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  • Humans’ Sole Warning To Galactic Empire: “Your Worlds Will Burn!” | HFY | A Short Sci-Fi Story
    Original story, written and owned by me!
    #alien #aliens #galacticconflict #galaxy #hfy #hfystories #human #humanity #scifi #earth

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  • @murphymmc
    @murphymmc 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    Initial impressions of overused phrases and names in these stories..."the tension was palpable", "released a breath they didn't know they were holding", the name Marcus, Lira...just to name a few. This story almost got off the ground, lots of scattered bits of information, no real connections with character development.

  • @TheSolidSnakeOil
    @TheSolidSnakeOil 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    I don't think I've ever heard a story with so many random references. I doubt a human wrote this.

    • @AlexBoom73
      @AlexBoom73 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      This is Ai generated you novice it by the use of words

    • @TheSolidSnakeOil
      @TheSolidSnakeOil 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      @@AlexBoom73 Well, that's how I _noviced_ it was Ai generated.

  • @cabbageplays6710
    @cabbageplays6710 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    little hint for ya, stop saying "tapestry", its a dead giveaway for chat GPT, please for the love of god, dont put this shit out there. just put what actual people have written, it will go a long way. trust me.
    Edit, why do all Chat GPT stories always not have a definitive set of rules. your by Venus, and yet Earth, a multi system government has no idea your there, but they know what your doing and how your doing it, get a grip. please, its just nonsensical drivel. STOP GPT, for the love of all that is good in this world, AI does not know everything.

    • @cabbageplays6710
      @cabbageplays6710 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Really, so you like the things people say, even tho its all going against what you do, ridiculous. Get a grip, Have some sort of backbone and reply, dont just like and then forget.

    • @user-kd5xw8rb1n
      @user-kd5xw8rb1n 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Chat AI's. Make everyone an author, bad ones mostly but authors,,until the AI stops working

    • @TheLunacyofOurTimes
      @TheLunacyofOurTimes 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      It takes more work to write rules for GPT than an actual story. Creativity, however, can not be entered into the rules.

  • @jim5324
    @jim5324 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    So many off shoots that it never gets to the meat of the story - conflict or peace... And, ultimately the outcome.

  • @Vaquero4382
    @Vaquero4382 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    What percentage of these stories have the words "the vast" in the first sentence? It is truly tedious.

  • @sdragut
    @sdragut 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

    the story has potential if it wasn't for the AI

  • @DataStorm1
    @DataStorm1 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    "Original" story? more like AI generated... there is not even the decency of copyright on that shit.

  • @fredeerickbays
    @fredeerickbays 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Good story to bad u used a poor AI to read it Hire a voice actor then u will get a thumbs up and a comment that does not tell u u wont get one.

  • @georgearden7075
    @georgearden7075 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

    AI repetitive malfunction

  • @killiansred1000
    @killiansred1000 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Too much meandering with no goal.

  • @stevebullington1544
    @stevebullington1544 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Horrible waste of my time!