In line with the main point of this video, here's some constructive criticism. I liked the unscripted nature of this one, but it feels like you were struggling to find talking points due to not having prepared material, which made the video overall feel like rambling about a singular point. I know you're good at writing and structuring content so this one felt like a step down for me. But the format has potential, I think with some pre-written talking points you could have some structure but keep the natural, conversational tone.
ohhh you're so right, I didn't script anything at all cuz I made up my mind to make this video the night before and did it first thing morning, was trying to let me mind run free. And clearly it showed. Great notes! I do agree I should have at least some talking points written down.
I agree that he is a particularly talented script writer, certainly a strength of his. But I don't think this was fully unscripted, I think this time he was experimenting with having an outline scripted as opposed to it being word for word
TALK LONGER!!! I could listen to you for hours
In line with the main point of this video, here's some constructive criticism. I liked the unscripted nature of this one, but it feels like you were struggling to find talking points due to not having prepared material, which made the video overall feel like rambling about a singular point. I know you're good at writing and structuring content so this one felt like a step down for me. But the format has potential, I think with some pre-written talking points you could have some structure but keep the natural, conversational tone.
ohhh you're so right, I didn't script anything at all cuz I made up my mind to make this video the night before and did it first thing morning, was trying to let me mind run free. And clearly it showed. Great notes! I do agree I should have at least some talking points written down.
I agree that he is a particularly talented script writer, certainly a strength of his. But I don't think this was fully unscripted, I think this time he was experimenting with having an outline scripted as opposed to it being word for word
what would you say fashion needs you have been saying fashion needs mor then honesty but what is it
@@Abudi-c4p did you watch the whole video because I feel like you didn’t
2:33 right here
@@ryanyipfashion sorry i love your vids and i hope i get to watch all of them