GIRL SAME T-T, Dawn Jheqia for real if there is anything we can do to make yalls storys animated or like actully published we would LITERLLY DO ANYTHING IN OUR POWER
@@simpllyfin3702 Well, the problem with getting these publish is that we don't own the rights to the characters. Companies like Zag allow stuff like this because 1. they know they really can't stop people from doing it, and 2. because any money we might make only increases interest in their own version and gets them more money in the long run. So publishing them as books wouldn't work. Maybe, someday, we can find an animator to work with us on a story, but that takes a lot of time and/or money. Time which I think you guys would rather we spend writing more stories! Either way, your enthusiasm is what keeps us writing and creating! You are an important part of this too!😊
Well, I wrote First Kiss as well and it made sense for her to be kidnapped and held for ransom once Shadowmoth knew about her and Cat, so I reused the concept. Just this time it is going to be more intense... and epic!
Dawn.....Jheqia........whew. Everyone needs to join patreon to get these gems early because they are absolutely worth it!! I hope I don't have any clients while this is live so I can wig out in the premiere. It's so good!! If I could like this more than once I would!
Well, it took me all last week to finish part 2, I got it done Saturday evening, and it came out just under 11k words, so that puts it over an hour of narration. Dawn wants to get everything right for you guys so it is taking time. But I promise you an epic ending!
This is epic....no words....the details... the emotions.... I'm really speechless 😭❤️ This has definitely taken my top favorite dawn fanfic spot...what a masterpiece! 👏👏👏
Well, when you are faced with writing a sequel to something you expected to be a one-shot, you kind of have to work with what you already did. I couldn't just leave them safe, sound, and snuggling after Marinette lit into Shadowmoth, could I? "Touch one hair on MY Cat's head"? Talk about waving a red flag in front of a bull! So yeah, it kind of went down hill pretty quickly. But there will be a happy ending, never fear!
That was amazing I’m scared she’s going to give in and be akkumatized but I love akkumatized mari I nearly thought adrien was going to be akkumatized untill plagg calmed him down so much going on I’m screaming
So upset I missed this premiere!!! So many emotions right now and I definitely can't wait for part 2!!! awesome job Jheqia and Dawn!!! 😡😬😭❤️🤯 Waiting patiently for part 2❤️
This was so cute aaaa! I can't wait for part 2! 😃😃😃 Also Dawn and Jheqia, I've noticed that two fanfiction series called, 'Seven Stages of Life' and 'Secrets Under the Moon' were never finished. I was just wondering if they will ever be completed, cause i actually really liked them!
OK OK OK OK.... GURL FIRST YOU POST THE AMZING FIC YESTERDAY THAT IS MY NEW FAV AND NOW THIS SEQUAL TO YOUR OTHER ONE OF MEH FAVS, HOW ARE YOU AND JHEIQA SO AMAZING! LIKE FR! YALL SOULD DO THIS PROFESSINALLY YALL WOULD BE BILLIONAIRES! i feel blessd to be seeing this thank yall sm yall are amazing
Jheqia did an amazing job! Dawn did amazing narration! It's such a rollercoaster of a story! I am not lying when I winced along with Marinette at the removal of the blind fold thinking she would wince at light, but she was wincing at it rubbing her cut (Plot Twist I guess?) Also, "Nino and Alya jumped at his scream." Same so excellent voice acting/narration for that part! I actually jumped. Lol! I will certainly be rewatching this another 20 times as I have done with all the videos here. :)
Thank you so much! It always makes my day when people notice the little details in my stories. Dawn did such an amazing job on the narration! I was torn between squealing like a total fangirl and crying over how good she made my story sound!
Ooohhh!!! Looking forward to this one but it'll have to be my post study reward for the day.... if I listen now I'll never get anything done, going to have to find another story I've listened to before to put on in the background instead! Hmmm.. sweet treats? Romeo and his marinette? Home? As your heart betrays you? 🤔 what am I in the mood for today....
CLIFFHANGER!!!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOO WHY????????? Why have you done A Shadowmooth on us. Why did you done it ? And why did you hit us with The Gut Punch 👊 from HELL!!!! Right in the feels.
I will now boost the algorithm by casting a spell… ALGORITHILUMOFUCIDOR EXPELLACCIOMAGNIDUCTOR! (The longer and more complicated the spell is, the stronger it is! :D)
Immediately went to watch this after finishing Warrior Princess- I loved it so much I've always hated Gabriel so much- always, but ESPECIALLY after Chat Blanc And even though this is just a fanfiction and not actually real in the show, it makes me hate him way more
Apple tax would be useful so at least Marinette parents know where she is when she goes missing in the situation and get the police involved and take down hawk Daddy aggress down I wouldn’t mind seeing Adrian kitty noir cataclysm his father all he wanted was his father’s love but no
Aaaaaaaaaahhhhh!!!! 😫😫😫 And can we just say how gross it is that Gabriel stuck around for hours watching them make out, waiting for Cat to leave Marinette? 🤮
@@jheqiawrites4985 well, I always expect a level of evilness from a villain but creepiness isn't something I always expect. But when you're not right in the mind, it can show in all different kinds of ways.
Could’ve been worse his father could’ve came Etai’s shadow from sonic the hedgehog oh good luck controlling that guy haematite victim😈🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣
Course I didn’t do it at her parents house they will hear her or you kidding me Alia and Nino why why would you even think that Marinette and buttercup doing the deed other parents house what if they walk in on her since that’s not the keys wow so smooth A grass very smooth🤦🏾♀️🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂
GIRL.ALL.THE.WAY! I GOT THE: sandels, belt, slippers, gun, the fandoms rath, and all of the hands of the poeple who want to take him down!...... did i miss anything or r we good to go? >:)
If she’s present it David Adrian‘s girlfriend you using that to miraculous bring your wife back man that will be out of the question she won’t exist to be in Adrian‘s life why can’t you just go after that I don’t know the rabbit miraculous hello🤦🏾♀️😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡🤬😡😡😡
This is insane...lk wow, the fact that mr. hawkie straight up had ladybug n his hands...and missed the chance 👏lk wow
Omgg this is...wowow
"I left around midnight"...wow Adrien...so subtle...I'm dying
Dude- there’s nothing I wouldn’t give to see this story animated!!!
GIRL SAME T-T, Dawn Jheqia for real if there is anything we can do to make yalls storys animated or like actully published we would LITERLLY DO ANYTHING IN OUR POWER
@@simpllyfin3702 Well, the problem with getting these publish is that we don't own the rights to the characters. Companies like Zag allow stuff like this because 1. they know they really can't stop people from doing it, and 2. because any money we might make only increases interest in their own version and gets them more money in the long run. So publishing them as books wouldn't work. Maybe, someday, we can find an animator to work with us on a story, but that takes a lot of time and/or money. Time which I think you guys would rather we spend writing more stories!
Either way, your enthusiasm is what keeps us writing and creating! You are an important part of this too!😊
same dude
same bro.
This is really insane writing. Wow. Gives vibes of first kiss. But i guess this post season 4. Cant wait enough to read what happens next.
Well, I wrote First Kiss as well and it made sense for her to be kidnapped and held for ransom once Shadowmoth knew about her and Cat, so I reused the concept. Just this time it is going to be more intense... and epic!
I'm being serious I just screamed when I saw this
Oh my god, how can you leave us like this??????!!!!! What an amazing story! I really loved the darker tone and omg I can’t wait for the next part.
I am so excited 😆😀😘😍💓
Dawn.....Jheqia........whew. Everyone needs to join patreon to get these gems early because they are absolutely worth it!! I hope I don't have any clients while this is live so I can wig out in the premiere. It's so good!! If I could like this more than once I would!
The premiers are in Patreon! Cool!
@@jheqiawrites4985 really? I didn't realize! Thank you!
@@kitabootforever You're welcome!
OMG I JUST READ THIS LIKE A MONTH AGO, I'M SO EXCITED!!!!!!!!!!
edit: just read the tag "marinette in danger" and HOLY CRAP I'M SO SO SO EXCITED!!!!
I don't want to wait for marichat Mondays for the conclusion. It is too good to wait for.
Well, it took me all last week to finish part 2, I got it done Saturday evening, and it came out just under 11k words, so that puts it over an hour of narration. Dawn wants to get everything right for you guys so it is taking time. But I promise you an epic ending!
I can’t wait for part 2
Me neither 🥰 maybe this Monday 🤞.
This is epic....no words....the details... the emotions.... I'm really speechless 😭❤️
This has definitely taken my top favorite dawn fanfic spot...what a masterpiece! 👏👏👏
Thank you so much 😀
This is going to be awesome
I love it!! It got dark and serious fast!! it's so exciting!! I wonder what will happen next!!
Well, when you are faced with writing a sequel to something you expected to be a one-shot, you kind of have to work with what you already did. I couldn't just leave them safe, sound, and snuggling after Marinette lit into Shadowmoth, could I? "Touch one hair on MY Cat's head"? Talk about waving a red flag in front of a bull! So yeah, it kind of went down hill pretty quickly. But there will be a happy ending, never fear!
Hopefully all the classmate help even Queen Bee. I hope to get to read the next chapter soon
Well, go big or go home... right?
All I can say is WOW, just wow. Looking forward to part 2
Glad you enjoyed it!
The emotional rollercoaster was crazy! and it hasn't even ended yet!
I am literally shaking from excitement for part 2!!!!!!!
Its coming!
loved part one and looking forward to part two,amazing,awesome,wow,epic,cool,great,excellent,wonderful,fun-fun-fun.
That was amazing I’m scared she’s going to give in and be akkumatized but I love akkumatized mari I nearly thought adrien was going to be akkumatized untill plagg calmed him down so much going on I’m screaming
To akumatize Marinette or not to akumatize Marinette? That is the question...🤔
"His smile was so wide it hurt"
...and it was at that moment that I realized my face hurt from smiling so hard 😅🥰
That was amazing! The background music, the voices! The emotion!!!
I know! I was going mental when I heard it the first time! Dawn did such an amazing job!
dawn’s content never fail to impress me ☺️
Im so excited for this one! The cover is so eye catching 😍😍😆💞
I really enjoyed the story and can’t wait for the next part
😁
Wow! What a cliffhanger. I hope I will be able to sleep tonight after this.😱😱
So upset I missed this premiere!!! So many emotions right now and I definitely can't wait for part 2!!! awesome job Jheqia and Dawn!!! 😡😬😭❤️🤯 Waiting patiently for part 2❤️
(hugs) it's ok
You'll get it someday tiki 🫂🫂😁😊
Thanks, Tiki!
AAHHHH!!!! this is crazy!!! this is by far my favorite series so far ahhh! thank you for this!! ❤️❤️❤️
You are welcome! Glad you are enjoying it!
This was so cute aaaa! I can't wait for part 2! 😃😃😃 Also Dawn and Jheqia, I've noticed that two fanfiction series called, 'Seven Stages of Life' and 'Secrets Under the Moon' were never finished. I was just wondering if they will ever be completed, cause i actually really liked them!
Yes, both of those series are written by me and I'm planning to finish them soon.
I'm still kind of new to your channel, I'm not used to stories that haven't been completed yet 😍🤞🥰 I just assumed part 2 was already ready for me 😭😭😭.
OK OK OK OK.... GURL FIRST YOU POST THE AMZING FIC YESTERDAY THAT IS MY NEW FAV AND NOW THIS SEQUAL TO YOUR OTHER ONE OF MEH FAVS, HOW ARE YOU AND JHEIQA SO AMAZING! LIKE FR! YALL SOULD DO THIS PROFESSINALLY YALL WOULD BE BILLIONAIRES! i feel blessd to be seeing this thank yall sm yall are amazing
Awe! thank you! That means so much!
Jheqia did an amazing job! Dawn did amazing narration! It's such a rollercoaster of a story! I am not lying when I winced along with Marinette at the removal of the blind fold thinking she would wince at light, but she was wincing at it rubbing her cut (Plot Twist I guess?) Also, "Nino and Alya jumped at his scream." Same so excellent voice acting/narration for that part! I actually jumped. Lol! I will certainly be rewatching this another 20 times as I have done with all the videos here. :)
Thank you so much! It always makes my day when people notice the little details in my stories. Dawn did such an amazing job on the narration! I was torn between squealing like a total fangirl and crying over how good she made my story sound!
OMG! I have never been so excited for another one to come out! 🤩 You did so amazing Dawn! ❤️❤️❤️
I can’t wait to see it 😬🤩😌
Ooohhh!!! Looking forward to this one but it'll have to be my post study reward for the day.... if I listen now I'll never get anything done, going to have to find another story I've listened to before to put on in the background instead!
Hmmm.. sweet treats? Romeo and his marinette? Home? As your heart betrays you? 🤔 what am I in the mood for today....
Oh man I felt that sigh at the end..... 😅
Sooner please!!!!!!!!!!
Definitely an epic instalment!!!
Gabe is about to get his butt kicked!!!
@@eleishadolbey6889 Oh yes! He will!
This is absolutely amazing...I'm speechless...👏👏👏👏 Can't wait for next one 🙈 You both are amazing ❤️
SIGH!!!! I MISSED IT!!! 😭😭😭😭😭😭
I'LL MAKE PART 2!!!!!!
As soon as I here part 2 I sound lk a 2 yr old getting candy
Nino legit called him a giant butterfly 🦋
Wooaaah !!! Amazing 👏 🙀 .
Can't wait for part 2
Oh my goodness! This was insane I’m so overwhelmed aha.
CLIFFHANGER!!!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOO WHY????????? Why have you done A Shadowmooth on us. Why did you done it ? And why did you hit us with The Gut Punch 👊 from HELL!!!! Right in the feels.
Dang it... Too many emotions and thoughts on my head right now 😭
This is EEEEEEEPPPPPPIIIIICCCC!!!!!! Much love ❤️
This good it’s so intense love it !!
I will now boost the algorithm by casting a spell… ALGORITHILUMOFUCIDOR EXPELLACCIOMAGNIDUCTOR!
(The longer and more complicated the spell is, the stronger it is! :D)
I finally reach on time😅👋🏾👋🏾
Oh so good!! I love how you narrate this story!!
What a comic I have ever listened to I love it ❤
Him this is amazingggg. WOW, I was wondering though if pt2 would be comming any time soon?
I need the next part, this is so good omg
I’m not trying to rush you but I really need to see a part two to this ASAP
Just realized it was sequel
Oh crap Hawkmoore found out where she lives😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱
this is epic!
Adrien is pissed and that's not a good thing. Daddy has no idea of the monster he created. Gabriel is going to regret his actions.
Oh, you better believe it! Shadowdaddy is going down!
This is epic
Immediately went to watch this after finishing Warrior Princess- I loved it so much
I've always hated Gabriel so much- always, but ESPECIALLY after Chat Blanc
And even though this is just a fanfiction and not actually real in the show, it makes me hate him way more
Love it ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️
Hurry up with part twoooooooooo😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Part two is complete, but it is just shy of 11k words, so it is going to be a doozy and its taking Dawn time to get it perfect for you guys!
Part 2! ... Part 2! .... Part 2!.... 🤞
Please 🥺!
I can't wait!!!!!
Apple tax would be useful so at least Marinette parents know where she is when she goes missing in the situation and get the police involved and take down hawk Daddy aggress down I wouldn’t mind seeing Adrian kitty noir cataclysm his father all he wanted was his father’s love but no
I really love 😂so very much it is the best èveŕ I love all of them so much
Omg this was sooo good!!
Love it
I WILL KILL THAT DAMNED GABRIEL AGRESTE/HAWKMOTH/SHADOWMOTH/MONARCH WITH MY OWN TWO HANDS!!
Where is the superheroes from New York when you need them😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Aaaaaaaaaahhhhh!!!! 😫😫😫
And can we just say how gross it is that Gabriel stuck around for hours watching them make out, waiting for Cat to leave Marinette? 🤮
He invades the minds of hurting teenagers and crying infants and that grosses you out? 😅
@@jheqiawrites4985 well, I always expect a level of evilness from a villain but creepiness isn't something I always expect. But when you're not right in the mind, it can show in all different kinds of ways.
@@jmvanzalinge5023 True enough!
Noooooooooo its...nu uh I can't a waut
❤❤😅this is epic
How many parts are their🙃🙃
As far as I know, there are 2 parts.
Most likely two.
please more
Could’ve been worse his father could’ve came Etai’s shadow from sonic the hedgehog oh good luck controlling that guy haematite victim😈🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣
Course I didn’t do it at her parents house they will hear her or you kidding me Alia and Nino why why would you even think that Marinette and buttercup doing the deed other parents house what if they walk in on her since that’s not the keys wow so smooth A grass very smooth🤦🏾♀️🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂
NO. NOT TRUTH BEHIND RHE LIES AND DAMSEL IN DISTRESS. COME ON!!!!!
sugar and cookies no just nooooooooooooooooooo
THIS IS WAR 😤😤😡😡 WHO'S WITH ME 😤😤😌
I finally got to listen!! I'm totally with you!! So many friggin emotions... 😡😭❤️🤯
*hugs tight* breath tiki, we'll get our chance 😈
GIRL.ALL.THE.WAY! I GOT THE: sandels, belt, slippers, gun, the fandoms rath, and all of the hands of the poeple who want to take him down!...... did i miss anything or r we good to go? >:)
@@simpllyfin3702hmmmmm 😏 (walks over to my playstation and opens a small hidden compartment underneath it) miraculous 😏
@@lupine4001 Lol! If its a war you want, then hopefully you won't be disappointed!
No no no no no no no no no no not fair more 🙂👍🙂👍☺️😊😁.
Omg😮
No matter how many times I listen to this fic it still makes me cry. It’s sooo emotional
If she’s present it David Adrian‘s girlfriend you using that to miraculous bring your wife back man that will be out of the question she won’t exist to be in Adrian‘s life why can’t you just go after that I don’t know the rabbit miraculous hello🤦🏾♀️😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡🤬😡😡😡
No!!!!!
Oh my goodness! This was insane I’m so overwhelmed aha.