I missed this earlier, when you first posted it, but you're clearly a good storyteller. I hope you've made good progress in this book in the 4 months since you posted this. As a writer myself, I can appreciate a good story.
what a nice story your voice is so calming I hope you put more of these up I was out like a light in minute I especially like the witch doctor one along with others keep up the good work
I wasn't really paying attention to the story, but your voice is so lovely to listen to, it doesn't really matter what's being said. Nice to hear from you; hope you have a good Holiday Season.
HI THIS IS GONNA BE A LONG COMMENT BUT TLDR THIS IS A GOOD VIDEO 👍 Firstly I appreciate the writing style you went for, I feel like its v suitable for these kinds of stories. It provides enough detail for the listener to know whats happening, but still leaves smaller details to the imagination. Albeit i did end up listening three times cause I kept getting too sleepy to pay attention (See: i listened w my eyes closed and I liked trying to imagine what was happening) The word choice is colourful too, I think my favourite bit was how you referred to the red star as having "terrible magnificence", cause it remains vague if the red star is supposed to be a "good" or "bad" kind of character. In the end it leaves me wondering if the red star is trustworthy in the first place, which makes me even more curious to know what happens next I also really like how you described the boat in the second prophecy. You didnt just say "it was fragile" but instead you used it as an opportunity to describe the camaraderie between the sailors and their beliefs, which really helps w the worldbuilding. Good stuff When you bring up one fact, it leaves me w more questions, and I think that's really fitting for this kind of tale. For example for the 1st one, it leaves me wondering who the 9 people are, how were they speaking in tongues, how did they know where to go, etc. It's v mystical :] Overall I like your writing and it was nice listening to you read it like a bedtime story ! Do you post your writings anywhere ?
Thanks, I appreciate the compliments! I don't really post stuff I write anywhere but here's the link to the stuff I have so far on this story if you're interested in reading it. docs.google.com/document/d/1HwywM6Q-cMH7yalVpctU6kbGkadIL0ro8AVNoNLlgSs/edit?usp=sharing
@@DallASMR hhihi I read the doc and its cool stuff :] Do you have a discord or something ? I have some ideas and suggestions I can share if that's ok w you !
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I missed this earlier, when you first posted it, but you're clearly a good storyteller. I hope you've made good progress in this book in the 4 months since you posted this. As a writer myself, I can appreciate a good story.
Happy Holidays to Dall and everyone else as well! Always lovely to get a new video from you, Dall. ^_^
what a lovely idea
Your voice feels like a hug.
I like to hear more of your own personal work. It's amazing so far
Lovely story thank you for the tingles
Your voice is so beautiful and comforting
what a nice story your voice is so calming I hope you put more of these up I was out like a light in minute I especially like the witch doctor one along with others keep up the good work
We love you, Dall, no worries on the uploads. Take your time. 😊
I have a huge love for fantasy worlds and stories, so yes please on doing more of this! 💙
Me too!
I am totally interested in this world and hope to get to hear more ❤😊
I wasn't really paying attention to the story, but your voice is so lovely to listen to, it doesn't really matter what's being said. Nice to hear from you; hope you have a good Holiday Season.
I probably sound like a broken record, but welcome back, Dall.
HI THIS IS GONNA BE A LONG COMMENT BUT TLDR THIS IS A GOOD VIDEO 👍
Firstly I appreciate the writing style you went for, I feel like its v suitable for these kinds of stories. It provides enough detail for the listener to know whats happening, but still leaves smaller details to the imagination. Albeit i did end up listening three times cause I kept getting too sleepy to pay attention (See: i listened w my eyes closed and I liked trying to imagine what was happening)
The word choice is colourful too, I think my favourite bit was how you referred to the red star as having "terrible magnificence", cause it remains vague if the red star is supposed to be a "good" or "bad" kind of character. In the end it leaves me wondering if the red star is trustworthy in the first place, which makes me even more curious to know what happens next
I also really like how you described the boat in the second prophecy. You didnt just say "it was fragile" but instead you used it as an opportunity to describe the camaraderie between the sailors and their beliefs, which really helps w the worldbuilding. Good stuff
When you bring up one fact, it leaves me w more questions, and I think that's really fitting for this kind of tale. For example for the 1st one, it leaves me wondering who the 9 people are, how were they speaking in tongues, how did they know where to go, etc. It's v mystical :]
Overall I like your writing and it was nice listening to you read it like a bedtime story ! Do you post your writings anywhere ?
Thanks, I appreciate the compliments! I don't really post stuff I write anywhere but here's the link to the stuff I have so far on this story if you're interested in reading it. docs.google.com/document/d/1HwywM6Q-cMH7yalVpctU6kbGkadIL0ro8AVNoNLlgSs/edit?usp=sharing
@@DallASMR hhihi I read the doc and its cool stuff :] Do you have a discord or something ? I have some ideas and suggestions I can share if that's ok w you !
Yeah sure, Im not very active on it anymore, but you can always DM me the ideas and it shouldnt take me long to reply.
discord.com/invite/w6dqH3jc
Have you considered starting a bedtime story channel, too? ⭐️❤️⭐️
This is mad cool! I love these types of fantasies with mythical cults and lore, and I hope we get to hear more about your fantasy world.