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- เผยแพร่เมื่อ 18 ต.ค. 2024
- Renegades is not intended for children and contains mature themes, violence, blood and animal death.
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Episode 2: Recreancy
Kwebso must choose where his loyalties lie: his brother or the Clan.
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So yeah there's a couple of inconsistencies and mistakes but I can't really be bothered to fix them. I like this episode less than episode 1, because it feels kinda forced, but I hope you'll like it still. I did try to give a little more voice direction as I got some feedback on episode's one voice acting.
Kwebso's actor from episode 1 has been replaced. I really hope this is temporary, because Josheir did a great job at playing him, but if it's not, let's welcome his equally awesome replacement, Warinot. Both really bring the character to life and I appreciate it so much.
The ending is inspired by Unknown Blood episode 6 because who doesn't love an ending where everything goes wrong for this one character.
Music credits:
"Sleep and Then" Kevin MacLeod (incompetech.com)
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So yes here's my stupid commentary on this stupid episode. I really hope episode 3 will be better. I've come to the realization that the lip sync is off in more places than I actually thought it was, that I broke the 180 rule for a bit, and that the final scene is forced as heck. I regret doing things the way I did with this episode, and I'm not happy with it, unlike episode 1.
But whatever, it's out there and I don't think I'm going back to fix it unless absolutely necessary.
Some *spoilery* commentary on the episode:
-Is Richard's love genuine? Even he kind of questions it. But he thinks it's genuine enough to run off with his first love, though.
-When "saying" his farewells, to Kwebso, Richard doesn't bother using words. Make of that what you will.
-Both Kwebso and Richard have bags under their eyes because they've actually been sleeping rather poorly. Richard because he has to lie to Kwebso and live a double life. Kwebso because he thinks his brother is dying.
-Kwebso is indeed a crybaby. Two episodes into this series and the latter halves of both episodes have had him crying. What a wuss.
-A couple of days have passed from episode one to episode two.
-Johanna can't seem to stay on model for more than one scene whoops.
-Judge Richard however you will, I won't judge you for your conclusions about him c:
I'm sorry.
So much reading -^-
Plz make more love ALL LONE ONES and this series
Lynnzl its ok :3
IT MADE ME SAD!!
what are you talking about "stupid episode"? It was good. The voices and music-which i know from Saberclaw productions-really drew my emotions
Same Kwebso, I've had a friend ditch me for their date before.
Great job on this! It was really emotional, the friendship the main two share is really genuine. I hope things work out between them.
" _Take my hoodie to remember me by_ ."
More emotional words have never been spoken!
Good episode though, especially near the end, I thought Kwebso was going to snap and attack RIchard for a moment! :O
However at 5:40, I gotta say uhh, did RIch suddenly become a furry to be able to sprout opposable fingers? I know it's a weird thing to notice (and this is fantasy after all) but the way he's holding that helmet really threw me off. x'D
The animals in the ALOverse have semi-dexterous claws. So they can't really do the refined things unless they have extreme training, but they can do basic things like holding or grabbing stuff if they want to xD One of their four claws (the one closest to the other forepaw) can be used as a "thumb", and the small dew claw is just useless.
And yeah you're not the only one who thought so xD The "this ends here"-line kinda gives people the idea I think xD
Ah I see! I always sort of figured it would be something like that, since they've armor and all, but to _see_ it in action just took me aback. lel
and yes, it was exactly that line that got me thinking 'ohhh shiiittt' in combination with the tension in the voice acting. owo seriously did a wonderful job with the dialogue!
Lynnzl what's does CC means?
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i cried When Richard was leaving he should have gone with him i would choose brother over clan any day
Nods
Alpha Nova STOP
@@DaSilverBackz o-o
That hurt my heart. that really hurt my heart. i was hoping they would leave together. this is sad. but good. ok. im gonna go cry in a corner now.
I find it funny that everyone hates Richard and I just still love that dude (favorite character tbh)
No i like Richard tho
I love Richard too X33
"You Choose her...over me..." This is by far the most emotional series ever........
AND I LOVE IT!!!!😄
Ah, great work animating Richard’s nonverbal gestures. I feel like not enough people in the animation community take advantage of being able to animate movements like that. Really enhances the character. As for the story I love all the clear motives and loyalties you’ve given these characters, and how that creates conflict.
Wooooooow, this episode was pretty sad tbh
I cant imagine having your closest friend (Sibling) leave you like that for however long they will be away for...
But anyways, great job on the animation and the lip sync. It seemed pretty fine to me tbh
And awesome job to all the voice actors too ^u^
That made me cry so much my eyes hurt
This is really an amazing series. Extremely creative, in your animation, presentation and editing. I'm really looking forward to the next episode. Very well done.
Woa dude you're like one of my top inspirations. Hearing those words from you is very motivating. Thanks so much!
wanna see the next ep
they add the penis ._.
Goodbye may seem forever. Farewell feels like the end. But in my heart's a memory. And there will always be
Dang, I feel bad for lil Kwebso
Johanna is trash don't like her xD
Thank you so very much!
Richard: if anyone asked where i am
I V E L E F T T H E C O U N T R Y.
Poor Kwebso and I honestly thought Richard was dying bombshell but I did like Kwebsos' new VA he did a good job👍👍👏👏
THANK U FOR MAKING ANOTHER ONE PLZ MAKE MORE MYBE ???
Please continue this. I absolutely love this. :)
*Nice video Lynnzl it's good lip sync I love it!!!!*
I'm glad u made ur episodes fast brilliant person u r
6:55
That male body part that throws you off >.>
TRUE THOU
echo. hi.
Oh my
4:16 that male body part
GracefulAngelWolf Thanks a lot, you just ruined all my other emotions. Now all I can think of is that one body part :P
This was a great episode girl! I loved how it turned out! And that plot twist was spot on!
dere he' is !! Kwebso is my son
No he mine
Great plot twist! The story just keeps getting better! I can't wait for the next episode.
Thank you!
You're welcome.
I love how you gave Kwebso a real, deep reason to not leave the clan. Several deep reasons, actually. Instead of just “he’s forced to stay” or “he feels he has more to do.” Instead of just having their past not interact with their present, you made it an actual factor in their lives that ended up dividing them. ^-^
Thank you!
THIS IS SO GOOD I can't wait to see the next episode but I can wait I know animators need time! Hope you have a great day!
Wowww I watched most of this yesterday.!;) And now I love it please make more good thing I subscribed 😀😊
I clicked on the i icon and I don't believe in what Richard😕 said he did sounded foolish but you know!😕
This is a great episode. There are many ways the plot can go from here. I look forward to how this series progresses.
Thank you!
this is amazing there has to be more episodes :0
This series is really good so far! I can't wait for the next episode!
I figured that was his mate and when he left the camp I knew he was probably going to see her xD
Aww :c
Lynnzl lol I wasn't for sure anyway until the final bit xD it was really good how you wrote the final bit, it made a lot of sense and fit together well :D!
Lynnzl Will they ever be together again 😭😢 Brother love is broken now.😢😭💔
Make an episode three!!! Its soo good and it's left on a cliffhanger ahhhh I'm gonna die 😫🤣
This made me cry every time I watch this😭😭😭😭😭😭😢😢😢😭😢😭😢😭
I love this series keep up the good work guys
Ommmmmggggg nnnooooo that was geting soooo good!!! Wish for another episode #plottwist #likeifuagree
THIS JUST GOT SO GOOD OMG I'M IN LOVE
That had to be the hardest decision for him..
(The near end) :(
THIS MADE ME CRY SO MUCH
Whoop, loved this episode, it turned so well ^w^
EDIT: returned to this series for the nostalgia and forgot I VC’d Johanna and wondered why that dog sounded so familiar 😂
it pissed me off kwebso would be so loyal to a clan of demons instead of his own bro
I love that guys voice is dasker and eres
Its so good gratelasion you have done this good i like this i am happy you make me happy
I literally started tearing up
No Video Has Ever Made Me Cry But the Last Episode Of All Lone Ones :'c
I love this seaires plz make more!
It actually made me cry
This made me cry 😢😢😢😢
Richard was in the right he doesn't have to apologise or be sorry
I can't believe he didn't join Richard!! I would have!! I'm gonna cry!! ;(
I actually cried
Ohno :c
Ooh, nice episode! The animation is pretty smooth, and the lip-synch good, though it seemed a bit choppy at times. The backgrounds were nice, so much green ah yes x) the music fit pretty well, too! Just a small critique, but you broke the 180 degree camera rule thing several times (I noticed you did this in ALO, too, though you stopped after a while I think). I don't know how to explain it very well, so just Google it; basically how the characters are placed at times is confusing because that wasn't how they were placed before. Anyway...good job with this episode and I look forward to the next one! (Also still not happy that my last name is in there)
Whoops sorry. xD
OML it's out it's out OMG Great this is amazing
Can't wait till the next episode!!
whan will we get to see ep 3 of this episode cuse i love this episode
T-that was so sad at the end I cried 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Oml so good it made me cry xd
the voice actors make it more sad
Now this is getting very interesting to see that 💫.
I will be ur new subscriber! :)
I cried at the end! If my brother ever dared to choose his girlfriend over me I would just slap him really hard and run away crying and maybe never come back.
I have to side on Richard on this, and Joanne has a point about the clan (hint my point from the scene of Taima and Rou), something that Kwebso should of been totally get the picture on, plus I'm starting to like RichardXJohanne, I hope we get to see more of their relationship in this series, keep it up
Gone some strong Arcane vibes right now. Like Jinx (Kwebso) wanting to have Vi (Richard) for herself and how she should love no one else. Or else she'll see this as a betrayal
Oh ok
71% of people were shook
best series ever
When the notification comes when I'm sleeping-_- edit: oml ;-; Richard why
=^=
Timezones :D
Richard make me cry ;-;
I’ve only known Kwebso for two episodes and I want him
Ok Mabel I was wrong because he did not die but I have to say this is dramatic.
and yes, I hope episode three is better but I still love this though.OK I MIGHT CRY RIGHT NOW
OMG I NEED MOREEEEE
More!! Pleas!
"you choosed her over me?!.." so sad.. from all they been tho..
I heard Joshier quit voice acting :(
He did? Aww, that's too bad. I don't mind him quitting, but next time I'd appreciate being told rather than having to hear via commenter x3
Lynnzl when is episode 3 coming out
Oki I think I'm about to cry I was getting into the episode then all of a sudden 4:15 it's just I've never really seen anyone draw genitals on a wolf series XD
I really think that it is so amazing animation animation episodes video in the whole world 🌟.
I luved it so sad tho!!!! Is there ever gonna be more? I hope so!
*But I’m just repeating it because I CAN*
Oh snap that was harsh when Richard left.
Richard has contracted Lumbago
Is this a story about domestic dogs in the wild? If it is thats pretty cool. Keep up the great content!
Nice! You showed how strong a brothers' bond can be, and yet how easily broken. In what episode will they fight to the death and then find redemption? Or will it be slightly different, where they actually kill each other? Or maybe they never see each other again... Whatever the outcome is, I'm sure it will be epic!
I was finishing Richard's "Join me." With "and together we shall destroyer the Jedi!" And other phrases like that.
BTW, Now that Silke has gone crazy, has Rufus' clan really collapsed that greatly? If so than that could be an interesting factor in how this turns out.
Thanks for another part of the story!
The Clan is faring pretty well without Silkey actually. Rufus appointed Rou the new second-in-command, and he does his job well enough. Though he isn't as great as Silkey was in her golden days.
I can't believe that he was lying😥😢😓😿🐕🐾
Lol Richard is like Fushimi betraying Misaki, oh yes... quipso is certainly not as brash as Misaki. Btw the anime is called K project tin Netflix
I cant wait for part 3
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I cried...
I cried before Kwebso did...
I'm so happy it doesn't end there and something not so sad can happen. How long do u think the series with be?
6 episodes
8:07 I agree with Kwebso! WHY CANT U JUST BRING HER INTO THE CLAN RICHARD?!?!
if I were kwebso I would've been like "Bai" if your a trader and don't want to be with me anymore after all the clan has helped u then Bye-bye I would take feel bad for u... seriously I wouldn't spend time with my brother begging him to stay I would've ended it right there as then(sorry this was no offense to bad feedback to your show it is just what I would've done)PS also sorry if I spelled kwebso wrong 😅
That's OOC for Kwebso
He broke the odth :c
I love it so much
YAAAAAY EINE NEUE EPISODE IST DRAUSSEN(bin etwas spät aber egaaaaaal XD) Es ist richtig gut geworden!!!! Wie machst du das?? :OO
MS Paint und Willenskraft.
I love that video
I think the sickness is love!💜
I Love it
dogs know how to use literature wonder were they learned from
The feral-borns don't, but Kwebso and Richard were once pets and can read, so they know the meaning of "quote-unquote".
damn boi u knew her a month and you wanna run off with her already
ain't Richard just the most considerate sweetheart
Pshh! The helmets on their head at the beginning xD
Im crying
6:56 DAT D*CK THO XD
This is really interesting but sad ;-; I am curious, where are Lynn and One-Eye now?
Dead c:
Lynnzl aww well.good animation and I look for word to seeing more :3
No dislikes. I can see why
Did richard grow fingers? :3