"DELIVERY" Rage leads to regret in this animated short film by Patrick Smith
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- เผยแพร่เมื่อ 22 มี.ค. 2020
- Abuse leads to rage as two friends compete for a delivered package. Was the result of this conflict worth the prize found within the box? "Delivery" deals with the realistic consequences of rage and violence, even within a cartoon setting.
Director Note:
"My big brother used to do this thing called the "CRAW", it's when he would grab me by my face, lift me off the ground, and throw me. I was a little dude. Anyway, that is the impetus of my least favorite film I've ever made "DELIVERY"
-Patrick Smith #patricksmith #animation
"This is a wordless and darkly comic piece that turns no action longueurs into the heartbeat of a diabolical comic timing, deftly rendering suspense out of the spaces between movements and expressions."
-Animation World Magazine.
Official Selection of:
-Slamdance Film Festival
-ASIFA-East Animation Festival (Winner)
-Brooklyn Film Festival
-Annecy International Animation Festival
-New York Film Expo
-Hamptons Film Festival
-Northampton Film Festival
-New Orleans Film Festival
-Lausanne Underground Film Festival
-Red Bank International Film Festival
-Sacramento Festival of Cinema
-Pusan International Film Festival
-Great Lakes International Film Festival
-Boston Underground Film Festival
-Film Fleadh Shorts Film Festival
-Boston Film Festival
-Los Angeles International Short Film Festival
-Woodstock Film Festival
-Rhode Island International Film Festival
-Brainwash Underground Movie Festival
-Cartoon Club International Animation Festival
-Cordoba Animation Festival , May 28-30, 2003 Argentina. - ภาพยนตร์และแอนิเมชัน
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My big brother used to do this thing called the "CRAW", it's when he would grab me by my face, lift me off the ground, and throw me. I was a little dude. Anyway, that is the impetus of my least favorite film I've ever made "DELIVERY"
Ouch
My friends older brother used to grab him and hold him to the ground and spit in his face it was the most trash thing I've ever see someone do.
@Акva •Kоtek• капец грустная анимация
@@quintavious1619 yes, something similar happened to me. but my brother would keep holding me, allowing the spit to dry.
@@MrOof-ob8uw hahaha, definitely!! whenever my parents would go out, I would just hide, sometimes for hours, until they got home. fortunately i had another big brother that would often defend me, but when he left home, it was open season on Patrick!!!
Imagine if the box just contained a replacement framed photo identical to the one that had fell.and smashed.
where were you when i thought up the story?
Patrick Smith lol
@@PatrickSmithAnimation At home in the back room.
That's also what I thought would be in it..
@@PatrickSmithAnimation you better fix the video then.
"fear leads to anger, anger leads to hate, hate leads to suffering."
-yoda
"Enough chitchat. What is your pitch, kid? ... Come on. Money, time is. Power, money is. Pizza, power is. Knowledge, pizza is. ... Let's go."
- also Yoda
"Fear anger leads to, anger hate leads to, hate suffering leads to"
This tells a story without any dialogue so well.
True
It's a Gumnut
😑
Gak bisa bahasa Inggris
True
"violence always solves things"
~Uganda Knuckles
I absolutely loved the scene where the white haired guy faded out of consciousness into the weird trippy world (seemingly a concussion). Im not sure if it was intended but the part of his roommate LITERALLY walking all over him really explained the dynamic between the characters.
That as well their very beginning interactions really sold the idea of the hero and the villain, but I was pleasantly surprised to see that there was no grand victory. No matter who won they both would have ended up the same, full of mistakes and nothing to show for it
thanks for watching, and for your insightful comment. this was one of my first films I ever did, I'm happy it resonated with you.
"life good, get box"
"brother steals box"
"kill brother"
"Regret."
LMAO
“life good, get box”
“brother steals box”
“kill brother”
“life better”
“time flys”
“old age”
“die”
“go to hell”
“Regret.”
@@pixelcat29 demons kill bunny
Doom kills demons
Goes to hell
Hell regrets
@@pixelcat29 but what if you were a Satan worshiper now your partying
The two things I’m amazed by:
1. The background art
2. The smooth animation
3. The storyline
Thanks!
Patrick Smith your welcome :)
GamingWithJulZ sorry, I’m stupid lmao!
*BIG* *MEATY* *HANDS*
Da hands r bigg
6 minutes and this is the darkest and best animation I've ever seen. No words said in this video whatsoever and still shows emotion much better than if there was. This is a perfect animation, and it's one of the few videos I've shared with a friend. 10/10
awesome. thanks for this, means a lot to me.
How lucky. Patrick smith is your first commenter.
rage and revenge will reward you with nothing but regret in the end
yes. I thought it was a simple story to illustrate this point.
who Cares, Revenge Feels Nice At The End.
YEA
I mean, he got the box
Rage is good when u too powerful than u think,thats why ppls scared come closer to you
I wonder what the guy was thinking when he picked up the box from the door. If there was nothing inside, he should've been able to feel that there wasn't anything simply by moving the box around. They both should've been able to recognize there was nothing in the box during the moments they held it, yet they both still fought for it. The brown haired guy seemed like a jerk though, and had probably been one for awhile. For some reason, he may have thought something good was inside, despite there being no apparent labeling and the certainty he should've gotten that it was empty when he moved it around, but he could've also just wanted a reason to play some cruel tricks on the white-haired guy (Although, from the way they were looking at each other, they probably genuinely thought there was something of value in it). If this was the first time something like this happened, the white-haired guy would've been ticked off sure, but definitely not willing to kill the other guy. So while it definitely was wrong to kill the brown-haired guy, there is still some blame on his side from fucking with someone so much they reach their breaking point and snap. At the same time, the white-haired guy murdered a man, one that he knew for a while at that (although from the description, their relationship was abusive, so knowing him for a long time wouldn't really help. For example, would you knowing your torturer for 3 years make you treat them better than a stranger? Probably not.), for a random box that he didn't know the contents of, and, for all he knew, could be something worthless. It could just be that while he was expecting something decent from the box, he was mainly focused on killing the other guy because of his rage, and the box would just be a nice prize he would get, only for him to find out it had nothing in it, and realize that he had committed murder for essentially nothing. However, although anger was obviously a factor in this whole thing, a little bit of stupidity also comes into play here. The white-haired guy was unnecessarily happy for a box, and for some reason couldn't tell it was empty from both its weight and the fact that no sound came from inside when the box was shaked, implying that there's nothing in there (and this was before the whole fight thing, I doubt he had so much rage at the time that it'd blind him from obvious things like this), although this could be seen as a little nitpicky. Really though, both people are at blame here, and even though it's only an animation, it's kind of sad to see how this whole thing could've been avoided if the two friends had a better relationship and just decided to open the box together. They'd be disappointed, sure, but it definitely wouldn't be as bad as what happened in the video. Also, the package delivery guy at the end of the video with a box makes me curious as to whether that's just an extra bit that's unrelated to the story of the video, or if the guy took the original box and replaced it with an empty one. Regardless, it wouldn't have really mattered, the white-haired guy might've actually gotten something had the delivery guy not (hypothetically) swapped it, but he most likely would've still committed murder.
Comment was a little long and messy, but just wanted to put out all (or at least most) of my thoughts about the video in one comment.
Bro just want to say I read this to understand but damn
Me brain no good now
mucho texto, but good abstact
4:50
Congrats! you killed your friend!
"New achievement unlocked!"
take that shit seriously.
@@TheOverwriter Nuh Uh
Last Time I Checked Friends Don't Make You Draw Blood When They Hit You They Only Tap You
they’re brothers
“How Did We Get Here?”
This felt relatable instantly, especially the feeling of the brown haired brother running all over him and even climbing out of him. That’s how it feels to be totally crushed by a sibling you still stupidly look up to.
yes.
i really really hate myself because of this movie, but still this is the most interesting one I’ve ever seen keep this up
Thanks for your comment. I wasn't going to post this, but based on the reaction it's getting, I guess i'm glad I did. it's a personal film, and is probably too dark and violent for some people.. but the violence is expressing something very specific.. the idea that rage and revenge don't lead to anything.
Well, everything in this video was a blast. I've become a fan of yours since the POUR series. The most heartbreaking moment of this film is when both of them are confronting each other and the brown haired guy sees the other bleeding. In that moment, his face turns to be sad, as if now he was realizing that what he's done was wrong.
And then, when the white haired one grabs his face and caresses it, it's like he's recording the lasts shreds of life from his friend before snapping his neck. Like, there was some doubt because he knew what he wanted to do but was still thinking about how wrong it was. But in the end, the rage was stronger than humanity.
thanks for taking the time to watch, I truly appreciate it. also thx for such a great comment.
Imagine breaking a neck that sounds like ripping cardboard
Imagine throwing someone like throwing a trash paper
🙂
It is
This kinda reminds me of Joker because that guy got revenge for being abused
Things im amazed about:
1. The background art
2. The smooth animation
3. The storyline
4. The fact they could both beat the crap out of eachother with an empty cardboard box
5. they're both about as strong as popeye the sailor man (popneck/necksnap man)
6. that patrick smith didn't do the same thing as his own animated guy
background art was done by my friend Tony Curanaj.. he's brilliant.
Oh my. Now that's a strong sentiment on what greed and selfishness can do to siblings. Esp if it's material in nature.
Damn a membership
Is That What The Star Means? I Never Seen It Before
Наткнулся на shorts в ютубе с вашей анимацией. Это невероятно! Как же мне нравится подобный стиль и анимация! Ещё и саунд дизайн очень приятно слушать. Вы проделали невероятную работу! Молодец ♥️♥️♥️
4:46 reminds me of SCP-173
Bruh
He will move when you stare, though(the guy that's here).
Yeah but 173 is a
Peanut
nah, 173 did it a lot cleaner and quicker, no hesitation, just one load *CRUNCH*
Ah peanut
Dude this is so realistic I thought, I could go in the screen and take some of that popcorn. Amazing job on this Animation!
The sounds are just.... Wow!
Well, this turned out darker than I thought. I like how the blood is bright red in comparison to the rest of the background.
Always love seeing your work, Patrick!
The box: I Defined laws of gravity. me: ok den
you're too observant:)
actually given the ending and the spinning of it that can physically work.
You can see the guilt in his eyes When hes about to snap his Big brother's neck 4:40
The dark-haired roomate was a bully and a parasite, but the light-haired roomate didn't take the chance to communicate their displeasure, at least not on-screen. The result is a tangled mess of things that likely both regret, all told, assuming the existence of an afterlife in the world of this animation.
btw I really liked the fluid reality-breaking animation illustrating how the light-haired roomate felt like a doormat.
Ngl, considering what a douche-bag dark-haired roommate is, he probably wouldn’t have stopped bullying mushroom man if mushroom man politely told him to stop.
All he had to do was pull the string and then an embarrassing picture of spongebob will pop up.
0:14 This man head just did a full 180
It’s sad but the animation and the lighting and shading is good keep it up also I would love a animation on an alternative universe of food that eats humans
Jesus Christ
That was gruesome. How do you crank out videos the smooth and beautiful so fast?
this is an older film. yes, very gruesome.. part of the story. Ultimately it's one of the reasons that this is my least favorite thing i've ever done.
just casually twists his brothers neck
@@ashamed5232 Look at him right before he does, though.
Im a simple man. I see Patrick Smith. I watch his animations
I'm about to be the same, myself.
MY MANS JUST MURDERED SOMEONE
brutal, i know.
@@PatrickSmithAnimation he goin to prison
Meh the dead guy deserved it
this animation reminds me one of the episodes from Spongebob
with a "magic" box
thing
1:57 You know you can just go the other side, it ain’t that hard!
Atleast He Didn't Pull The SECRECT STRING Leading To The SECRECT COMPARTMENT
Here again, hello once again, Patrick Smith!, :).
2:43 The fact that this kid was able to draw blood by just grabbing him terrifies me
Well if it isnt the Soviet union
@@ARandomGuy112 Well if it isn't the guy who asked
@@LadsOfLegend a
1:14 genius, starting to chew before even stuffing
Wow, just wow that was a trip, It's scary thinking of the connections between this and so many real world toxic relationships.
I like the fact that the brown haired guy felt guilty when he saw the white haired guy for the last time
the storytelling is really good, and I love the art style and the way the hands are drawn
Thanks!
Nice and epic another animation from our very good animator Patrick Smith
Finally I found the original video of this animated
This animation is very good at depicting the precise way someone acts that leads to violence or violent thoughts. In particular getting aggressive or violent/abusive themselves when confronted. It's like they leave you no other option. You'd think humans are smarter than animals and yet so many of them can't be reasoned with words alone. It's sad more than anything
thx for thoughtful comment, def a tragic film
I actually like the style of animation!!🤞 I hope I create something like this some day!😶 More power to you!❤
4:45 Well that was jarring
A few minutes later...
*Damn, that escalated quickly*
The fact that bowl cut hair dude killed his friend over a box though:
Edit: left tears coming from my eyes after this.
People who Bully you should never be ur friend. AND This friendship will end anyway because of selfishness. So here is nothing worthy to regret. The mushroom guy does the right thing.
I think if you showed flashbacks of other abusive things that his brother did to him instead of showing his brother walk all over him i think that would have sold it. But other than that i think you did an amazing job at this animation because of how much detail and oviase sybalism there is in this animation. And it is always the animations about abuse that sure can touch all of us and make us fell some empathy for others.
thanks for watching, and even more thanks for your thoughtful critical comment. It means a lot to me that you took the time!
Man that part where he snapped his neck made me disturbed
Your sharp edged art style is absolutely gorgeous!
Thank you so much!
Amazing work as always 👍
"when I was a little kid, my mother told me not to stare in to the sun, So once, When I Was Six, I Did, in that day I had my first headache ..."
see my animation and like it if you like!
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but what a good animation ...
rating. 10/10
Thanks so much!! i have trouble watching older work because i feel like it's so crude. the more recent films like POUR 585 are a lot better, animation wise.. check it out if you have the time!
@@PatrickSmithAnimation
Okay
@@PatrickSmithAnimation
There is a cheerleader that you should know, she is good and she sees that Adrián is a good team
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Jeesus man this is amazing,sorry you had to go through that
1:21 Why this looks so appetizing😭
You know you should collab with the guy that made double king
Yes!!!!!
Felix Colgrave
Yikes. This is felt by every middle child
indeed. getting terrorized by my older brothers was the impetus for this film.
@@PatrickSmithAnimation well Im glad you were able to take what happened with your brothers and turn it into something that people can learn from and enjoy
@@PatrickSmithAnimation I feel so bad for you 😭
My sister does the same thing I have a lot of repressed anger on her I just don’t show it because she is my sister
Such powerful message.
the dream sequence is really well executed
5:15 instant tape!!
"when I was a little kid, my mother told me not to stare in to the sun, So once, When I Was Six, I Did, in that day I had my first headache ..."
see my animation and like it if you like!
th-cam.com/video/9iTJRN1BgDA/w-d-xo.html
*VERY nice*
Damn, I love the artstyle, the animation, and the atmosphere. Sound design and the music too as well! Gives me newgrounds vibes and I love it.
thank you!
Plot twist: the mailman planned this
I love your animated short films😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
Love ur vids keep it up man
Penguinie you are so right man
Yee we all support you
Yah
Thanks, will do!
This. Is. Amazing.
You kill a person, you are happy, you recive your prize, and then....you realize that the prize is nothing, and you killed a person for nothing....that's how thing works
but this is bad, very very bad
Imagine...inside a card fluttered down....and in it was the words,”I miss you,bro.”And attached wasn’t a picture of them both with their recently passed on father.What if that was why he took it,because he wanted to see one last glimpse of their father before he gifted it....
5:48 SAD
White Hair Guy : "I won but what cost"
Fr
To be fair, he had it coming.
Treating brother like trash all his life and then this? No wonder the dude just snapped.
Which one?
@@targashsensei7900 good question.
4:45 The kill moment is like a game that called among us. A new trending game. Btw nice animation. Where did you Created it?
Esto nos deja una gran leccion de vida
Yea
Dont kill uour brother
0:28 does this song give anybody else pigstep vibes or is that just me???
Even with no words it had a really deep meaning
WOW IS BEST ANIMATION AND I LIKE THE VIDEO :DDDD
Thank you so much!
No thank you you best!
4:58
link be like
A rare box that is inside nothing!
Damn that hit different, rly good nice job
1:29 that 2nd guy it looks exactly like lincolin loud
4:35 Not gonna lie, at this moment, I was half expecting them to kiss. 😅
We need another part of pour 585 please
working on it!!
@@Mega_The_Friendly_Shark still working on it.. actually, i'm working on a series of very short videos that use same characters from pour 585
@@PatrickSmithAnimation I just wanted to say I love the subscriber animation you made from the 585 characters.
@@mywayfernandez8704 thanks! yeah that was fun to make, i wanted to do something original for 100k. i'll have to do something similar for 500k!
I didn't expect the part when the boy with brown hair got his neck broke
I love how you can see the friends regret to in the nosebleed he just got carried away and realized he hurt his friend and regretted it a little version of the other guy kill him then regrets it
1:46 And how a corona virus came about XD just joking, and is crazy moments XD
What the music 3:37
this was a original score by musician Karl von Kries
When I watched this cartoon, my heart almost stopped! How can you do this to a friend and to each other why do that!
Is nobody gonna talk about how bright that yellow box was in a dull scene
Too bad he can't control his emotions. Just like me...
man wtf he killed his brother just for a f****** box I didn't except that shet 4:45
Now who the hell would deliver an empty package? That's just bad shipping.
Woah! I absolutely love this animation, new sub 🎉
Thanks for subbing!
Just casually breaks his brother neck...
I love this guys stuff I wish there were more I loveee these types of animations
yeah, animation takes a really long time. i have a few films in production now though.
Imagine this plot twist there was only a piece of paper in the box with a link on it he turns on his computer types in the link and gets rick rolled
The delivery man did a big fuck you moment
The short is all about two boys who want a box. However when things don’t go well for the white hair man he wreaks havoc.
The short is all about obsession . The two men’s wanted what was in the yellow box really really badly. It all started fine as the white hair man took the yellow box just for himself, when he refused to give it to brown hair man, he resulted in force. Even when the white hair man wanted it , the brown hair man beater him up for no good reason. The white hair man felt like he deserved the box so badly that he had hallucinations about the brown haired man taking his box as well as lots of other copies of him. The white hair man was so angry that he KILLED the brown haired man in the end. At last, he was so happy to get the yellow box the thing that he felt like that he really deserved. However when he opened it, there was nothing. The two of them were fighting for absolutely nothing for the whole time. The white haired man sat on the sofa sadly as he killed his friend for nothing.
The short was all about greed. The two men really did fight for that box and they wanted what was inside the box , the box seemed extremely useful due to something nice inside, however since their was nothing in the box at all, the fight now seemed pointless. The white hair man really went out of his way to kill his friend just so he can get the box but remember it was greed that made him do it . The brown haired also used force on him, so it made more sense to why the white haired man was obsessed with it, why would the brown haired man use force on him for only a box? There must be something good inside that he doesn’t want me to have.
That was probably his thoughts. So all this rage and greed for nothing as there was no reward. Lesson of the day do not fight for something that looks worthy when it is truly worthless. Overall, the short is nicely animated and probably underestimated.
Rating : 9.14 ( Excellent )
They're strangely attractive.
3:12 he literally smashed his face with a goddamn KATROON BAWX
Bro really killed his brother? Roomie? For an empty box 😭😭