So it's your house, and the woman wants it, so she throws trash in her yard, and the woman says "Fine, I am sick of this harassment, so I am leaving the house..."? Really? Throwing some trash on someone yard is enough to make them abandon their house? How freaking stupid...
Love how Zora is whinnying about being caught cheating with his cousin!! You messed up admit it come out and face the music and there's no way I'd marry you Zora so bye. You broke his trust and there's nothing you can ever do to fix it
😂 Ya right Also she was at home in her bed room but needed him to bring her clothes back. Why not just grab some out of her dresser or closet. Or did I miss something. 😂
Okay, decent story line, but why the third person talk? IF you are not reading printed word, the way they switch pronouns and nouns but are supposedly talking to the person is confusing. BTW, why the repeat?? This is just confusing
I was thinking the same thing also and came to see if anyone else was thinking the same way. First comment I came to was you and you didn't let me down. 😂
Soo.. Is it just me that is getting really annoyed by the fact that the one writing the story has no idea bout the difference between here and there? Or the fact that the dialogue is actually written and read as being a monologue?
And that they keep switching from first to third person? Plus, they simply do not know the meaning of many of the clichès they are attempting to use. Oh My God these stories are a hot mess.
Hey Monan, a verbal divorce agreement is legal and binding. Sletta file charges against her get cameras. Sell the house and move immediately it would be great if you knocked it down too. LMAO
MONAN LET HER EGO GET THE BEST OF HER TOO AND MONAN KNOW THAT TOO AND MONAN IS VERY FUNNY AND A JOKE AND A COWARD TOO AND MONAN WILL BE EATING THOSE WORDS NOW TOO AND MONAN YOU WERE WARNED TOO
I'm unsubscribing... hypocrite much!!!! You put in the description about legal action for reposting/copyright/plagiarism. Can't stand fear mongering hypocrites... This is a copy of a story on another channel ages ago... so youre breaching copyright? Its certainly plagiarism which in itself is reprehensible. Its the same names and everything!!!! I hope the original creator sees this and applies the same conditions on this channel.
All of these fake story channels copy their stories from each other. I read the same story about the "mom friend" who crashes dinners and lunches to eat for free...
I'm wondering why they keep referring to each other by their names when they clearly mean to say you. It's almost as if there's an AI writing this... I'm not against AI, but it is distracting.
If a person can be "stolen", that person isn't worth having.
So true so true !
Amen to that !!
The audacity of this backstabbing husband snatcher Monan. She thought she won this battle, not knowing the Mansion was cursed with bad luck.
No such thing as living for free in a mansion, a regular or a mid sized house there's always cost of living.
Why on earth is not the first reaction to finding out they've been cheated on "I better get checked for all the diseases."
It was just a momentary fling! That. Lasted 6 months.
So it's your house, and the woman wants it, so she throws trash in her yard, and the woman says "Fine, I am sick of this harassment, so I am leaving the house..."? Really? Throwing some trash on someone yard is enough to make them abandon their house? How freaking stupid...
Ridiculous, I know
Lol sure you can have this big expensive house.... Hope you can pay for the big expensive bills that comes with it. Because I won't be helping you
Love how Zora is whinnying about being caught cheating with his cousin!! You messed up admit it come out and face the music and there's no way I'd marry you Zora so bye. You broke his trust and there's nothing you can ever do to fix it
Slutta? Seriously? Even for a narcissist that’s harsh.
I got lost hearing monans name so often! Lol
And switching between first, second and third person voices doesn't help.
Who doesn't know that living in a mansion costs a lot of money.
Living a champagne lifestyle on a beer budget, lol
Zora must believe that she is soooo persuasive or her voice is soooo seductive that he will believe her no matter what.
😂
Ya right
Also she was at home in her bed room but needed him to bring her clothes back. Why not just grab some out of her dresser or closet. Or did I miss something. 😂
Monan is so ignorant. the larger the house, the higher the bills, that's universal and should be understood by even young children.
Okay, decent story line, but why the third person talk? IF you are not reading printed word, the way they switch pronouns and nouns but are supposedly talking to the person is confusing. BTW, why the repeat?? This is just confusing
I was thinking the same thing also and came to see if anyone else was thinking the same way. First comment I came to was you and you didn't let me down. 😂
Just use common sense and enjoy. They do try hard and have my support.
@@mccaffreybeverley450 _"They do try hard..."_ Are they?
Why is she talking to Monan in the 3rd person when she is talking to her! Weird!
Did anyone proof read the script before it was handed to the narrator.😮😮😮😮
In the second story, she should have ask her husband if he was in love with his friend. Or was he gay now.
The narrators...it sounds so robotic and timing needs improvement
Why do you keep talking to her I would block her
Time to set up cameras!
Spacious rooms heated floors big heating and cooling bills
I think karma was great when he didn't let them have their clothes 😂
If she's determined to live there, sub divide some areas into apartments / rooms for lodgers and make the place pay for itself.
MacBook Channel: wow. Just…wow. You really need to get a proofreader. Your dialogue is missing the mark a lot.
Weird and confusing.
Duh! A mansion's bills will be very high! Common sense!
too long
Zora should of got a job if she is so lonely
Soo..
Is it just me that is getting really annoyed by the fact that the one writing the story has no idea bout the difference between here and there? Or the fact that the dialogue is actually written and read as being a monologue?
And that they keep switching from first to third person? Plus, they simply do not know the meaning of many of the clichès they are attempting to use. Oh My God these stories are a hot mess.
Hey Monan, a verbal divorce agreement is legal and binding. Sletta file charges against her get cameras. Sell the house and move immediately it would be great if you knocked it down too. LMAO
If you're so dang lonely, get a dog or a cat instead of cheating
MONAN LET HER EGO GET THE BEST OF HER TOO AND MONAN KNOW THAT TOO AND MONAN IS VERY FUNNY AND A JOKE AND A COWARD TOO AND MONAN WILL BE EATING THOSE WORDS NOW TOO AND MONAN YOU WERE WARNED TOO
Why do they speak in third person?
Some of these stories are stupid
I'm unsubscribing... hypocrite much!!!! You put in the description about legal action for reposting/copyright/plagiarism. Can't stand fear mongering hypocrites...
This is a copy of a story on another channel ages ago... so youre breaching copyright? Its certainly plagiarism which in itself is reprehensible. Its the same names and everything!!!! I hope the original creator sees this and applies the same conditions on this channel.
All of these fake story channels copy their stories from each other. I read the same story about the "mom friend" who crashes dinners and lunches to eat for free...
Several of these channels belong to the same group
What is wrong with the volume. To low to hear
I'm wondering why they keep referring to each other by their names when they clearly mean to say you. It's almost as if there's an AI writing this... I'm not against AI, but it is distracting.
Was this written by an AI, why do they talk liek that and keep saying each others names like that