GET HIGHER MARKS in AS Level English 9093 by avoiding these common mistakes

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  • This video will help you get higher marks in Cambridge International AS Level English (9093) by listing some of the most common and serious mistakes students make in text analysis in Paper 1.
    But we don't just list the mistakes, we give actionable and useful tips to help you do better.
    This advice will be helpful not only in Paper 1, Question 2 (Text Analysis) but also when comparing two texts (Paper 1, Question 1b) and when writing a reflective commentary on your own text (Paper 2, Question 1b).
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  • @hsstudykaola2459
    @hsstudykaola2459 3 ปีที่แล้ว +76

    This is so helpful! I have my Paper 1 exam this afternoon in Cape Town. This video gave me confidence. I think this will definitely help me improve the quality of my essays!

    • @EngliLearn
      @EngliLearn  3 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      Thank you for your kind comment!
      Best of luck in your exam!

    • @abdurrehmankhurram3135
      @abdurrehmankhurram3135 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Are you giving your A levels p3 and p4 exam as well.
      Because I need help

    • @fariapushpita3373
      @fariapushpita3373 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      So how was it?

    • @Ayankhaan77
      @Ayankhaan77 ปีที่แล้ว

      Yoo dm me

  • @rubiksmaster4849
    @rubiksmaster4849 หลายเดือนก่อน +7

    0:35 1. Feature-Spotting
    2:04 2. Describing effects imprecisely
    5:20 3. Not using the correct linguistic terminology
    6:35 4. Using long quotes

  • @farhanrazimi5854
    @farhanrazimi5854 2 ปีที่แล้ว +10

    this channel is so underrated! can't believed i never found this channel. Thank you so much for the tips, this will definitely help me with my exam today.

  • @waidiasakoraevans2190
    @waidiasakoraevans2190 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    I was doing everything wrong defore this video, my teacher is always saying I'm too vague and I should dig deeper but I didn't understand what she meant but now this video demonstrates how I should write instead. I literally have paper 2 of GP tomorrow, this was a lifesaver 👌 wish me luck!

  • @lsuji5758
    @lsuji5758 2 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    I’m currently doing my first year of A Level English and our first task after learning all the figuartive languages is o analyse a text. THIS has helped me alot. I’m able to understand . Thank you so much

  • @adamafxal9255
    @adamafxal9255 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Thanks to you, I scored higher than I expected in A levels English last year. Keep up the good work :)

  • @therealhound3977
    @therealhound3977 3 ปีที่แล้ว +9

    Really appreciate your help I am giving A level this October/November so this helps me a lot

  • @CrazyTeacherNick
    @CrazyTeacherNick 3 ปีที่แล้ว +23

    This is an excellent video - I have continuously "raged" against these common mistakes. Thank you.

    • @EngliLearn
      @EngliLearn  3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Same here :) Next year, this video might be one of the first things I discuss with my students, to try to pre-empt at least some of it.

    • @CrazyTeacherNick
      @CrazyTeacherNick 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@EngliLearn I am just at the end of my first quarter in South Africa. I am using it for my IGCSE students for question 2(d) on paper 1.

    • @CrazyTeacherNick
      @CrazyTeacherNick 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      I should add I teach IGCSE and A level.

    • @EngliLearn
      @EngliLearn  3 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      @@CrazyTeacherNick My students are all ESL speakers (but they take AS level English because there's no other option), so I don't teach IGCSE First Language English. I'm glad it can be used in that course too.

  • @abbykadabby6872
    @abbykadabby6872 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +9

    I GOT THIS I WILL PASS THIS EXAM!!!

    • @edithamarnor6755
      @edithamarnor6755 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

      YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS WE GOT THISSSSSSSS

    • @prakshrestha
      @prakshrestha หลายเดือนก่อน

      YAYAYA

  • @janitajames4137
    @janitajames4137 3 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Thank you for this, i saw some of my own mistakes in this video, thank you so much!!!!!

    • @EngliLearn
      @EngliLearn  3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      You're welcome!

  • @subhannaeem6482
    @subhannaeem6482 2 ปีที่แล้ว +9

    CHECK HOW MANY QUESTIONS THERE ARE. For the love of goodness, before even starting the exam and writing down everything FLIP THROUGH THE QUESTION PAPER. I didn't answer Question 2 on my exam because I mismanaged and didn't know there was another question. DON'T make the same mistake as I did. I have paper two coming up and I've learn't my lesson. I might have to retake the exam for a higher score even though I am an A level student because I missed out on 25 marks. Highest I'll get is a C, and that's if I get full marks on every assessment.

    • @staceycollin8252
      @staceycollin8252 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      what grade did you get?

    • @subhannaeem6482
      @subhannaeem6482 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@staceycollin8252 I have misplaced my Cambridge ID so I'll have to wait until the school year to check the results. I'll make a reminder and comment my score.

    • @staceycollin8252
      @staceycollin8252 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@subhannaeem6482 ah okay, you can always contact/call cambridge or your exam centre to verify incase you need to!

    • @subhannaeem6482
      @subhannaeem6482 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@staceycollin8252 that's the thing my school is closed :(

    • @staceycollin8252
      @staceycollin8252 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@subhannaeem6482 oh no! maybe you can contact cie?

  • @Algotube
    @Algotube ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I took paper 2 this morning and now this comes up on my feed… couldn’t it have been 3 days earlier?

  • @novankurniadi180
    @novankurniadi180 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Very insightful, Subbed already!

    • @EngliLearn
      @EngliLearn  3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Thank you, I'm happy to help :)

  • @FahadKhan-eh8yx
    @FahadKhan-eh8yx 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Dear Teacher,
    My name is Fahad. I live in Saudi Arabia and the day after tomorrow I have my English 9093 AS level paper 1 exam and believe me I think I'm not prepared much for it. I watched all the videos on your channel and if you can me a favor, upon my request it will be really helpful. What I am requesting you to help me with is that can you please analyze the text in Oct/Nov 2019 variant 11 question 3. like the whole analysis and then writing the commentary itself and then the part b of it the directed writing. I meant to say that if you uploaded a new video on your channel regarding this question so it will be extremely helpful for me and others will also benefit from it.

    • @EngliLearn
      @EngliLearn  3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Unfortunately, due to copyright restrictions (something Cambridge is very serious about), I'm not allowed to make videos using past papers :( Best of luck in your exam :)

  • @taecookie659
    @taecookie659 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    This is so helpful Thank you so much ☺️

  • @kelliemaye8879
    @kelliemaye8879 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    This was really helpful thanks

  • @lathamenon3945
    @lathamenon3945 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Excellent video, very useful. Thank you.

    • @EngliLearn
      @EngliLearn  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Thank you very much! :)

  • @mr.perfect7431
    @mr.perfect7431 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Loved your content

  • @murtazasyed4867
    @murtazasyed4867 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I would like to subscribe to this channel like a million times. Wish it were possible.
    Please tell me you have something on A2 9093

  • @PrinceKG-zp3fh
    @PrinceKG-zp3fh 7 วันที่ผ่านมา

    I've been watching these videos via repeat, made some notes and then practice, but no I'm not getting anywhere

  • @mahnazqaiser3371
    @mahnazqaiser3371 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Don't you have videos for A2??Paper 3 and 4?

  • @drrly.7933
    @drrly.7933 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    precisive felpgul video... tysm

    • @drrly.7933
      @drrly.7933 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      i mean helpful lmao

    • @GoToMan
      @GoToMan 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@drrly.7933 felpgul

  • @nadimanis9438
    @nadimanis9438 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    THANK YOU SO MUCH!

    • @EngliLearn
      @EngliLearn  3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      You're welcome! :)

  • @damiii5742
    @damiii5742 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Can this be used for a level ??

  • @royaledits8912
    @royaledits8912 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Hello. I’m certain that you have better things to do but I’ve got my a levels tomorrow and I’m confused on how much or how many paragraphs are you supposed to write in Question 1 part A.

    • @tmolin8237
      @tmolin8237 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      3-4 paragraphs but they can be medium long. I have my A levels today as well

    • @EngliLearn
      @EngliLearn  3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Yes, that's correct, 3-4 shorter paragraphs will do.
      Best of luck today!

    • @royaledits8912
      @royaledits8912 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@EngliLearn could you tell me if you’re supposed to draw a rectangle around your advertisement in paper two. Is that necessary

    • @EngliLearn
      @EngliLearn  3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      @@royaledits8912 As far as I know, no graphic elements are required. Your writing is all that counts.
      I don't really understand why someone would require you to draw a rectangle. Was it advised only for advertisements?

    • @royaledits8912
      @royaledits8912 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@EngliLearn could you also help me out with something. I’m sorry I know it’s quite late at night but I’ve got a paper in a couple of hours. In paper 2; I can’t find the format templates for podcasts, blogs, investigative journalism, scripted speech and review writing. There are tips and all for it. But no template is present on google to show me how exactly am I supposed to write it and in which format and what order, how many paragraphs and how should it start or end. If you could please find a way to explain it to me somehow, or even send me templates of them, I’d be grateful. My Instagram is: m.malaikaaa, if you could please do that, I’d appreciate it

  • @loosdamoose4489
    @loosdamoose4489 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    I'm trying to get feedback for these practice papers but havent got any

  • @Xxxcappie23
    @Xxxcappie23 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Helpful

  • @HelenaFrans-j7d
    @HelenaFrans-j7d ปีที่แล้ว

    i need help please, i have my exams on tuesd
    ay.....especially regarding essays

  • @linaabdelshafy6524
    @linaabdelshafy6524 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    canu pleaseeee do paper 2

    • @EngliLearn
      @EngliLearn  3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Working on it!

    • @EngliLearn
      @EngliLearn  3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Done! Check it out here: th-cam.com/video/rOiaLEBwLBw/w-d-xo.html

  • @saiftalha7373
    @saiftalha7373 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Mam, can we get through WhatsApp etc. for more discussions?

    • @EngliLearn
      @EngliLearn  3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Feel free to ask anything you'd like to know here in the comments. Alternatively, you can email us at englilearn@gmail.com.

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    @jesuslovesyou8404 2 ปีที่แล้ว +7

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  • @kushagrajain7083
    @kushagrajain7083 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    your tips gave my friend an e in their a levels do not recommend🤬😡🤬😡