I love how the questionable way in which Ralsei (in this case Charkis) tries to minimize the emotional impact of the battle on Kris (Asriel) is maintained.
@@ElSamu-XD I did this because I wanted Asriel to be, from my point of view, a brother figure that Charkis never had. Like Kris who sees Ralsei as a non-human version of himself, different from his mother and father.
@@A_H1kikOm0ri I'm Brazilian, and I don't know how to write in English, and unfortunately Google Translate hasn't updated the list of pronouns yet, so there's only HE and SHE... 😔
Spamton's fate felt like simple bad luck. He had seen himself flying high into heaven, only for him to realise and accept he can't break his shackles. But Junkil's fate, here how you've written it? That one just feels like betrayal. He didn't just see himself reaching for heaven, he saw himself becoming a true hero, an immortal hero that which everyone would look upon, only for him to collapse and see he won't be anyone's hero at all. After he collapses, he seems to accept not just his imprisonment, but also his death and the inevitable truth of being forgotten. The slowed soundtrack 'Analog' adds to the feeling, as I find this key quite melancholic. And the final nail on the coffin is seeing him say: "I can't do anything else." When a character has a running witty catchphrase and you get so accustomed to hearing them say it so many times, it becomes that much shocking to suddenly hear them say the exact opposite of their catchphrase. That's when you can tell they've lost it completely. To critique the whole animation, the graphics and the audio have got some flaws here and there, but the writing is just incredible and depressing in the best meaning possible. Congratulations on managing to crush my soul harder than Spamton's post battle cutscene.
@@PetikG Dude, this was the best review I've seen of my channel so far, and I'm really happy to know that you liked it, and especially that you liked the dialogues I created, my initial idea was to make Junkil realize that he's alone even after everything, that this is a consequence of his sin of greed, and that nothing could change it except death itself. I know I'm not good at animating and making audios, that's why I only edit on my cell phone because I don't have a PC to do it properly. I'm also Brazilian and that doesn't help :V But I really thank you for the support! 😭😭😭😭😭❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
I don't know if its a personal preference or not but the only thing I dont seem to like is Junkil being held UP by the strings meaning to pull em down. Like I feel like Junkil should've been bounded to the ground. Other than that amazing work Chapter Rewritten should really have you help it's amazing.
The way Junkil wanted immortality instead of freedom makes me think about what he is....a radio host. And what did happen to radio? It got killed by video. So Junkil thought by acquiring all that power, he'd stay mainstream no matter what, becoming the hero his fans looked upon once more. He is so desperate over his own benefit that he isn't really worried over sacrificing his free will at all, because in a way, he'll still be able to do anything even as a puppet since he'll be immortal (Which makes sense considering Jevil's denial). All of this makes him stand out from Spamton a lot more because while Spamton was ignored and forgotten, thus going on a wild goose chase to control his fate and prevent any future fall from grace. Meanwhile, Junkil was a victim of modernization, being cast aside for being deemed too "outdated" by the time, turning him into nothing more than a symbol of a distant past, a relic. So if he has to become a puppet in order of being able to do anything? Screw it Edit: TU É UM BR?!?!?!
Wait this isn’t canon? (Joke I mean not exactly how I imagined it but my imagination can get wild and confusing Mixing things where they shouldn’t blending media Kind of like ai but it isn’t stealing art for companies (and before ai was such a big deal ) ) :P (9/10 )
i believe it's meant to reflect how jevil is meant to be more of a carefree unbothered character in heavy contrast to spamton who is incredibly sensitive.
Legal Bem aventurados os humildes em espírito,porque deles é o Reino dos céus Bem aventurados os que choram,porque serão consolados Bem aventurados os mansos,porque eles herdaram a terra Bem aventurados os que tem fome e sede de justiça,pois serão fartos Bem aventurados os que misericordiosos,porque eles alcançarão misericórdia Bem aventurados os limpos de coração,porque verão a *DEUS* Bem aventurados os pacificadores,pois serão chamados filhos de *DEUS* Ame seu inimigo e o ajude se precisar,pois assim ele queimará em culpa e remorso e *DEUS* te abençoará e recompensará com um novo aliado. *JESUS CRISTO* está voltando, arrependei de todos os pecados cometidos para *DEUS* os perdoarem, pague com penitência se for necessário pois o tempo da justiça DIVINA chegará e você não vai querer ficar aqui. Mantenha-se firme na fé, pois ela te transformará em uma criatura perfeita,eliminando seus pontos frágeis e fortalecendo seu corpo e mente. Lembre-se, nascemos para *ELE* , então devemos o deixar alegre. Não tenham dúvidas, pois se levarmos em consideração que o tempo seria infinito,ou seja todas as probabilidades aconteceram em algum momento e,hipoteticamente,é possível produzir um motor infinito por meio de imãs inclinados a 50° colados em um círculo cujo estão todos do mesmo polo magnético e colocar no centro um rolamento com hastes com imãs na ponta que chegam perto dos imãs da base,no qual são contrários ,formando assim uma força que levaria o imã da haste ir para frente por repulsão do da base a esquerda e a atração da direita (Tenho ciência que isso iria contra a lei da conservação de energia,mas a maioria dos cientistas só não consideram o imã um motor infinito pois é muito afetado pela massa de ar ou não tem força suficiente,e não há algo,que eu percebi,que possa impedir esse motor de funcionar. Provavelmente o mesmo conservaria a própria energia e a transformaria em energia mecânica sem gastar a energia eletromagnética conveniente ) faz com que sejá muito provável que exista um DEUS,pois com o "poder de criação" proporcionado pelo motor ( já que tudo é energia e a energia pode ser transformada) é possível conseguir onisciência,que, consequentemente, daria onipresença e onipotência ao usuário,oque se encaixa no conceito DEUS. Vale constar que há diversos milagres como a translação de Enoque e Isaías para não ver a morte,o Dilúvio e o aviso a Noé,Sara poder dar a luz fora da idade sem nenhuma tecnologia,as dez pragas do Egito, a passagem pelo Mar Vermelho,a cura das picadas das serpentes por uma serpente de bronze pendurada por ordem de *DEUS* ,o maná caído do céu para crianças na época de Moisés, a queda dos muros de Jericó ,milagres feitos por *JESUS* e a ressurreição do *PRÓPRIO* ,além de milagres eucarísticos e milhares de testemunhos o que deixa a probabilidade de existir cerca de 75% e,como a probabilidade está ao lado de *DEUS* e crer seria mais benefíco, tanto mentalmente quanto fisicamente,a melhor escolha seria seguir-lo. Lembre-se " *JESUS* é o caminho,a verdade e a vida,para que quem *nELE* crêr não pereça mas tenha a vida eterna",o caminho é difícil mas nós conseguiremos se for do plano de *DEUS* . Você nunca estará só nessa caminhada.
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I love how the questionable way in which Ralsei (in this case Charkis) tries to minimize the emotional impact of the battle on Kris (Asriel) is maintained.
@@ElSamu-XD I did this because I wanted Asriel to be, from my point of view, a brother figure that Charkis never had. Like Kris who sees Ralsei as a non-human version of himself, different from his mother and father.
@@LuskaSynski kris uses they/them, toby corrected a friend of his that used "he" on them
@@A_H1kikOm0ri I'm Brazilian, and I don't know how to write in English, and unfortunately Google Translate hasn't updated the list of pronouns yet, so there's only HE and SHE... 😔
@LuskaSynski ohh ok
The Chapter Rewritten team should hire you, This is awesome!
@@grungalisfungalis Thanks bro! 😭😭😭
Spamton's fate felt like simple bad luck. He had seen himself flying high into heaven, only for him to realise and accept he can't break his shackles.
But Junkil's fate, here how you've written it? That one just feels like betrayal. He didn't just see himself reaching for heaven, he saw himself becoming a true hero, an immortal hero that which everyone would look upon, only for him to collapse and see he won't be anyone's hero at all. After he collapses, he seems to accept not just his imprisonment, but also his death and the inevitable truth of being forgotten.
The slowed soundtrack 'Analog' adds to the feeling, as I find this key quite melancholic.
And the final nail on the coffin is seeing him say: "I can't do anything else." When a character has a running witty catchphrase and you get so accustomed to hearing them say it so many times, it becomes that much shocking to suddenly hear them say the exact opposite of their catchphrase. That's when you can tell they've lost it completely.
To critique the whole animation, the graphics and the audio have got some flaws here and there, but the writing is just incredible and depressing in the best meaning possible. Congratulations on managing to crush my soul harder than Spamton's post battle cutscene.
@@PetikG Dude, this was the best review I've seen of my channel so far, and I'm really happy to know that you liked it, and especially that you liked the dialogues I created, my initial idea was to make Junkil realize that he's alone even after everything, that this is a consequence of his sin of greed, and that nothing could change it except death itself. I know I'm not good at animating and making audios, that's why I only edit on my cell phone because I don't have a PC to do it properly. I'm also Brazilian and that doesn't help :V
But I really thank you for the support! 😭😭😭😭😭❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Bro cooked and left no crumbs
I am extremely deranged mentally i saw the thumbnail and thought "does Junkil have a dollar sign shaped dingaling" BUT NO IT WAS HIS TAIL
The eerienes even echoed when the battle ended - 💀
@@evertale4302 Like in the spamton battle, when you go back to his store and the addisons are there...
@LuskaSynski what will seam say though💀💀
Imagine if they treated the poles like enemies or something like that and you had to act in some way to be violent, so it’s opposites
What? '-'
@@LuskaSynskiI think he means what if the poles had a separate “hit box” from junkil and you had to damage them until they snapped
my boy got crusified
This os awesome! Like abosulyte thought this was official at first. I'm just a bit confuses about him saying "look viewers" And then saying "on radio"
He’s a radio host
@@amethyst..2 Yes, my point exactly! Why is it "look viewrs" and not "listen radiolisteners" ro whatever?
@ oh I see! I’d say it’s just an expression, I’m sure radios hosts would say that, just cuz “listen viewers” sounds clunky and weird
I don't know if its a personal preference or not but the only thing I dont seem to like is Junkil being held UP by the strings meaning to pull em down. Like I feel like Junkil should've been bounded to the ground.
Other than that amazing work Chapter Rewritten should really have you help it's amazing.
The way Junkil wanted immortality instead of freedom makes me think about what he is....a radio host. And what did happen to radio? It got killed by video. So Junkil thought by acquiring all that power, he'd stay mainstream no matter what, becoming the hero his fans looked upon once more. He is so desperate over his own benefit that he isn't really worried over sacrificing his free will at all, because in a way, he'll still be able to do anything even as a puppet since he'll be immortal (Which makes sense considering Jevil's denial). All of this makes him stand out from Spamton a lot more because while Spamton was ignored and forgotten, thus going on a wild goose chase to control his fate and prevent any future fall from grace. Meanwhile, Junkil was a victim of modernization, being cast aside for being deemed too "outdated" by the time, turning him into nothing more than a symbol of a distant past, a relic. So if he has to become a puppet in order of being able to do anything? Screw it
Edit: TU É UM BR?!?!?!
This is really cool.
Congratulation bro that's so goooooof it's me your friend bruhh😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
Now bro just need to post or clips from fortnite tbh kkkkkkkk
Caralho bro, vc trabalha tanto quanto o time todo!
@@JohnnyBigodeTV FINALMENTE UM BRASILEIRO KSKSKSKSK, TMJ MANO
Holy shit its brazilian creator time
@@LuskaSynski eu sou um dos 3 BRs que conhece chapter rewritten kkkk
@@JohnnyBigodeTV Sim Ksksksks
@@JohnnyBigodeTVquatro na verdade
Аааааааа happy happy happy!
ЧТО? ЭТО ФАН КОНЦЕПТ??? Я КОГДА ЭТО УВИДЕЛ, ПОДУМАЛ ЭТО ОРИГИНАЛ! (я не заметил название канала)
Wait this isn’t canon?
(Joke
I mean not exactly how I imagined it but my imagination can get wild and confusing
Mixing things where they shouldn’t blending media
Kind of like ai but it isn’t stealing art for companies (and before ai was such a big deal ) )
:P
(9/10 )
Is it just me or is junkil more "helpful " than spamton when defeated idk how but he feels more "encouraging"?
i believe it's meant to reflect how jevil is meant to be more of a carefree unbothered character in heavy contrast to spamton who is incredibly sensitive.
😳👌
Legal
Bem aventurados os humildes em espírito,porque deles é o Reino dos céus
Bem aventurados os que choram,porque serão consolados
Bem aventurados os mansos,porque eles herdaram a terra
Bem aventurados os que tem fome e sede de justiça,pois serão fartos
Bem aventurados os que misericordiosos,porque eles alcançarão misericórdia
Bem aventurados os limpos de coração,porque verão a *DEUS*
Bem aventurados os pacificadores,pois serão chamados filhos de *DEUS*
Ame seu inimigo e o ajude se precisar,pois assim ele queimará em culpa e remorso e *DEUS* te abençoará e recompensará com um novo aliado.
*JESUS CRISTO* está voltando, arrependei de todos os pecados cometidos para *DEUS* os perdoarem, pague com penitência se for necessário pois o tempo da justiça DIVINA chegará e você não vai querer ficar aqui. Mantenha-se firme na fé, pois ela te transformará em uma criatura perfeita,eliminando seus pontos frágeis e fortalecendo seu corpo e mente. Lembre-se, nascemos para *ELE* , então devemos o deixar alegre. Não tenham dúvidas, pois se levarmos em consideração que o tempo seria infinito,ou seja todas as probabilidades aconteceram em algum momento e,hipoteticamente,é possível produzir um motor infinito por meio de imãs inclinados a 50° colados em um círculo cujo estão todos do mesmo polo magnético e colocar no centro um rolamento com hastes com imãs na ponta que chegam perto dos imãs da base,no qual são contrários ,formando assim uma força que levaria o imã da haste ir para frente por repulsão do da base a esquerda e a atração da direita (Tenho ciência que isso iria contra a lei da conservação de energia,mas a maioria dos cientistas só não consideram o imã um motor infinito pois é muito afetado pela massa de ar ou não tem força suficiente,e não há algo,que eu percebi,que possa impedir esse motor de funcionar. Provavelmente o mesmo conservaria a própria energia e a transformaria em energia mecânica sem gastar a energia eletromagnética conveniente ) faz com que sejá muito provável que exista um DEUS,pois com o "poder de criação" proporcionado pelo motor ( já que tudo é energia e a energia pode ser transformada) é possível conseguir onisciência,que, consequentemente, daria onipresença e onipotência ao usuário,oque se encaixa no conceito DEUS. Vale constar que há diversos milagres como a translação de Enoque e Isaías para não ver a morte,o Dilúvio e o aviso a Noé,Sara poder dar a luz fora da idade sem nenhuma tecnologia,as dez pragas do Egito, a passagem pelo Mar Vermelho,a cura das picadas das serpentes por uma serpente de bronze pendurada por ordem de *DEUS* ,o maná caído do céu para crianças na época de Moisés, a queda dos muros de Jericó ,milagres feitos por *JESUS* e a ressurreição do *PRÓPRIO* ,além de milagres eucarísticos e milhares de testemunhos o que deixa a probabilidade de existir cerca de 75% e,como a probabilidade está ao lado de *DEUS* e crer seria mais benefíco, tanto mentalmente quanto fisicamente,a melhor escolha seria seguir-lo. Lembre-se " *JESUS* é o caminho,a verdade e a vida,para que quem *nELE* crêr não pereça mas tenha a vida eterna",o caminho é difícil mas nós conseguiremos se for do plano de *DEUS* . Você nunca estará só nessa caminhada.
@@DEUSabencoe_a_todos_Igor AMÉM! 🙏🙏🙏
Wow thank you for that very relevant comment
@@OliviaWantsToBePretty bro GET OU-
@@SPAMT0N-G-SPMTON SPAMTON???????