" I have told you these things, so that in me you may have peace. In this world you will have trouble. But take heart! I have overcome the world."-John 16:33
i would bet he has also mastered the art of self inserting. the mcs va has the worst mic out of all the vas here, so i would bet he is played by the head dev himself
" I have told you these things, so that in me you may have peace. In this world you will have trouble. But take heart! I have overcome the world."-John 16:33
Thanks for streaming my game, it's a honor to have people making fun of this, the fact my game got attention no matter bad or good just motivates me to do better not to disappoint again, even I the dev of the game realised that at the end it did not come out as I had planned and hoped for players to turn a blind eye to it and just mess around with it for fun ❤
I mean this without any irony or snark: PLEASE continue making games. You genuinely seem like a fun person with a passion for game development. At this point you can only get better!
Hey keep making games, you got talent, I believe in you! This one was a miss but don’t let it get you down! You can tell the stories you want some day, just keep practicing. Have a wonderful day ❤️
9:01 "Bet he can't open doors." I genuinely got jumpscared by the fact that he reappeared as Charlie was looking around. I honestly didn't know what I was expecting at that point..
This is a psychological-horror game, the real scary part is that you're playing an emotionless sociopath who is completely unresponsive to the death of a daughter
I'm convinced the man in the sewer at 15:17 was the Narrator, that's why his voice was reverbed and he cut himself off to say "Help!" This story is incredible
Dr. Dan's wife's note ending with a written "..." has the same energy as Monty Python and the writing in the cave in Holy Grail. "The legendary beast of ughhhhh" "why would he write ughhhhh?"
" I have told you these things, so that in me you may have peace. In this world you will have trouble. But take heart! I have overcome the world."-John 16:33
" I have told you these things, so that in me you may have peace. In this world you will have trouble. But take heart! I have overcome the world."-John 16:33
You know the game is going to be true horror when you can control the menu camera and they change the right click to pause to left click on the next screen.
" I have told you these things, so that in me you may have peace. In this world you will have trouble. But take heart! I have overcome the world."-John 16:33 Through the help and faith in Jesus you can overcome life's obstacles
Not to mention the X and Y keys existing as the lean mechanics. It's impeccable they managed to fumble this bad, leads us to go on to ask what truly went wrong along the way.
That entire opening narration was glorious. I haven't laughed that hard in ages. The inane story. The weird, almost mary-sue levels of describing Dr. Dan's appearance and mannerisms. The grammar mistakes. The fact that entire story boils down to a group of scientists bringing about the end of the world by bringing two "substances" together, just to be petty assholes to Dr. Dan who explicitly told them not to and the fact that Dr. Dan survived this whole thing because at some point before that, he injected himself with one of those dangerous substances and yet DIDN'T turn into a zombie himself. Truly a masterpiece of crap, I can't wait for part two.
" I have told you these things, so that in me you may have peace. In this world you will have trouble. But take heart! I have overcome the world."-John 16:33 Through the help and faith in Jesus you can overcome life's obstacles
@AutisticVaultBoy so I went to the time 16:33 there's no one named John or are you talking about that weird little voice? Idk i couldn't make out what it said I think you got the wrong time stamp
The virgin "show don't tell" method: ❌ Boring ❌ Confusing ❌ Wastes time on "immersion" and "plot" (nerd mechanisms) ❌ Lame ❌ No one will know about your hero's fitted muscles The sigma "tell them everything" method: ✅ Better ✅ Easily understood and PLENTIFUL writing to generously aid the player ✅ Combines the video game and with reading (educational) ✅ Gets straight to killing vampires ✅ You have told them about the fitted muscles; they can now die happy.
The VA performances really sell this game in my opinion. The way they are completely immersed in their role is extremely impressive in all the best ways. I feel like they could make any game, story, or not just a story feel completely "true". They should be charging more for this game.
Ok so people were mixing chemicals together which caused our dimension to collide with the cod zombies and other weird and mysterious dimensions. After regaining memories Dr Dan gives up all hope as he realized the world is doomed. But a badass character comes in and motivates him to continue living. So they get in a car and start driving but a meteorite strikes earth so the dr Dan must fight off the hordes of cod zombies, flying whales, and weird mysterious things from other dimensions. Truly a great story and I personally am hyped for part two
18:30 there is so much to discuss 1. This springtrap thing holding a gun, what is that 2. right before the cutscene ended, the AI had a stroke for no reason 3. Charlie's reaction to all of this is so funny
thank god they explained dr dan had an 84kg body weight, fitted muscles, and a cold vibe. i thought this game was gonna be unplayable before they mentioned that.
" I have told you these things, so that in me you may have peace. In this world you will have trouble. But take heart! I have overcome the world."-John 16:33 Through the help and faith in Jesus you can overcome life's obstacles
" I have told you these things, so that in me you may have peace. In this world you will have trouble. But take heart! I have overcome the world."-John 16:33 Through the help and faith in Jesus you can overcome life's obstacles
I love games that are made in English by people who clearly don't speak English. Because broken English is one of the funniest things to hear or see in a video game.
Charlie saying "being chased by zombies, he got into a sewage system to avoid them" to mock the narrator cutting immediately to the narrator saying "he got into a sewage pipe to avoid them" was hilarious
This game is truly great, even good enough for district 8 hospital helper who single handidly carried the hunger games franchise on their back which is built like adonis the greek god, who if the said person was in a lat spread would look like a bat. Truly great.
" I have told you these things, so that in me you may have peace. In this world you will have trouble. But take heart! I have overcome the world."-John 16:33
@@Vaultboythefightingmachinetons of copium coming from the guy who needs to spam verses just to try and keep believing in the nonsense he’s spouting 😂😂
Fun fact: the school you have to go in and save your daughter is the exact same school from another game in which you work as a night janitor while paranormal things happen, sadly i can't remember the name of that game.
Some would call this "Steam dumpster-diving," but I would be more inclined on calling this "Picking up used gum off the side-walk to see if it has some flavour left in it." Not as catchy, sure, but describes these games a bit better. Charlie is such a hero for enduring all of this for our entertainment.
Easily one of the greatest works of horror in our generation, surpassing even the likes of Stephen King and H.P. Lovecraft. An enigmatic and brilliant work from an even more brilliant creator.
Y and X is because it's programmed by someone with a QWERTZ keyboard. The Y and X are next to each other on it. Now Even so, that's still an utterly unhinged place to put your lean buttons. Edit: QWERTZ would also explain the god-awful dialogue, since it's probably google translated.
" I have told you these things, so that in me you may have peace. In this world you will have trouble. But take heart! I have overcome the world."-John 16:33 Through the help and faith in Jesus you can overcome life's obstacles
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The writers' strike has affected the gaming industry considerably
LMAO
It is just a story
@@sebastianrmaaa3275A GAME THEORY
@@sebastianrmaaa3275A TRUE STORY
@@neobot2751get it right
That opening monologue was some of the most well written, dreamy dialogue I’ve ever experienced
Unrelated to the comment but I wonder if youtube will ever fix this bot problem
@@scorching_hot6239probably a big NO
" I have told you these things, so that in me you may have peace. In this world you will have trouble. But take heart! I have overcome the world."-John 16:33
@@Vaultboythefightingmachine name checks out
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I love how the level timer goes to the ten thousandth of a second just in case you wanted to be sure you had time
“It’s just a timer”
The amount of Narrative subtlety is paramount. The developer truly mastered the art of show don’t tell…
I agree. There's almost no expositions in the storytelling that it's mind boggling.
i would bet he has also mastered the art of self inserting.
the mcs va has the worst mic out of all the vas here, so i would bet he is played by the head dev himself
More like tell don't show.
The text changing for every cutscene is a simple nod to the effort developers put into this game.
Charlie trying and failing to read the intro fast enough made me laugh so hard
Holy FUCK these bots
Even tho there was left click to pause ;-;
Yeah! I mean we all had done the same thing atleast once in our lives.
@@YUGITO-sama and just before that it said right click to pause, which he tried
@@KogasaTatara514 poor charlie ;-;
At 80 kg of pure muscle,Dr dan must've been an imposing 5'6. Truly a fearsome individual.
I dont care lol
@@Ðogecoinwhy take it personally short shit
@@Ðogecoin I think you should. Lest you want Dr. Dan to visit your prostate tonight.
@@ultimaxkom8728 Bro thinks I care
@@ÐogecoinSee you soon.
Dr Dan is my hero, he saved me on day I was hurt. His fitted muscles pulled me from bad place, truly great man!
" I have told you these things, so that in me you may have peace. In this world you will have trouble. But take heart! I have overcome the world."-John 16:33
His bodyweight of 84Kg pulled me from the afterlife and back onto earth, I love Dr. Dan!
I couldn’t help but read that in Trump’s voice lol
its mr dan
@@tsueki3941hey he worked hard for his PhD u know.
Thanks for streaming my game, it's a honor to have people making fun of this, the fact my game got attention no matter bad or good just motivates me to do better not to disappoint again, even I the dev of the game realised that at the end it did not come out as I had planned and hoped for players to turn a blind eye to it and just mess around with it for fun ❤
I mean this without any irony or snark: PLEASE continue making games. You genuinely seem like a fun person with a passion for game development. At this point you can only get better!
i love ur game it’s amazing!!! whether u intended to make it silly i guarantee anyone who plays can have a good old time :)
Its so nice to see someone actually take a joke like it is supposed to be. Thank u for not making a huge fuss about this.
Hey keep making games, you got talent, I believe in you! This one was a miss but don’t let it get you down! You can tell the stories you want some day, just keep practicing. Have a wonderful day ❤️
I know this is an old comment, but I will edit the writing on whatever project you're working on, if you want. Just let me know.
Dr. Dan had the best character arc. He gathered the courage to stop fearing his daughter. We should all take a lesson from his bravery.
9:01 "Bet he can't open doors." I genuinely got jumpscared by the fact that he reappeared as Charlie was looking around. I honestly didn't know what I was expecting at that point..
SAME I JUMPED LMFAO
ME AND MY GIRLFRIEND BOTH JUMPED 😭
honestly scared the shit out of me
@@jullianbutler7970jullian.. she died years ago, youve gotta move on… 😔
@@cherub_inBAHAHASHHW
This is a psychological-horror game, the real scary part is that you're playing an emotionless sociopath who is completely unresponsive to the death of a daughter
Lmao
If I'm not mistaken he also left before she could give him the codes 💀
I believe he lost his memories and didn't recognize that the woman was his daughter until he got to the office (where he regained his memories)
cuz he is on a whole another level baby!
Cuz He feared his daughter.
I'm convinced the man in the sewer at 15:17 was the Narrator, that's why his voice was reverbed and he cut himself off to say "Help!" This story is incredible
LMAOO
13:28 I lost it man, betty dying before giving the full code got me wheezing 😭
Dr. Dan's wife's note ending with a written "..." has the same energy as Monty Python and the writing in the cave in Holy Grail. "The legendary beast of ughhhhh" "why would he write ughhhhh?"
It's an expression, some people can't hear but can read. **sigh**
I love how the exposition had almost NO periods, just commas.
Dr Dan lost his PHD and regained it in the span of 3-4 sentences. That's gotta be some sort of record. Dr Dan is a Legend
My favorite thing about the notes is that she never actually finishes righting them instead she just ... and goes to the next note lol
Imagine putting the "Am Ready" button in the pause menu.
Impeccable game design really.
*Am ready
Am ready*
Am*ready
Ok🗿
Am here am ready am ham
At the end of the day, it's just a story. Masterpiece.
" I have told you these things, so that in me you may have peace. In this world you will have trouble. But take heart! I have overcome the world."-John 16:33
@@Vaultboythefightingmachineonline Christians try not to spit random scripture at people challenge (IMPOSSIBLE)
@@lunaticgmd6427 Cope Jesus Hater.
@@lunaticgmd6427 pookie…it’s a bot🙏
@@apaca1959 tf is the point of a bot that just puts scripture in people's reply sections lmao
Charile the type of dude to play a horror game for the comedy aspect
tf these bots doing
That’s literally what he does for a living
" I have told you these things, so that in me you may have peace. In this world you will have trouble. But take heart! I have overcome the world."-John 16:33
@@shinefrkthreatening you
@Susnation532bot learned how to use emojis
You know the game is going to be true horror when you can control the menu camera and they change the right click to pause to left click on the next screen.
" I have told you these things, so that in me you may have peace. In this world you will have trouble. But take heart! I have overcome the world."-John 16:33 Through the help and faith in Jesus you can overcome life's obstacles
@@Vaultboythefightingmachine pls shut up
Not to mention the X and Y keys existing as the lean mechanics. It's impeccable they managed to fumble this bad, leads us to go on to ask what truly went wrong along the way.
That entire opening narration was glorious. I haven't laughed that hard in ages.
The inane story. The weird, almost mary-sue levels of describing Dr. Dan's appearance and mannerisms. The grammar mistakes. The fact that entire story boils down to a group of scientists bringing about the end of the world by bringing two "substances" together, just to be petty assholes to Dr. Dan who explicitly told them not to and the fact that Dr. Dan survived this whole thing because at some point before that, he injected himself with one of those dangerous substances and yet DIDN'T turn into a zombie himself.
Truly a masterpiece of crap, I can't wait for part two.
You describe it so well haha!
Finally, a worthy contender of The Last Hope for best narrative
" I have told you these things, so that in me you may have peace. In this world you will have trouble. But take heart! I have overcome the world."-John 16:33 Through the help and faith in Jesus you can overcome life's obstacles
@AutisticVaultBoy so I went to the time 16:33 there's no one named John or are you talking about that weird little voice? Idk i couldn't make out what it said I think you got the wrong time stamp
@@artificial_bunny1025 The holy bible is what I'm quoting idiot
@@artificial_bunny1025 Lol the guy is preaching the bible out of nowhere, he means verse John 16:33. There is also a chance he is a bot.
@@DinantZr/whoosh
10:45 I love how speechless Charlie was at the whale. All he could do was just shake his head
“She hit me with that Skibidi Toilet” made me actually laugh out loud
The story brought me to tears, it is undoubtedly the most astounding and rich piece of modern literature. If not that, then of all time.
It definitely is one of the most pieces of modern literature of all times
Dan had recently escaped an asylum, convincing himself that he himself is a doctor, and forever narrating himself in his own reality.
Mouse right click to pause is truly the scariest aspect of this game.
I feel like this is what would happen if someone turned their dreams into a game
This is like a nightmare that is trying it’s best to be a nightmare. As a new solo developer, this motivates me to be better.
I cried during this video. It was such a wave of emotions I even bust. Thank you, Its just a story - horror game.
I actually did cry, laughing LOL
I busted as well. Thought I was the only one😢
i personally busted a nut after hearing mr. dan’s description, it sounded so real, like he was right in front of me… 😩😊
Dr. Dan is such a complex character
holy smokes this game is so unintentionally comedic
Language
@@Abdo12qwop as a canadian i sincerely apologize and im sorry for ruining your life. i made a mistake ey and i didnt mean to
I honestly believe its intentionally comedic
The virgin "show don't tell" method:
❌ Boring
❌ Confusing
❌ Wastes time on "immersion" and "plot" (nerd mechanisms)
❌ Lame
❌ No one will know about your hero's fitted muscles
The sigma "tell them everything" method:
✅ Better
✅ Easily understood and PLENTIFUL writing to generously aid the player
✅ Combines the video game and with reading (educational)
✅ Gets straight to killing vampires
✅ You have told them about the fitted muscles; they can now die happy.
there is no way im the only person that actually cried of laughter from this video lmfaoooo
The VA performances really sell this game in my opinion. The way they are completely immersed in their role is extremely impressive in all the best ways. I feel like they could make any game, story, or not just a story feel completely "true". They should be charging more for this game.
The dan backstory slideshow made me remember my university lectures god damn my head hurts
Ok so people were mixing chemicals together which caused our dimension to collide with the cod zombies and other weird and mysterious dimensions. After regaining memories Dr Dan gives up all hope as he realized the world is doomed. But a badass character comes in and motivates him to continue living. So they get in a car and start driving but a meteorite strikes earth so the dr Dan must fight off the hordes of cod zombies, flying whales, and weird mysterious things from other dimensions. Truly a great story and I personally am hyped for part two
Christopher Nolan is shit compared to this
This makes me think of the 2 brothers movie trailer on Rick and morty
18:30 there is so much to discuss
1. This springtrap thing holding a gun, what is that
2. right before the cutscene ended, the AI had a stroke for no reason
3. Charlie's reaction to all of this is so funny
16:30 ALVIN AND THE CHIPMUNKS KIDNAPPED ME LMFAO
I’m convinced this is a comedy game and is pure satire. I lost it at 10:40 the whale just appears and moans
Dude your comment got completely copied word for word.
@@Shadow497Knight Dude your comment got completely copied word for word.
Yeah I know bots will just copy comments and repost them to make it look like a human wrote it
thank god they explained dr dan had an 84kg body weight, fitted muscles, and a cold vibe. i thought this game was gonna be unplayable before they mentioned that.
15:07 I like to think the narrator is following the main character the whole way through the game telling the story lmao
This story is phenomenal, truly one of the games of all time
" I have told you these things, so that in me you may have peace. In this world you will have trouble. But take heart! I have overcome the world."-John 16:33 Through the help and faith in Jesus you can overcome life's obstacles
This game is literally everything
A book
A survival horror
A hide and seek
A visual novel
And maintenance man
I am so happy we get more Bad Games Nights, i was tired of focusing only on the drama
The intro has the most extreme Neil Breen energy, I can't handle it.
What a story.
" I have told you these things, so that in me you may have peace. In this world you will have trouble. But take heart! I have overcome the world."-John 16:33 Through the help and faith in Jesus you can overcome life's obstacles
Facts
I’m a bot. Rah.
💯
I love games that are made in English by people who clearly don't speak English. Because broken English is one of the funniest things to hear or see in a video game.
Charlie saying "being chased by zombies, he got into a sewage system to avoid them" to mock the narrator cutting immediately to the narrator saying "he got into a sewage pipe to avoid them" was hilarious
Dr. Dan being 185 pounds but still having "fitted muscles" is funny and odd at the same time.
You know it’s good when Charlie says it’s a good story.
with how long the opening exposition was i genuinely thought the game was JUST gonna be 1 zombie and then just an audiobook worth of lore
This was truly the most story of all time
Truly one of the stories I've listened to.
11:17 the burp was scarier than the whole game
This game is truly great, even good enough for district 8 hospital helper who single handidly carried the hunger games franchise on their back which is built like adonis the greek god, who if the said person was in a lat spread would look like a bat. Truly great.
Oh my gosh... it's the same asset flip as _FNAFENO._
This game was pure comedy
when the swamp monster thing busted through the door i was laughing uncontrollably for a good 2 minutes
3:58 truly appreciated the attention to detail with Mr./Dr. dan
Charlie is type of person you want on a horror team
" I have told you these things, so that in me you may have peace. In this world you will have trouble. But take heart! I have overcome the world."-John 16:33
@@Vaultboythefightingmachineokay that's enough completely irrelevant copy and paste bible verses-
@@pumkin610 Cope Jesus Hater
@@Vaultboythefightingmachinetons of copium coming from the guy who needs to spam verses just to try and keep believing in the nonsense he’s spouting 😂😂
@@2oqh At least I am happy by believing in something that I want to share it with others. I could be a nihilistic POS like you
Bro 🤣0:56 "left click to pause" is the most backwards game design idea I've ever seen
Jesus that zombie jump scare through the door almost got me out of my chair
She didn't just write those dots, she typed that message and printed it out. Even had a few sips of coffee before staging that note.
Fun fact: the school you have to go in and save your daughter is the exact same school from another game in which you work as a night janitor while paranormal things happen, sadly i can't remember the name of that game.
This game is like if Amnesia and Outlast had a child
A child that they dropped on their head at birth.
i find it so interesting that so many indie horror games cant find a font that would actually look good ingame
Explaining the note for the safe and how it’s safer that the daughter has it made a great deal of sense!
This game would fall in the comedy category 😂
Zombie said “sale” and I knew what time we were on lmao
Kojima really outdid himself this time
Sick essay at the beginning. The plot twists many times within the same sentance, hollywood stuff.
Charlie trying and failing to read the text that was going too fast gave me so much anxiety lmao
The opening dialogue reads like what you get when you spam the next-word suggestions on your phone
11:38 Hahahaha this HAS to be a comedy game cause wtf is this :D
8:48 Dude the glowing eyes are spooky and Damn the bug jumpscares.
Not gonna lie, i can’t wait for part 2
The fact Charlie mentions Harry Potter in most of his videos makes me feel like he’s a closeted Potter Head
Some would call this "Steam dumpster-diving," but I would be more inclined on calling this "Picking up used gum off the side-walk to see if it has some flavour left in it." Not as catchy, sure, but describes these games a bit better.
Charlie is such a hero for enduring all of this for our entertainment.
5:02 Holy run-on sentence
0:20 that earth is literally a default asset in Filmora video editor, I used it on a project for history class 💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀
that skibidi toilet jumpscare in 11:35 was amazing, unlucky that charlie was in the wrong place, he couldn't fully digest the spookiness.
Ah yes the 1000 word essay being read by a TTS, my favourite part of any game
ChatGPT is getting so good that it's getting difficult to tell AI from someone with a language barrier using Google translate and text to speech
Easily one of the greatest works of horror in our generation, surpassing even the likes of Stephen King and H.P. Lovecraft. An enigmatic and brilliant work from an even more brilliant creator.
I haven't laughed this hard in a very long time, I had to go watch the twitch vod because this is so funny. Literally crying at this LMFAO
Y and X is because it's programmed by someone with a QWERTZ keyboard. The Y and X are next to each other on it.
Now
Even so, that's still an utterly unhinged place to put your lean buttons.
Edit: QWERTZ would also explain the god-awful dialogue, since it's probably google translated.
Charlie messing with the map reminds me of when you’d press on your eyes to see colours as a kid 😂😂😂
When you said ‘where is my daughter ‘ stoned me was like ohhh ! You sound like Nicolas cage !
11:39 "she hit me with that skibidi toilet, jesus this game is awesome"
I DIED AHHAHSDHAUIKHASKDFJ
Keeping the prologue longer than the refundable playtime is a smart idea
i actually got jump scared at 9:05
3:52 "charismatic, cold-vibes, family man who is terrified of his daughter" - A"I"
You know you are about to witness a masterpiece when game's called "It is just a story - horror game"
" I have told you these things, so that in me you may have peace. In this world you will have trouble. But take heart! I have overcome the world."-John 16:33 Through the help and faith in Jesus you can overcome life's obstacles
Gosh a bit comments full of bots, interesting
Is part 2 out yet?!? This literally made me cry laughing all the time 🤣
Today's Fact: The smallest reptile in the world is a chameleon called Brookesia micra, which measures just 29 mm in length.
@Susnation532 bot💀
@Susnation532 cuh
His size has a big personality
@Susnation532get a father figure
bot
This was one big LSD fever dream bad ass trip.
Can't wait for part 2 of this masterpiece
Charlie not reacting to the microwave baby(?) demon is everything 10:20
Charlie should try the Fear & Hunger game. I know for sure he would love those games!