"Death Sentence" -- a Star Trek fan production

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  • @calanon534
    @calanon534 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    Oh, LORD, I love these uniforms! They remind me of the post-Movie era and the post-ENT era (Pacific 201), without looking corny or hackneyed.
    That story was VERY well done. It had all the hallmarks of a good TNG episode, bite-sized. Love it, love it. This is why Trek will live on forever - fans like you all.

  • @HairyHarrisFilm
    @HairyHarrisFilm 2 ปีที่แล้ว +15

    Excellent story, well told! Ross' VFX are near studio quality (and we could use his help)! Although I prefer uniforms with TOS rank braids, your uniforms and bridge set is a logical bridge between TOS and TWOK. Looking forward to seeing more stuff from the "Lost Era".

  • @Capt.Marco-Hawk-L.L.A.P
    @Capt.Marco-Hawk-L.L.A.P 2 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    excellent awesome production, interesting Romulan probe design.

  • @the_mighty_bearcat
    @the_mighty_bearcat 2 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Enjoyable. Loved seeing an Oberth class vessel. Decent story. The makeup on Taer is looking better IMO. And respectfully, Sarah Holton is a rather good looking woman ❤.

  • @peterfox3374
    @peterfox3374 2 ปีที่แล้ว +11

    It appears that I have acquired the prime of the comment section, and have made the first comment my own.
    I ADORE the drone Shots, they look Amazing! Great job with Episode 2! Looking forward for many more adventures.

  • @thecopycat7153
    @thecopycat7153 2 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    Cool effects I like that green beaking, really awesome.

  • @Telemachus2814
    @Telemachus2814 2 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    Enjoyed this one. I feel bad it took me so long to watch a new episode of my favorite, active, fan production. As always, can't wait for more.

  • @Taliesin-xd7ke
    @Taliesin-xd7ke ปีที่แล้ว +4

    A sad tale well told guys.👍

  • @mkendallpk4321
    @mkendallpk4321 2 ปีที่แล้ว +10

    Interesting concept. Very well done.

  • @michaelaldredge-greenwell1692
    @michaelaldredge-greenwell1692 2 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    So poignant, so beautiful, so saddening!! Such a wonderful, heartfelt, touching, heart wrenching episode!! I’m crying & sobbing right now!! This episode is humbling

    • @Potemkin1711
      @Potemkin1711  2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Thank you. That means a lot to us!

  • @brunozeigerts6379
    @brunozeigerts6379 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Interesting depiction of how two captains would assess ... and handle... a situation differently.

  • @cwtnc
    @cwtnc 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    A somber tale, very well done.
    The Security Team jackets reminded me a bit of Battlestar Galatica 2.

  • @ryanc5572
    @ryanc5572 2 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    Great story and I loved the effects. The outro theme is amazing too 😍

  • @snowwolves3dprintingandpro629
    @snowwolves3dprintingandpro629 2 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Good job.

  • @DMSProduktions
    @DMSProduktions 2 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    Gr8 job!

  • @generalwainwright9074
    @generalwainwright9074 2 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    I actually like the Captains character. He seems like A D bag but I like D bags. I also kinda have a man crush on him I don't know why lol. Great job guys I enjoyed that.

    • @DMSProduktions
      @DMSProduktions 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      You CAN say it you know! It ISN'T a wear word!

  • @unname935
    @unname935 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    My god, these Caliborn crews' uniforms always make me think they are Section 31.🤣

  • @davideversole9767
    @davideversole9767 2 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    The musical score is outstanding. Is the flute-like (to my ears) music the one called "Asian Harmony" in the credits. Thanks guys.

    • @Potemkin1711
      @Potemkin1711  2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Yes. It came from Freesound and was composed and performed by N0IZ.

  • @bryangarton2313
    @bryangarton2313 2 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    great show 😎

  • @wernerlouderback6796
    @wernerlouderback6796 2 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    “Better to die then to live as no one.” 🤔
    Something like, “No man is an island...”?

  • @ChristinaMoore79
    @ChristinaMoore79 2 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    Wow. What a profound story -- and told in only a few minutes' time! Very well done. I like that Hawkins decided to leave the outcasts in place and peace, as their presence wasn't disturbing anyone and interference would only lead to their deaths. Your CGI is fantastic, and the make-up work is improving (the Romulan's ears looked almost natural!). Still not a fan of the blue overhead lighting on the Caliborn bridge -- I personally feel like the lighting should be all one color, such as the spotlight over the captain's chair. Muted lighting over the consoles is fine, but blue just doesn't seem right.

    • @Potemkin1711
      @Potemkin1711  2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      The blue lighting at the stations makes the graphics on the panels "pop." I have tried other colors that were less visually effective.

    • @ChristinaMoore79
      @ChristinaMoore79 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      @@Potemkin1711 Maybe try a lighter shade of blue, then? The bridge just seems so dark and dreary, but it is -- of course -- all your own prerogative as it is your ship! :)

    • @Potemkin1711
      @Potemkin1711  2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      @@ChristinaMoore79 I'll try a lighter shade for this weekend's Caliborn shoot. :)
      Thanks for the suggestion. As long as the control surfaces pop, it'll be great.

    • @ChristinaMoore79
      @ChristinaMoore79 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      @@Potemkin1711 I don't mean to be a pain in the booty, lol. I'm really only speaking of personal preference, as I know you gotta do what works best and what you like matters most! I wanted so much to join the crew myself (I love right above you in Ohio), but never could arrange a trip down there. Maybe some day in the future!

    • @Potemkin1711
      @Potemkin1711  2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      @@ChristinaMoore79 you'd be more than welcome. And I don't think experimenting with the light is bad at all.

  • @silvereagle2061
    @silvereagle2061 2 ปีที่แล้ว +10

    You have a crewman from Charon? That's pretty ambitious. I thought all life with the exception of two were long gone. I love it though.

    • @Potemkin1711
      @Potemkin1711  2 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      He was off-world when the Great Calamity occurred.

    • @silvereagle2061
      @silvereagle2061 2 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      @@Potemkin1711 Great idea guys.

    • @ChristinaMoore79
      @ChristinaMoore79 2 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      I actually think it rather presumptuous to assume at all Cheronians were killed in the war on their planet. After all, Bele had been chasing Lokai for some thousands of years, he said, which is indicative of their being a spacefaring race when our own was still in the muck. It's entirely plausible, as was said, that there were many Cheronians off-world when the home planet was destroyed.

    • @Potemkin1711
      @Potemkin1711  2 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      @@ChristinaMoore79 There is a script coming up for Caliborn which basically explains exactly where Taer was and what he was doing and why.

    • @silvereagle2061
      @silvereagle2061 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      @@ChristinaMoore79 It may be presumptuous on my part, but no other fan film, or any Star Trek incarnation for that matter showed anyone from Cheron other than that one TOS episode and this film. I was going on the odds of that happening being pretty high so if there were other people from Cheron 'out there' then we would have seen them more often. That's what I was getting at.

  • @chrismayer3919
    @chrismayer3919 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Those Tal Shiar are DEVILS!

  • @hahsydxhy7gh908
    @hahsydxhy7gh908 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    What is the green object at 7:48?
    Also, Edda Jex 😍😍

    • @Potemkin1711
      @Potemkin1711  ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Romulan security observation satellite.

  • @richNfit4life
    @richNfit4life 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Wait! The people of Planet Cheron destroyed each other. Who’s he, and where did he come from?

    • @Potemkin1711
      @Potemkin1711  2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      The report of the deaths of all Cheron were greatly exaggerated.

  • @Gardner1701
    @Gardner1701 2 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    Those away team jackets…I like them. How were they made?

    • @beren225
      @beren225 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      The actor that played Lune designed and created them themselves!

    • @peterfox3374
      @peterfox3374 2 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      The base models are just simple leather jackets, painted red/maroon with Fabric and Vinyl Spray paint.
      The straps and greebling is comprised of small bits of painted leather, some painted elastic straps, and a little bit of some painted fabric strips.
      The backing for the badge is eva foam, and I found a wonderful little store on Etsy that supplied the patches.
      Then I just added a little bit of paint for extra details.

  • @MLK-KAEFENTERPRISES
    @MLK-KAEFENTERPRISES 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Love this shot: 3:02. How'd you all get that one?

  • @JB-ym4up
    @JB-ym4up 2 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    🖖

  • @trevormillar1576
    @trevormillar1576 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Hold on. I thought thr Shironians were extinct (having exterminated each other centurirs before)

    • @Potemkin1711
      @Potemkin1711  8 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      The reports of their extinction were greatly exaggerated. ;)

  • @andytay5507
    @andytay5507 2 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Very poignant! Thanks! Hilda Hellacious?! Really?

  • @russellonearrow2154
    @russellonearrow2154 ปีที่แล้ว

    If I remember my star trek lore correctly, the 1/2 white, 1/2 black race destroyed themselves before they could join starfleet.

    • @Potemkin1711
      @Potemkin1711  ปีที่แล้ว +1

      As stated elsewhere, the report of their extinction has been greatly exaggerated.

  • @grantmcclellan777
    @grantmcclellan777 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Nice!
    I've watched a few of your video's..
    I like what your trying to do..
    But a few critics:
    Wardrobe:
    Uniforms are not fitting the actors correctly they need a more "Tailored" look and please No More Turtlenecks..
    Mock turtlenecks will work/look better.
    Props:
    They are all over the place..
    Phasers, Tricorders, Communicators from different era's all being used at the same time..just confusing.
    Acting/Staging:
    If possible don't allow the Actors to stop making physical movements and just stand still to say dialogue
    Have them move "Walk and Talk" like normal conversations.
    I live in Louisville Kentucky
    I am also an Actor, a 30year Star Trek fan and I sew and tailor some of my own Uniforms..contact me.

    • @the_mighty_bearcat
      @the_mighty_bearcat 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      I respectfully disagree on the opinion that the props are out of place. I enjoy them, and in most cases they really are not from vastly different eras.