. double-rhyme.com Example: double rhyme -> couple's time -> humble's crime -> uncle prime Do you think its like cheating if a rapper is using powerfull tools?
im a multi syllable master. proof is in my uploads if you wanna check. any real lyricist needs to have this in their arsenal. it's my bread and butter and not many can match me in that department. other areas i could use some work and i can always get better....but my multi-syllables and internal rhyme schemes are elite world class. pay attention to this video if youre truly wanting to be a skilled rapper.
I quietly close my eyes, duck my head and clench my teeth, And step below the rising swing that ebbs beside my cheek. Let redness rise beneath; the dead inside me reap the first connection! Lesson learned: his neck resigns, it leaks.
Just a tip, rhyming alot of syllables in most of your bars lessen the rhythm of the song it does give the verse a plain feeling, but anyway great vids ^, I just wanted to point out you may be overdoing it..
I'm not able to write cant't even get to decide in which point may be right 'cause my table is too wide but I'm so proud that now you got to see how I might go loud with word so hard to speak And as I go now it's gon' look like as evil but I'm going to make more mistakes It's what I have mostly made I would have ate more cake by day january 8
Hellrasing creating chaotic turbulence Drivin' 'round like little underprivileged disturbing shits Windows down bumpin Eminem, cursing shit/ Screaming 'I don't give a fuck', As we're menacingly burning skids/ Reving tha deadliest turbo 6 Almost ran over pedestrians, murderin 'em/ If i didn't eventually turn to miss/ Went up the curb and hit, A Fire hydriet, "Accidentally" burstin' it/ Fuck didn't think I was that drunk Musta been that specific certain sip of my Hennessy, Bourbon mix/ I took, as ol' mate held the wheel so I could steadily serve him his/ Neighborhood watch couldn't stop us so they're connected in circles pissed/ Standing, dicks in there hands getting concerned wit this/ The state of their homes massive water damage to everyone's furnishing/ House foundation was worsening The local church is blitz Rolled the car into the sermons bricks People closin their curtains quick/ 'Cept 'fore the rally of urban rich suburban kids, Twistin they're fingers, flippin tha bird with it
AustFisch not all my songs are like that and I didn't try to copy Em it just came to my mind so I wrote it down and i wanted to use this as an example for beginners
bro did you take the time out to figure out the game??thats fucking sick..idk but when im rich i can deffs et you on some funding..like you prolly cahnged my life..important factor i waould say..
yeah well for instance the thing i wrote makes no sense but in later lines you can fit in clock references and make it work, but yeah tech one of the best. (be warned) is great rapping that sometimes makes sense sometimes dont. and mr muthafukin exquires verse on oh hail no is another that sounds like the most amazing thing phonetically as well but i love content myself
to put it plain in simple cause i don't think you understood me...if you are cramming multi's together to sound "hot" then its not, brah I'm a real rapper ok...if your multi's have meaning its makes it more powerful the more breath you have the more powerful your delivery will be...thus a great verse needs structure throughout the entire work. Also, what feels good may not be the best way...thats why in the music industry you have a studio full of writers, who collaborate on each song
I wrote a song I couldn't do you know your girlfriend's using you That's what I talked about no looney toones I got to fuck around with gloomy moods That's what I truly do just to be true the rhymes that shine you're using too and that I'm not googling to do
checking it after 8 years 💯 one of my fav Indian Underrated Rapper wrote this : Bout Begin Never Did Clout Chasing Waited For Ma Turn Then Turned All Debate Inc. Sprout Raised In Cloud 9 Now 18 Proud Bhai Thou Live In Me Like Am Beethe(o)ven Bhai - Brother
I am alone and sad they say i am fucking bad while i know they are a clone of their vulnerabities why they doubt at my abilities one day i am gonna prove my capabilites. Gave it a try 😅
I'll give it a go dnt hate This thing called life is a game, it's first to the hall of fame Getting hoes on the journey, bending low things be getting dirty Using these rhymes to get past the line The finish line is heaven, BangBang my squad be stressing It's payday skip a few goes, scrolling on tinder gotta skip a few hoes. What begun was now won, spitting these like cmon
Like the guy below me, I've hit ROCK BOTTOM, he pissed me off so I grabbed my GLOCK, SHOT HIM, had to DASH AND RUN, and I was HAVING FUN, I had to BLAST THE CHUMP after I GRABBED THE GUN, With all his clever shit and all his MULTISYLLABIC RHYMES, He's top of the game and he's COLD, HE'S KILLING HIS LINES, Have PATIENCE WAIT, he's got a flow like RAZOR BLADES, He's killing MC's, so STAY AWAKE for DAYS AND DAYS
"Live life with no regrets, when you hurt, you work til you can't tell the tears from sweat.
nice
Brooklyn Rhoads ooo ooo bars! BARS
Brooklyn Rhoads Hmmm i was thinking. "work six to five you can't tell the tears from sweat." Only this way you're rhyming with live and life!
Live life with no regret, when you hurt, workin' six to five you can't tell the tears from sweat, or what you're worth. Always kissing someone's ass like you lost a bet. Dog just got sick but you have no money to pay the cost for a vet, it's easy to forget the endless cycle.... of living in a house where you can see the sky fall... it's easy to cry null because when you wake up in the morning you remove that rifle from your tired scull -- bars.
Working for years,no regret,jerking tears and sweat
Hickory Dickory Dock, The Mouse Ran Up The Clock, The Clock Struck Twelve, The Mouse Ran Down, I Shot It With My Glock.
I wear Nike socks, while walking down the block and there I saw your glock that I had to block while walking down the block and now you're out of stock
Put my cock, inside its box, and stuffed its mouth with a sock, stopped and chopped , it’s vocal box, ripped off his jaw, and put him in arm submission lock, I lost my watch.. fuck it idk where I’m goin with this
Straddling up to the shoe store, shiny glistening floor shown. What’s up with the popping, glowing colors simmering off the footwear? Looking quite high tech something like alien ware. Loving the laces, so many places with fresh material, they were so clean people thought it was a miracle. Sales with the discount off, so ya better bring y’all cases. Pull out from the box leaving people shocked as you can tell by their faces.
Gucci gang gucci gang gucci ganf gucci gang gucci gang
@@yusuftalha9085 hahahahahahah...... How easy to rhyme for nowadays rappers.... That's the real definition of meaningless rap
best example i could find: Eminem - Rock Bottom
Feel like im walking a tight rope without a CIRCUS NET
Poppin PERCOCET, Im a NERVOUS WRECK
I DESERVE RESPECT, but i WORK A SWEAT, for this WORTHLESS CHECK
Bout to BURST THIS TECH at somebody to REVERSE THIS DEBT
This is what makes eminem the greatest of all time, he is simply the best at using multi syllable, internal, and end rhyme, as well as assonance, alliteration, and metaphor/similies
Tech better at everything you sound besides internal 🤣
Theres others. How much rap you listen to?
Got to listen to the man Eminem took his style from…kook g rap before you make comments like that
Mama told me to PLAY NICE
But I'm feeling like RAY RICE
Marvin Mitchell BUT I FEEL LIKE YOU SHOULD PLAY NICE
@@lameloball3938
Bitch i punch LANA DEL RAY TWICE
& the bitch had lice 🤣
@@tqtau6456 And Kanye wrote an album about Jesus Christ
@@Surfingthekaliyuga laughed so hard i almost dropped my pipe
A lot of ‘rappers’ need to see this…
I am very surprised at the number of rappers who NEVER do this. It doesn't have to be your entire strategy but it's definitely worth knowing.
Great job I would suggest asking the viewers to do an exercise at the end of the video to encourage more interaction!
NEXT, HE CAN TEACH US HOW TO BE MORE "SOULFUL" FOH!!!
Mario Datzit did you watch the video?
Terrell Cooper
HONESTLY, NO I DIDN'T. BUT, SINCE YOUR RESPONSE WAS COOL! I'LL WATCH THE VIDEO. PEACE FAM.
Mario Datzit join my group called hip hop nerds I think you would like it !
Terrell Cooper That's a great idea. I appreciate the feedback. I'll see what I can do to implement these things in future videos.
We all know the king of inverse rhymes.
Slim Shady
Twisted insane
ALL CAPS eminem
Rakim and kool g rap
Surely MF DOOM
Ayy Hex just wanna let you know that you and Tek still killin it over all the years ive been listening to yall cats. You guys are masters at this art without a doubt. Your shit is inspiration for cats like me and my music crew. Stay dope. OneLove.
You are great there is no one who can explain it that easy
Glad it helped, took me a long time to learn it.
"let's jump into it" 1 minute into the video :P
Don't mix Liquor, car keys and wordplay, I gotta prefunk in a hurry, after the party, driving home drunk listening to Rakim, KRS-1 and big daddy cane on a thirty Thursday, Rocking to the beat out of my seat, lost control, swerved, crashed, ended up in a hurst and that's a worst way, especially since it just happened on my birthday
I tried 😂
I glad there's videos like this on youtube with guys like this that know what there talking about. Teach those talentless up and coming soulja boys how its done.
Not mine but I wanted to show how multi rhymes can be combined with internal rhymes for a more complex pattern: (2nd verse of Bad Company - Umang & Kick Back)
"I'm systematic with this gift of manners, sittin' back with a pen and pad and interact it with simple magic, single handed, think gymnastics when I flip a passage, the way that my lips are flappin' you'd think I was just a madman escapin' on what I crafted..."
Multis aren't everything, it's best when there's assonant filler in-between.
Retrieve What I Perceive As A Need To Achieve Relief For Me
I Discretely Weave A Web Of Make-Believe To Deceive & Seize These Naïves
Then Retreat Through The Leaves
So Serene Like A Breeze
See I Cheat Deadbeats & Treat Obese Police Who Overeat As If They Were Thieves In The Middle East Beneath Obsolete A Disease Of Displease To These Elite Street Athletes Neat Masterpiece On These Mantlepiece Like Peace & Sanctity Or So It Seems Sneak In To Steal Your Dreams As If They Decreased Until They Delete You Admit Defeat You Beg & You Squeeze Enwreathed In Your Sheets You Cleave Your Teeth To Your Hearts Beat Your Beaten With Ease As I Tease Like A Beast Feasting At The Very Least On These Screams They Are My Tasty Treat You Plea Like A Priest With Prayer Bead Rosaries On Your Knees But God Isn't Me He Exists Overseas
I'm Must Be Higher Than a Muh' Fucka. God Deyum. LMFAO...
t(>.
Man this is too hard🔥🔥🔥
Fire
I'm a psychopath with a long history of violence, I'll get a reaction like histamine appliance, leavin you perplexed because I'm a mystery of science, these rappers try to get under my skin they're giving me psoriasis
I made this 11 months ago. It was just a quickie, I wasn't really trying my best
GuysOfFilm Holy shit that's good
GuysOfFilm yea bunch of shit that just ryhmes but has no meaning
that's dope 🙄
GuysOfFilm eh... your words are too complex... what good is a rap song nobody can understand w/o googling every word xD js
writing is an art at its best when its felt from the heart u should tell it from the start i was born premature but i fought apparantly i came from the source
I write multisyllable & it's really easy just focus more on the vowels & less of the consonants, you'll get way more rhymes that way
yeah .like focusing more on the sounds than spelling
+Dono TG respect for giving the description layout to better clarify the lesson
Examples: Militant Lyracist-Villian whose spiritless
Technician on the mic-Magician when i write
Becoming a good writer just takes tonns of practice id say it takes an average rapper atleast 6 months to a year before they are writing anything half way decent. I remember the first bars i wrote had no real structure but the more i kept at it slowly began to be able to write more complex schemes.
ima keep rhyming at will and never sleep or stop/and ima keep climbing this hill until I reach the top/
I am a 14 year old girl who is doing all of these in her rhymes and not knowing that. Shit comes naturally when I legit just listen to rap songand it teaches me how to rap
Works that way for some people. Keep grinding. Cheers.
this video really helped me wright my rap song thanks !!!!!!
jehh great! 1. q : bars and hook ? how mutch etc. 2. fast and slow rhyming 3 accents ? :)
I never said delivery wasn't a factor. But weak lyricism is all over the place. This is for people looking to step up their writing game. Everybody hates...smh
"Thug Queen" is the beat girl rapper lyrically.Checkout "Thug Queen" verse on "Power" and Mighty Mighty Warrior(s).
"Thug Queen" is very Talented
I'm in a rap game ,and I light ma flame , right now what Im fame.
Diamond rings, designer jeans , shiny thing, everything the finer life brings ain't glitz glamour, arms and hammers, head and shoulders now we working constantly around the clock as the day gets older!!!!
Ayo big L
Are you allowed to rhyme CINNAMON and SYNONYM?
SIN-A-MIN/SYN-OH-NIM - Looks like a decent slant to me.
I'm a lyrical spiritual individual miracle spiritual individual lyrical spiritual miracle
Correction I'm the individual lyrical spirit miracle that'll spear a fool!
@@Abracastabya No..no you totally didn't get the joke
@@Abracastabya fuck dude you're really not getting it ahahaha
Dumb
*Those are eminems lines*
Nice pointers, learned a lot. Thanks! :D
Same here. Having started DJ'ing drumb n base in 1995 gave me the advantage to MC over it 7 years later. though hip hop is mainly what I do the syllable are cynicism located in dnb emceeing gave me my foundation in hip hop syllable bouncing. I'm in X skateboarder cat from the 90's and it reminds me of skateboarding. syllable flipping.
Awesome man. I'm a novice, but I'm gonna use this to make some silly multis.
slant rhymes are the best for me .its like hidden rhymes
U alive?
sometimes you have to split the word and start its next syllable on your next line☺️
Yo bro whair to get these rap tunes??????😕😕😕😕
Bro. That 2001 haircut is next level
Thanks for this i can write some dope lyrics and it help me freestyle all night
Top tips really useful information, thank you for the video. From the UK
Your dope bro I was skeptical about taking advice from a white dude about rapping but you know your shit. Forreal you could be a ghost writter golden information
Super well made!
Good work bro. You took me back to the basics. That's what I need, to stay grounded. Good work.
i really dont think emcees read all this stuff, they just write and practice, earn good vocab, all this multi syllable shit will just confuse you, you have to start with your abc rhymes like dr.seuss and just rhyme, eventually you get better and notice time to time those multi syllables will show up
im not gonna worry about multi syllables or syllables itself when i freestyle,i just fuckin freestyle lol
wouldn't it be fun if you could freestyle with multies though? :D
of course ;D
honestly you probably already naturally do a lot of this stuff. its about taking it from unconscious competence to conscious competence
i like it thanks for the help! you my my brother are the man!
Good video man!
Eminem-infinite best example of this
I'm rich, my life is like a sketch, sometimes I was feeling upset attempting to jump off a bridge, at times I had an empty fridge, grew up on milk and cereal, stayed spiritual look at me now they call me Lord lyricall.
Still waiting on your video tutorial man. This video is similiar to the kind of video we are expecting from you, Hex.
someone please can i rhyme unstressed syllables for example
bleeding to reach
helping to preach
ing to reach
ing to preach
ing is unstressed
I guess, try it.
No. What you wrote is single rhyme.
BLEE-ding to REACH
FEE-ding the GREEKS
LEAK-ing of GREASE
SPEA-king of SPEECH
SEA-king is WEAK
TEA-ching the GEEKS
SNEE-zing dis-EASE
SEA-ted be-TWEEN
SEE-ing mau-RICE
FEE-ling so WEAK
EA-ting for FREE
KEEN on my NEICE
KNEE-ling for PRIESTS
HEL-ping to PREACH
DEL-ving to DEEP
SEL-ling to PEEPS
SA-lomon WEEPS
MAS-ter de-GREE
etc.
Practice, practice, practice, practice, practice, practice, practice, practice, practice, practice, practice.
You changed my life😄
haha i gotcha nd almost all my verses like that now i just gotta get this studio with my brother
Just a few Pac rhymes that contained multi syllable rhymes: Ballad of a Dead Soldier, Hard 2 find, If I die tonight, Ghetto Star, Troublesome 96, Ambitionz As A Ridah,Hit'em Up, ect. Biggie multis NEVER made sense.
That was sick man! :D
Just kidding, you're dope!! Just finding a way to pass that link out, brah
Here is a website where you can find multy syllable rhymes.
double-rhyme.com
Example: double rhyme -> couple's time -> humble's crime -> uncle prime
Do you think its like cheating if a rapper is using powerfull tools?
im a multi syllable master. proof is in my uploads if you wanna check. any real lyricist needs to have this in their arsenal. it's my bread and butter and not many can match me in that department. other areas i could use some work and i can always get better....but my multi-syllables and internal rhyme schemes are elite world class. pay attention to this video if youre truly wanting to be a skilled rapper.
I quietly close my eyes, duck my head and clench my teeth,
And step below the rising swing that ebbs beside my cheek.
Let redness rise beneath; the dead inside me reap the first connection!
Lesson learned: his neck resigns, it leaks.
Sir I How make hooks our lyrics plz make a video for how to make hooks
Added to my list.
thanx for the info,
i think it gonne be helpfull!
Thanks. Very helpful indeed.
we not doin it lowkey like the bottom lock
bigger than the whole sea, jesus had to stop the walk
I really liked this video, thanks :)
Just a tip, rhyming alot of syllables in most of your bars lessen the rhythm of the song it does give the verse a plain feeling, but anyway great vids ^, I just wanted to point out you may be overdoing it..
Hey can you *please* do a video on ryhme charts (I think they're called?). Eminem put that method to use a lot if that helps
My raps are as hot as fire, somebody cool me down, haters trying to put me down, I'm still king give me the crown.
can you please do a tutorial on techniques eminem uses(especially on his last album)
Internal rhymes, multis/mosaic rhymes, tons of double meanings, metaphors, similes and other wordplay. Just to name a few
the hard part on eminems style is his flow .he switches so quick .thats hard to do while writing lyrics
good video man
you are amazing..
Would like a little flow at start and end of every video.
*IN ARGENTINA THIS TECHNIQ IS CALLED " ONE-TWO OR MULTYSILLABICS OR METRICA"*
SEARCH IN YT "METRICAS DAM"
Hey sir Dono TG. thanks for sharing this video. :)
nice job man
do one on pentameter
Great Video, Great content, You know what they say about Great Minds.
I'm not able to write
cant't even get to decide
in which point may be right
'cause my table is too wide
but I'm so proud
that now you got to see
how I might go loud
with word so hard to speak
And as I go now
it's gon' look like as evil
but I'm going to make more mistakes
It's what I have mostly made
I would have ate more cake
by day january 8
I be chillin like a nigga &
smokin like a ninja.. lol
Very helpful thanks Gigi
This is sick
Hellrasing creating chaotic turbulence
Drivin' 'round like little underprivileged disturbing shits
Windows down bumpin Eminem, cursing shit/
Screaming 'I don't give a fuck',
As we're menacingly burning skids/
Reving tha deadliest turbo 6
Almost ran over pedestrians, murderin 'em/
If i didn't eventually turn to miss/
Went up the curb and hit,
A Fire hydriet, "Accidentally" burstin' it/
Fuck didn't think I was that drunk
Musta been that specific certain sip
of my Hennessy, Bourbon mix/
I took, as ol' mate held the wheel
so I could steadily serve him his/
Neighborhood watch couldn't stop us so they're connected in circles pissed/
Standing, dicks in there hands getting concerned wit this/
The state of their homes
massive water damage to everyone's furnishing/
House foundation was worsening
The local church is blitz
Rolled the car into the sermons bricks
People closin their curtains quick/
'Cept 'fore the rally of urban rich suburban kids,
Twistin they're fingers, flippin tha bird with it
niceeeeeeeee can you teach me some stuff?
find your own style, copped ems style after mentioning him. itll do you better.
AustFisch i found mine lol, its complicated to explain, ill tell u about it if u want
AustFisch not all my songs are like that and I didn't try to copy Em it just came to my mind so I wrote it down and i wanted to use this as an example for beginners
bro did you take the time out to figure out the game??thats fucking sick..idk but when im rich i can deffs et you on some funding..like you prolly cahnged my life..important factor i waould say..
Glad to be of help. Lemme know if you need anything else bro.
Good video
thanks very helpful bro
yeah well for instance the thing i wrote makes no sense but in later lines you can fit in clock references and make it work, but yeah tech one of the best. (be warned) is great rapping that sometimes makes sense sometimes dont. and mr muthafukin exquires verse on oh hail no is another that sounds like the most amazing thing phonetically as well but i love content myself
I got scary flows with hairy toes
LOL
to put it plain in simple cause i don't think you understood me...if you are cramming multi's together to sound "hot" then its not, brah I'm a real rapper ok...if your multi's have meaning its makes it more powerful the more breath you have the more powerful your delivery will be...thus a great verse needs structure throughout the entire work. Also, what feels good may not be the best way...thats why in the music industry you have a studio full of writers, who collaborate on each song
Don't correct the correct corrections cause the correct corrections are corrected by a correct corrector
"i run quick/why sun slick." sounds like something lil wayne would rap. xD
How are you man
After 7 years
Hickory Dickory Dock, got that icky sticky now I'm stuck
I wrote a song I couldn't do
you know your girlfriend's using you
That's what I talked about no looney toones
I got to fuck around with gloomy moods
That's what I truly do
just to be true the rhymes that shine you're using too
and that I'm not googling to do
ok i have to put this on CYNX ENTERTAINMENT - TEH (BARZ) A.B.M.
Useful, Thanks - Would be nice to bust a flow, let them skills show 1 2 3 4 Sho’
checking it after 8 years 💯
one of my fav Indian Underrated Rapper wrote this :
Bout Begin Never Did Clout Chasing
Waited For Ma Turn Then Turned All Debate Inc.
Sprout Raised In Cloud 9 Now 18
Proud Bhai Thou Live In Me Like Am Beethe(o)ven
Bhai - Brother
I am alone and sad they say i am fucking bad while i know they are a clone of their vulnerabities why they doubt at my abilities one day i am gonna prove my capabilites.
Gave it a try 😅
sick!!! nice
I'll give it a go dnt hate
This thing called life is a game, it's first to the hall of fame
Getting hoes on the journey, bending low things be getting dirty
Using these rhymes to get past the line
The finish line is heaven, BangBang my squad be stressing
It's payday skip a few goes, scrolling on tinder gotta skip a few hoes.
What begun was now won, spitting these like cmon
That's good bro dopeee asss
Like the guy below me, I've hit ROCK BOTTOM,
he pissed me off so I grabbed my GLOCK, SHOT HIM,
had to DASH AND RUN, and I was HAVING FUN,
I had to BLAST THE CHUMP after I GRABBED THE GUN,
With all his clever shit and all his MULTISYLLABIC RHYMES,
He's top of the game and he's COLD, HE'S KILLING HIS LINES,
Have PATIENCE WAIT, he's got a flow like RAZOR BLADES,
He's killing MC's, so STAY AWAKE for DAYS AND DAYS
good stuff
dawn eden
born again
from fauna kin
adorning pens
I have multi's in the songs I write, but I'm thirteen, they probably suck! Haha.