I think there is a minor mistake at 17:58. The ratio is around 180 to 160 instead of 120 to 90. 120 to 90 is history and archeology. The video is really very helpful! Love it!
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@@renamemmedova8691People still fixate on "tips," when the key is simply to read a lot and build your vocabulary through reading articles, academic books, and reading passages. Stop searching for tips.
I did see some misread figures and ratio parts BUT to be honest those were nothing compared to the way she effortlessly guided us through these charts with such organized ideas and coherent paragraphs. I have learned a lot of useful phrases and learned how to read charts in a different perspective! This video is awesome and big thanks to you! 💕❤️
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This bar chart illustrates information about the number of participants in different activities related to the art from linguistics to Media at a university in the UK in 2011. Overall, most participant in almost all categories are women except the Art and Design where male students participated more. it can be also noted that the highest attractive subject for both were English language and literature. In terms of speaking regarding men, they showed most interest in English language and literature with about 225 participants. On the other hand, philosophy attracted just 50 male students that made it the least interesting activity among men. For women just like the men, English language and literature was the most interesting subject where 250 female students participated in. Linguistics and Communication and Media study attracted many female students as well with around 245 and 235, respectively.
Your videos were so helpful for me especially in writing task 1 which i did find difficult for me but i scored 7 bands, loads of thanks to you and your team.
Loving the terms and vocabs that were used in 3 charts. Well cohesive and explained clearly, though just by looking at the charts (especially the 3rd one) you'll get panic and confuse because of the various graphs. However, when you start writting it, it seems easy and you are able to understand the flow. The tips and techniques you give, which were finding first the trending and noticeable diffirence among the charts were very useful. Thank you so much. You make confusing things easier. God bless. 💚
Very helpfull video. I m currently preparing my IELTS tess specially writing task 1, and i admit that u have given me some reilable light on my way of going through. Thank you dear
but she is just human like us who are capable of making mistakes, I love the way she explains with rightful vocab and a very low tone sweet voice that keeps me more listen attentively.
One thing I would like to mention here is that when we are writing about the digits/values we should use words like: almost, around, approximately etc because we are not sure about the values and writing the exact digits can result in negative marking
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there are two huge mistakes in the above writing task. firstly, the history and archeology data was presented wrongly second, in the last paragraph, there was not below than 100 female in a given bar graph
History and archeology had more than 100 female students **( she made a mistake and wrote less than 100) Also the ratio of men to women in art and design was about 175 to 110**
Hi , First of all best video so far in TH-cam for IELTS writing, So Thank you so sooooooo much. Can you kindly tell me where can I find more of your sample essays for writing task 1?
For second bar chart, the topic actually stated that it illustrates the percentage of "executives" of different genders. But the sample answer seems didn't mention "executives" at all. Does executives equal to professionals?
Wouldn't it be more logical to mention that language based subjects were popular both for males and females in the overview as a trend, rather than in body paragraphs? Also wouldn't it be more beneficial to add more numbers into the essay?
The bar chart shows the male and female manager ratios of six various professions in the UK in 2007, percentagewise. Overall, the gender diversity is quite similar in three professions except for three significant specialties: teaching, construction, and therapy. The gender gap between those three professions is undeniable. As we can see on the chart, most of the male executives preferred jobs related to analytical thinking and problem solving, such as science and construction, with percentages of 90 and 60, respectively. In contrast males are making up only 10 percent in teaching areas. In journalism, it has been observed that male and female numbers are the same. On the other hand, women tend to choose specialties that require being more in touch with emotions and having good human relationships skills, namely therapy and teaching. Women's numbers in teaching positions are nine times greater than men's, and women also dominate men in therapy by almost 65 percent. total 156 words. What do you guys think? How many points can I get from this essay?
23:05 you used the word ''shows'' two times in both intro and overall section, but did not highlighted. anyway this is very excellent class liked ands subscribed
The given bar chart depicts the percentage of the employee in six different occupations by gender across the Uk in 2007. Overall, teaching and working as a therapist were the two most popular jobs amongst the female population, while males were more inclined towards the field of construction. Journalism is the only profession with no gender gap, whereas the rest of the other occupations have a minor gender difference. Regarding the male profession, the construction sector secured the first rank in the popularity list with 90%, followed by science, where 60% of workers were male employees. The remaining occupations employed an average number of men with the percentages somewhere between. To. In terms of female employment, 90% and 81% of teachers and therapist jobs were done by females in 2011. In contrast to the male, the female population showed the slightest interest in building and construction. Other fraternities like advertisement, Law, and science witnessed nearly similar ratios of genders with only a trivial gap.
I hope that I can understand all the explanation but so far, I did not cautch all them. I need the best method. Can you give me some tips and tricks for improving my Writing Task 1 skill?
Just wanted to note that the second paragraph is just a sentence long. This may not be looked at favorably by the examiner under the grammatical range criterion.
Pls with reference to the second chart, the question mentioned six exercutives of different professions but when paraphrasing you stated seven widely diff career instead of six. Could you please explain. I like the video
nobody is talking about the fact that she did all the explanation, the demonstration, the grouping, the narration, all the side talking, probable she made a coffee and had a sandwich, AND WRITE THE FREAKING WHOLE REPORT (that would take me forever without writing it as fine and beautiful as she did) AAAALLLLL IN FREAKING 20 MINUTES.... ALLL, ALL OF THAT UNDER 21 MINUTES ,,I would just give her a band 9 without even attending the damn exam if I were the examiner... why does her 20 minutes felt like 60 minutes, while mine felt like 2 minutes every damn time... damn you Einstein.
I think you've mistaken the last line. Less than 100 is all numbers below 100 but the graph is just over 100 and also I didn't understand the first body's first line 120 to 90 means...can anyone explain it
I thought that adverbs follows the verb. However, in the introduction first sentence occurs the contrary "in traditionally gender-dominated professions "
Is it okay if my 2 groupings are done using the categories given ie language based subjects and other subjects then discuss my essay according to that.?
can we make body 1 and body by male and female?is this right format?or rather we could breake 3 subject at body 1 and remaining subject in second body para?
very beneficial and usefull example, with great set of vocabulary but i think those words like "stereotypical" or "traditionally dominated professions" sound kind of bizarre. these words based on personal or social experience, and i think, irrelevant here. also in the assignment it is said: percentage of executive but in your description it looks like professions in general. just IMHO
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I think there is a minor mistake at 17:58. The ratio is around 180 to 160 instead of 120 to 90. 120 to 90 is history and archeology.
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Stop searching for tips.
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I did see some misread figures and ratio parts BUT to be honest those were nothing compared to the way she effortlessly guided us through these charts with such organized ideas and coherent paragraphs. I have learned a lot of useful phrases and learned how to read charts in a different perspective! This video is awesome and big thanks to you! 💕❤️
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I need English speaking partner ?
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Wow you have scored very well, can you do me a favor, please send me some best sample of academic writing task 1
This bar chart illustrates information about the number of participants in different activities related to the art from linguistics to Media at a university in the UK in 2011.
Overall, most participant in almost all categories are women except the Art and Design where male students participated more. it can be also noted that the highest attractive subject for both were English language and literature.
In terms of speaking regarding men, they showed most interest in English language and literature with about 225 participants. On the other hand, philosophy attracted just 50 male students that made it the least interesting activity among men.
For women just like the men, English language and literature was the most interesting subject where 250 female students participated in. Linguistics and Communication and Media study attracted many female students as well with around 245 and 235, respectively.
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Your videos were so helpful for me especially in writing task 1 which i did find difficult for me but i scored 7 bands, loads of thanks to you and your team.
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Loving the terms and vocabs that were used in 3 charts. Well cohesive and explained clearly, though just by looking at the charts (especially the 3rd one) you'll get panic and confuse because of the various graphs. However, when you start writting it, it seems easy and you are able to understand the flow. The tips and techniques you give, which were finding first the trending and noticeable diffirence among the charts were very useful. Thank you so much. You make confusing things easier. God bless. 💚
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I m currently preparing my IELTS tess specially writing task 1, and i admit that u have given me some reilable light on my way of going through.
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Paragraph . 120 to 90?.. I don't think so. Perhaps do you see the History and Archeology bars
yeah its mistake she wrote history and archology number instead of art and design
I also notice this mistake.
but she is just human like us who are capable of making mistakes, I love the way she explains with rightful vocab and a very low tone sweet voice that keeps me more listen attentively.
I was stuck in this paragraph
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Absolutely clear and coherent.
One thing I would like to mention here is that when we are writing about the digits/values we should use words like: almost, around, approximately etc because we are not sure about the values and writing the exact digits can result in negative marking
Great effort , Writing was a problem for me but I became happy when I saw your channel and how it’s organised and how each section and part is covered specially writing. I can’t thank you anymore. I am mathematics teacher from Egypt
This is a very good lesson for me! Much appreciated
there are two huge mistakes in the above writing task.
firstly, the history and archeology data was presented wrongly
second, in the last paragraph, there was not below than 100 female in a given bar graph
Thanks a lot.. because of your videos i could score overall 7 band :)
History and archeology had more than 100 female students **( she made a mistake and wrote less than 100)
Also the ratio of men to women in art and design was about 175 to 110**
Thank you so much. Your videos helped me a lot.🥰
Hi , First of all best video so far in TH-cam for IELTS writing, So Thank you so sooooooo much.
Can you kindly tell me where can I find more of your sample essays for writing task 1?
The tutorial is pure gold! (the least attracted subject for males? or attractive? though?)
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Thanks a lot, I found it very helpful. The best explanations out there
Thank you for these videos! Very insightful!
For second bar chart, the topic actually stated that it illustrates the percentage of "executives" of different genders. But the sample answer seems didn't mention "executives" at all. Does executives equal to professionals?
'at a ratio of 120 to 90' may someone explain it to me? I didn't understand, really appreciate it!
Me too
can we paraphrase subjects to disciplines do not sound right (may be curriculum), by the way Great content loved it..
actually discipline is a synonym for subject but at a higher level (C2)
Wouldn't it be more logical to mention that language based subjects were popular both for males and females in the overview as a trend, rather than in body paragraphs? Also wouldn't it be more beneficial to add more numbers into the essay?
Great job😍it’s really helpful
Thank you so much!!! Your videos always so informative
The bar chart shows the male and female manager ratios of six various professions in the UK in 2007, percentagewise.
Overall, the gender diversity is quite similar in three professions except for three significant specialties: teaching, construction, and therapy. The gender gap between those three professions is undeniable.
As we can see on the chart, most of the male executives preferred jobs related to analytical thinking and problem solving, such as science and construction, with percentages of 90 and 60, respectively. In contrast males are making up only 10 percent in teaching areas. In journalism, it has been observed that male and female numbers are the same.
On the other hand, women tend to choose specialties that require being more in touch with emotions and having good human relationships skills, namely therapy and teaching. Women's numbers in teaching positions are nine times greater than men's, and women also dominate men in therapy by almost 65 percent.
total 156 words.
What do you guys think? How many points can I get from this essay?
Very good teaching!
Honestly, I found some mistakes over here. However, her techniques to hit the main features are great.
Very good lesson, thanks
23:05 you used the word ''shows'' two times in both intro and overall section, but did not highlighted. anyway this is very excellent class liked ands subscribed
The given bar chart depicts the percentage of the employee in six different occupations by gender across the Uk in 2007.
Overall, teaching and working as a therapist were the two most popular jobs amongst the female population, while males were more inclined towards the field of construction. Journalism is the only profession with no gender gap, whereas the rest of the other occupations have a minor gender difference.
Regarding the male profession, the construction sector secured the first rank in the popularity list with 90%, followed by science, where 60% of workers were male employees. The remaining occupations employed an average number of men with the percentages somewhere between. To.
In terms of female employment, 90% and 81% of teachers and therapist jobs were done by females in 2011. In contrast to the male, the female population showed the slightest interest in building and construction. Other fraternities like advertisement, Law, and science witnessed nearly similar ratios of genders with only a trivial gap.
I think that adding an opinion about advertising in the second writing will be more comprehensive.
I hope that I can understand all the explanation but so far, I did not cautch all them. I need the best method. Can you give me some tips and tricks for improving my Writing Task 1 skill?
Thanks for your help ❤️
What a great guide🥰
Just wanted to note that the second paragraph is just a sentence long. This may not be looked at favorably by the examiner under the grammatical range criterion.
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Thanks for this course. Helped me a lot. Requesting the creator to delete the repeated videos.
After writing our essays, while practicing for IELTS, where can we send them to be reviewed and to get a feedback on them?
I think you made a tiny mistake in body paragraph one, the ratio of Art and Design is nearly 180 to 160.
120 to 90 if for History and Archeology
Great video. Very insightful
Pls with reference to the second chart, the question mentioned six exercutives of different professions but when paraphrasing you stated seven widely diff career instead of six. Could you please explain. I like the video
Can we put "undergraduates" instead of "students" in the 1st essay?
nobody is talking about the fact that she did all the explanation, the demonstration, the grouping, the narration, all the side talking, probable she made a coffee and had a sandwich, AND WRITE THE FREAKING WHOLE REPORT (that would take me forever without writing it as fine and beautiful as she did) AAAALLLLL IN FREAKING 20 MINUTES.... ALLL, ALL OF THAT UNDER 21 MINUTES ,,I would just give her a band 9 without even attending the damn exam if I were the examiner... why does her 20 minutes felt like 60 minutes, while mine felt like 2 minutes every damn time... damn you Einstein.
How can we exactly know mam ? Using the words like male enrollement and all from the questions? Not only for this any questions in task 1
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Thanks for the lesson. It is easy to understand.
You should NEVER write an exactly number or you gonna fail. Always use around, almost, just below or just above.
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in the 2nd question of bar chart, it was written six different types, but in reality the bar chart consists of seven types . I'm confused
I think you've mistaken the last line.
Less than 100 is all numbers below 100 but the graph is just over 100 and also I didn't understand the first body's first line 120 to 90 means...can anyone explain it
I thought that adverbs follows the verb.
However, in the introduction first sentence occurs the contrary
"in traditionally gender-dominated professions "
Did she mean tradional as an adjetive?
Great job!
Could using words like, traditionally and stereotypically in the essay not count as offering opinions?
I study your vedios . it's very use full for my exam ...by the way you vedios and chat is not clear....
How is art and design significantly higher please
Can anyone help me to find out trends as I become confused
How you reached to ratio of 120 and 90 to art and design
I think for 17:12, it should be " while females outnumbered males"
I gotta question, thr picture of task 1 will be provided to the examiners
How came 120 to 90 in 18:00 m
Is it okay if my 2 groupings are done using the categories given ie language based subjects and other subjects then discuss my essay according to that.?
If I write something like this in the exam and assume I do just as great in task 2, what band score would I get for writing?
8+
can we make body 1 and body by male and female?is this right format?or rather we could breake 3 subject at body 1 and remaining subject in second body para?
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For the first graph, in paragraph 1, why not "the least attractive subjects to males..."?
i couldn't understand the 3rd para
at a ratio of 120 to 90?
Using so many “ and “ is going to affect to overall band , I guess
Female outnumber male is most descipline how i am confused anyone explain this
"At a ratio of 120 to 90 " . Is it true??? Isn't it ratio of 170 to 150??
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Still lack of comparison
There is an inaccuracy history and archeology female students
This is completely opposite compared to strategies that my tutor taught
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very beneficial and usefull example, with great set of vocabulary but i think those words like "stereotypical" or "traditionally dominated professions" sound kind of bizarre. these words based on personal or social experience, and i think, irrelevant here. also in the assignment it is said: percentage of executive but in your description it looks like professions in general.
just IMHO
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After 3 hours my exam will be started😢