AGREED!!! Some parts are just too much. If the extra muchness was cutout then the focus could be on the heart ♥️ of the story. In addition, at 36 minutes, I almost didn't play this video.
What a besutiful story! I sm only a bit annoyed at the wrong spellings & haphazard way words were printed that I was thrown off guard at what the storyteller was really putting across.
Some parts are just too much. If the extra muchness was cutout then the focus could be on the heart ♥️ of the story. In addition, at 36 minutes, I almost didn't play this video.
That's the problem when you '' put the cart before the horse '' --having intimacy even before getting married and Elsie having to fend for herself with an '' illegitimate child '' --a single mother and without a husband . Conscience should have struck him or the love -bug should have bitten him that he should go back to her and marry her -- not unless he .Don . treated her as just another of his casual consensual sex partner . No excuse to put her . Elsie and Dorothy in such a dire situation . The problem is , he promise to go back to her but he never did ............Only an idiot would do that !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The story makes me cry. Glad everything worked out well for them.
It is a beautiful story. At last I am hearing a lovely story beautifully narrated..
Another great story! I've seen every one of your videos on this channel. Keep it up with the uplifting and wholesome stories.
Thank you!
Beautiful story, thank you!!!
Oh man! I thought sure he was going to ask her to marry him while they were dancing while their daughter sang! Great story!
Awesome & breathtaking❤❤❤
Beautiful story
This story is so beautiful. 🙂
Such a heartwarming story..
Beautiful story ❤️ ♥️ 💕
Beautiful story ♥️
A beautiful story
Wow so beautiful story
To be honest I was crying too and something dripping out my 👃😊.
Thanks for the beautiful story.
This is god’s work don old boy just think about it don’t you think so Aussie Pete ❤❤❤❤
i love this story. it made me cry
what a reat story. a real tear jerker. very unusual for these made up stories. whoever created this has real talent.
What a great story.
Beautiful 🥲❤
Too much description and very wordy why not be direct ?
AGREED!!! Some parts are just too much.
If the extra muchness was cutout then the focus could be on the heart ♥️ of the story.
In addition, at 36 minutes, I almost didn't play this video.
Agreed. Be precised direct to the point
We never saw the begger Gail who uplifted him or heard her sing lord have mercy on us
what a beautiful story.
What a besutiful story! I sm only a bit annoyed at the wrong spellings & haphazard way words were printed that I was thrown off guard at what the storyteller was really putting across.
Yeah, the auto correct sometimes messes things up.
It’s look like true story
Amazing ❤❤❤
God will make a Way
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fairy tale indeed but nice
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Remedial reading?? Please.
Ok, on and on about the restaurant, we get it, focus on the beggar girl!
Agreed
Some parts are just too much.
If the extra muchness was cutout then the focus could be on the heart ♥️ of the story.
In addition, at 36 minutes, I almost didn't play this video.
So lenghty iß the narrative
That's the problem when you '' put the cart before the horse '' --having intimacy even before getting married and Elsie having to fend for herself with an '' illegitimate child '' --a single mother and without a husband . Conscience should have struck him or the love -bug should have bitten him that he should go back to her and marry her -- not unless he .Don . treated her as just another of his casual consensual sex partner . No excuse to put her . Elsie and Dorothy in such a dire situation . The problem is , he promise to go back to her but he never did ............Only an idiot would do that !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Nice story, but waaaaay too many words.
The narrator needs to learn to read
Yeah, agree.
It never ends .Sad waste time .
Too much talk, get to the point.
Is this story about the description of a restaurant and a business place and how to establish same? Bs, very drawnout. Bs
Get to the point!!! Never finished listening to boring story. Hope it ended well.
AI pronunciations make me cringe. Why can't programs be undated when these errors are noticed - or does no-one else but me care?
I’m sorry sir, but this is me pronouncing. Not AI, just still a learner. Working on it every day!
@@lifenarrated6836 Okay. Sorry to be rude.
@@robynw6307 you're good!
don almost ruined lady life almost break the promise so he is just a jurk 35:11 -35:56 what a reason 💩💩💩
Beautiful story