Why don't you love me? Lyrical Oneshot (Marichat. Reveal. Angst) Miraculous Ladybug Fanfic/Audiofic

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  • @Princess-yj7ko
    @Princess-yj7ko 2 ปีที่แล้ว +78

    Thomas Astruc said that there are stuff he can't include in the show, but he would love to, and that lucky for us there are fanfics, and I was like “thank God there is Dawn Chorus” Beautiful as always

    • @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous
      @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous  2 ปีที่แล้ว +8

      Awww bless you, that is so sweet!! 💖😊

    • @Sof_rha
      @Sof_rha 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      agreed!

    • @myladynoirr853
      @myladynoirr853 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Ahh Totally agreed! The fanfictions are sooo cute and I know that they can't include things like this (you get me i guess 😅) in the show. So there goes Dawnn our everyday hero😂💕

    • @SweetSpotPA
      @SweetSpotPA 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Who would be anyone to disagree?! Ever since season 4 ended my impatience reached it's limits and I used fanfics to help me stay patient. Channel to channel, texting stories and written stories. Not one channel has come close to Dawn Chorus Writes. Not one channel has been so realistic, include audio, and overall write this good whether it's Jheqia or Dawn. To this day when I want fanfictions, Dawn is the first channel I can even think of. Before I would type "Miraculous One-Shots." Now I type "Dawn Chorus Writes." Dont know if I would stay patient without ya, Dawn! Thank you for your amazing content!

    • @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous
      @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@SweetSpotPA Thank you so much for your kind words, it means a lot to me!! 💖😊

  • @toxic7nitemare
    @toxic7nitemare 2 ปีที่แล้ว +51

    I like that Marinette got to tell him everything he put her through both as Adrien & as Cat. 🥺😭 I loved it. Its was so perfect.

  • @wingedcreature126
    @wingedcreature126 2 ปีที่แล้ว +37

    “child soldier” or something like that. I LOVE how the author described the trauma and struggles of Marinette/Ladybug and Adrien/Cat Noir. 👏❤️

  • @khamiliaangel7045
    @khamiliaangel7045 2 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    Nah yall dont understand😩 I was litterally about to cry on the SCHOOL BUS✋🏽😭 *ON THE SCHOOL BUS* 🤡 I *CANT* with the amount of love and passion that went into this story❤🤧👍🏼

  • @leifjbj
    @leifjbj 2 ปีที่แล้ว +13

    Plagg slapping Adrien was one of the best things I have heard in a long while. Also character development!

  • @elizabethphillips2001
    @elizabethphillips2001 2 ปีที่แล้ว +18

    This was amazing. The argument hurt my heart 😭 but enjoyed the end💗

    • @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous
      @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous  2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      I know what you mean but it felt good for them both to vent their emotions so they could get to that place... I think that is what the show is missing. 💖

    • @QueenKittenGirl
      @QueenKittenGirl 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      fair point.. i heard from somewhere idk where .. that sometimes it's good to argue once in a while to let out what needs to be said and then come to an agreement by compromise or finding a way to resolve something

  • @emmatimpson7896
    @emmatimpson7896 2 ปีที่แล้ว +17

    Let's just say something, Dawn, you are stealing my sleep! 🤣 I litterally can't sleep through the night without waking up with some profound revelation about a new step in the mlb love dynamic, and it's driving me insane! 😊 In a good way. Love your work Dawn, and Jheqia, It gives me so much inspiration! 💖

  • @eleishadolbey6889
    @eleishadolbey6889 2 ปีที่แล้ว +22

    That was so good!!!!!
    This needs to happen in the show!!!!!
    Amazing writing as always Jheqia and Dawn your narration was perfect!!

  • @aistrakvitochka2326
    @aistrakvitochka2326 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    What's wrong with you, kitty?! Mari, don't be so Ewell! You hurt him! Save him, please!

  • @brighterthansunshine4355
    @brighterthansunshine4355 2 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    This art is soooooo cute! I would listen to this fic just because of the thumbnail - it's that good!

  • @Dances_in_the_kitchen
    @Dances_in_the_kitchen 2 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    „He knew it was too good, too perfect to last but….“ 💕💖✨🐞🐾

  • @danioceanangel
    @danioceanangel 2 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Wow that was definitely very emotional. I was crying, but such a great story. And such a cute ending.

  • @sarahhairston8796
    @sarahhairston8796 2 ปีที่แล้ว +12

    This was so well read! The narration was excellent! Oh, the feels!!!

    • @Will-mk5pj
      @Will-mk5pj 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      That was simply amazing! The emotion you put into the narration!

    • @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous
      @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous  2 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      aww shucks, giving the bashful look... its nothing!! 💖

  • @catdownthestreet
    @catdownthestreet 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Emotional is an understatement, lady!
    Seriously I’m sobbing, this has no right to be as amazing as it is AND make me cry like a baby. The wholesomeness is too much for my feeble heart 😭💕

  • @snodly94
    @snodly94 2 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Definitely an emotional roller coaster..in a very good way, beautiful story.

  • @stelerElk
    @stelerElk 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    This is my all time favorite reveal, and I have read and or listened to a lot of reveals.
    It's because of the realism that a kids show would hide as to not scar the children watching that this is my favorite.

    • @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous
      @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous  2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Yeah I agree, it is that release in emotion and to show that's its not perfect to start with. 🤔💖

    • @stelerElk
      @stelerElk 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@dawnchoruswrites-miraculous I was also referring to the more rated R side of things you can't have notable death in a kids show after all.

  • @SweetSpotPA
    @SweetSpotPA 2 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    AMAZING, as usual! I love how emotional this is! It definitely has everything people can imagine. Although, I love to say I have almost the purrfect idea for a series myself. I'm mid-writing it now and this reminds me of it. They both have a little of everything and something quite more. They're both definitely strong, even if it will be my first fanfic. Although I do think I have a good plot idea, nothing competes with this! THIS IS AMAZING.

  • @milanieflores6360
    @milanieflores6360 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    This is really beautiful!! I loved how their identities have been revealed to them...

  • @emmatimpson7896
    @emmatimpson7896 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    ooh, I'm excited, but I accidentally read the comments and now I'm scared it's going to throw my emotions into turmoil, I'll just have to wait and see

  • @madilovessinging
    @madilovessinging 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    This literally made me cry. Thank you so much for your hard work. I always love reading to what you post and I’m always wishing that it could happen in the actual show.

  • @jennyfleuren5411
    @jennyfleuren5411 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Incredible. Absolutely in-credi-ble. I am at a loss for other words. Well done is not even close to a description of how I feel right now. ♥️

  • @Phoenix-vc7gp
    @Phoenix-vc7gp 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    How are all of these videos so good?

  • @SophieFrancesRadley
    @SophieFrancesRadley 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    This is to perfect I mean Purrfect !! I absolutely love how the story ❤️🥺.

  • @sesskag1000
    @sesskag1000 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    This is truely amazing! You and your team captured the emotions so well. This is one of the best stories that i have found so far.

    • @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous
      @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous  2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Thank you and this is a one woman team creating the stories with the help of a great writing friend in Jheqia. Glad you enjoyed the story so much.

  • @QueenKittenGirl
    @QueenKittenGirl 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    i love this video they should make this an episode in the show maybe

  • @katherinesaenz455
    @katherinesaenz455 2 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    I've read/watch/hear a lot of places where Chat/Adrien would propose, but the sewers... That's a new one 😂 I absolutely love this, it has the Ephemeral vibe at the beginning

  • @bondark2346
    @bondark2346 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    This is the epitome of perfection

  • @alibali7184
    @alibali7184 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    epilogue of the proposal is a necessity at this point
    am I right or am I right?

  • @maryshashaw2895
    @maryshashaw2895 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Amazing I cried and laughed great story again as usual

  • @nuruddinshah684
    @nuruddinshah684 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    AHAHAHAHAHAAHHA
    But ton would be too busy planning the wedding to ask questions
    AHAHAHHAHAHAAHHAHA

    • @QueenKittenGirl
      @QueenKittenGirl 6 หลายเดือนก่อน

      i could not stop laughing during that part of the video 🤣

  • @VilmaSantos-pd5hl
    @VilmaSantos-pd5hl 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    I love this! It was so awesome and great. It would be awesome if something similar happened in the show.

  • @nuruddinshah684
    @nuruddinshah684 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Why don't you love me
    Ah....Are you there NOT "doing IT' already...
    Thumbnail

  • @karisabellanfante6256
    @karisabellanfante6256 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Adrien . This makes me cry. Love it

  • @mindlessperson
    @mindlessperson 2 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    Kissing in the sewers must be so romantic 🥺

    • @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous
      @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      lol 😆 yeah the smell really adds to the feels

    • @sarahhairston8796
      @sarahhairston8796 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@dawnchoruswrites-miraculous Couldn't we assume they are like... storm sewers or something? And come on! One of the most romantic scenes in the show happens in the sewers! "You and me against the world, milady!"

  • @sandicliff1172
    @sandicliff1172 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Beautiful! I didn't want it to end!

  • @amberflores19
    @amberflores19 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Wow this is amazing!
    Was Marinette never good enough for the famous adrien Agreste the great Cat noir?!!
    That hit!

  • @rebeccaatkins2514
    @rebeccaatkins2514 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I love this so much, its just so powerful

  • @damarissiminic2126
    @damarissiminic2126 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I am in tears of joy😢❤i love it😍❤

  • @emmatimpson7896
    @emmatimpson7896 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    yep, emotional turmoil, that's all I can say

  • @PassiveHydra972...
    @PassiveHydra972... ปีที่แล้ว

    Dawn can we just both admit that mlb if it wasn't a kids show would be one of the best emotional tramitizeing series's ever

  • @adrien3868
    @adrien3868 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Lesson learn, Always listen to plagg when he is serious at least

  • @BlondieLadybug
    @BlondieLadybug 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Such a lovely story thank you! 😍

  • @rosilvapeterson262
    @rosilvapeterson262 ปีที่แล้ว

    😢❤❤beautiful, I loved it 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻

  • @Liz_Lizzie123
    @Liz_Lizzie123 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Me reacting to everything Adrien does in this audiofic : are you actually stupid Adrien. V.s me reacting to marinette during this : tell him girl tell him!!! I am here for you

  • @desireepaulplummer4386
    @desireepaulplummer4386 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    This is one of the best I have listened to in my entire life Thank you😍😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾2029 I’m still pouring tears of joy

    • @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous
      @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous  2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      💖💖😆🎇 Love it!!! Just about to Upload Romeo and his Marinette for tonight - Utter fluff!!

  • @damarissiminic2126
    @damarissiminic2126 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    😭sooooo beautiful

  • @emmatimpson7896
    @emmatimpson7896 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    I think I'm going to cry, 😥, Oh, looks like I already did. 😭

  • @bappida3091
    @bappida3091 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    OMG I started crying.🥺😥. And I am still crying😢😭😭

  • @robertsanders3503
    @robertsanders3503 29 วันที่ผ่านมา

    This was great

  • @rebeccajolley4582
    @rebeccajolley4582 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Lovely story

  • @nothereanymore...
    @nothereanymore... 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    This was soo fudging good, I cant stop squealing 😁😁😁

  • @adrienbrown438
    @adrienbrown438 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    4EVER 🧡 MARICHAT 4 LIFE

  • @Sof_rha
    @Sof_rha 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    SO CUTEEEE

  • @ashthegreat1371
    @ashthegreat1371 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Ph I cant wait to wach after school 💖

    • @ashthegreat1371
      @ashthegreat1371 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Omg this gonna make me cry that's how you know it's good writing ✍ when it makes you feel there emotions

    • @ashthegreat1371
      @ashthegreat1371 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      I'm not ok lol nah but the end is so sweet

  • @catsrule3377
    @catsrule3377 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Amazing video love me some marichat! ✨💖 Also I wanted to ask is Dawn your brith name or a stage name? because it’s really pretty and I just wanted to know

    • @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous
      @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Thank you and Dawn is my middle name I go by, apparently I was born at dawn and been up at that time ever since and now I use that time to write. 😊🎇🌞

  • @Honor-tt3hs
    @Honor-tt3hs 6 หลายเดือนก่อน

    I love your comics

  • @marichat99
    @marichat99 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    😭😭😭😭😭 love it

  • @NucdnicdCduhjcdnnjdc
    @NucdnicdCduhjcdnnjdc หลายเดือนก่อน

    Watch at 2x speed XD it was WAY to much emotion in 30 minutes on regular speed but 2x speed?! WAY TOO MUCH in 15 minutes

  • @depressoespresso5904
    @depressoespresso5904 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    i need fluff after reading this umay gulay

  • @WijdeneSkhab
    @WijdeneSkhab 6 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Well the thing is I personally think both did something wrong because yeah adrien never saw mari as more than a friend but mari never saw car noir as more than a Friend either and cat noir is definitely the true adrien

  • @leifjbj
    @leifjbj 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    For the algorithm

  • @rosilvapeterson262
    @rosilvapeterson262 ปีที่แล้ว

    All true😍

  • @adenialuthfiarifah7184
    @adenialuthfiarifah7184 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    why hasn't the story of Señorita I asked for been released yet?it's been more than 4 months. Was it because Ladrien was hated and disliked that you weren't released? I'm a bit lazy with Marichat.

    • @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous
      @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous  2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      I have a list of requested lyricals and a constant playlist of the songs I listen to all the time. I haven't gotten to Senorita yet isn't because it's Ladrien but the whole story hasn't come to me around the lyrics yet. That is how I write. I will be releasing more requested ones during March.

    • @adenialuthfiarifah7184
      @adenialuthfiarifah7184 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@dawnchoruswrites-miraculous I understood.

  • @jeremiahscott2032
    @jeremiahscott2032 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Such a good story!!
    Also ever notice she says he/she when it’s she/he??
    I’m not making fun, just never noticed

  • @BudgetBuildingNetwork
    @BudgetBuildingNetwork 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Gosh animate this please

  • @archknight20
    @archknight20 ปีที่แล้ว

    how exactly is this marichat?

  • @monicasud1
    @monicasud1 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    5 minutes!

  • @druroojahmed2369
    @druroojahmed2369 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thats not true ladybug is not just fraction of marinette side its her whole side andwhat about cat noir
    90% of this book is wrong and not true bht good story btw

    • @druroojahmed2369
      @druroojahmed2369 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      She loved adrien not cn why cn was adrien true side underneath and don't say anything about his flirting marinette has been a crazy stalker over Adrien too!
      Marinette had everyone but adrien didn't had anyone to talk to
      Both suffered equally

  • @isabelakendall4652
    @isabelakendall4652 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    ? ???????

  • @DigimonGaara
    @DigimonGaara 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    too much worshiping of marinette in this fanfic :(